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** Mr. Burns has yet to make an appearance even though he's rebuilt his casino in Traverse Town.
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** Mr. Burns has and Lorne have yet to make an appearance even though he's they've rebuilt his casino the Monty Burns Casino and Caritas in Traverse Town.
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* AsHimself: The random movie scripts that mysteriously appear around Nicktown star various townspeople as themselves. They are written so well that Tommy Pickles films the movies with the collaboration of said townspeople. One example is Zim, who starred in "Zim Fantango".
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* AsHimself: The random movie scripts that mysteriously appear around Nicktown star various townspeople as themselves. They The more well-written ones are written so well that filmed by Tommy Pickles films the movies with the collaboration of said townspeople. One example is Zim, who starred in "Zim Fantango".
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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: The worst movie scripts that are mentioned under the AsHimself example above are used as a form of torture on heinous criminals: they are forced to read them.
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* BigNo: GIR when Zim turns off his movie. He bounces back when Zim puts in a new movie.
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* AsHimself: The random movie scripts that mysteriously appear around Nicktown star various townspeople as themselves. They are written so well that Tommy Pickles films the movies with the collaboration of said townspeople. One example is Zim, who starred in "Zim Fantango".
* BigNo: GIR when Zim turns off his movie. He bounces back when Zim puts ina new movie."Zim Fantango".
* BigNo: GIR when Zim turns off his movie. He bounces back when Zim puts in
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* DistractedByTheSexy: While the characters composing Orlando Bloo argue amongst themselves, Morte watches them briefly before turning to stare at a "passing woman of questionable morality".
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** As Stewie and Jarod are taking part in the Orlando Bloo TotemPoleTrench, Stewie picks up Calvin and Hobbes by the scruff of the neck, causing Jarod to protest.
--> '''Jarod''': Stewie, you better not be antagonizing them! You remember the incident with the Pokemon Ambassadors? ''I'' remember the incident with the Pokemon Ambassadors!
--> '''Jarod''': Stewie, you better not be antagonizing them! You remember the incident with the Pokemon Ambassadors? ''I'' remember the incident with the Pokemon Ambassadors!
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** Bloo dresses up as Orlando Bloo again.
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** Hobbes tricking Calvin into jumping into an open trash can reminds Calvin of the time he fell into a gravel driveway in order to stop rollerskating at Hobbes' suggestion.
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** Calvin after falling into a garbage can and rolling until it hits a lamppost:
--> '''Calvin''': Somebody stop the Planet of the Apes, I want to get off.
--> '''Calvin''': Somebody stop the Planet of the Apes, I want to get off.
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* TheGhost: Garfield, who probably won't be showing up until the end.
** Mr. Burns has yet to make an appearance even though he's rebuilt his casino in Traverse Town.
** The Elric brothers are constantly mentioned, but they are currently on some sort of mission away from Traverse Town.
** Mr. Burns has yet to make an appearance even though he's rebuilt his casino in Traverse Town.
** The Elric brothers are constantly mentioned, but they are currently on some sort of mission away from Traverse Town.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The fic's description (which has since been changed) used to spoil [[spoiler:[[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina Jiha]], [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Sierra]], and [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime Marceline the Vampire Queen]] joining Zim's party in the future. Said characters are still mentioned on the author's profile, but it only says that they'll be in the story.]] It turns out that [[WhatCouldHaveBeen this lineup is not happening after all]], as the author is rebooting the story with a different party.
* WhoEvenNeedsABrain: Cosmo is a Type IV example, at one point showing an x-ray revealing that his skull only contains some cobwebs and a sign saying "This Space for Rent".
* WhoEvenNeedsABrain: Cosmo is a Type IV example, at one point showing an x-ray revealing that his skull only contains some cobwebs and a sign saying "This Space for Rent".
