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* DeathFakedForYou: [[spoiler:Kabuto uses a one of his customisable corpses to fake Hinata's death when he kidnaps her during the fall of Konoha. Fortunately Kiba sees through it and calls in TheCavalry.]]
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* DeathFakedForYou: [[spoiler:Kabuto uses a one of his customisable corpses to fake Hinata's death when he kidnaps her during the fall of Konoha. Fortunately Kiba sees [[TheNoseKnows (or smells)]] through it and calls in TheCavalry.]]
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* HoneyTrap: Sakura (with the assistance of a henge) uses this to ensnare and capture an Iwa shinobi [[spoiler:so she and Keiji can interrogate him about Naruto and Kakashi's situation]].
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* TheSchlubPubSeductionDeduction: Sakura (with the assistance of a henge) seduces, drugs and captures a particularly hapless Iwa shinobi [[spoiler:so she and Keiji can interrogate him about Naruto and Kakashi's situation]].
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* AlmostKiss: [[spoiler:Naruto and Hinata in chapter 11.]]
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* OddFriendship: It's not exactly a "friendship" but [[spoiler:when Hinata has some free time while at Suna she hangs out with ''Kankuro,'' observing him while he works on repairing Karasu and, flattered by her interest, he educates her on Suna's combat puppet tradition]].
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* SayMyName: [[spoiler:When the Kyuubi has taken over Naruto's body during his duel with Gaara, Hinata screaming his name is the only thing he can hear when his consciousness is suppressed inside his soulspace, waking him up and giving him a chance to fight for control his body.]]
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* MotivationalKiss: [[spoiler:Hinata]] gives one on the cheek to Naruto the night before his duel against [[spoiler:Gaara]] as a "good luck charm". It ends up [[spoiler:saving them all when it [[ThePowerOfLove allows Naruto to hear Hinata's voice and take back control of his body from the Kyuubi]] during the battle]].
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* ChekhovsGun: It looks like Keiji is finally going to use his [[FuumaShuriken Deathwing Shuriken]] in [[spoiler:the Hosokusa rescue]], but he ultimately [[AvertedTrope decides it's too risky]]. He finally uses it [[spoiler:to ''[[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe cut Orochimaru in half]]'' in chapter 9]].
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* ChekhovsGun: It looks like Keiji is finally going to use his [[FuumaShuriken Deathwing Deathwind Shuriken]] in [[spoiler:the Hosokusa rescue]], but he ultimately [[AvertedTrope decides it's too risky]]. He finally uses it [[spoiler:to ''[[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe cut Orochimaru in half]]'' in chapter 9]].
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* TheConfidant: Hinata serves as this to Naruto, as she does in canon [[spoiler:when he confesses to her his doubts about whether he can beat Gaara as well as his fear that actually being able to do so would make him "a monster"]], but Naruto also serves as this to her in chapter 3.
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* ChekhovsGun: The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya placed on Naruto in chapter 7 comes into play [[spoiler:in chapter 10 when the Kyuubi takes control of Naruto's body]].
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* ChekhovsGun: It looks like Keiji is finally going to use his [[FuumaShuriken Deathwing Shuriken]] in [[spoiler:the Hosokusa rescue]], but he ultimately [[AvertedTrope decides it's too risky]]. He finally uses it [[spoiler:to ''[[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe cut Orochimaru in half]]'' in chapter 9]].
** The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya placed on Naruto in chapter 7 comes into play [[spoiler:in chapter 10 when the Kyuubi takes control of Naruto's body]].
** The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya placed on Naruto in chapter 7 comes into play [[spoiler:in chapter 10 when the Kyuubi takes control of Naruto's body]].
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* ForWantOfANail: Sasuke's death ultimately leads to MAJOR differences in the development of the plot. The first really significant one of these is [[spoiler:the new Team 7 being ''refused'' permission to enter the Chuunin Exam by the 3rd Hokage]].
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* ForWantOfANail: Sasuke's death ultimately leads to MAJOR differences in the development of the plot. The first really significant one of these is [[spoiler:the the new Team 7 being ''refused'' permission to enter the Chuunin Exam by the 3rd Hokage]].Hokage.
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* YearInsideHourOutside: Naruto's soulspace works this way (as it does in canon, although attention was never drawn to it)- during [[spoiler:the fight with Wabisuke]] Naruto is panicking about not having time to waste talking to the Kyuubi while the fox tells him they have as much time as he needs. It also [[YearOutsideHourInside works both ways]] if Naruto goes there while unconscious- he can spend a few minutes or hours in the soulspace, but won't leave until his body wakes up, even if he's out for an entire day.
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* ChekhovsGun: The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya placed on Naruto in chapter 7 comes into play [[spoiler:when the Kyuubi takes control of Naruto's body]].
