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* CountryMouse: Kyoshi is very impressed by Omashu and large cities in general. She doesn't like crowds or how paranoid the guards are, though.
* CowboysAndIndians: Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
* CowboysAndIndians: Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
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* CountryMouse: Kyoshi is very impressed by Omashu and large cities in general. She doesn't like crowds or how paranoid the guards are, though.
though, and has very little experience dealing with nobles or rulers.
* CowboysAndIndians: As a child, Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
* CowboysAndIndians: As a child, Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: Fire Nation Prince Adachi. His father even reprove him for doing reckless things to help his subjects.
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* TheWisePrince: Prince Adachi. He does his best to help people, wish to learn how to be a good Firelord and treats commonners with respect.
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* EverythingsBetterWithPrincesses: Subverted the hell and back with Princess Miyabi, Miyaki, a selfish, egocentric and classist SpoiledBrat.
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* RoyalBrat: My God, princess Miyabi.Miyaki.
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* EverythingIsBetterWithPrincess: Subverted the hell and back with Princess Miyabi, a selfish, egocentric and classist SpoiledBrat.
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* EverythingIsBetterWithPrincess: Subverted the hell and back with Princess Miyabi, a selfish, egocentric and classist SpoiledBrat.
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* OhCrap: Kyoshi, when she [[spoiler: meets Sage Gorou after her escape from the temple.]]
* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Firelord Mitsuo. He is a stern father but he seems to want the best for both his son and his nation.
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* RoyalBrat: My God, princess Miyabi.
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* ElsewhereFic: Set about 400 years before the main series. The only canon characters that show up are [[CaptainObvious Kyoshi]] and her past lives.
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* TheGambler: Sun; he almost [[LostHimInACardGame lost his earlier traveling partner in a bet]], and would have lost quite a bit of money to a ConArtist had Kyoshi not cleared things up.
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* TheGambler: TheGamblingAddict: Sun; he almost [[LostHimInACardGame lost his earlier traveling partner in a bet]], and would have lost quite a bit of money to a ConArtist had Kyoshi not cleared things up.
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* HumbleHero: Kyoshi doesn't like receive any special treatment.
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* HumbleHero: Kyoshi doesn't like receive receiving any special treatment.
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* CoolOldGuy: Lau Dan, Xin Beifong and Wei-Jin. This was to be expected, since they are [[spoiler: members of the White Lotus.]]
* CountryMouse: Kyoshi is very impressed by Omashu and large cities in general. She doesn't like crowds or how paranoids the guards are, though.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Kyoshi is the tomboy to her very girly sister Mei.
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* ItsAllMyFault: Kyoshi blames herself for [[spoiler: her mother being injured by bandits on the night Kyoshi learned she was the Avatar]].
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* ItsAllMyFault: IShouldHaveBeenBetter: Kyoshi blames herself for [[spoiler: her mother being injured by bandits on the night Kyoshi learned she was the Avatar]].Avatar]]. Her main goal is to make sure that never happens to anyone ever again.
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*ElsewhereFic: Set about 400 years before the main series. The only canon characters that show up are [[CaptainObvious Kyoshi]] and her past lives.
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* WanderingMinstrel: Sun, whom Kyoshi meets early in her journey. He doesn't actually get an instrument until they arrive in Omashu, and usually acts as Kyoshi's tether in case she starts slipping too far into KnightTemplar mode.
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* WanderingMinstrel: Sun, whom Kyoshi meets early in her journey. He doesn't actually get an instrument until they arrive in Omashu, and usually acts as Kyoshi's tether in case she starts slipping too far into KnightTemplar mode.mode.
*WalkingTheEarth: Kyoshi, in a literal sense of the term; she spends most of her time walking from place to place, although she does get help from fishermen, merchant sailors [[spoiler: and White Lotus members.]]
**Sun's occupation as a WanderingMinstrel demands that he does this. He doesn't seem to mind, until his wanderings lead to him getting into trouble.
*WalkingTheEarth: Kyoshi, in a literal sense of the term; she spends most of her time walking from place to place, although she does get help from fishermen, merchant sailors [[spoiler: and White Lotus members.]]
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*ConArtist: Kyoshi and Sun run into one on their way to Omashu. Kyoshi uses her Earthbending to expose his cheating to the (now very angry) crowd.
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*CooldownHug: Sun administers one to Kyoshi when she almost smashes the head of one of the men who attacked her family.
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*TheGambler: Sun; he almost [[LostHimInACardGame lost his earlier traveling partner in a bet]], and would have lost quite a bit of money to a ConArtist had Kyoshi not cleared things up.
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*LostHimInACardGame: In Sun's backstory, he almost had his travelling partner enslaved by Sandbenders when he bet too high in a game. His partner repaid him once they reached Gaoling by taking the winnings and framing Sun for robbery.
