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** The opening credits theme to the "Hermie Parker" movie was performed by [[Music/GunsNRoses Glocks n' Tulips]], and [[Creator/AdamWest Adam North]] voices the owner of the mansion.
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** The opening credits theme to the "Hermie Parker" movie was performed by [[Music/GunsNRoses Glocks n' Tulips]], and [[Creator/AdamWest Adam North]] (who played Ace Savvy in a [[Series/Batman1966 live-action TV show from the '60s]]) voices the owner of the mansion.
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* BlahBlahBlah: Lincoln tunes out during Leni and Erin's high school drama talk, resulting in him hearing mostly "''blah blah blah blah blah like blah blah blah like blah blah blah blah blah blah blah like...''"
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* TheDitz: Leni shows signs of her low intelligence when she thinks "rock, paper, scissors" has lots of strategy, takes Li Wei's comment about "dragging Lincoln along" and her teacher's words about "fight or flight" literally, reads the note "UR a QT" (you are a cutie) as "yurakt" (and when Lincoln translates it for her, thinks he's calling her a cutie) and describes someone's trousers as his "bottom".
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* TheDitz: Leni shows signs of her low intelligence when she thinks "rock, paper, scissors" has lots of strategy, takes Li Wei's comment about "dragging Lincoln along" and her teacher's words about "fight or flight" literally, reads the note "UR a QT" (you are a cutie) as "yurakt" "[[AcronymsAreEasyAsAybeecee yurakt]]" (and when Lincoln translates it for her, thinks he's calling her a cutie) and describes someone's trousers as his "bottom".
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* CrappyHomemadeGift: Leni has a coupon book full of favors she needs for Lincoln. He had made it the previous December, following a last-minute shopping spree and finding out the dress he wanted to get her was already sold out. According to Lori, he's made these sorts of gifts before, but Leni, being Leni, ends up loving it.
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* CrappyHomemadeGift: Lincoln apparently has a history of making these sorts of gifts. In fact, the previous Christmas, he had made Leni has a coupon book full of favors she needs for Lincoln. He had made it the previous December, from him, following a last-minute shopping spree and finding out the a dress he wanted was intending to get buy for her was already getting sold out. According to Lori, he's made these sorts of gifts before, but Leni, being Leni, ends up loving it. Leni has since kept it, and cashes in two coupons--one for the main shopping spree, and a free hug--during the story.
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* CuteKitten: Discusssed when the fictional detective Hermie Parker is said to have a cute kitten named Archie.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Leni is normally a ditzy, kindhearted fashionista. But bully anyone she cares about and she will ''whoop your ass to kingdom come''.
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->''See? Fashion'' can ''be fun!''
-->-- '''Leni Loud'''
'''''[[https://www.deviantart.com/mrtyedye/art/Fanfic-Mall-Rats-Chapter-1-713513198 Mall Rats]]''''' (also available [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12320880/1/Mall-Rats here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13989876/chapters/32212041 here]]) is a fanfiction of ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' by the author of ''Fanfic/PeekingThroughTheFourthWall'' and ''Fanfic/IrrationalFear''.
It is about Lincoln having to spend a few hours at the mall with Leni. At first he is reluctant because he finds the mall boring, but then he learns to enjoy the mall and actually learns a few things from Leni despite her low intelligence.
The fanfic also has a subplot of Lincoln trying to avoid his bullies and Leni eventually giving them their comeuppance.
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!! ''Mall Rats'' provides examples of
* AccidentalPun: Ned observes that it's sweet of Leni to treat Lincoln to ice cream, but he didn't intend that as a pun.
* AllWomenLoveShoes: Discussed when Lincoln wonders why girls are "infatuated with shoes" because they seem insignificant compared to jeans and dresses.
* BatmanGambit: When Lincoln suggests that he and Leni leave because of the jocks, she thinks he's being rude, so he brings up the romper she wants to buy.
* BigSisterInstinct: When Lincoln's bullies harass him, Leni gives all of them a CurbstompBattle.
* ChewingTheScenery: As a joke, Lincoln acts like a butler while helping her try on shoes.
* ContinuityNod:
** Leni remembers the time Lincoln made Ronnie Anne cry, which happened in the canon episode "Save the Date".
** Lincoln recalls the events of "The Loudest Yard", and the bullies from the Royal Woods Roosters appear as the story's antagonists.
** When meeting Jolene, Lincoln is reduced to stammering, "Ba... ba... ba...", like his sisters did to Hugh (and how ''he'' reacted to Ms. [=DiMartino=]) in "Study Muffin".