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* ChekhovsGun: The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya placed on Naruto in chapter 7 comes into play [[spoiler:when [[spoiler:in chapter 10 when the Kyuubi takes control of Naruto's body]].
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* ContinuityNod: In chapter 6, Naruto catches a kunai is his teeth to fight [[spoiler:Tsukiko]] without his hands, in a CallBack to Zabuza's last stand.
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* ContinuityNod: In chapter 6, Naruto catches a kunai is his teeth to fight [[spoiler:Tsukiko]] [[spoiler:Tsuchiko]] without his hands, in a CallBack to Zabuza's last stand.
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** The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya puts on [[spoiler:Naruto]] is the same one [[spoiler:Orochimaru put on him in canon]], only modified so he can activate it at will as an emergency measure to [[spoiler:CutTheJuice on the Kyuubi]].
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** The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya puts on [[spoiler:Naruto]] is the same one [[spoiler:Orochimaru put on him him]] in canon]], canon, only modified so he can activate it at will as an emergency measure to [[spoiler:CutTheJuice on the Kyuubi]].
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* ContinuityNod: The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya puts on [[spoiler:Naruto]] is the same one [[spoiler:Orochimaru put on him in canon]], only modified so he can activate it at will as an emergency measure to [[spoiler:CutTheJuice on the Kyuubi]].
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* ContinuityNod: In chapter 6, Naruto catches a kunai is his teeth to fight [[spoiler:Tsukiko]] without his hands, in a CallBack to Zabuza's last stand.
** The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya puts on [[spoiler:Naruto]] is the same one [[spoiler:Orochimaru put on him in canon]], only modified so he can activate it at will as an emergency measure to [[spoiler:CutTheJuice on the Kyuubi]].
** The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya puts on [[spoiler:Naruto]] is the same one [[spoiler:Orochimaru put on him in canon]], only modified so he can activate it at will as an emergency measure to [[spoiler:CutTheJuice on the Kyuubi]].
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** He also has this to Gaara, as in canon, although it's partly subverted when Gaara says their radically different beliefs make them not alike after all, something Naruto is happy to agree with.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Although never identified by name, Keiji's old Team 5 was wiped out by [[spoiler:Hoshigaki Kisame]].
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Although never identified by name, Keiji's old Team 5 was wiped out by [[spoiler:Hoshigaki Kisame]].Hoshigaki Kisame.
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* TrojanPrisoner: How Team 7 infiltrate [[spoiler:the Sound base]], with Sakura playing the prisoner.
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* CutTheJuice: The [[spoiler:Five Elements Delayed Restrained Seal]] works like this, allowing Naruto to [[spoiler:completely disrupt his own chakra network if the Kyuubi looks like it's getting out of control, instantly shutting it out]].
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* DeathFakedForYou: [[spoiler:Kabuto uses a one of his customisable corpses to fake Hinata's death when he kidnaps her during the fall of Konoha. Fortunately Kiba sees through it and calls in TheCavalry.]]
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* BigNo: From [[spoiler:the Kyuubi]] just before Naruto [[spoiler:activates the Five Elements Restrained Seal and takes back control of his body]].
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Jiraiya rather bitingly asks Tsunade when was the last time she did something ''Shizune'' wanted to do, considering Shizune has followed her loyally all over the world and helped look after her for twenty years, when [[spoiler:he tries to leave Shizune in charge of the Fortress of the Senju while he, Kakashi's team and Guy's team are away]].
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* OhCrap: A series of consecutive ones during [[spoiler:the fight between Naruto and Gaara]] as each combatant keeps raising the stakes higher. The biggest probably comes when [[spoiler:it looks like the Kyuubi has taken complete control of Naruto.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: In chapter 10 Kakashi notes with astonishment that he's never heard Guy swear before in the entire twenty years they've known each other when [[spoiler:Gaara retreats to his sand sphere to summon the Shukaku's armour]].
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: In chapter 10 Kakashi notes with astonishment that he's never heard Guy swear before in the entire twenty years they've known each other when [[spoiler:Gaara retreats to his sand sphere to summon the Shukaku's armour]].
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* YourMindMakesItReal: Played with and partly inverted with the world inside Naruto's soul where he meets the Kyuubi- the world is partly shaped by his thoughts, so he can, for example, breathe underwater as long as he convinces himself that he can. [[spoiler:However, if he dies in there, his consciousness will perish, leaving his body an EmptyShell- which the Kyuubi can then take over.]]
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** Temari and Kankuro both show this towards Gaara [[spoiler:when the Kyuubi nearly kills him]].
