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** And in Chapter 27, the five remaining male supporting characters, Tatsuya Nakagawa, Noriyuki Fukushima, Kazuya Yamada, Atsushi Ishidate, and Nobuaki Kawanami, were all introduced.
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The story starts in [[TwentyMinutesIntoThePast February of 2010]], 2 years after the girls graduate from Ryouou High School. The synopsis of the story is that the 4 main characters have been separated (Konata and Kagami now attend Kyoto University, while Tsukasa and Miyuki now attend the University of Tokyo), however one event will set forward a chain reaction that will bring them closer together than ever before.
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* TrueCompanions: Mariko and Chiyoko qualify to some extent. After all, they've been best friends ever since ''the day they started kindergarten''.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Just barely averted with Konata and Kagami during Chapter 2. They were hit hard by the actions of their respective fathers, and were about to jump off the bridge. Thankfully for everyone involved, Hachiro talked them out of it.
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* InMemoriam: Chapter 29 was dedicated in memory of those killed in the Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting. Chapter 30 was dedicated to the people who lost their lives as well as the people who were injured in both the Boston Marathon explosion and the Texas Fertilizer explosion.
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* HugeSchoolgirl: Standing at 174 centimeters tall (almost 5'9") Tomoyo certainly qualifies as this.
* TokenMiniMoe: With a height of only 136 centimeters (just under 4'6"), Chiyoko easily qualifies as this.
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* VocalTagTeam: Chiyoko [[TokenMiniMoe Chiyoko]] and Tomoyo [[HugeSchoolgirl Tomoyo]] are the two lead vocalists for Red Roses and Blue Violets.
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* HeterosexualLifePartners: Mariko and Chiyoko, for certain. Both of them have boyfriends, but they still spend most, if not nearly all, of their time together.
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* [[ChristmasEpisode Christmas Chapter]]: Three so far, in Chapters 9-10, Chapter 22, and Chapter 27.
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* [[BirthdayEpisode Birthday Chapter]]: In the second half of Chapter 26, Yutaka celebrates her 21st birthday.
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* [[BirthdayEpisode Birthday Chapter]]: In the second half of Chapter 26, Yutaka celebrates her 21st birthday. It is also the day Minami proposes to her.
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* [[BirthdayEpisode Birthday Chapter]]: In the second half of Chapter 26, Yutaka celebrates her 21st birthday.
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* RupturedAppendix: In the first half of Chapter 26, Yutaka ends up getting appendicitis during her and Minami's senior year of college.
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School. The 4 main characters have been separated (Konata and Kagami now attend Kyoto University, while Tsukasa and Miyuki now attend the University of Tokyo)
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** And finally during Chapter 27, the five remaining male supporting characters, Tatsuya Nakagawa, Noriyuki Fukushima, Kazuya Yamada, Atsushi Ishidate, and Nobuaki Kawanami, were all introduced.
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** And finally during in Chapter 27, the five remaining male supporting characters, Tatsuya Nakagawa, Noriyuki Fukushima, Kazuya Yamada, Atsushi Ishidate, and Nobuaki Kawanami, were all introduced.
** And most recently in Chapter 30, Heather Johnson, Judith Thompson, and Rachel Anderson, three American girls, were introduced.
** And most recently in Chapter 30, Heather Johnson, Judith Thompson, and Rachel Anderson, three American girls, were introduced.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One of the rare non-ending examples. Konata gave birth to Kanata in Chapter 20. And Chapter 28 confirmed that another baby is on the way.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The first part of Chapter 2 runs on this, as Tadao and Sojiro (usually the OnlySaneMan and the BumblingDad respectively) are fighting with each other over their daughters marrying, and Hachiro (depicted in the first two fanfics as a NiceGuy) finally snaps at them and loses it.
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* TaremeEyes: Ayaka, Nanami, and Hiroko all sport this eyestyle.
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** In Chapter 27, Hiroko joined as the saxophone player
** And in Chapter 28, it's revealed Mikoto joined as a vocalist and a percussion player.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Mariko and Chiyoko got their own flashback arc which took place during Chapters 23 through 25.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story]]'' is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as January 28, May 15, 2013, there have been 29 30 chapters.
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** Of course from the previous two fanfics we have Ayaka and Nanami (introduced in The Day Everything Changed) and Mariko and Chiyoko (introduced in Holiday Vacation) all returning for this fanfic.
