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A ''Literature/{{Worm}}''/''[[TabletopGame/{{Exalted}}'' ''Literature/{{Worm}}''/''TabletopGame/{{Exalted}}'' AU [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/it-is-dark-exalted-worm.268262/ fic]] branching off a canon scene where Brian has been captured and tortured by [[MadScientist Bonesaw]]. Desperate to save himself and his friends by any means necessary, he [[DealWithTheDevil accepts an offer]] from the dead [[EldritchAbomination Primordial]] Cecelyne, and becomes an Infernal Exalted.
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A ''Literature/{{Worm}}''/''[[TabletopGame/{{Exalted}}]]'' ''Literature/{{Worm}}''/''[[TabletopGame/{{Exalted}}'' AU [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/it-is-dark-exalted-worm.268262/ fic]] branching off a canon scene where Brian has been captured and tortured by [[MadScientist Bonesaw]]. Desperate to save himself and his friends by any means necessary, he [[DealWithTheDevil accepts an offer]] from the dead [[EldritchAbomination Primordial]] Cecelyne, and becomes an Infernal Exalted.
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-->They killed my beautiful children, for they would not bend the knee. Their glorious empire of millions murdered by the usurpers. [[TrueCompanions Alec, proud and witty. Rachel, fierce against the foe. Lisa, brilliant and mercurial. Taylor, whom I loved. Aisha, who was mine to protect.]]
--> If ever I could win them back by guile or crushing force, they would be elevated to their rightful place beneath the Sun. I swore it.
-->The world was broken, and I could not put it right, bound as I was. I had to break free, not only for myself, but for them.
-->And acknowledging that, I simply stepped forward… and like a cracking egg, the world of memory shattered. And I was reborn.
A''Literature/{{Worm}}'' ''Literature/{{Worm}}''/''[[TabletopGame/{{Exalted}}]]'' AU [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/it-is-dark-exalted-worm.268262/ fic]] branching off a canon scene where Taylor
Brian has been captured and tortured by [[MadScientist Bonesaw]]. Desperate to save himself and his friends by any means necessary, he [[DealWithTheDevil accepts an offer]] from the dead [[EldritchAbomination Primordial]] Cecelyne, and becomes an Infernal Exalted.
It is a DeadFic, with only five or so chapters, but worth checking out.
--> If ever I could win them back by guile or crushing force, they would be elevated to their rightful place beneath the Sun. I swore it.
-->The world was broken, and I could not put it right, bound as I was. I had to break free, not only for myself, but for them.
-->And acknowledging that, I simply stepped forward… and like a cracking egg, the world of memory shattered. And I was reborn.
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It is a DeadFic, with only five or so chapters, but worth checking out.
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!! Tropes in ''It Is Dark'':
* CurseCutShort: Happens to Tattletale when Grue jumps into the ocean while carrying her.
* MrExposition: Fasherai, Brian's Coadjutor, teaches him about the Yozis and their minions in the first chapter.
* NoSell: Subverted.
-->Bonesaw remarked, “Yeah, poisons don’t work on me either.”
-->“This one will,” I promised her.
-->She almost immediately began to perspire, doubling over in pain so that she was only kept upright by my hands locked around her. “Huh,” she gasped, surprised. “I guess so.”
* HypocriticalHumor: Tattletale remarking, "Damn, I hate smart people."
* PragmaticVillainy: WordOfGod describes Brian's motivation as '[The Undersiders] becoming the uncontested and beloved rulers of Brockton Bay and beyond'.
* CurseCutShort: Happens to Tattletale when Grue jumps into the ocean while carrying her.
* MrExposition: Fasherai, Brian's Coadjutor, teaches him about the Yozis and their minions in the first chapter.
* NoSell: Subverted.
-->Bonesaw remarked, “Yeah, poisons don’t work on me either.”
-->“This one will,” I promised her.
-->She almost immediately began to perspire, doubling over in pain so that she was only kept upright by my hands locked around her. “Huh,” she gasped, surprised. “I guess so.”
* HypocriticalHumor: Tattletale remarking, "Damn, I hate smart people."
* PragmaticVillainy: WordOfGod describes Brian's motivation as '[The Undersiders] becoming the uncontested and beloved rulers of Brockton Bay and beyond'.
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