* CrappyHomemadeGift: Last December, Lincoln did some last-minute shopping to get gifts for his sisters, but the dress he wanted to get Leni was already sold out, so he made a "coupon book" full of favors she needs from him whenever she cashes one in. According to Lori, he's made these sorts of gifts before, but Leni, being Leni, ends up loving it.
* CuddleBug: Erin, Leni's best friend, hugs Lincoln and Leni and tousles Lincoln's hair.
* CuteKitten: Discusssed when the fictional detective Hermie Parker is said to have a cute kitten named Archie.
* TheDitz: Leni shows signs of her low intelligence when she thinks "rock, paper, scissors" has lots of strategy, takes Li Wei's comment about "dragging Lincoln along" and her teacher's words about "fight or flight" literally, reads the note "UR a QT" (you are a cutie) as "yurakt" (and when Lincoln translates it for her, thinks he's calling her a cutie) and describes someone's trousers as his "bottom".
* DoubleStandard: Lincoln ponders the double standards of men and boys not being "supposed to" like fashion.
* EurekaMoment: When Lincoln is complaining mentally about Leni "turning [his suggestions] down flat", it reminds him that Leni has a pair of ''flats'' that she can wear with her teal dress instead of the heels, wearing the heels with the romper.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lincoln has apparently broken promises before, but never ones made on Christmas.
* {{Fainting}}: Discussed when Lincoln worries that he'll faint from his crush holding his hand.
* TheFashionista: Leni's love of fashion shows itself when she and Lincoln are shoe shopping and she wonders whether certain garments "go" with each other.
* FlippingTheBird: The tall bully flips off Leni.
* GenkiGirl:
** Leni is described as "bubbly" and she frequently skips and talks in singsong.
** Jolene is described as "vibrant" and "energetic".
* GoToSleepEnding: The fanfic ends with Lincoln taking a nap.
* GuiltyPleasure: Apparently, Lincoln doesn't want to admit that he finds escalators fun.
* TheKlutz: Leni's clumsiness is referenced when Lincoln has to tug her to prevent her bumping into people and things.
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: The second chapter is titled "Kindness, Friendship, and Shoes".
* LimitedWardrobe: Referenced when Leni thinks Lincoln's outfit of an orange shirt and jeans is "getting old".
* LiteralMinded:
** When Li Wei, the owner of the restaurant "Wok This Way", asks Leni if she's dragging Lincoln along, she replies that he can walk on his own.
** The reason Leni can fight is because she took "fight or flight" literally and thought flying wasn't an option.
* MustHaveCaffeine: According to Lincoln, Leni usually needs coffee to be energetic in the morning.
* NotAMorningPerson: Lincoln is surprised at Leni waking up on a Saturday morning perky because she's apparently not usually a morning person unless she's had coffee.
* OriginalCharacter: The fanfic introduces many original Royal Woods Mall employees, alongside other shoppers like Leni's friend Erin (although she may be one of Leni's friends from "Sound of Silence" and "Overnight Success", which would make her NamedByTheAdaptation).
* PerpetualFrowner: One girl who Lincoln and Leni meet at the shoe store has a "perma-sneer".
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Leni says, "Leave. Him. ALONE!" when she hits the bullies.
* PungeonMaster: Discussed when Leni describes Luan as "she makes a lot of puns" and the movie character Hermie Parker is said to make a lot of puns.
* PuppyLove: Lincoln and Ronnie Anne are said to be practically a couple at age eleven and Lincoln also gets a crush on the woman painting his nails.
* ShapedLikeItself:
** Lincoln doesn't break his promise to Leni because "a promise is a promise".
** After his manicure, Lincoln says to Leni, "When you're right, you're right."
* ShoutOut:
** Lincoln compares a pair of shoes to the Ruby Slippers from ''Film/TheWizardOfOz''.
** When Lincoln wears a leather jacket, Jimmy tells him that he looks like the Fonz (from ''Series/HappyDays''). Later, Lincoln tells his bullies to "sit on it", which is the way the characters on ''Happy Days'' say, "Shut up".
** Apparently, Ronnie Anne once told Lincoln he threw like a hobbit, which are little humanoids from ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''.
