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* SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong: [[spoiler: Edward attempted to time travel back to the beginning of the series to save everyone's lives, but ends up ''way'' further back than he intended]].

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* SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong: SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: [[spoiler: Edward attempted to time travel back to the beginning of the series to save everyone's lives, but ends up ''way'' further back than he intended]].
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* PastExperienceNightmare: Ed suffers nightmares because of [[spoiler: how terrible the Promise Day was and [[SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong to prevent it]] means erasing almost everyone and everything he's ever known]]. It causes him to become TheInsomniac.

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* PastExperienceNightmare: Ed suffers nightmares because of [[spoiler: how terrible the Promise Day was and [[SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong [[SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong to prevent it]] means erasing almost everyone and everything he's ever known]]. It causes him to become TheInsomniac.

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* OutDamnedSpot: Slave Seven, through she doesn't participate in any murders, has to clean up after [[spoiler: Roshan disposes of anyone who [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows too much]], and as a result often feels like her hands are stained with blood and has a compulsive need to wash to wash them]].


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* ScrubbingOffTheTrauma: Slave Seven, through she doesn't participate in any murders, has to clean up after [[spoiler: Roshan disposes of anyone who [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows too much]]]], and as a result often feels like her hands are stained with blood and has a compulsive need to wash to wash them.

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* ExactWords: Edward was granted a one time trip to go either forward or backward in time after Father tries to use his philosopher's stone to travel to the beginning of time. Ed asks Truth to send him back to a time when Father can still be defeated, before he executes his plan and kills everyone. Truth sends him back ''four hundred years'' to when Father was still the dwarf in the flask, having forgotten to account for the destruction of Xerxes.

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* ExactWords: Edward was granted a one time trip to go either forward or backward in time after Father tries to use his philosopher's stone to travel to the beginning of time. Ed asks Truth to send him back to a time when Father can still be defeated, before he executes his plan and kills everyone. Truth sends him back ''four hundred years'' to when Father was still the dwarf in the flask, having because Ed had forgotten to account for the destruction of Xerxes.


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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: After seeing how Roshan treats the "little dwarf in the flask", Edward admits that a lot of his evil came from the cruelty of humans, but it still doesn't justify the multiple genocides he caused.


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* LiteralGenie: When Edward states he wants to go back to the past to "save everyone from from Father", he means "save Amestris" from the Homunculus. What Truth actually does is send him hundreds of years into the past to shortly before the Homunculus was even born, so Edward could save ''all'' of his victims.
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* ClarkesThirdLaw: Because the method to create gold with alchemy wouldn't be discovered for another couple hundred years, when Edward creates some in front of an elderly couple, they start worshiping him. When he does the same in front of Van, he assumes Edward's a god in disguise and [[{{Fainting}} passes out on the spot]].

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* ClarkesThirdLaw: Because the method to create gold with alchemy wouldn't be discovered for another couple hundred years, when Edward creates transmutes some in front of an elderly couple, they start worshiping him. When he does the same in front of Van, he assumes Edward's a god in disguise and [[{{Fainting}} passes out on the spot]].

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* SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong: [[spoiler: Edward attempted to time travel back to the beginning of the series to save everyone lives, but ends up ''way'' further back than he intended]].

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* SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong: [[spoiler: Edward attempted to time travel back to the beginning of the series to save everyone everyone's lives, but ends up ''way'' further back than he intended]].



* SideBet: When Van acts incredulous at idea that Edward managed to defeat five bandits barehanded, they make a bet; if Van is able to land a hit on him, Edward will call himself short and if Van fails, he has to call himself an idiot (and say that Ed isn’t short). [[spoiler: Edward wins easily]].

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* SideBet: When Van acts incredulous at the idea that Edward managed to defeat five bandits barehanded, they make a bet; if Van is able to land a hit on him, Edward will call himself short and if Van fails, he has to call himself an idiot (and say that Ed isn’t short). [[spoiler: Edward wins easily]].


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* TitleDrop: Chapter 4 ends on one:
-->'''Ed:''' Quite [sic] being so grumpy and accept the lesson I so graciously decided to bestow upon you.\\
'''Van:''' And what exactly is the lesson, '''''my Master Ed'''''?\\
'''Ed:''' Never challenge the Fullmetal Alchemist!
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* {{Fainting}}: Van passes out and falls on his face after seeing Edward can create gold, thinking he’d been joking with and mocking a god in disguise and his tolerance for weirdness finally being exhausted.

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* {{Fainting}}: FaintInShock: Van passes out and falls flat on his face after seeing that Edward can create gold, thinking he’d gold because he thinks he’s been joking with and mocking a [[GodGuise god in disguise and disguise]]. At this, his tolerance for weirdness is finally being exhausted.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: While Ed focuses on bringing down the Dwarf in the Flask, he worries about what to do about the government itself since people willing to kill all of their own citizens for immortality don't deserve to be in charge and can bring ruin to the country even without a manipulative mastermind influencing them. At the same time, he knows how ''staggeringly'' unqualified he is to start a revolution.

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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: DecadentCourt: While Ed focuses on bringing down the Dwarf in the Flask, he worries about what to do about the government itself since people willing to kill all of their own citizens for immortality don't deserve to be in charge and can bring ruin to the country even without a manipulative mastermind influencing them. At the same time, he knows how ''staggeringly'' unqualified he is to start a revolution.
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* BadDreams: Ed suffers nightmares in because of [[spoiler: how terrible the Promise Day was and [[SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong to prevent it]] means erasing almost everyone and everything he's ever known]]. It causes him to become TheInsomniac.