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* BroadStrokes: The author's notes for chapter 10 make it clear that Arcane Azmadi is taking this approach to the post-TimeSkip canon, considering his clear dislike for the direction the manga took as it went on. He's very specific that the fanfic will be following the manga devoutly up until the TimeSkip, but everything after that will be cherry-picked at his discretion (he's already made it clear that the Bijuu and the concept of "jinchuuriki" don't exist in his story).
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* ChekhovsGun: The [[spoiler:Five Elements Restrained Seal]] Jiraiya placed on Naruto in chapter 7 comes into play [[spoiler:when the Kyuubi takes control of Naruto's body]].
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* DemonicPossession: As a result of the above, [[spoiler:during the fight with Gaara the Kyuubi, rather than trying to break free from Naruto, takes over his body instead]].
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* EnemyWithin: The Kyuubi is more this to Naruto than in canon, with shades of TreacherousAdvisor.
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* FightingFromTheInside: [[spoiler:Naruto, when the Kyuubi takes control of his body.]]
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* GodzillaThreshold: [[spoiler:Temari requests Naruto fight Gaara "as one monster to another" when Gaara threatens to destroy Suna. During the fight, Naruto is forced to unleash the full power of the Kyuubi to stop Gaara from doing the same with the Shukaku, and [[DemonicPossession almost pays the price]].]]
* GoThroughMe: [[spoiler:Kankuro stands between the Kyuubi and the fallen Gaara and Temari even after Karasu is destroyed. Gaara even notes that Kankuro has basically no chance, as he neglects his taijutsu and has no weapons other than Karasu, but he prepares to fight the demonic monster with his ''fists'' if he has to. Fortunately, Naruto stops it just in time.]]
* GoThroughMe: [[spoiler:Kankuro stands between the Kyuubi and the fallen Gaara and Temari even after Karasu is destroyed. Gaara even notes that Kankuro has basically no chance, as he neglects his taijutsu and has no weapons other than Karasu, but he prepares to fight the demonic monster with his ''fists'' if he has to. Fortunately, Naruto stops it just in time.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: [[spoiler:The Kyuubi]] unleashes this on [[spoiler:Gaara]] after [[spoiler:taking over Naruto's body during his and Gaara's duel]].
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* ThePowerOfLove: [[spoiler:The kiss Hinata left on Naruto's cheek as a "good luck charm" allows her voice to reach him when the Kyuubi possesses him and suppresses his consciousness within his soulspace.]]
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Big Sister Instinct]]: [[spoiler:Inuzuka Hana ''[[GuttedLikeAFish disembowels]]'' one of the Sound ninja that was going to finish off Kiba, and her dogs tear out the throat of one of the others.]]
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* MyFriendsAndZoidberg: On Naruto's first meeting with Jiraiya:
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* ObliviousToLove: Naruto continues to be a classic example of this trope with regards to Hinata. When she asks if she can keep his forehead protector and gives him hers instead, he thinks she wants it because it used to be ''Iruka's.''
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* ObliviousToLove: Naruto continues to be a classic example of this trope with regards to Hinata. When she asks if she can keep his forehead protector that he loaned her and gives him hers instead, he thinks she wants it because it used to be ''Iruka's.''
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* MagiBabble: In chapter 7 Jiraiya is explaining to Naruto the purpose of a complicated seal [[spoiler:which will supposedly allow him to shut down the Kyuubi if it tries to run out of control]] and Naruto thinks of it as a "torrent of jutsubabble".
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* BringIt: Naruto says exactly this to [[spoiler:Orochimaru]].
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* BringIt: Naruto says exactly this to [[spoiler:Orochimaru]]. [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] because he knows he can't win, but [[YouShallNotPass will stand his ground regardless]].
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* DisproportionateRetribution: During the 3rd Shinobi War, [[spoiler:Wabisuke Ryota]] had his face disfigured in single combat with [[spoiler:Kakashi]]. Years later, this is his motivation for [[spoiler:capturing and torturing Kakashi and Naruto, then attempting to frame them for an attemped assassination of the Earth Country Daimyo to start a new war between Iwa and Konoha]].
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* YoureInsane: Kakashi to [[spoiler:Wabisuke]]. He's right.
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* YoureInsane: Kakashi to [[spoiler:Wabisuke]]. [[AxCrazy He's right.]]
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* ShoutOut: According to WordOfGod [[spoiler:the Hidden Fortress of the Senju]] is a ShoutOut to the classic AkiraKurosawa film ''TheHiddenFortress''.
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* ShoutOut: According to WordOfGod [[spoiler:the Hidden Fortress of the Senju]] is a ShoutOut to the classic AkiraKurosawa film ''TheHiddenFortress''.''Film/TheHiddenFortress''.
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** For that matter, Sasuke's death is this for Naruto and Sakura.