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The fic's description (which has since been changed) used to spoil [[spoiler:[[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina Jiha]], [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Sierra]], and [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime Marceline the Vampire Queen]] joining Zim's party in the future. Said characters are still mentioned on the author's profile, but it only says that they'll be in the story.]] It turns out that [[WhatCouldHaveBeen this lineup is not happening after all]], as the author is rebooting the story with a different party.
* WhoEvenNeedsABrain: Cosmo is a Type IV example, at one point showing an x-ray revealing that his skull only contains some cobwebs and a sign saying "This Space for Rent".party.
* WhoEvenNeedsABrain: Cosmo is a Type IV example, at one point showing an x-ray revealing that his skull only contains some cobwebs and a sign saying "This Space for Rent".
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** When Calvin, Hobbes, and Morte first arrive in Traverse Town, Calvin has an idea of what to do next. Hobbes is more than a little skeptical.
--> '''Hobbes''': If it ends up like any of your other plans, we'll either be publicly ridiculed at gunpoint, end up crashing into the bottom of a cliff, wind up among xenophobic tentacled alien-beasts, attacked by giant prehistoric reptiles from the depths of a crazed artist's nightmares, or get so lost we create our own spacial singularity. ... And that last one happened in a ''straight room''.
--> '''Hobbes''': If it ends up like any of your other plans, we'll either be publicly ridiculed at gunpoint, end up crashing into the bottom of a cliff, wind up among xenophobic tentacled alien-beasts, attacked by giant prehistoric reptiles from the depths of a crazed artist's nightmares, or get so lost we create our own spacial singularity. ... And that last one happened in a ''straight room''.
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* PurpleProse: The high word count can be partly attributed to the ''Fanfic/MyImmortal''-esque[[note]]Only with proper spelling and grammar and a wider vocabulary.[[/note]] descriptions of every character's apparel.
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** Zim when he's about to die to the Darkside, but regains the strength to continue fighting after he hallucinates GIR.
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** Zim when his weapon suddenly disappears while fighting the Darkside.
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** Zim when his weapon suddenly disappears while fighting the Darkside.Wrath.
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** A dramatic one after Zim loses GIR, Dib, and Gaz:
--> '''Zim''': Wherever you are, I'm going to find you and get you back! NO MATTER WHAT!
--> '''Zim''': Wherever you are, I'm going to find you and get you back! NO MATTER WHAT!
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** Zim again when the first Shadow he encounters prepares to attack.
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** During the same session with Razputin:
--> '''Zim''': I always had a little bad luck. ... I blew out the power of Devastasis because I freaked out and blew up a snack machine with a Maim Bot, and there was that time I blew out the power to Irk five minutes after I was born.
** Calvin about to show Hobbes Garfield's note:
--> '''Calvin''': Wake up, we've got a problem even worse than the time I accidentally made twenty evil duplicates and they conquered the world for five and a half days but then spontaneously imploded for reasons I have yet to establish!
--> '''Zim''': I always had a little bad luck. ... I blew out the power of Devastasis because I freaked out and blew up a snack machine with a Maim Bot, and there was that time I blew out the power to Irk five minutes after I was born.
** Calvin about to show Hobbes Garfield's note:
--> '''Calvin''': Wake up, we've got a problem even worse than the time I accidentally made twenty evil duplicates and they conquered the world for five and a half days but then spontaneously imploded for reasons I have yet to establish!
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** At last year's Christmas party, Zim drank punch, which turned out to be alcohol to Irkens, and he ended up punching people out and flipping over furniture.
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** Zim when he can't find GIR as the Heartless begin to invade Nicktown.
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** At last year's Christmas party, Zim drank punch, which turned out to be alcohol to Irkens, and he ended up punching people out and flipping over furniture.
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* BuffySpeak:BuffySpeak: Zim cleaning up GIR's mess in the living room:
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* CallBack: [[{{VideoGame/Psychonauts}} Razputin]] recalls the time he ended up as Godzilla in a city populated by semi-intelligent lungfish. Also the Meat Circus.
