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** [[spoiler: Tarn is converted into Sinanju after Shockwave kills him and the remaining [=DJD=] members.]]
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** Tarn is rebuilt into [[Anime/MobileSuitGundamUnicorn Sinanju]].
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It can also be read [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/how-very-logical-tfp-si.120996/ here]].
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It can also be read [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/how-very-logical-tfp-si.120996/ here]].
here]]. It is currently complete, with the sequel ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/a-shift-in-logic-tfp-si-sequel.1153228/#post-100094566 A Shift in Logic]]'' currently ongoing.
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* XanatosGambit: Soundwave broadcasts a general tightbeam recall signal to all Decepticons scattered across the cosmos so he can see how Shockwave handles the influx of bots with differing opinions towards his leadership. If Shockwave manages to solidify his position in the Decepticon hierarchy by dealing with the warmongers in their ranks, then it means that Soundwave will cooperate with him since he proved himself capable of leading the Decepticons; if not, then Soundwave can simply bring Megatron back online for that.
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* XanatosGambit: Soundwave broadcasts a general tightbeam recall signal to all Decepticons scattered across the cosmos so he can see how Shockwave handles the influx of bots with differing opinions towards his leadership. If Shockwave manages to solidify his position in the Decepticon hierarchy by dealing with the warmongers in their ranks, then it means that Soundwave will cooperate with him since he proved himself capable of leading the Decepticons; if not, then Soundwave can simply bring Megatron back online for that.that.
* WhamLine: The 49th chapter features a line that will be ''very'' familiar to anyone who's read a Commander fic on Spacebattles.
--> [[spoiler: Somewhere, on some backwater planet, in a backwater system, in a backwater sector of a backwater galaxy, a Commander builds a metal extractor.]]
* WhamLine: The 49th chapter features a line that will be ''very'' familiar to anyone who's read a Commander fic on Spacebattles.
--> [[spoiler: Somewhere, on some backwater planet, in a backwater system, in a backwater sector of a backwater galaxy, a Commander builds a metal extractor.]]
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** The Decepticon Justice Division from ''ComicBook/TheTransformersMoreThanMeetsTheEye'' first appear as a few of the Decepticons who received Soundwave's tightbeam signal from Cybertron, and they're ''not'' too happy to learn that Megatron got deposed as the Decepticon leader.
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** The Decepticon Justice Division from ''ComicBook/TheTransformersMoreThanMeetsTheEye'' first appear as a few of the Decepticons who received Soundwave's tightbeam signal from Cybertron, and they're ''not'' too happy to learn that Megatron got deposed as the Decepticon leader.
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** The Decepticon Justice Division from ''ComicBook/MoreThanMeetsTheEye'' first appear as a few of the Decepticons who received Soundwave's tightbeam signal from Cybertron, and they're ''not'' too happy to learn that Megatron got deposed as the Decepticon leader.
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** The Decepticon Justice Division from ''ComicBook/MoreThanMeetsTheEye'' ''ComicBook/TheTransformersMoreThanMeetsTheEye'' first appear as a few of the Decepticons who received Soundwave's tightbeam signal from Cybertron, and they're ''not'' too happy to learn that Megatron got deposed as the Decepticon leader.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: In his tightbeam message, Soundwave states that Megatron was temporarily disabled due to a 'compromised flaw found in his processor' (i. e. Dark Energon addiction and poisoning), with Shockwave taking command in his place for that very reason. Unfortunatelhy, the [=DJD=], being the mad fanatics they are, completely misinterpret it as Shockwave usurping power for himself, which isn't helped by Soundwave's obtuse phrasing.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: In his tightbeam message, Soundwave states that Megatron was temporarily disabled due to a 'compromised flaw found in his processor' (i. e. Dark Energon addiction and poisoning), with Shockwave taking command in his place for that very reason. Unfortunatelhy, Unfortunately, the [=DJD=], being the mad fanatics they are, completely misinterpret it as Shockwave usurping power for himself, which isn't helped by Soundwave's obtuse phrasing.
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* CanonImmigrant: Airazor from ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' shows up as one of the Predacons created by Shockwave.
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* CanonImmigrant: CanonImmigrant:
** Airazor from ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' shows up as one of the Predacons created byShockwave.Shockwave.
** The Decepticon Justice Division from ''ComicBook/MoreThanMeetsTheEye'' first appear as a few of the Decepticons who received Soundwave's tightbeam signal from Cybertron, and they're ''not'' too happy to learn that Megatron got deposed as the Decepticon leader.
