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*ChekovsGun: after being mentioned back in chapter 2. [[spoiler: korra's Tattoos do indeed prove to be a recognisable mark, allowing Sakari and Jinora to connect all the times they'd seen her]]
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* GreyAndGrayMorality: The anarchistic Red Lotus are in Republic City to keep an eye on Amon and the Equalists, with the originally heroic Korra siding with the former, and Asami with the latter, while others in the main cast are in secondary roles. Both the Red Lotus and the Eqaulists are shown to have a point.
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* InternalReveal: In Chapter 13, [[spoiler: it becomes public knowledge that Sakari is Korra's sister, and Asami realizes that Korra is both the Avatar and the new Blue Spirit]].
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* LuxuryPrisonSuite: The one Varrick had gets used by [[spoiler: Asami after she turns herself over to the RCPD]].
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* CoolUncle: In the quasi-family the Red Lotus form for Korra, Ghazan is this, taking her to a pro-bending game and generally indulging her.
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* CoolUncle: In the quasi-family the Red Lotus form for Korra, Ghazan is this, taking her to a pro-bending game and generally indulging her. [[spoiler: However, after the disastrous Tarrlok assassination attempt (in which Amon took away Ming-Hua's bending) things get strained between them]]
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* TheLostLenore: Hiroshi Sato to Yasuko, having been killed in the mansion break-in instead of her.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: In the past, Hiroshi and his wife Yasuko Sato, as now she’s in control of Future Industries, is just as good an engineer as he was, and functions in his role as the Equalist’s EvilGenius.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: In the past, Hiroshi and his wife Yasuko Sato, as now she’s in control of Future Industries, is just as good an engineer as he was, and functions in his role as the Equalist’s EvilGenius. In the present, her actions and motivations are practically identical to his down to certain lines of dialogue.
* HeroicSacrifice: Instead of Lin, [[spoiler: Mako]] ends up holding off the Equalists so Tenzin's family can get away, [[spoiler: which also ends in Amon taking his bending and the family being captured anyway]].
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* VillainCred: The Red Lotus is initially interested in the Equalist revolution, but later, Zaheer and Ghazan both find Amon's powers worrying.
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* FriendlessBackground: Sakari's existence was kept secret and few knew of her existence, similar to Toph's upbringing.
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* DisabilityImmunity: All that practice Ming-Hua's gotten bending water to function as part of her body makes her resistant to bloodbending. [[spoiler: This does not extend to Amon's debending power]].
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* LegacyCharacter: Korra becomes one to [[spoiler: Zuko when she becomes the new Blue Spirit, complete with exclusively using firebending when disguised]].
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* BadassGrandma: Toph, as usual, but she now has the added distinction of once fighting Ghazan and winning easily in spite of his lavabending while very likely being in her sixties.
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[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/4658958/chapters/10628718 Instincts of a Fearful Body]] is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLegendOfKorra'' fanfiction written by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/Emirael/pseuds/Emirael Emirael]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/skyedancer_rae/pseuds/skyedancer_rae skyedancer_rae]]. It depicts Korra, having being successfully captured by the Red Lotus, coming to Republic City with Zaheer’s gang to observe the development of the budding Equalist revolution.
The story diverges from canon in several ways besides Korra’s kidnapping being a success. Hiroshi, rather than his wife Yasuko, was killed by benders, she’s taken his place within the Equalist movement, and she’s actively involving Asami in the revolution. Unalaq died in an unspecified manner to explain his lack of involvement in the kidnapping, so he never betrayed the other Red Lotus members. The story also takes place a short time ''after'' Book 1 would, as Amon never accelerated his plans upon Korra’s arrival in Republic City.
Spoilers for the series will not be marked.
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!!Instincts of a Fearful Body contains examples of:
* AffablyEvil: The Red Lotus members are depicted as much more personable, not having suffered in prisons for thirteen years, and function as a kind of family for Korra. However, they’re still dangerous criminals who fought the original Team Avatar, and whether their long-term plans for Korra still include painfully killing her as in the series is unknown.