** The Bigfoot who needs to sand his belt shows up again.
** Calvin considers Garfield's disappearance to be worse than the time he made those evil duplicates of himself.
** While lost in the Ocean Between, Hobbes reminds Calvin about the time they got lost in the Yukon.
** The Bigfoot who needs to sand his belt shows up again.
** Calvin considers Garfield's disappearance to be worse than the time he made those evil duplicates of himself.
** While lost in the Ocean Between, Hobbes reminds Calvin about the time they got lost in the Yukon.
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* CallBack: [[{{VideoGame/Psychonauts}} Razputin]] recalls Razputin doesn't want to jump into Zim's mind because...
--> '''Razputin''': You wouldn't believe the trouble I've had getting inside non-human minds. The last timehe I did that, I ended up as Godzilla in a city populated by semi-intelligent lungfish. Also And that was before the Meat Circus.
circus of meat.
** During the same session with Razputin, there is one to the unfinished episode "The Trial":
--> '''Zim''': I always had a little bad luck. The Tallest before Red and Purple were eaten by a giant memory absorbing monster I accidentally set loose on different occasions.
** The Bigfoot who needs to sand his belt showsup again.
** Calvin considers Garfield's disappearance to be worse thanup, first in the time he made those evil duplicates of Dive to the Heart, and later filming Dib humiliating himself.
**While Calvin, Hobbes, and Morte get lost in the Ocean Between, Hobbes reminds Calvin about the time they got lost in the Between:
--> '''Calvin''': I told you before, I don't get lost. As a technomancer, alchemist, and general mystic, I have an innate sense of direction.
--> '''Hobbes''': Yukon.
--> '''Razputin''': You wouldn't believe the trouble I've had getting inside non-human minds. The last time
** During the same session with Razputin, there is one to the unfinished episode "The Trial":
--> '''Zim''': I always had a little bad luck. The Tallest before Red and Purple were eaten by a giant memory absorbing monster I accidentally set loose on different occasions.
** The Bigfoot who needs to sand his belt shows
** Calvin considers Garfield's disappearance to be worse than
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--> '''Calvin''': I told you before, I don't get lost. As a technomancer, alchemist, and general mystic, I have an innate sense of direction.
--> '''Hobbes''': Yukon.
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** Sheen still believes Zim is a human with a bad skin condition, despite the fact that [[WesternAnimation/JimmyNeutronBoyGenius he himself has encountered aliens before]], and that Zim being an alien is common knowledge now. However, he may just be trolling Zim.
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** Sheen still believes Zim is a human with a bad skin condition, despite the fact that [[WesternAnimation/JimmyNeutronBoyGenius he himself has encountered aliens before]], and that Zim being an alien is common knowledge now.now (he doesn't even wear the disguise anymore). However, he may just be trolling Zim.
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* NonSequiturThud: Zim after GIR flies him to their destination too fast, dazing him: "I don't think I can do the exam, General Magnigaran; I got the brain worms again."
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* NonSequiturThud: Zim after GIR flies him to their destination too fast, dazing him: "I him.
--> '''Zim''': I don't think I can do the exam, General Magnigaran; I got the brain worms again."
--> '''Zim''': I don't think I can do the exam, General Magnigaran; I got the brain worms again.
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** Zim once inadvertently turned an oatmeal packet into a small supernova that wiped out half of Irk's sugar supply.
** Zim once freaked out and blew up a vending machine, blowing out the power of Devastasis.
** Three days before the start of the story, Carl and Sheen were attacked by aliens.
** Jimmy has a fear of exploding chocolate rabbits, somehow caused by GIR latching onto his head.
** Zim once freaked out and blew up a vending machine, blowing out the power of Devastasis.
** Three days before the start of the story, Carl and Sheen were attacked by aliens.
** Jimmy has a fear of exploding chocolate rabbits, somehow caused by GIR latching onto his head.
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** Zim once inadvertently turned telling Razputin about his past:
--> '''Zim''': Come to think of it, [working as a research scientist] was right after an oatmeal packet I tinkered with turned into asmall tiny supernova that and wiped out half of Irk's the planet's sugar supply.
