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->''"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."''
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->''"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,...myself... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."''
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."
-->--'''[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
-->--'''[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
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-->-- '''[[TheHero Kyoshi]]''', in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}}
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** A villain named [[Characters/Warhammer40000ChaosSpaceMarines Honsou]].
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* OutdatedByCannon: With the release of the Kyoshi's ''real'' backstory in ''Literature/TheRiseOfKyoshi'', this story is officially moved to discontinuity.
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* OutdatedByCannon: OutdatedByCanon: With the release of the Kyoshi's ''real'' ''cannon'' backstory in ''Literature/TheRiseOfKyoshi'', this story is officially moved to discontinuity.invalidated.
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* OutdatedByCannon: With the release of the Kyoshi's ''real'' backstory in ''Literature/TheRiseOfKyoshi'', this story is officially moved to discontinuity.
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* BerserkButton: Don't threaten or harm Kyoshi's loved ones. [[UnstoppableRage It won't end well]].
** She also doesn't take too kindly to people who pretend to be the Avatar.
** She also doesn't take too kindly to people who pretend to be the Avatar.
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* BerserkButton: Don't threaten or harm Kyoshi's loved ones. [[UnstoppableRage It won't end well]].
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-->--[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
-->--[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-'''
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-->--'''[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-'''[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-'''[[TheHero "-'''
-->--[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
-->--[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
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** Anything to do with [[BigBad Chin]] is slowly becoming one for Kyoshi.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Mai-Lin, although she does her best to hide it from her friends.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Mai-Lin, although she does her best to hide it from her friends. [[spoiler: It finally catches up to her in Chapter 46.]]
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Chin acts friendly and cordial towards Kyoshi when they meet. Keyword is ''act''.
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*StarterVillain: Jian Feng serves as the catalyst for Kyoshi's journey, and his presence and influence weighs heavily on her mind throughout her travels. [[spoiler: He's killed off in Chapter 38, but not after striking down Adachi.]]
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*BadLiar: Kyoshi.
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** Kyoshi vs. [[FakeUltimateHero Wong Chu]]: Kyoshi completely destroys Wong Chu while the latter is busy trying to make himself look impressive.
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** Kyoshi vs. [[FakeUltimateHero Wong Chu]]: Kyoshi completely destroys Wong Chu while the latter is busy trying to make himself look impressive. She takes him down even quicker when they fight again near the end of the first story arc.
*EyeScream: The One-eyed Earthbender gets first his good eye and then his face burned off when he fights Kyoshi.
**Even more explicit when [[spoiler: Kyoshi kills Jian Feng.]]
-->"I am not like you, [[spoiler: Jian Feng]]... But let me tell you of another mistake you made... I am not Kuruk."
-->"I am not like you, [[spoiler: Jian Feng]]... But let me tell you of another mistake you made... I am not Kuruk."
*KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Jian Feng and Adachi die by the end of the first arc.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: Minister Honsou is pulling the strings behind the Fire Nation royal family, working hard to make sure they stay under his control. hard enough that he is willing to [[spoiler: hire Jian Feng as a mercenary to attack the Fire Nation and draw Kyoshi away from the Fire Nation.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: Minister Honsou is pulling the strings behind the Fire Nation royal family, working hard to make sure they stay under his control. hard Hard enough that he is willing to [[spoiler: hire Jian Feng as a mercenary to attack the Fire Nation and draw Kyoshi away from the Fire Nation.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: One of Jian Feng's motives for hunting Kyoshi. [[HiddenAgendaVillain Why he wants revenge is as of yet unknown.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: One of Jian Feng's motives for hunting Kyoshi. [[HiddenAgendaVillain Why Kyoshi; Kuruk made some kind of slight against him, and he wants is now set on taking out his revenge is as of yet unknown.]][[RevengeByProxy on his successor]].
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* ShockAndAwe: Miyaki starts researching the possibility of Bending Lightning after she brings it up in a conversation with Kyoshi. [[spoiler: she succeed and uses it to subdue Honsou.]]
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* ShockAndAwe: Miyaki starts researching the possibility of Bending Lightning after she brings it up in a conversation with Kyoshi. [[spoiler: she She succeed and uses it to subdue Honsou.]]
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* ABoyAGirlAndABabyFamily: Kyoshi is the youngest of three (her older sister being approximately nine years older), and is the only Bender in the family.