** Airazor from ''WesternAnimation/BeastWars'' shows up as one of the Predacons created by
** The Decepticon Justice Division from ''ComicBook/MoreThanMeetsTheEye'' first appear as a few of the Decepticons who received Soundwave's tightbeam signal from Cybertron, and they're ''not'' too happy to learn that Megatron got deposed as the Decepticon leader.
* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: In his tightbeam message, Soundwave states that Megatron was temporarily disabled due to a 'compromised flaw found in his processor' (i. e. Dark Energon addiction and poisoning), with Shockwave taking command in his place for that very reason. Unfortunatelhy, the [=DJD=], being the mad fanatics they are, completely misinterpret it as Shockwave usurping power for himself, which isn't helped by Soundwave's obtuse phrasing.
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* XanatosGambit: Soundwave broadcasts a general tightbeam recall signal to all Decepticons scattered across the cosmos so he can see how Shockwave handles the influx of bots with differing opinions towards his leadership. If Shockwave manages to solidify his position in the Decepticon hierarchy by dealing with those who would seek to overthrow him, then it means that Soundwave will cooperate with him since he proved himself capable of leading the Decepticons; if not, then Soundwave can simply bring Megatron back online for that.
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* XanatosGambit: Soundwave broadcasts a general tightbeam recall signal to all Decepticons scattered across the cosmos so he can see how Shockwave handles the influx of bots with differing opinions towards his leadership. If Shockwave manages to solidify his position in the Decepticon hierarchy by dealing with those who would seek to overthrow him, the warmongers in their ranks, then it means that Soundwave will cooperate with him since he proved himself capable of leading the Decepticons; if not, then Soundwave can simply bring Megatron back online for that.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Dreadwing and Ultra Magnus' almost starting an argument over who gets to return to Cybertron after Unicron's defeat sends Shockwave into a TranquilFury over their stubbornness, with the scientist chewing out both bots for not letting go of their old prejudices and stating that either both sides work together to restore their home planet or get nothing.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Dreadwing and Ultra Magnus' almost starting an argument over who gets to return to Cybertron after Unicron's defeat sends Shockwave into a TranquilFury over their stubbornness, with the scientist chewing out both bots for not letting go of their old prejudices and stating that either both sides work together to restore unless they cut it out with their home planet or get nothing.grudges, they're gonna spend time in the brig while everyone else gets to go home.
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* WorthyOpponent: Mandible and the Insecticons peg Brawl as fine warrior for his strength and manage to strike up a friendship of sorts from their fight at the Pit.
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* WorthyOpponent: Mandible and the Insecticons peg Brawl as fine warrior for his strength and manage to strike up a friendship of sorts from their fight at the Pit.Pit.
* XanatosGambit: Soundwave broadcasts a general tightbeam recall signal to all Decepticons scattered across the cosmos so he can see how Shockwave handles the influx of bots with differing opinions towards his leadership. If Shockwave manages to solidify his position in the Decepticon hierarchy by dealing with those who would seek to overthrow him, then it means that Soundwave will cooperate with him since he proved himself capable of leading the Decepticons; if not, then Soundwave can simply bring Megatron back online for that.
* XanatosGambit: Soundwave broadcasts a general tightbeam recall signal to all Decepticons scattered across the cosmos so he can see how Shockwave handles the influx of bots with differing opinions towards his leadership. If Shockwave manages to solidify his position in the Decepticon hierarchy by dealing with those who would seek to overthrow him, then it means that Soundwave will cooperate with him since he proved himself capable of leading the Decepticons; if not, then Soundwave can simply bring Megatron back online for that.
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* BeingEvilSucks: Although Shockwave is loyal to the Decepticon cause, he doesn't relish in tormenting his foes, asking Bumblebee to surrender in exchange for fair treatment as a [=POW=] and apologizing to Optimus Prime on kidnapping Jack, Raf, and Miko.
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* TokenGoodTeammate: Although Shockwave is loyal to the Decepticon cause, he doesn't relish in tormenting his foes, asking Bumblebee to surrender in exchange for fair treatment as a [=POW=] and apologizing to Optimus Prime on kidnapping Jack, Raf, and Miko.
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* RageBreakingPoint: Dreadwing and Ultra Magnus' almost starting an argument over who gets to return to Cybertron after Unicron's defeat sends Shockwave into a TranquilFury over their stubbornness, with the scientist chewing out both bots for not letting go of their old prejudices and stating that either both sides work together to restore their home planet or get nothing.
