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* AlternateUniverseFic: This story focuses on what might have happened if Steven had been unable to escape Homeworld and was punished for the shattering of Pink Diamond as the Diamonds intended
* HeroicSacrifice: Steven turns himself in as Rose Quartz to protect his friends and family
* DisproportionateRetribution: Blue Diamond tortures Steven for Rose Quartz's crimes, believing him to be the one that shattered her beloved Pink
* CharacterDevelopment: Steven's experiences on Homeworld lead to him maturing mentally and emotionally in many ways, and as a result, he becomes more open and willing to accept help, comfort and support from his family and friends
** In addition, during Steven's time away, the gems seemed to have matured as they no longer had him to rely on to fix their problems and give them an excuse not to grow up and move forward
* {{Brainwashing}}: Steven Universe is temporarily brainwashed into believing he is Rose Quartz
** TraumaInducedAmnesia: As a result of brainwashing and [[spoiler: Lapis being shattered]], Steven also temporarily loses his memories of his life on Earth
* ColdBloodedTorture: Steven is pretty much put through hell on Homeworld as a result of his punishments
** SleepDeprivationPunishment: Steven doesn't sleep the entire time he's on Homeworld, which is a total of [[spoiler: eight months]]
** DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In addition, Steven also doesn't eat or drink during his time on Homeworld, which eventually leads to him developing a complete aversion to food altogether
** ChildSoldiers: Steven is sent into war after his healing abilities are discovered
** ElectricTorture: Steven is tortured with destabilizers after attempting to escape, developing a fear of electricity
* CharacterDeath: During a battle, [[spoiler: Mandarin is revealed to have been shattered]]
** Later on, [[spoiler: Lapis is shattered as a result of Steven attempting to escape Homeworld]]
* HeroicSacrifice: Steven turns himself in as Rose Quartz to protect his friends and family
* DisproportionateRetribution: Blue Diamond tortures Steven for Rose Quartz's crimes, believing him to be the one that shattered her beloved Pink
* CharacterDevelopment: Steven's experiences on Homeworld lead to him maturing mentally and emotionally in many ways, and as a result, he becomes more open and willing to accept help, comfort and support from his family and friends
** In addition, during Steven's time away, the gems seemed to have matured as they no longer had him to rely on to fix their problems and give them an excuse not to grow up and move forward
* {{Brainwashing}}: Steven Universe is temporarily brainwashed into believing he is Rose Quartz
** TraumaInducedAmnesia: As a result of brainwashing and [[spoiler: Lapis being shattered]], Steven also temporarily loses his memories of his life on Earth
* ColdBloodedTorture: Steven is pretty much put through hell on Homeworld as a result of his punishments
** SleepDeprivationPunishment: Steven doesn't sleep the entire time he's on Homeworld, which is a total of [[spoiler: eight months]]
** DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In addition, Steven also doesn't eat or drink during his time on Homeworld, which eventually leads to him developing a complete aversion to food altogether
** ChildSoldiers: Steven is sent into war after his healing abilities are discovered
** ElectricTorture: Steven is tortured with destabilizers after attempting to escape, developing a fear of electricity
* CharacterDeath: During a battle, [[spoiler: Mandarin is revealed to have been shattered]]
** Later on, [[spoiler: Lapis is shattered as a result of Steven attempting to escape Homeworld]]
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* AlternateUniverseFic: This story focuses on what might have happened if Steven had been unable to escape Homeworld and was punished for the shattering of Pink Diamond as the Diamonds intended
intended.
*HeroicSacrifice: {{Brainwashing}}: Steven turns himself in as Rose Quartz to protect his friends and family
* DisproportionateRetribution: Blue Diamond tortures Steven for Rose Quartz's crimes,Universe is temporarily brainwashed into believing him he is Rose Quartz.
* CharacterDeath: During a battle, [[spoiler: Mandarin is revealed tobe the one that have been shattered]].
** Later on, [[spoiler: Lapis is shatteredher beloved Pink
as a result of Steven attempting to escape Homeworld]].
* CharacterDevelopment: Steven's experiences on Homeworld lead to him maturing mentally and emotionally in many ways, and as a result, he becomes more open and willing to accept help, comfort and support from his family andfriends
friends.
** In addition, during Steven's time away, the gems seemed to have matured as they no longer had him to rely on to fix their problems and give them an excuse not to grow up and moveforward
forward.
