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* FateWorseThanDeath: Fudge's current career. [[spoiler:He's lost enormous amounts of power, reducing him to a puppet figure for Carrow, his main backers have been killed, his attempts to kill Faulks have met with miserable failure ''and'' given Carrow more ammo against the Ministry, and he's been shown that should he even decide to toe the line again, he'll be simply converted into an automated servitor under Carrow's command.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Fudge's current career. [[spoiler:He's lost enormous amounts of power, reducing him to a puppet figure for Carrow, his main backers have been killed, his attempts to kill Faulks have met with miserable failure ''and'' given Carrow more ammo against the Ministry, and he's been shown that should he even decide to toe think of pulling the line same trick again, he'll be simply converted into an automated servitor under Carrow's command.]]
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Where in canon the Weasley twins rescued Harry from the Dursleys at the beginning of his second year, in this series they were caught by Mrs. Weasley when they tried to sneak out. Desperate and dying, Harry Potter prayed to anything that might be listening for an escape from the Dursleys, and his magic answered...
Two months later, a discharge of magical energy deposits a eight-foot tall unconscious giant at the edge of Hogwarts' Black Lake. This is Allesandor Darius Carrow, Inquisitor of His Most Holy Majesty's Ordo Malleus and brother of the Charnel Guard chapter of the Adeptus Astartes. Though Inquisitor Carrow used to be Harry James Potter, nearly three centuries of life in the most grimdark cosmology imaginable has transformed him utterly.
Two months later, a discharge of magical energy deposits a eight-foot tall unconscious giant at the edge of Hogwarts' Black Lake. This is Allesandor Darius Carrow, Inquisitor of His Most Holy Majesty's Ordo Malleus and brother of the Charnel Guard chapter of the Adeptus Astartes. Though Inquisitor Carrow used to be Harry James Potter, nearly three centuries of life in the most grimdark cosmology imaginable has transformed him utterly.
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Where in canon Ron and the Weasley twins rescued Harry from the Dursleys at the beginning of his second year, in this series they were caught by Mrs. Weasley when they tried to sneak out. Desperate and dying, Harry Potter prayed to anything that might be listening for an escape from the Dursleys, and his magic answered...
Two months later, a discharge of magical energy depositsa eight-foot tall an eight-foot-tall unconscious giant at the edge of Hogwarts' Black Lake. This is Allesandor Darius Carrow, Inquisitor of His Most Holy Majesty's Ordo Malleus and brother of the Charnel Guard chapter of the Adeptus Astartes. Though Inquisitor Carrow used to be Harry James Potter, nearly three centuries of life in the most grimdark cosmology imaginable has transformed him utterly.
Two months later, a discharge of magical energy deposits