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** Of course from the previous two fanfics we have Ayaka and Nanami (introduced (who were both introduced in The Day Everything Changed) and Mariko and Chiyoko (introduced (who were both introduced in Holiday Vacation) all returning for this fanfic.
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* [[FiveManBandConcert Five Girl Band Concert]]: In Chapter 19, the band Red Roses and Blue Violets (organized by 5 of the original characters) perform "Castle in the Sky" at a Halloween party concert. As for the members, Ayaka is the bassist, Nanami is the lead guitarist, Mariko is the drummer, Chiyoko is the first lead vocalist and the keyboard player, and Tomoyo is the second lead vocalist and is the percussion player.
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** Of course from the previous two fanfics we have Ayaka and Nanami (introduced in The Day Everything Changed) and Mariko and Chiyoko (introduced in Holiday Vacation) all returning for this fanfic.
** In Chapter 17, Tomoyo Yoshida was introduced.
** In Chapter 21, Hiroko Yoshida (Tomoyo's little sister) was introduced.
** The first male supporting characters in the story, Katsuhiko Takahashi and Fumihiko Takemoto, were both introduced at the end of Chapter 23.
** Around the start of Chapter 26, Mikoto Furukawa is introduced.
** And finally during Chapter 27, the five remaining male supporting characters, Tatsuya Nakagawa, Noriyuki Fukushima, Kazuya Yamada, Atsushi Ishidate, and Nobuaki Kawanami, were all introduced.
** In Chapter 17, Tomoyo Yoshida was introduced.
** In Chapter 21, Hiroko Yoshida (Tomoyo's little sister) was introduced.
** The first male supporting characters in the story, Katsuhiko Takahashi and Fumihiko Takemoto, were both introduced at the end of Chapter 23.
** Around the start of Chapter 26, Mikoto Furukawa is introduced.
** And finally during Chapter 27, the five remaining male supporting characters, Tatsuya Nakagawa, Noriyuki Fukushima, Kazuya Yamada, Atsushi Ishidate, and Nobuaki Kawanami, were all introduced.
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Lucky Star: After Story is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as January 28, 2013, there have been 29 chapters.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7550345/1/Lucky-Star-After-Story Lucky Star: After Story Story]]'' is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as January 28, 2013, there have been 29 chapters.
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** In Chapter 2: Konata and Kagami get married on June 12, 2010.
** In Chapter 13: Tsukasa and Miyuki get married on September 10, 2011.
** In Chapter 28: Yutaka and Minami get married on July 20, 2013.
** In Chapter 2: Konata and Kagami get married on June 12, 2010.
** In Chapter 13: Tsukasa and Miyuki get married on September 10, 2011.
** In Chapter 28: Yutaka and Minami get married on July 20, 2013.
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Lucky Star: After Story is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as January 28, 2013, there have been 29 chapters.
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Lucky Star: After Story is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as January 28, 2013, there have been 29 chapters.chapters.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One of the rare non-ending examples.
* HasTwoMommies: As of Chapter 20, Konata and Kagami have a daughter named Kanata.
* ScreamingBirth: Somewhat subverted when Konata gave birth during Chapter 20. She mostly managed to say calm for most of the ordeal, only screaming a few times. She did end up crying a bit from the pain though.
* WeddingDay: This fanfic has three of them.
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* BabiesEverAfter: One of the rare non-ending examples.
* HasTwoMommies: As of Chapter 20, Konata and Kagami have a daughter named Kanata.
* ScreamingBirth: Somewhat subverted when Konata gave birth during Chapter 20. She mostly managed to say calm for most of the ordeal, only screaming a few times. She did end up crying a bit from the pain though.
* WeddingDay: This fanfic has three of them.
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Lucky Star: After Story is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'' Vacation'', and was written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2689121/Mr-FanficGuy Mr. Fanfic Guy.Guy]]. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as January 28, 2013, there have been 29 chapters.
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Lucky Star: After Story is the concluding fanfic of a 3-story Konata and Kagami story arc, after two earlier fanfics ''The Day Everything Changed'' and ''Holiday Vacation'' written by Mr. Fanfic Guy. The first chapter was uploaded on November 14, 2011 and as January 28, 2013, there have been 29 chapters.