*{{Brainwashing}}: ChildSoldiers: Steven Universe is temporarily brainwashed sent into believing he is Rose Quartz
** TraumaInducedAmnesia: As a result of brainwashing and [[spoiler: Lapis being shattered]], Steven also temporarily loseswar after his memories of his life on Earth
healing abilities are discovered.
* ColdBloodedTorture: Steven is pretty much put through hell on Homeworld as a result of hispunishments
** SleepDeprivationPunishment: Steven doesn't sleep the entire time he's on Homeworld, which is a total of [[spoiler: eight months]]
**punishment.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In addition, Steven also doesn't eat or drink during his time on Homeworld, which eventually leads to him developing a complete aversion to foodaltogether
** ChildSoldiers: Steven is sent into war after his healing abilities are discovered
**altogether.
* ElectricTorture: Steven is tortured with destabilizers after attempting to escape, developing a fear ofelectricity
electricity.
*CharacterDeath: During a battle, [[spoiler: Mandarin is revealed HeroicSacrifice: Steven turns himself in as Rose Quartz to have been shattered]]
** Later on,protect his friends and family.
* MisplacedRetribution: Blue Diamond tortures Steven for Rose Quartz's crimes, believing him to be the one that shattered her beloved Pink.
* TraumaInducedAmnesia: As a result of brainwashing and [[spoiler: Lapisis shattered as a result of being shattered]], Steven attempting to escape Homeworld]]also temporarily loses his memories of his life on Earth.
* SleepDeprivationPunishment: Steven doesn't sleep the entire time he's on Homeworld, which is a total of [[spoiler: eight months]].
*
* DisproportionateRetribution: Blue Diamond tortures Steven for Rose Quartz's crimes,
* CharacterDeath: During a battle, [[spoiler: Mandarin is revealed to
** Later on, [[spoiler: Lapis is shattered
* CharacterDevelopment: Steven's experiences on Homeworld lead to him maturing mentally and emotionally in many ways, and as a result, he becomes more open and willing to accept help, comfort and support from his family and
** In addition, during Steven's time away, the gems seemed to have matured as they no longer had him to rely on to fix their problems and give them an excuse not to grow up and move
*
** TraumaInducedAmnesia: As a result of brainwashing and [[spoiler: Lapis being shattered]], Steven also temporarily loses
* ColdBloodedTorture: Steven is pretty much put through hell on Homeworld as a result of his
** SleepDeprivationPunishment: Steven doesn't sleep the entire time he's on Homeworld, which is a total of [[spoiler: eight months]]
**
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: In addition, Steven also doesn't eat or drink during his time on Homeworld, which eventually leads to him developing a complete aversion to food
** ChildSoldiers: Steven is sent into war after his healing abilities are discovered
**
* ElectricTorture: Steven is tortured with destabilizers after attempting to escape, developing a fear of
*
** Later on,
* MisplacedRetribution: Blue Diamond tortures Steven for Rose Quartz's crimes, believing him to be the one that shattered her beloved Pink.
* TraumaInducedAmnesia: As a result of brainwashing and [[spoiler: Lapis
* SleepDeprivationPunishment: Steven doesn't sleep the entire time he's on Homeworld, which is a total of [[spoiler: eight months]].
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** TraumaInducedAmnesia: As a result of brainwashing and [[spoiler: Lapis being shattered]], Steven also temporarily loses his memories of his life on Earth
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** TraumaInducedAmnesia: This happens to Steven when [[spoiler: Blue Diamond shatters Lapis in front of him]]
** IdentityAmnesia: After losing his memory, Steven genuinely believes he is Rose Quartz
* NotUsedToFreedom: Steven grows used to life on Homeworld, especially after losing his memories, so much so that [[spoiler: when faced with the opportunity to leave, he doesn't want to]]
* SenseLossSadness: As a result of being forced to wear limb enhancers, Steven loses the ability to feel physical touch, which leads to him being simultaneously touch-starved and temporarily averse to contact
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: The Ruby Berry is a great example of this trope. While typically seen as harsh and snappy, Berry does have a soft side which is shown, albeit rarely, to those she cares for
* {{Transgender}}: The Peridot Lemon Lime is shown to be transgender, as he first uses 'they/them' pronouns, and starts using 'he/him' after meeting Steven
* FamilyOfChoice: During his time on Homeworld, Steven forged familial bonds with most of the gems he met.
** LikeBrotherAndSister: Berry and Lemon Lime share this kind of relationship. Steven and Berry share a similar bond. Steven also shares a sibling-esque bond with the Pearl Candy.