--> '''Shockwave''': We are going to Cybertron. All of us. Allow me to be ''extremely'' clear, to ''all'' of you. We...are on the ''cusp'' of breathing ''life'' back into our home. Of ''reversing'' the effects of the ''idiotic war'' our species has trapped itself in for ''eons''. I will not allow ''anyone'' to stop this from happening. Not Megatron. Not Optimus Prime. Not ''Unicron''. And most certainly not ''you two''. We are ''going'' to Cybertron. Autobots ''and'' Decepticons. Then we are going to ''activate'' the Omega Lock, and we are going to ''return'' the Allspark to its rightful place, within Primus' core. ''Then'', we can figure out what to do with ourselves afterwards. If you all want to continue ''killing each other'' over goals and ideals that nearly all of us have forgotten, that's perfectly fine. I, on the other servo, am very, ''very'' tired of dealing with all of you, and would much rather retreat to a secluded laboratory to continue work on some of my other projects. Now, ''behave''. Before I have you ''both'' thrown in the ''[[PrecisionFStrike fragging]]'' brig.
--> '''Shockwave''': We are going to Cybertron. All of us. Allow me to be ''extremely'' clear, to ''all'' of you. We...are on the ''cusp'' of breathing ''life'' back into our home. Of ''reversing'' the effects of the ''idiotic war'' our species has trapped itself in for ''eons''. I will not allow ''anyone'' to stop this from happening. Not Megatron. Not Optimus Prime. Not ''Unicron''. And most certainly not ''you two''. We are ''going'' to Cybertron. Autobots ''and'' Decepticons. Then we are going to ''activate'' the Omega Lock, and we are going to ''return'' the Allspark to its rightful place, within Primus' core. ''Then'', we can figure out what to do with ourselves afterwards. If you all want to continue ''killing each other'' over goals and ideals that nearly all of us have forgotten, that's perfectly fine. I, on the other servo, am very, ''very'' tired of dealing with all of you, and would much rather retreat to a secluded laboratory to continue work on some of my other projects. Now, ''behave''. Before I have you ''both'' thrown in the ''[[PrecisionFStrike fragging]]'' brig.
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Shockwave asks Ser-Ket to bring him some high-grade energon after he learns that Optimus Prime is telling everyone about the stuff he got up to while he was still a senator.
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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Shockwave asks Ser-Ket to bring him some high-grade energon after he learns that Optimus Prime is telling everyone about the stuff hijinks he got up to while he was still a senator.
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** Silas is ripscanned by Shockwave for info on how he managed to fuse flesh and metal together, and judging by his screams, the process is quite painful (and possibly fatal for humans). That being said, Silas was a terrorist leader who wanted to take control of Cybertronian tech for his ends, so his fate is well-deserved.
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** Silas is ripscanned by Shockwave for info on how he managed to fuse flesh and metal together, and judging by his screams, the process is quite painful (and possibly fatal for humans). That being said, Silas was a ruthless terrorist leader who wanted to take control of Cybertronian tech for his ends, ends no matter the cost and fused himself with Breakdown's corpse, so his fate is well-deserved.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Shockwave persuades the rest of the Decepticons to turn on Megatron by revealing to them that the Decepticon warlord has been essentially mainlining the blood of the Cybertonian GodOfEvil on a constant basis, making him unfit for leadership due to the Dark Energon in his systems making him dangerously irrational and unstable. Most notably, Soundwave, who is known for his UndyingLoyalty, comes to agree with the others that Megatron must be put down for the sake of all Cybertronians after he sees Megatron turn on the rest of the Decepticons in a mad rage after Shockwave reveals that cyberforming Earth with the Omega Lock would revive Unicron.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Shockwave persuades the rest of the Decepticons to turn on Megatron by revealing to them that the Decepticon warlord has been essentially mainlining the blood of the Cybertonian GodOfEvil on a constant basis, making him unfit for leadership due to the Dark Energon in his systems making him dangerously irrational and unstable. Most notably, Soundwave, who is known for his UndyingLoyalty, comes to agree with the others that Megatron must be put down for the sake of all Cybertronians after once he sees Megatron turn on the rest of the Decepticons in a mad rage after Shockwave reveals that cyberforming Earth with the Omega Lock would revive Unicron.
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* BenevolentBoss: SI!Shockwave makes sure to provide the Vehicons under his command some much-needed repairs and rest after seeing just how poor of a state they're in, which he justifies as keeping the Decepticon troops in tip-top condition.
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* BenevolentBoss: SI!Shockwave Shockwave makes sure to provide the Vehicons under his command some much-needed repairs and rest after seeing just how poor of a state they're in, which he justifies as keeping the Decepticon troops in tip-top condition.