*BigShutUp: Kyoshi to Adachi, when their discussion about dealing with Jian Feng and a possible traitor devolves into an argument.
* ABoyAGirlAndABabyFamily: Kyoshi is the youngest of three (her older sister being approximately nine years older), and is the only Bender in the family.
* ABoyAGirlAndABabyFamily: Kyoshi is the youngest of three (her older sister being approximately nine years older), and is the only Bender in the family.
*MotiveRant: [[spoiler: Honsou, after he is attacked by Miyaki, rants about how his manipulations were done to help the Fire Nation. This is enough for her to convict him and have him arrested.]]
*ShockAndAwe: Miyaki starts researching the possibility of Bending Lightning after she brings it up in a conversation with Kyoshi. [[spoiler: she succeed and uses it to subdue Honsou.]]
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* TheNeedsOfTheMany: Yangchen's philosophy boils down to this; it is the Avatar's duty to preserve balance in the world, and thus they must be unrestrained from all possible bonds.
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* TheNeedsOfTheMany: Yangchen's philosophy boils down to this; it is the Avatar's duty to preserve balance in the world, and thus they must be unrestrained from all possible bonds. Kyoshi appears to be taking up this view when she goes to confront Jian Feng.
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*WellDoneSonGuy: Both of the fire Nation siblings have issues regarding their father's ParentalNeglect.
*WellIntentionedExtremist: Minister Honsou claims to have done all his manipulations for the betterment of the Fire Nation. [[spoiler: It's not enough to save him from being arrested.]]
*WellIntentionedExtremist: Minister Honsou claims to have done all his manipulations for the betterment of the Fire Nation. [[spoiler: It's not enough to save him from being arrested.]]
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* CombatHandFan: Lady Sho's specialty. Ty Jun knows a bit of the art and Kyoshi hopes to learn from the master.
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* CombatHandFan: Lady Sho's specialty. Ty Jun knows a bit of the art and Kyoshi hopes seeks out Lady Sho to learn from the master.her.
**Kyoshi herself towards Princess Miyaki, tempering the princess' brattiness while also assisting her with lessons in Firebending and leadership.
*DarkAndTroubledPast: Mai-Lin, although she does her best to hide it from her friends.
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* HoldingHands: Kyoshi and Prince Adachi, if [[ShipTease only for a few seconds]].
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* ManipulativeBastard: Minister Honsou is pulling the strings behind the Fire Nation royal family, working hard to make sure they stay under his control.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Minister Honsou is pulling the strings behind the Fire Nation royal family, working hard to make sure they stay under his control. hard enough that he is willing to [[spoiler: hire Jian Feng as a mercenary to attack the Fire Nation and draw Kyoshi away from the Fire Nation.]]
*ShowWithinAShow: Sun's stage adaptation of "The Avatar and the Dragon Queen", an old history on the rise of the Fire Nation. Watching the play gives Kyoshi a few things to think about in regards to her duties as the Avatar, and influences the decision to choose her makeup for her IconicOutfit.
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* SternTeacher: Lady Sho; she constantly calls Kyoshi an "idiot girl", gives Kyoshi vague instructions on performing tasks (and then hits Kyoshi with her fans or thrown sticks if Kyoshi gets the task wrong/questions the task), and keeps Kyoshi relatively isolated from the rest of the world. However, her training does produce results, and Kyoshi is able to learn quickly and win some respect from the master.
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* SternTeacher: Lady Sho; she constantly calls Kyoshi an "idiot girl", gives Kyoshi vague instructions on performing tasks (and then hits Kyoshi with her fans or thrown sticks if Kyoshi gets the task wrong/questions the task), and keeps Kyoshi relatively isolated from the rest of the world. However, her training does produce results, and Kyoshi is able to learn quickly and win some respect from the master. And she is not a total sadist, allowing Kyoshi a day off to see Sun's play.
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* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Kyoshi would have been fine just living out her life on her family farm, but then Jian Feng attacks her home...
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* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Kyoshi would have been fine just living out her life on her family farm, but then Jian Feng attacks her home...home and she's forced to take up her role as the Avatar.
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*BetterAsFriends: Kyoshi and Adachi ultimately decide to stay friends instead of pursuing a relationship.