**Zim once During the same session with Razputin:
--> '''Zim''': I always had a little bad luck. ... I blew out the power of Devastasis because I freaked out and blew up avending machine, blowing snack machine with a Maim Bot, and there was that time I blew out the power of Devastasis.
to Irk five minutes after I was born.
**Three Calvin about to show Hobbes Garfield's note:
--> '''Calvin''': Wake up, we've got a problem even worse than the time I accidentally made twenty evil duplicates and they conquered the world for five and a half daysbefore the start of the story, but then spontaneously imploded for reasons I have yet to establish!
** Carl and Sheenwere attacked by aliens.
look on as Zim beats up a rock:
--> '''Sheen''': And you wanted to go to the movies.
--> '''Carl''': In the movies, crazy aliens don't try to shoot you.
--> '''Sheen''': Didn't that happen about three days ago?
--> '''Carl''': Yeah, but they didn't yell as much.
** The last time GIR got onto Jimmy's head, Jimmyhas ended up with a fear severe phobia of exploding explosive chocolate rabbits, somehow caused by GIR latching onto his head.rabbits. He still has nightmares about them.
--> '''Zim''': Come to think of it, [working as a research scientist] was right after an oatmeal packet I tinkered with turned into a
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--> '''Zim''': I always had a little bad luck. ... I blew out the power of Devastasis because I freaked out and blew up a
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--> '''Calvin''': Wake up, we've got a problem even worse than the time I accidentally made twenty evil duplicates and they conquered the world for five and a half days
** Carl and Sheen
--> '''Sheen''': And you wanted to go to the movies.
--> '''Carl''': In the movies, crazy aliens don't try to shoot you.
--> '''Sheen''': Didn't that happen about three days ago?
--> '''Carl''': Yeah, but they didn't yell as much.
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* SkywardScream: Zim's very first line in the story: "Stupid story:
--> '''Zim''': Stupid thoughts... ''WHY WON'T YOU JUST SHUTUP!''"
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** After Zim and GIR escapecertain death...Plankton's assassination attempt...
--> '''Zim''': Stupid thoughts... ''WHY WON'T YOU JUST SHUT
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* StrollingThroughTheChaos: Gaz singlehandedly ended the galactic war by casually walking into the enemy base and unplugging the power grid. [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk And only because the signals were interfering with her Game Slave.]]
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* StrollingThroughTheChaos: Gaz singlehandedly ended the galactic war by casually walking into the enemy base and unplugging the power grid. grid, [[JerkWithAHeartOfJerk And only because the signals were interfering with her Game Slave.]]]]
* TalkingInYourSleep: Zim falls asleep while watching a movie with GIR. He says this in his sleep:
--> '''Zim''': Huh? What's that? Oh, yeah. I like cake, Rana. I deserve, 'cause I'm so amazing. I even got the Amazingly Amazible Award of Amazing Amazingness; I'm just that good. What? No, GIR, NO! STAY AWAY FROM THE POWER AMPLIFIER! THE SPONGECAKES! THEY BUUUURN!
* TalkingInYourSleep: Zim falls asleep while watching a movie with GIR. He says this in his sleep:
--> '''Zim''': Huh? What's that? Oh, yeah. I like cake, Rana. I deserve, 'cause I'm so amazing. I even got the Amazingly Amazible Award of Amazing Amazingness; I'm just that good. What? No, GIR, NO! STAY AWAY FROM THE POWER AMPLIFIER! THE SPONGECAKES! THEY BUUUURN!
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* TotemPoleTrench: [[WesternAnimation/FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends Bloo]], in his first appearance, disguises himself as Orlando Bloo once again, this time with the help of [[WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy Stewie Griffin]] and [[Series/ThePretender Jarod]].
