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-> '''Buwaro:''' “Hey, now! Are you...''encouraging'' me to do bad stuff?”
-> '''Kieri:''' “It certainly would be easier to punish you for it!”
-->-- ''Chapter 4, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131931646 Without Voice or Face]]''
-> '''Kieri:''' “It certainly would be easier to punish you for it!”
-->-- ''Chapter 4, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131931646 Without Voice or Face]]''
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-> '''Kieri:''' “It certainly would be easier to punish you for it!”
-->-- ''Chapter 4, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131931646 Without Voice or Face]]''
-> '''Kieri:''' “It certainly would be easier to punish you for it!”
-->-- ''Chapter 4, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131931646 Without Voice or Face]]''
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''Inverted All Along'' is an ongoing AlternateUniverse fanfic of the webcomic ''Webcomic/SlightlyDamned''. In this universe, Heaven and its Angels torment sinful people, whereas Hell and its Demons reward virtuous ones. The story follows Rhea Snaketail's journey as she is sent to Heaven, and is selected to be the Median escort to Kieri Suizahn's team.
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''Inverted All Along'' is an ongoing a completed AlternateUniverse fanfic of the webcomic ''Webcomic/SlightlyDamned''. In this universe, Heaven and its Angels torment sinful people, whereas Hell and its Demons reward virtuous ones. The story follows Rhea Snaketail's journey as she is sent to Heaven, and is selected to be the Median escort to Kieri Suizahn's team.
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-> '''Buwaro:''' “Hey, now! Are you...''encouraging'' me to do bad stuff?”
-> '''Kieri:''' “It certainly would be easier to punish you for it!”
-->-- ''Chapter 4, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131931646 Without Voice or Face]]''
-> '''Kieri:''' “It certainly would be easier to punish you for it!”
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** [[Death's Final Judgment rounds up all Medians and asks them what to do with their world, giving them a chance to change things for the better.]]
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* DefeatByModesty: Kieri's embarrassment comes not from being unclothed, but unmasked.
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* DefeatByModesty: Kieri's embarrassment comes not from being unclothed, but unmasked.unmasked, not unclothed. In Angel culture, it's about the same thing.
-> '''Kieri:''' “Median, you seem to forget who is in charge here!”
-> '''Rhea:''' “And you seem to forget that you're not in Heaven anymore. Whatever big name status you have means nothing to me. If I don't want to follow you, I won't.”
-->-- ''Chapter 2, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131875951 Snow-Winged Hunter]]''
-> '''Rhea:''' “And you seem to forget that you're not in Heaven anymore. Whatever big name status you have means nothing to me. If I don't want to follow you, I won't.”
-->-- ''Chapter 2, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131875951 Snow-Winged Hunter]]''
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* SlidingScaleOfFreeWillVsFate: The Angels' plan is to [[spoiler:destroy free will itself and impose Gaia's light as the only way]]. Rhea would like to disagree.
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* SlidingScaleOfFreeWillVsFate: SlidingScaleOfFreeWillVsFate:
** The Angels' plan is to [[spoiler:destroy free will itself and impose Gaia's light as the only way]]. Rhea would like todisagree.disagree.
** [[Death's Final Judgment rounds up all Medians and asks them what to do with their world, giving them a chance to change things for the better.]]
-> '''Drazil:''' “But here's the funny thing about fate, Jakkai. It doesn't care. It doesn't ask whether people deserve it or not. Your fate was written in the Great Book long before you ever stepped foot onto Medius. Your actions, your beliefs...it's all empty air, next to fate.”
-->-- ''Chapter 1, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131779666 The Servitude to Fate]]''
** The Angels' plan is to [[spoiler:destroy free will itself and impose Gaia's light as the only way]]. Rhea would like to
** [[Death's Final Judgment rounds up all Medians and asks them what to do with their world, giving them a chance to change things for the better.]]
-> '''Drazil:''' “But here's the funny thing about fate, Jakkai. It doesn't care. It doesn't ask whether people deserve it or not. Your fate was written in the Great Book long before you ever stepped foot onto Medius. Your actions, your beliefs...it's all empty air, next to fate.”
-->-- ''Chapter 1, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131779666 The Servitude to Fate]]''
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* JusticeWillPrevail: Subverted. While Angels claim to want to rid the world of sin, their solution to do so is to [[eliminate free will and impose their worldview on Medians]].
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* JusticeWillPrevail: Subverted. While Angels claim to want to rid the world of sin, their solution to do so is to [[eliminate [[spoiler:eliminate free will and impose their worldview on Medians]].
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* BackFromTheDead: Rhea and Ramirez.