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*TheBard: Sun; a WanderingMinstrel from a long line of Wandering Minstrels, he meets Kyoshi as he's traveling the Earth Kingdom collecting songs and stories. His dream is to write the Avatar's biography, and he tries his best to use his knowledge of folklore and theater to help Kyoshi achieve her potential, to varying degrees of success.
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*TheConfidant: Sun is slowly growing into this role for Kyoshi, helping her open up and lending an ear whenever she needs someone to talk to.
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*CowboysAndIndians: Kyoshi's older brother and his friends enjoy playing rounds of "Earth Kingdom Soldier", breaking off into teams and having the heroic Earth Kingdom defeating the evil Fire King with the assistance of the Avatar (the biggest argument is not over who gets to be on the good team, but who gets to be the Avatar). Kyoshi is often "kidnapped" to be the DamselInDistress, at least until she gets more control over her Earthbending and gets everyone to accept her as the Avatar whenever they play.
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* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Unfortunately for [[FakeUltimateHero Wong-Chu]], it is not.
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* TalkingIsAFreeAction: Unfortunately for [[FakeUltimateHero Wong-Chu]], it is not.Played straight during Kyoshi's fight with Jian Feng and his group, averted during her fight with Wong-Chu.
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*IWorkAlone: Kyoshi's initial outlook. Sun talks her out of it after she reveals she's the Avatar.
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*GrumpyBear: Sun pegs Kyoshi for this, as much as she would deny it.
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**When Kyoshi's powers first manifest, she pushes her brother and sister away with some small pillars. Her sister runs to her mother and says Kyoshi [[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries threw a rock at her... it was a big rock]].
**The FakeUltimateHero Kyoshi fights in Omashu, Wong-Chu, was based off an early ComicBook/IronMan villain, a Vietnamese colonel who liked to wrestle his prisoners in exchange for their "freedom".
**When Kyoshi's powers first manifest, she pushes her brother and sister away with some small pillars. Her sister runs to her mother and says Kyoshi [[WesternAnimation/BatmanTheAnimatedSeries threw a rock at her... it was a big rock]].
**The FakeUltimateHero Kyoshi fights in Omashu, Wong-Chu, was based off an early ComicBook/IronMan villain, a Vietnamese colonel who liked to wrestle his prisoners in exchange for their "freedom".
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*TalkingIsAFreeAction: Unfortunately for [[FakeUltimateHero Wong-Chu]], it is not.
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*IAmNotHim: Kyoshi is a bit more blunt than Kuruk was, and people have noticed it.
-->'''ObstructiveBureaucrat (whom Kyoshi currently has in a NeckLift):''' Th-the Avatar wouldn't threaten people.
-->'''Kyoshi:''' Sorry if I am not Kuruk, but your actions and blatant disrespect for the spirits have endangered the entire village. If I need to threaten you, then so be it.
-->'''ObstructiveBureaucrat (whom Kyoshi currently has in a NeckLift):''' Th-the Avatar wouldn't threaten people.
-->'''Kyoshi:''' Sorry if I am not Kuruk, but your actions and blatant disrespect for the spirits have endangered the entire village. If I need to threaten you, then so be it.
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*{{Revenge}}: One of Jian Feng's motives for hunting Kyoshi. [[HiddenAgendaVillain Why he wants revenge is as of yet unknown.]]
*StatuesqueStunner: Kyoshi usually towers over most of the people she interacts with.
*StatuesqueStunner: Kyoshi usually towers over most of the people she interacts with.
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*IDidWhatIHadToDo: Yangchen's outlook on her tenure as the Avatar.
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*TheNeedsOfTheMany: Yangchen's philosophy boils down to this; it is the Avatar's duty to preserve balance in the world, and thus they must be unrestrained from all possible bonds.
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*TakeThat: The style of Bending in ''Film/TheLastAirbender'' is mocked a few times, with Lau Dan saying that excessive arm motions actually makes a person's Bending weaker.
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*CoolTeacher: Lau Dan, Kyoshi's Earthbending instructor [[spoiler: and White Lotus member]].
*FearOfThunder: Kyoshi expresses a dislike of storms, saying that she used to run crying for her parents whenever a storm rolled in.
*HowDoIShotWeb: At the beginning of the story, Kyoshi is only a child and thus has little experience with actual Earthbending. She tries to teach herself based off of what others have told her (mainly flailing her arms and stomping her feet ala ''Film/TheLastAirbender''), but can never Bend more than a few small rocks unless she gets angry. Once she gets some formal training, she progresses quickly.
*HowDoIShotWeb: At the beginning of the story, Kyoshi is only a child and thus has little experience with actual Earthbending. She tries to teach herself based off of what others have told her (mainly flailing her arms and stomping her feet ala ''Film/TheLastAirbender''), but can never Bend more than a few small rocks unless she gets angry. Once she gets some formal training, she progresses quickly.