** Movies in the movie store include "[[Literature/ASeriesOfUnfortunateEvents The Littlest Elf]]", "[[Film/HighSchoolMusical Middle School Musical]]", "[[WebVideo/JakeAndAmir Astronaut Accountants from Outer Space]]", "[[WesternAnimation/DorbeesMakingDecisions Mr. Poe & Yogul in Vegas]]", "Alan Smithee's Literature/AliceInWonderland" and "[[Film/AboutABoy Santa's Super Sleigh: The Movie]]".
** The opening credits theme to the "Hermie Parker" movie was performed by [[Music/GunsNRoses Glocks n' Tulips]], and [[Creator/AdamWest Adam North]] voices the owner of the mansion.
** The ice cream parlor at the end is [[VideoGame/TwistedMetal Marcus Kane's]], with the signature flavor "Sweet Tooth".
* SmugSnake: Frank, the owner of the movie store, is pretty arrogant and goes on about how he's the best at picking out movies.
* ToiletHumour:
** When Leni tries on the romper, Lincoln wonders how she's meant to pee while wearing it.
** Leni remembers a time when a boy said that he really liked her top and she replied that she really liked his ''bottom'' (referring to his pants), but the boy ran away.
** Discussed when Lincoln and Leni want to rent a movie with gross-out humour so Lana can enjoy it.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Discussed when the movie that Lincoln and Leni rent features a cat graphically throwing up onscreen.
* YouAreGrounded: Discussed when Lincoln thinks his parents would ground him for a week if he quoted the slogans on the punk hoodies.
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-->-- '''Leni Loud'''
'''''[[https://www.deviantart.com/mrtyedye/art/Fanfic-Mall-Rats-Chapter-1-713513198 Mall Rats]]''''' (also available [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12320880/1/Mall-Rats here]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/13989876/chapters/32212041 here]]) is a fanfiction of ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' by the author of ''Fanfic/PeekingThroughTheFourthWall'' and ''Fanfic/IrrationalFear''.
It is about Lincoln having to spend a few hours at the mall with Leni. At first he is reluctant because he finds the mall boring, but then he learns to enjoy the mall and actually learns a few things from Leni despite her low intelligence.
The fanfic also has a subplot of Lincoln trying to avoid his bullies and Leni eventually giving them their comeuppance.
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!! ''Mall Rats'' provides examples of
* AccidentalPun: Ned observes that it's sweet of Leni to treat Lincoln to ice cream, but he didn't intend that as a pun.
* AllWomenLoveShoes: Discussed when Lincoln wonders why girls are "infatuated with shoes" because they seem insignificant compared to jeans and dresses.
* BatmanGambit: When Lincoln suggests that he and Leni leave because of the jocks, she thinks he's being rude, so he brings up the romper she wants to buy.
* BigSisterInstinct: When Lincoln's bullies harass him, Leni gives all of them a CurbstompBattle.
* ChewingTheScenery: As a joke, Lincoln acts like a butler while helping her try on shoes.
* ContinuityNod:
** Leni remembers the time Lincoln made Ronnie Anne cry, which happened in the canon episode "Save the Date".
** Lincoln recalls the events of "The Loudest Yard", and the bullies from the Royal Woods Roosters appear as the story's antagonists.
** When meeting Jolene, Lincoln is reduced to stammering, "Ba... ba... ba...", like his sisters did to Hugh (and how ''he'' reacted to Ms. [=DiMartino=]) in "Study Muffin".
* CrappyHomemadeGift: Last December, Lincoln did some last-minute shopping to get gifts for his sisters, but the dress he wanted to get Leni was already sold out, so he made a "coupon book" full of favors she needs from him whenever she cashes one in. According to Lori, he's made these sorts of gifts before, but Leni, being Leni, ends up loving it.
* CuddleBug: Erin, Leni's best friend, hugs Lincoln and Leni and tousles Lincoln's hair.
* CuteKitten: Discusssed when the fictional detective Hermie Parker is said to have a cute kitten named Archie.
* TheDitz: Leni shows signs of her low intelligence when she thinks "rock, paper, scissors" has lots of strategy, takes Li Wei's comment about "dragging Lincoln along" and her teacher's words about "fight or flight" literally, reads the note "UR a QT" (you are a cutie) as "yurakt" (and when Lincoln translates it for her, thinks he's calling her a cutie) and describes someone's trousers as his "bottom".
* DoubleStandard: Lincoln ponders the double standards of men and boys not being "supposed to" like fashion.
* EurekaMoment: When Lincoln is complaining mentally about Leni "turning [his suggestions] down flat", it reminds him that Leni has a pair of ''flats'' that she can wear with her teal dress instead of the heels, wearing the heels with the romper.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Lincoln has apparently broken promises before, but never ones made on Christmas.
