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** The Boonchuys had to cope with their daughter being kidnapped as an infant for 13 years, robbing them of the chance of raising her as their parents and seeing her grow up. [[spoiler:They also witness Anne's HeroicSacrifice in the FinalBattle and she dies in their arms. Luckily, she gets better.]]
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** The Boonchuys had to cope with their daughter being kidnapped as an infant for 13 years, robbing them of the chance of raising her as their birth parents and seeing her grow up. [[spoiler:They also witness Anne's HeroicSacrifice in the FinalBattle and she dies in their arms. Luckily, she gets better.]]
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Opiorphine is about 6 times more powerful than morphine, but is sparcely present in human saliva and breaks apart in stomach acid.
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** Polly sticks her hands into Anne's mouth, and Anne reflectively spits her slime coat out. Some of the spit gets on Polly and makes her feel numb, so they assume it's poisonous, but it turns out that human saliva contains a mild painkiller.
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** Polly sticks her hands into Anne's mouth, and Anne reflectively spits her slime coat out. Some of the spit gets on Polly and makes her feel numb, so they assume it's poisonous, but it turns out that human saliva contains a mild potent yet very diluted painkiller.
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* BlueIsHeroic: Anne's frog form is light blue, just like her Calamity gem.
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* BlueIsHeroic: Anne's frog form is light blue, fittingly, just like her Calamity gem.
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* UpliftedAnimal: {{Discussed}}. After Anne reverts into a human for the first time, Hop Pop assumes that she gained her sapience from being a frog for most of her life, and she'll lose it eventually. Turns out that's not the case. Much later, [[spoiler:it turns out that Marcy believes this as well. She tells Anne and Sasha that Andrias is invading Earth to uplift humans. Since Anne has spent months on Earth and taught the entire resistance the truth about humans, they don't buy it, telling her its a lie.]]
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* UpliftedAnimal: {{Discussed}}. After Anne reverts into a human for the first time, Hop Pop assumes that she gained her sapience from being a frog for most of her life, and she'll lose it eventually. Turns out that's not the case. Much later, [[spoiler:it turns out that Marcy believes this as well. She tells Anne and Sasha that Andrias is invading Earth to uplift humans. Since Anne has spent months on Earth and taught the entire resistance the truth about humans, they don't buy it, telling her its it's a lie.]]
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* {{Xenofiction}}: Unlike most of the story, chapter 36 is almost entirely told from the perspective of [=Charlie2=] (Domino 2).
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* {{Xenofiction}}: Unlike While most of the story, chapters are from the perspectives of characters with human-level intelligence, chapter 36 is almost entirely told from the perspective of [=Charlie2=] (Domino 2).
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Those characters are about as prominent as they are in canon here, so I replaced them with an example that fits.
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* AscendedExtra: Unlike in the show, Anne's parents and Mr. X travel to Amphibia to witness the FinalBattle between the girls and the Core.
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* AscendedExtra: Unlike in In canon, Percy and Braddock disappeared halfway through season 2. Here, they have a bigger role as Sasha's adoptive parents, [[spoiler:so they return near the show, Anne's parents end and Mr. X travel to Amphibia to witness join the FinalBattle between the girls and the Core.final battle.]]