* AtrociousAlias: Korra goes by “Naga”, a dog’s name, while undercover. Ghazan follows suit and adopts “Naghaz” as one to poke fun at her.
* BadassGrandma: Toph, as usual, but she now has the added distinction of once fighting Ghazan and winning easily in spite of his lavabending while very likely being in her sixties.
* BirdsOfAFeather: In the past, Hiroshi and his wife Yasuko Sato, as now she’s in control of Future Industries, is just as good an engineer as he was, and functions in his role as the Equalist’s EvilGenius.
* BombThrowingAnarchists: Zaheer’s gang is planning to start assassinating representatives of Republic City’s government. Also, it’s revealed through a few stories they’ve been keeping busy in this manner for the last thirteen years.
* ChildProdigy: Saraki, an original character, is described as an incredible waterbender and is the youngest Pro-Bender in the league. [[spoiler: Makes sense seeing as she’s Korra’s little sister]].
* GreyAndGrayMorality: The anarchistic Red Lotus are in Republic City to keep an eye on Amon and the Equalists, with the Korra siding with the former, and Asami with the latter, while others in the main cast are in secondary roles.
* ReplacementSibling: Implicitly, [[spoiler: Saraki for Korra after the Red Lotus succeeded in capturing the latter]]. And [[spoiler: Tonraq and Senna]] are overprotective of her as results, though to what degree isn’t yet specified.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: Ghazan thought his lavabending would give him an edge over Toph the way it does over most earthbenders. He was wrong, nearly got captured, and now he has to be careful to avoid being recognized by the police.
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The story diverges from canon in several ways besides Korra’s kidnapping being a success. Hiroshi, rather than his wife Yasuko, was killed by benders, she’s taken his place within the Equalist movement, and she’s actively involving Asami in the revolution. Unalaq died in an unspecified manner to explain his lack of involvement in the kidnapping, so he never betrayed the other Red Lotus members. The story also takes place a short time ''after'' Book 1 would, as Amon never accelerated his plans upon Korra’s arrival in Republic City.
Spoilers for the series will not be marked.
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!!Instincts of a Fearful Body contains examples of:
* AffablyEvil: The Red Lotus members are depicted as much more personable, not having suffered in prisons for thirteen years, and function as a kind of family for Korra. However, they’re still dangerous criminals who fought the original Team Avatar, and whether their long-term plans for Korra still include painfully killing her as in the series is unknown.
* AtrociousAlias: Korra goes by “Naga”, a dog’s name, while undercover. Ghazan follows suit and adopts “Naghaz” as one to poke fun at her.
* BadassGrandma: Toph, as usual, but she now has the added distinction of once fighting Ghazan and winning easily in spite of his lavabending while very likely being in her sixties.
* BirdsOfAFeather: In the past, Hiroshi and his wife Yasuko Sato, as now she’s in control of Future Industries, is just as good an engineer as he was, and functions in his role as the Equalist’s EvilGenius.
* BombThrowingAnarchists: Zaheer’s gang is planning to start assassinating representatives of Republic City’s government. Also, it’s revealed through a few stories they’ve been keeping busy in this manner for the last thirteen years.
* ChildProdigy: Saraki, an original character, is described as an incredible waterbender and is the youngest Pro-Bender in the league. [[spoiler: Makes sense seeing as she’s Korra’s little sister]].
* GreyAndGrayMorality: The anarchistic Red Lotus are in Republic City to keep an eye on Amon and the Equalists, with the Korra siding with the former, and Asami with the latter, while others in the main cast are in secondary roles.
* ReplacementSibling: Implicitly, [[spoiler: Saraki for Korra after the Red Lotus succeeded in capturing the latter]]. And [[spoiler: Tonraq and Senna]] are overprotective of her as results, though to what degree isn’t yet specified.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: Ghazan thought his lavabending would give him an edge over Toph the way it does over most earthbenders. He was wrong, nearly got captured, and now he has to be careful to avoid being recognized by the police.
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