* {{Fainting}}: Discussed when Lincoln worries that he'll faint from his crush holding his hand.
* TheFashionista: Leni's love of fashion shows itself when she and Lincoln are shoe shopping and she wonders whether certain garments "go" with each other.
* FlippingTheBird: The tall bully flips off Leni.
* GenkiGirl:
** Leni is described as "bubbly" and she frequently skips and talks in singsong.
** Jolene is described as "vibrant" and "energetic".
* GoToSleepEnding: The fanfic ends with Lincoln taking a nap.
* GuiltyPleasure: Apparently, Lincoln doesn't want to admit that he finds escalators fun.
* TheKlutz: Leni's clumsiness is referenced when Lincoln has to tug her to prevent her bumping into people and things.
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: The second chapter is titled "Kindness, Friendship, and Shoes".
* LimitedWardrobe: Referenced when Leni thinks Lincoln's outfit of an orange shirt and jeans is "getting old".
* LiteralMinded:
** When Li Wei, the owner of the restaurant "Wok This Way", asks Leni if she's dragging Lincoln along, she replies that he can walk on his own.
** The reason Leni can fight is because she took "fight or flight" literally and thought flying wasn't an option.
* MustHaveCaffeine: According to Lincoln, Leni usually needs coffee to be energetic in the morning.
* NotAMorningPerson: Lincoln is surprised at Leni waking up on a Saturday morning perky because she's apparently not usually a morning person unless she's had coffee.
* OriginalCharacter: The fanfic introduces many original Royal Woods Mall employees, alongside other shoppers like Leni's friend Erin (although she may be one of Leni's friends from "Sound of Silence" and "Overnight Success", which would make her NamedByTheAdaptation).
* PerpetualFrowner: One girl who Lincoln and Leni meet at the shoe store has a "perma-sneer".
* PunctuatedForEmphasis: Leni says, "Leave. Him. ALONE!" when she hits the bullies.
* PungeonMaster: Discussed when Leni describes Luan as "she makes a lot of puns" and the movie character Hermie Parker is said to make a lot of puns.
* PuppyLove: Lincoln and Ronnie Anne are said to be practically a couple at age eleven and Lincoln also gets a crush on the woman painting his nails.
* ShapedLikeItself:
** Lincoln doesn't break his promise to Leni because "a promise is a promise".
** After his manicure, Lincoln says to Leni, "When you're right, you're right."
* ShoutOut:
** Lincoln compares a pair of shoes to the Ruby Slippers from ''Film/TheWizardOfOz''.
** When Lincoln wears a leather jacket, Jimmy tells him that he looks like the Fonz (from ''Series/HappyDays''). Later, Lincoln tells his bullies to "sit on it", which is the way the characters on ''Happy Days'' say, "Shut up".
** Apparently, Ronnie Anne once told Lincoln he threw like a hobbit, which are little humanoids from ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''.
** Movies in the movie store include "[[Literature/ASeriesOfUnfortunateEvents The Littlest Elf]]", "[[Film/HighSchoolMusical Middle School Musical]]", "[[WebVideo/JakeAndAmir Astronaut Accountants from Outer Space]]", "[[WesternAnimation/DorbeesMakingDecisions Mr. Poe & Yogul in Vegas]]", "Alan Smithee's Literature/AliceInWonderland" and "[[Film/AboutABoy Santa's Super Sleigh: The Movie]]".
** The opening credits theme to the "Hermie Parker" movie was performed by [[Music/GunsNRoses Glocks n' Tulips]], and [[Creator/AdamWest Adam North]] voices the owner of the mansion.
** The ice cream parlor at the end is [[VideoGame/TwistedMetal Marcus Kane's]], with the signature flavor "Sweet Tooth".
* SmugSnake: Frank, the owner of the movie store, is pretty arrogant and goes on about how he's the best at picking out movies.
* ToiletHumour:
** When Leni tries on the romper, Lincoln wonders how she's meant to pee while wearing it.
** Leni remembers a time when a boy said that he really liked her top and she replied that she really liked his ''bottom'' (referring to his pants), but the boy ran away.
** Discussed when Lincoln and Leni want to rent a movie with gross-out humour so Lana can enjoy it.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: Discussed when the movie that Lincoln and Leni rent features a cat graphically throwing up onscreen.
* YouAreGrounded: Discussed when Lincoln thinks his parents would ground him for a week if he quoted the slogans on the punk hoodies.
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