*TheMedic: Mai-Lin;in the scene she is introduced in, she heals Kyoshi's arms after the latter burns them in a duel.
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* MundaneUtility: [[CoolTeacher Lau Dan]] teaches Kyoshi how to use her Earthbending to fish (although he has [[WaxOnWaxOff practical reasons]] for it; Earthbenders need to be able to feel impacts and tremors through the ground, so they don't get snuck up on).
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* MundaneUtility: [[CoolTeacher Lau Dan]] teaches Kyoshi how to use her Earthbending to fish (although he has [[WaxOnWaxOff practical reasons]] for it; Earthbenders need to be able to feel impacts and tremors through the ground, so they don't get snuck up on).on).
*WanderingMinstrel: Sun, whom Kyoshi meets early in her journey. He doesn't actually get an instrument until they arrive in Omashu
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*BirthDeathJuxtaposition: Kuruk dies quelling a storm in the Northern Water Tribe, and the next scene shows Kyoshi being born in the Earth Kingdom.
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*[[FarmBoy Farm Girl]]: Kyoshi was born to farmers in the Southern Earth Kingdom.
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-The title character, in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-The "-'''The title character, in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.
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* FakeUlitmateHero: While in Omashu, Kyoshi runs into a man who claims to be the Avatar. She objects to his claims, and the two fight a duel over who is right. [[CurbStompBattle Kyoshi trashes him without breaking a sweat]].
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* FakeUlitmateHero: FakeUltimateHero: While in Omashu, Kyoshi runs into a man who claims to be the Avatar. She objects to his claims, and the two fight a duel over who is right. [[CurbStompBattle Kyoshi trashes him without breaking a sweat]].
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It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10004308/1/Kyoshi-Rising here]]. Or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1272487/chapters/2629480 here]].
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It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10004308/1/Kyoshi-Rising here]]. Or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1272487/chapters/2629480 here]].here]].
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*ABoyAGirlAndABabyFamily: Kyoshi is the youngest of three (her older sister being approximately nine years older), and is the only Bender in the family.
*BerserkButton: Don't threaten or harm Kyoshi's loved ones. [[UnstoppableRage It won't end well]].
*FakeUlitmateHero: While in Omashu, Kyoshi runs into a man who claims to be the Avatar. She objects to his claims, and the two fight a duel over who is right. [[CurbStompBattle Kyoshi trashes him without breaking a sweat]].
*ItsAllMyFault: Kyoshi blames herself for [[spoiler: her mother being injured by bandits on the night Kyoshi learned she was the Avatar]].
*MundaneUtility: [[CoolTeacher Lau Dan]] teaches Kyoshi how to use her Earthbending to fish (although he has [[WaxOnWaxOff practical reasons]] for it; Earthbenders need to be able to feel impacts and tremors through the ground, so they don't get snuck up on).
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*ABoyAGirlAndABabyFamily: Kyoshi is the youngest of three (her older sister being approximately nine years older), and is the only Bender in the family.
*BerserkButton: Don't threaten or harm Kyoshi's loved ones. [[UnstoppableRage It won't end well]].
*FakeUlitmateHero: While in Omashu, Kyoshi runs into a man who claims to be the Avatar. She objects to his claims, and the two fight a duel over who is right. [[CurbStompBattle Kyoshi trashes him without breaking a sweat]].
*ItsAllMyFault: Kyoshi blames herself for [[spoiler: her mother being injured by bandits on the night Kyoshi learned she was the Avatar]].
*MundaneUtility: [[CoolTeacher Lau Dan]] teaches Kyoshi how to use her Earthbending to fish (although he has [[WaxOnWaxOff practical reasons]] for it; Earthbenders need to be able to feel impacts and tremors through the ground, so they don't get snuck up on).
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-->"Perhaps I forgot to introduce myself,... My name is Kyoshi. I was born in the Southern Earth Kingdom to farmers, Han and Lian. I started Earthbending when I was one, and was a master by the age of twelve. On my sixteenth birthday, I learned the truth; I was not just a farmer's daughter, not just a normal Earthbender... My name is Kyoshi, and I am the new Avatar."-The title character, in the process of beating down a {{Jerkass}} noble.
''Kyoshi Rising'' is an ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' FanFic by iowaforever, focusing on the titular Avatar and her rise to prominence after the death of Avatar Kuruk.
It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10004308/1/Kyoshi-Rising here]]. Or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1272487/chapters/2629480 here]].
''Kyoshi Rising'' is an ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' FanFic by iowaforever, focusing on the titular Avatar and her rise to prominence after the death of Avatar Kuruk.
It can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10004308/1/Kyoshi-Rising here]]. Or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1272487/chapters/2629480 here]].