* BeingEvilSucks: Kieri grows to realize her Heaven upbringing might be a little bit inaccurate.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Demons in this AU are seen as good omens and loved by people.
* LightIsNotGood: Angels in this AU are masters of psychological torment.
* BeingEvilSucks: Kieri grows to realize her Heaven upbringing might be a little bit inaccurate.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Demons in this AU are seen as good omens and loved by people.
* LightIsNotGood: Angels in this AU are masters of psychological torment.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Drazil has a significant amount of lines for a character that never appeared in canon.
** Not counting [[{{https://www.sdamned.com/comic/842}} that one visual cameo]].
* AllCrimesAreEqual: Despite her insistence that she doesn't deserve this, Rhea ''is'' lumped in with the criminals and murderers.
* AlmostKiss: [[spoiler:Kieri and Buwaro]].
* BackFromTheDead: Rheaand ''and'' Ramirez.
*BeingEvilSucks: BattleTrophy: Rhea steals Kieri's mask after defeating her.
* BewareTheHonestOnes: Kierigrows to realize stands by her principles and prejudice even when all evidence seems to contradict them.
* DefeatByModesty: Kieri's embarrassment comes not from being unclothed, but unmasked.
* DontFearTheReaper: Death is said by Buwaro to be "nice". [[spoiler:Knowing their identity as Sakido, Buwaro's sister, it makes sense.]]
* EasyRoadToHell: Even young children can end up in Heaven.
* EmbodimentOfVirtue: Subverted with Kieri, who is quick to judge everything based on virtue and sin while being far from kind herself.
* FireAndBrimstoneHell: Inverted. While volcanic, Hell is actually a pleasant place.
* GodIsEvil: Mother Gaia [[spoiler:is the one leading the assault on Medius]].
* HeavenVersusHell: Here, it was Angels that led the attack onto Medius and Demons that came to its defense.
* HellOfAHeaven: Here, Heavenupbringing might be a little bit inaccurate.
is where sinners get tormented.
*DarkIsNotEvil: AHellOfATime: Here, Hell is an everlasting party celebrating life.
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Kieri assumes Medians are full of sin and Demonsin this AU are seen as good omens enablers. When Buwaro turns out to not fit that mold, she really wishes he did.
* IronicHell: As a punishment for lying, Rhea gets her tongue burned off. Or at least she would have, were it not for the selection.
* ItsAllMyFault: Ramirez tried to stop Rhea's murderer, andloved by people.
got killed as well. Both of them feel conflicted about it.
* JusticeWillPrevail: Subverted. While Angels claim to want to rid the world of sin, their solution to do so is to [[eliminate free will and impose their worldview on Medians]].
* LightIsNotGood: Angelsin use Holy Light magic, but they're far from benevolent.
* MightMakesRight: Subverted. Kieri uses her status as an Angel to command Rhea around, but the latter simply refuses.
* MoralDilemma: Kieri, several times.
** She assumes that Demons are sinful enablers, and would like to punish Buwaro for it; however, he's actually a nice person. [[{{WouldNotShootAGoodGuy}} It would then make no sense to punish him for something he didn't do]].
** She cannot push him to act wrongly either, for it would then be ''her'' wrongdoing.
* MoralSociopathy: Kieri (and Angels) rate Medians according to virtue, and will give precedence to those on top.
* ParentalSubstitute:
** Iratu took Buwaro into Hell thisAU time, and does care about him.
** While [[spoiler:Darius']] circumstances were different, he still took care of the three Demon children and gave them his pendants.
* Psychopomp:
** Death accompanies Rhea to the gates of Heaven.
** Subverted with Drazil, who makes her climb the thousand steps to Heaven on her own. Either that, or he'll bring her up as a corpse hanging from his sword.
* ReincarnationFriendship: [[spoiler:Following the Final Judgment, everyone is reborn again in a different Medius. Rhea, Buwaro and Kieri aremasters still friends.]]
* RelievingTheReaper: [[spoiler:Sakido.]]
* SealedOrders: Kieri doesn't know the whole ofpsychological torment.Heaven's plans, only [[spoiler:Kazai]] does as he's their team leader. Seraph Angels also withhold information regarding [[spoiler:the identity of their new leader]].
* SlidingScaleOfFreeWillVsFate: The Angels' plan is to [[spoiler:destroy free will itself and impose Gaia's light as the only way]]. Rhea would like to disagree.
* StairwayToHeaven: A gigantic spiral staircase said to be a thousand steps long.
* SympathyForTheDevil: Rhea to Kieri.
* UnfeelingHeavens: Angels are very strict and impersonal. Even on Medius, Kieri thinks of eating food as "indulging in sin".