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*SternTeacher: Lady Sho; she constantly calls Kyoshi an "idiot girl", gives Kyoshi vague instructions on performing tasks (and then hits Kyoshi with her fans or thrown sticks if Kyoshi gets the task wrong/questions the task), and keeps Kyoshi relatively isolated from the rest of the world. However, her training does produce results, and Kyoshi is able to learn quickly and win some respect from the master.
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* CoolOldGuy: Lau Dan, Xin Beifong and Wei-Jin. This was to be expected, since they are [[spoiler: members of the White Lotus.]]
* CountryMouse: Kyoshi is very impressed by Omashu and large cities in general. She doesn't like crowds or how paranoid the guards are, though, and has very little experience dealing with nobles or rulers.
* CowboysAndIndians: As a child, Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
* CountryMouse: Kyoshi is very impressed by Omashu and large cities in general. She doesn't like crowds or how paranoid the guards are, though, and has very little experience dealing with nobles or rulers.
* CowboysAndIndians: As a child, Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
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* CountryMouse:
* CowboysAndIndians: As a child, Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
* CoolOldGuy: Lau Dan, Xin Beifong and Wei-Jin. This was to be expected, since they are [[spoiler: members of the White Lotus.]]
* CountryMouse: Kyoshi is very impressed by Omashu and large cities in general. She doesn't like crowds or how paranoid the guards are, though, and has very little experience dealing with nobles or rulers.
* CowboysAndIndians: As a child, Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
*CurbStompBattle: a few, not all of them in favor of Kyoshi:
**Kyoshi vs. [[FakeUltimateHero Wong Chu]]: Kyoshi completely destroys Wong Chu while the latter is busy trying to make himself look impressive.
**Kyoshi vs. [[RoyalBrat Princess Miyaki]]: while not a serious fight, Kyoshi manages to beat the princess simply by out-maneuvering her before striking at opportune moments.
**Kyoshi vs. [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Fire]] [[ParentalNeglect Lord]] Mitsuo: Kyoshi is beaten rather savagely, but [[CurbStompCushion manages to land a final hit on the Fire Lord]], forcing the fight into a draw.
**Kyoshi vs. [[RenownedSelectiveMentor Lady Sho]]: Kyoshi loses, but does win the right to train with Lady Sho.
* CowboysAndIndians: As a child, Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
*CurbStompBattle: a few, not all of them in favor of Kyoshi:
**Kyoshi vs. [[FakeUltimateHero Wong Chu]]: Kyoshi completely destroys Wong Chu while the latter is busy trying to make himself look impressive.
**Kyoshi vs. [[RoyalBrat Princess Miyaki]]: while not a serious fight, Kyoshi manages to beat the princess simply by out-maneuvering her before striking at opportune moments.
**Kyoshi vs. [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Fire]] [[ParentalNeglect Lord]] Mitsuo: Kyoshi is beaten rather savagely, but [[CurbStompCushion manages to land a final hit on the Fire Lord]], forcing the fight into a draw.
**Kyoshi vs. [[RenownedSelectiveMentor Lady Sho]]: Kyoshi loses, but does win the right to train with Lady Sho.
*FluffyTamer: Kyoshi tames a shirshu, which she named "Isra", before facing Lady Sho.
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* RenownedSelectiveMentor: Lady Sho, one of the last practitioners of the art of using fans in combat and Ty Jun's former instructor. She's a recluse who lives on Ember Island and has turned away many potential students, including the Fire Lord himself.
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* RenownedSelectiveMentor: Lady Sho, one of the last practitioners of the art of using fans in combat [[CombatHandFan Combat hand fans]] and Ty Jun's former instructor. She's a recluse who lives on Ember Island and has turned away many potential students, including the Fire Lord himself.
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* RoyalBrat: My God, princess Miyaki. Partially justified in that she's trying to get attention, due to her father neglecting her and her brother, and she seems to be getting better once Kyoshi starts reaching out to her.
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* RoyalBrat: My God, princess Princess Miyaki. Partially justified in that she's trying to get attention, due to her father neglecting her and her brother, and she seems to be getting better once Kyoshi starts reaching [[CharacterDevelopment She grows out to her.of it through Kyoshi's influence]].
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*TrialByCombat: To be accepted as a student of Lady Sho, Kyoshi has to fight a duel against the master. Kyoshi loses, but Lady Sho decides to train her anyway.
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* HoldIngHands: Kyoshi and Prince Adachi, if [[ShipTease only for a few seconds]].
