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* DarkFic: Explicitly stated in the title and Author Notes that the story is a darker retelling, making it an AU of a AU, as the Moemon retelling is already an AU itself of Pokemon. [[spoiler: Ash's death]], [[spoiler: Pikachu's rape]], and Mewtwo's plan of [[spoiler: genocide]] and [[spoiler: enslavement]] for the human race is a few of how dark the story is, along with the stated deaths of characters in future chapters.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Pikachu, following Ash's death and noticing Charizard's arrival, is hostile towards Charizard. Short flashbacks however imply that their relationship was different prior to Charizard's evolution to Charmeleon, where their relationship deteriorated to where it was now.
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Pikachu, following [[spoiler: Ash's death death]] and noticing Charizard's arrival, is hostile towards Charizard. Short flashbacks however imply that their relationship was different prior to Charizard's evolution to Charmeleon, where their relationship deteriorated to where it was now.
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* UnstoppableRage: Ash's death triggers and makes Pikachu snap, who proceeds to violently attack Mewtwo for the death of her Trainer, even as going so far to attack her friends and allies for attempting to stop her. She blames Mew as well for allowing this to happen, as well as many other actions. She would have continued if not for Serena, who was the only one able to coax Pikachu to stop.
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The story is uploaded to Fanfiction.net[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14082163/1/Moemon-Adventures-Kanto]] and Archive of Our Own[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38652195/chapters/96629736]]
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The story is uploaded to Fanfiction.net[[https://www.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14082163/1/Moemon-Adventures-Kanto]] net/s/14082163/1/Moemon-Adventures-Kanto Fanfiction.net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38652195/chapters/96629736 Archive of Our Own[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38652195/chapters/96629736]]Own]].
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Moemon Adventures: Kanto is a story created by TegamiBachi25 and is a retelling of the Pokémon series, following the adventures of Ash Ketchum. The difference? All the Pokémon are Moemon, female humanoid creatures, based off the fan game concept that reworks every Pokémon into a female humanoid.
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Moemon Adventures: Kanto is a story created by TegamiBachi25 and is a retelling of the Pokémon series, following the adventures of Ash Ketchum. The difference? All the Pokémon are Moemon, female humanoid creatures, based off [[VideoGame/{{Moemon}} the fan game concept concept]] that reworks every Pokémon into a female humanoid.
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** And The Hero Dies
* Unstoppable Rage: Ash's death triggers and makes Pikachu snap, who proceeds to violently attack Mewtwo for the death of her Trainer, even as going so far to attack her friends and allies for attempting to stop her. She blames Mew as well for allowing this to happen, as well as many other actions. She would have continued if not for Serena, who was the only one able to coax Pikachu to stop.
* Dark Fic: Explicitly stated in the title and Author Notes that the story is a darker retelling, making it an AU of a AU, as the Moemon retelling is already an AU itself of Pokemon. Ash's death, Pikachu's rape, and Mewtwo's plan of genocide is a few of how dark the story is, along with the stated deaths of characters in future chapters
* Bludgeoned to Death: Ash's Charizard, in the height of their battle with her clone, Charizardtwo, proceeds to smash and cave her skull in.
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** And Murder is the Best Solution.
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** During the events of Mewtwo Strikes Back, Ash is killed by Mewtwo's and Mew's combined attack. However, the classic ending to the movie that most Pokemon fans know goes entirely different.
** Also, Plot Triggering Death, as Ash is not revived.
** And The Hero Dies
* Unstoppable Rage: Ash's death triggers and makes Pikachu snap, who proceeds to violently attack Mewtwo for the death of her Trainer, even as going so far to attack her friends and allies for attempting to stop her. She blames Mew as well for allowing this to happen, as well as many other actions. She would have continued if not for Serena, who was the only one able to coax Pikachu to stop.
* Dark Fic: Explicitly stated in the title and Author Notes that the story is a darker retelling, making it an AU of a AU, as the Moemon retelling is already an AU itself of Pokemon. Ash's death, Pikachu's rape, and Mewtwo's plan of genocide is a few of how dark the story is, along with the stated deaths of characters in future chapters
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Moemon Adventures: Kanto is a story created by TegamiBachi25 that and is a retelling of the Pokemon Pokémon series, following the adventures of Ash Ketchum. The difference? All the Pokemon are Moemon, female humanoid creatures, based off the fan game concept that reworks every Pokemon into a female humanoid.
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