** ParentalSubstitute: Agate and the Hessonite Garnet Sage take parental/mentor roles in their relationship with Steven, and the Jaspers Clementine, Tangerine and Mandarin, who they co-mentor
** CoolBigSis: Clementine, Mandarin and Tangerine act as siblings to Steven and each other, being in the same squadron
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** IdentityAmnesia: After losing his memory, Steven genuinely believes he is Rose Quartz
* NotUsedToFreedom: Steven grows used to life on Homeworld, especially after losing his memories, so much so that [[spoiler: when faced with the opportunity to leave, he doesn't want to]]
* SenseLossSadness: As a result of being forced to wear limb enhancers, Steven loses the ability to feel physical touch, which leads to him being simultaneously touch-starved and temporarily averse to contact
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* SugarAndIcePersonality: The Ruby Berry is a great example of this trope. While typically seen as harsh and snappy, Berry does have a soft side which is shown, albeit rarely, to those she cares for
* {{Transgender}}: The Peridot Lemon Lime is shown to be transgender, as he first uses 'they/them' pronouns, and starts using 'he/him' after meeting Steven
* FamilyOfChoice: During his time on Homeworld, Steven forged familial bonds with most of the gems he met.
** LikeBrotherAndSister: Berry and Lemon Lime share this kind of relationship. Steven and Berry share a similar bond. Steven also shares a sibling-esque bond with the Pearl Candy.
** ParentalSubstitute: Agate and the Hessonite Garnet Sage take parental/mentor roles in their relationship with Steven, and the Jaspers Clementine, Tangerine and Mandarin, who they co-mentor
** CoolBigSis: Clementine, Mandarin and Tangerine act as siblings to Steven and each other, being in the same squadron
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Upon returning back to Earth with the loss of his memories, Steven finds it difficult to settle down in his old environment at first, [[spoiler: even with the eventual return of his memories]]
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** Later on, [[spoiler: Lapis is shattered as a result of Steven attempting to escape Homeworld]]
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Upon returning back to Earth with the loss of his memories, Steven finds it difficult to settle down in his old environment at first, [[spoiler: even with the eventual return of his memories]]Homeworld]]
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Upon returning back to Earth with the loss of his memories, Steven finds it difficult to settle down in his old environment at first, [[spoiler: even with the eventual return of his memories]]
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* ExcessiveMourning: Blue Diamond's grief has completely consumed her, turning her into a terrifying, cold villain whose only motive is revenge.
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*** SinisterScythe: Steven receives a new weapon, a scythe, which he becomes very skilled at using in battle
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-->-- '''Blue Diamond''', ''I Am Rose Quartz, Chapter Two.''
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-->-- '''Blue Diamond''', ''I Am Rose Quartz, Chapter Two.''
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->''"You are Rose Quartz Facet-1 Cut-8BR. Your Diamond is Blue Diamond. You are a soldier, nothing else."''
-->-- '''Blue Diamond''', ''I Am Rose Quartz, Chapter Two.''
-->-- '''Blue Diamond''', ''I Am Rose Quartz, Chapter Two.''
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Upon returning back to Earth with the loss of his memories, Steven finds it difficult to settle down in his old environment at first, [[spoiler: even with the eventual return of his memories]]
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* StrangerInAFamiliarLand: Upon returning back to Earth with the loss of his memories, Steven finds it difficult to settle down in his old environment at first, [[spoiler: even with the eventual return of his memories]]
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** LikeBrotherAndSister: Berry and Lemon Lime share this kind of relationship. Steven and Berry share a similar bond. Steven also shares a sibling-esque bond with Candy.
** ParentalSubstitute: Agate and Sage take parental/mentor roles in their relationship with Steven, Clementine, Tangerine and Mandarin, who they co-mentor
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** LikeBrotherAndSister: Berry and Lemon Lime share this kind of relationship. Steven and Berry share a similar bond. Steven also shares a sibling-esque bond with the Pearl Candy.
** ParentalSubstitute: Agate and the Hessonite Garnet Sage take parental/mentor roles in their relationship with Steven, and the Jaspers Clementine, Tangerine and Mandarin, who they co-mentor
** ParentalSubstitute: Agate and the Hessonite Garnet Sage take parental/mentor roles in their relationship with Steven, and the Jaspers Clementine, Tangerine and Mandarin, who they co-mentor
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* CharacterDevelopment: Steven's experiences on Homeworld lead to him maturing mentally and emotionally in many ways, and as a result, he becomes more open and willing to accept help, comfort and support from his family and friends
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*** SinisterScythe: Steven receives a new weapon, a scythe, which he becomes very skilled at using in battle
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