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*TinyTyrannicalGirl: Princess Miyaki demands plenty of things, most of them focusing on having her brother or Kyoshi teach her Firebending than a more capable master. It takes Kyoshi confronting her head-on that Miyaki [[TookALevelInKindness takes a level in kindness]] and mellows out.
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* WizardDuel: Agni Kai, as in canon. Kyoshi ends up fighting one with Fire Lord Mitsuo after their argument over parenting; the result is Kyoshi is beaten into unconsciousness but manages to land a final blow on the Fire Lord, causing a draw.
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*HonorBeforeReason: Mai-Lin accuses the Fire Nation nobility of this after Kyoshi's Agni Kai with the Fire Lord.
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** Sun's occupation as a WanderingMinstrel demands that he does this. He doesn't seem to mind, until his wanderings lead to him getting into trouble.
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** Sun's occupation as a WanderingMinstrel demands that he does this. He doesn't seem to mind, until his wanderings lead to him getting into trouble.trouble.
*WizardDuel: Agni Kai, as in canon. Kyoshi ends up fighting one with Fire Lord Mitsuo after their argument over parenting; the result is Kyoshi is beaten into unconsciousness but manages to land a final blow on the Fire Lord, causing a draw.
*WizardDuel: Agni Kai, as in canon. Kyoshi ends up fighting one with Fire Lord Mitsuo after their argument over parenting; the result is Kyoshi is beaten into unconsciousness but manages to land a final blow on the Fire Lord, causing a draw.
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*ObstructiveBureaucrat: the magistrate's assistant in the first town Kyoshi and Sun visit continuously rejects Kyoshi's offers to help with a spirit problem, even after she reveals herself to be the Avatar. Kyoshi eventually gets fed up with him and puts him in a NeckLift.
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-'''The title character, in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-'''The title character, "-'''[[TheHero Kyoshi]], in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.'''
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: Subverted the hell and back with Princess Miyaki, a selfish, egocentric and classist SpoiledBrat.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: Subverted the hell and back at first with Princess Miyaki, a selfish, egocentric and classist SpoiledBrat.SpoiledBrat. Once Kyoshi starts reaching out to her, she gets better.
*ManipulativeBastard: Minister Honsou is pulling the strings behind the Fire Nation royal family, working hard to make sure they stay under his control.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Fire Lord Mitsuo. He is a stern father but he seems to want the best for both his son and his nation, although his ParentalNeglect sometimes gets in the way.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Fire Lord Mitsuo. He is a stern father but he seems to want the best for both his son and his nation, although his ParentalNeglect sometimes gets in the way.way and he can be manipulated by the likes of Honsou.
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* RoyalBrat: My God, princess Miyaki. Partially justified in that she's trying to get attention, due to her father neglecting her and her brother.
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* RoyalBrat: My God, princess Miyaki. Partially justified in that she's trying to get attention, due to her father neglecting her and her brother.brother, and she seems to be getting better once Kyoshi starts reaching out to her.
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*TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Kyoshi would have been fine just living out her life on her family farm, but then Jian Feng attacks her home...
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* [[TameHisAnger Tame Her Anger]]: A recurring theme concerning Kyoshi; Kuruk points out her anger issues when they first speak, and Kyoshi lets her tamper get the best of her and she yells at the Fire Lord when calling him out on his ParentalNeglect. Several characters say that while she was in the right, she didn't have to scream about it.
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* [[TameHisAnger Tame Her Anger]]: A recurring theme concerning Kyoshi; Kuruk points out her anger issues when they first speak, and Kyoshi lets her tamper temper get the best of her and she yells at the Fire Lord when calling him out on his ParentalNeglect. Several characters say that while she was in the right, she didn't have to scream about it.
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*RenownedSelectiveMentor: Lady Sho, one of the last practitioners of the art of using fans in combat and Ty Jun's former instructor. She's a recluse who lives on Ember Island and has turned away many potential students, including the Fire Lord himself.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Firelord Mitsuo. He is a stern father but he seems to want the best for both his son and his nation.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Firelord Fire Lord Mitsuo. He is a stern father but he seems to want the best for both his son and his nation.nation, although his ParentalNeglect sometimes gets in the way.
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*ParentalNeglect: Fire Lord Mitsuo, due to lingering grief over his wife's death.
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*BadassNormal: Ty Jun, a high ranking general in the Fire Nation military and the inventor of Chi Blocking.