* WhodunnitToMe: Rhea ''and'' Ramirez.
** Not counting [[{{https://www.sdamned.com/comic/842}} that one visual cameo]].
* AllCrimesAreEqual: Despite her insistence that she doesn't deserve this, Rhea ''is'' lumped in with the criminals and murderers.
* AlmostKiss: [[spoiler:Kieri and Buwaro]].
* BackFromTheDead: Rhea
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* BewareTheHonestOnes: Kieri
* DefeatByModesty: Kieri's embarrassment comes not from being unclothed, but unmasked.
* DontFearTheReaper: Death is said by Buwaro to be "nice". [[spoiler:Knowing their identity as Sakido, Buwaro's sister, it makes sense.]]
* EasyRoadToHell: Even young children can end up in Heaven.
* EmbodimentOfVirtue: Subverted with Kieri, who is quick to judge everything based on virtue and sin while being far from kind herself.
* FireAndBrimstoneHell: Inverted. While volcanic, Hell is actually a pleasant place.
* GodIsEvil: Mother Gaia [[spoiler:is the one leading the assault on Medius]].
* HeavenVersusHell: Here, it was Angels that led the attack onto Medius and Demons that came to its defense.
* HellOfAHeaven: Here, Heaven
*
* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: Kieri assumes Medians are full of sin and Demons
* IronicHell: As a punishment for lying, Rhea gets her tongue burned off. Or at least she would have, were it not for the selection.
* ItsAllMyFault: Ramirez tried to stop Rhea's murderer, and
* JusticeWillPrevail: Subverted. While Angels claim to want to rid the world of sin, their solution to do so is to [[eliminate free will and impose their worldview on Medians]].
* LightIsNotGood: Angels
* MightMakesRight: Subverted. Kieri uses her status as an Angel to command Rhea around, but the latter simply refuses.
* MoralDilemma: Kieri, several times.
** She assumes that Demons are sinful enablers, and would like to punish Buwaro for it; however, he's actually a nice person. [[{{WouldNotShootAGoodGuy}} It would then make no sense to punish him for something he didn't do]].
** She cannot push him to act wrongly either, for it would then be ''her'' wrongdoing.
* MoralSociopathy: Kieri (and Angels) rate Medians according to virtue, and will give precedence to those on top.
* ParentalSubstitute:
** Iratu took Buwaro into Hell this
** While [[spoiler:Darius']] circumstances were different, he still took care of the three Demon children and gave them his pendants.
* Psychopomp:
** Death accompanies Rhea to the gates of Heaven.
** Subverted with Drazil, who makes her climb the thousand steps to Heaven on her own. Either that, or he'll bring her up as a corpse hanging from his sword.
* ReincarnationFriendship: [[spoiler:Following the Final Judgment, everyone is reborn again in a different Medius. Rhea, Buwaro and Kieri are
* RelievingTheReaper: [[spoiler:Sakido.]]
* SealedOrders: Kieri doesn't know the whole of
* SlidingScaleOfFreeWillVsFate: The Angels' plan is to [[spoiler:destroy free will itself and impose Gaia's light as the only way]]. Rhea would like to disagree.
* StairwayToHeaven: A gigantic spiral staircase said to be a thousand steps long.
* SympathyForTheDevil: Rhea to Kieri.
* UnfeelingHeavens: Angels are very strict and impersonal. Even on Medius, Kieri thinks of eating food as "indulging in sin".
* WhodunnitToMe: Rhea ''and'' Ramirez.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131779666 Inverted All Along]]'' is an ongoing AlternateUniverse fanfic of the webcomic ''Webcomic/SlightlyDamned''. In this universe, Heaven and its Angels torment sinful people, whereas Hell and its Demons reward virtuous ones. The story follows Rhea Snaketail's journey as she is sent to Heaven, and is selected to be the Median escort to Kieri Suizahn's team.
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%%* LightIsNotGood: Angels in this AU are masters of psychological torment.
%%* BeingEvilSucks: Sakido seems to think this of her old life.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/52104046/chapters/131779666 Inverted All Along]]'' is an ongoing AlternateUniverse fanfic of the webcomic ''Webcomic/SlightlyDamned''. In this universe, Heaven and its Angels torment sinful people, whereas Hell and its Demons reward virtuous ones. The story follows Rhea Snaketail's journey as she is sent to Heaven, and is selected to be the Median escort to Kieri Suizahn's team.
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%%* BeingEvilSucks: Sakido seems to think this of her old life.
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%%* LightIsNotGood: Angels in this AU are masters of psychological torment.
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%%* BackFromTheDead: Rhea and Ramirez.
%%* BeingEvilSucks: Sakido seems to think this of her old life.
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