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* PastExperienceNightmare: Ed suffers nightmares because of [[spoiler: how terrible the Promise Day was and [[SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong to prevent it]] means erasing almost everyone and everything he's ever known]]. It causes him to become TheInsomniac.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Father chooses to kill the sacrifices after he's used them to open the gate. Pride kills Alphonse first]].

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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Father chooses to kill the sacrifices after he's used them to open the gate. Pride kills Alphonse first]].first]].
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* SneezeCut: When Ava and Eiliar discus how they want to find the person who rescued him, it cuts to Edward sneezing. Which confuses him, as no one should know who he is, and thus no one should be gossiping about him.

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* SneezeCut: When Ava and Eiliar discus discuss how they want to find the person who rescued him, it cuts to Edward sneezing. Which confuses him, as no one should know who he is, and thus no one should be gossiping about him.
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* BadLiar: Ed is a remarkably bad liar in his own head; for someone who insists to himself that he doesn't care whether or not Hohenheim chooses to stay and be friends with him, he obsesses over the issue for an awfully long time.


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* TheSpeechless: Slaves that can't speak are considered useful as they cannot tell anyone sensitive information and are considered addled. [[spoiler: Slave Seven learns quite a bit about Roshan's shady actions because of this]].


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* ThinkNothingOfIt: Ed does several things that make people grateful to him, from exposing a shady trader to buying half the stock from a struggling flower store to treating slaves like equals, but never realizes he's uniquely generous in this regard.

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* AssassinationAttempt: While walking through a graveyard, Edward prevents the assassination of a man by using circle-less alchemy and raising a wall behind him to stop an arrow from hitting him. The confused man tries to question Ed but having failed on the whole "low-profile" thing with that stunt, he hurries off.

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* AssassinationAttempt: While walking through a graveyard, Edward prevents the assassination of a man [[OriginalCharacter Eiliar]] by using circle-less alchemy and raising a wall behind him to stop an arrow from hitting him. The confused man tries to question Ed but having failed on the whole "low-profile" thing with that stunt, he hurries off.



* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: [[spoiler: Slave Seven warns Edward that Roshan has all of his assistants killed after he prevents her from being beaten, carries a bucket for her, and says she doesn't have to bow to him]].



* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Edward's intense distaste for slavery is very out of step with the rest of Xerses where it's both generally accepted and commonplace. When he says slaves should be treated like people, Van wonders where he picked up such a radical notion.

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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Edward's intense distaste for slavery is very out of step with the rest of Xerses Xerxes where it's both generally accepted and commonplace. When he says slaves should be treated like people, Van wonders where he picked up such a radical notion.notion.
* SneezeCut: When Ava and Eiliar discus how they want to find the person who rescued him, it cuts to Edward sneezing. Which confuses him, as no one should know who he is, and thus no one should be gossiping about him.
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* VolleyingInsults: Many of Van and Ed's arguments are of this nature.
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* BigEater: Van has the [[SharedFamilyQuirks same voracious appetite as Edward]]. In his case, this is at least partially due to his backstory of being a slave and never before having the amount or variety as he does after [[SlaveLiberation being freed]].
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* BigBrotherInstinct: After finding him in the past, Ed becomes highly protective of Van, taking him in under his wing by giving him food, shelter, and an education.
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* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: A merchant briefly thinks Van and Ed are brothers, but she and Van believe it actually was MistakenForRelative since Ed is keeping [[KidFromTheFuture his true status]] under wraps.

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* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: A merchant briefly thinks Van and Ed are brothers, but she and Van believe it actually was MistakenForRelative a RelativeError since Ed is keeping [[KidFromTheFuture his true status]] under wraps.

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* CommonPlaceRare: Van’s fascinated by the luxury things Edward creates, including glass dishes, a large mirror, and ice. Edward, being from a time and place were such items are common and able to make them all himself easily, doesn’t think anything of it.



* WorthlessYellowRocks: Van’s fascinated by the luxury things Edward creates, including glass dishes, a large mirror, and ice. Edward, being from a time and place were such items are common and able to make them all himself easily, doesn’t think anything of it.
** Also applies to gold itself since Edward can easily transmute as much as he needs.

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* WorthlessYellowRocks: Van’s fascinated by the luxury things Edward creates, including glass dishes, a large mirror, and ice. Edward, being from a time and place were such items are common and able to make them all himself easily, doesn’t think anything of it.
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WorthlessYellowRocks: Edward can easily transmute gold as much as he needs.needs so personally gold is meaningless to him.
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* BornIntoSlavery: Slaves that fall under this trope in Xerxes only receive numbers to be identified with. Van's rival, Andal, by contrast was [[MadeASlave sold into slavery]].

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* BornIntoSlavery: Slaves that fall under this trope in Xerxes only receive numbers to be identified with. Van's rival, Andal, by contrast was [[MadeASlave sold into slavery]].slavery to pay off family debts]].
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** When he finds out Edward's father is still alive, Van assumes he's traveled far away.

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** When he finds out Edward's father is still alive, Van assumes he's he abandoned Ed and traveled far away.



* WaterWakeUp: After a day of particularly grueling training, Van accidentally sleeps in so late that Edward has to wake him up, and he uses a bucket of ice to do so.

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* WaterWakeUp: After a day of particularly grueling training, Van accidentally sleeps in so late that Edward has to wake him up, and he uses a bucket of ice to do so.
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* {{Troll}}: Most people are put off by the way Edward goes completely overboard when he thinks someone calls him short. Van thinks it's hilarious and pushes that [[BerserkButton particular button]] regularly.
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* BadDreams: Ed suffers nightmares in because of [[spoiler: how terrible the Promise Day was and [[SetRightWhatOnceWasWrong to prevent it]] means erasing almost everyone and everything he's ever known]]. It causes him to become TheInsomniac.

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