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* TotemPoleTrench: [[WesternAnimation/FostersHomeForImaginaryFriends Bloo]], Bloo, in his first appearance, disguises himself as Orlando Bloo once again, this time with the help of [[WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy Stewie Griffin]] Griffin and [[Series/ThePretender Jarod]].Jarod.
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* GoodAngelBadAngel: Happens when Zim is conflicted as to whether or not to work or watch a movie with GIR.
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* GoodAngelBadAngel: Happens when Zim is conflicted as to whether or not to he should work or watch a movie with GIR.
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* BigNo: GIR when Zim turns off his movie. He bounces back when Zim puts in a new movie.
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* BuffySpeak:
--> '''Zim''': Prepare yourself to meet the delicious cleansing ''DOOM OF MY... THING I HAVE YET TO COMPOSE A NAME FOR!''
--> '''Zim''': Prepare yourself to meet the delicious cleansing ''DOOM OF MY... THING I HAVE YET TO COMPOSE A NAME FOR!''
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** While lost in the Ocean Between, Hobbes reminds Calvin about the time they got lost in the Yukon.
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* DirectionlessDriver: Calvin gets lost piloting the Gummi Ship in the Ocean Between.
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** Jimmy has a fear of exploding chocolate rabbits, somehow caused by GIR latching onto his head.
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** Sheen still believes Zim is a human with a bad skin condition, despite the fact that [[WesternAnimation/JimmyNeutronBoyGenius he himself has encountered aliens before]], and that Zim being an alien is common knowledge now.
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** Sheen still believes Zim is a human with a bad skin condition, despite the fact that [[WesternAnimation/JimmyNeutronBoyGenius he himself has encountered aliens before]], and that Zim being an alien is common knowledge now. However, he may just be trolling Zim.
** Cosmo had no idea that he's been married to Wanda for a thousand years.
** Cosmo had no idea that he's been married to Wanda for a thousand years.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The fic's description (which has since been changed) used to spoil [[spoiler:[[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina Jiha]], [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Sierra]], and [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime Marceline the Vampire Queen]] joining Zim's party in the future. Said characters are still mentioned on the author's profile, but it only says that they'll be in the story.]] It turns out that [[WhatCouldHaveBeen this lineup is not happening after all]], as the author is rebooting the story with a different party.
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* TrailersAlwaysSpoil: The fic's description (which has since been changed) used to spoil [[spoiler:[[Anime/TengenToppaGurrenLagann Kamina Jiha]], [[WesternAnimation/TotalDramaIsland Sierra]], and [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime Marceline the Vampire Queen]] joining Zim's party in the future. Said characters are still mentioned on the author's profile, but it only says that they'll be in the story.]] It turns out that [[WhatCouldHaveBeen this lineup is not happening after all]], as the author is rebooting the story with a different party.party.
* WhoEvenNeedsABrain: Cosmo is a Type IV example, at one point showing an x-ray revealing that his skull only contains some cobwebs and a sign saying "This Space for Rent".
* WhoEvenNeedsABrain: Cosmo is a Type IV example, at one point showing an x-ray revealing that his skull only contains some cobwebs and a sign saying "This Space for Rent".
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* PassThePopcorn: Sandy eats popcorn while filming a confrontation between Zim and GIR simply because she has nothing better to do.
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** After Zim and GIR escape certain death...
--> '''Zim''': I wouldn't have to use the override code if you could just ''grasp the concept of your own mortality!''
--> '''GIR''': Does it come with fries and a sixty-four ounce?
--> '''Zim''': ''You see what I have to live with?''
--> '''Zim''': I wouldn't have to use the override code if you could just ''grasp the concept of your own mortality!''
--> '''GIR''': Does it come with fries and a sixty-four ounce?
--> '''Zim''': ''You see what I have to live with?''
