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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] set a third of the way around the world east of Equestria, in the southeastern mountains of the continent of Taura.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] set a third of the way around the world east of Equestria, in the southeastern mountains of the continent of Taura.
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: The Black Hoof is clearly a terrorist organization, yet we see it from the First Strong Messenger's (sympathetic) point of view.
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* TheChosenOne: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]], as First Strong Messenger ''thinks'' he's been chosen by destiny for a sacred mission, but he's ''actually'' been chosen by [[spoiler:[[GodOfEvil Nyarlathotep]]]] to [[spoiler:start the Great War and neutralize the continent of Taura as an obstacle to coming of the [[DarkIsEvil Night]] [[LivingShadow Shadows]]]]
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* TheChosenOne: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]], as First Strong Messenger ''thinks'' he's been chosen by destiny for a sacred mission, but he's ''actually'' been chosen by [[spoiler:[[GodOfEvil Nyarlathotep]]]] to [[spoiler:start the Great War and neutralize the continent of Taura as an obstacle to the coming of the [[DarkIsEvil Night]] [[LivingShadow Shadows]]]]
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** (Land of)Running Water = Bosnia.
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** (Land of)Running of) Running Water = Bosnia.
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* MyCountryRightOrWrong: First Strong Messenger, and many others in team, are perfectly aware that they are risking a war, possibly a general war, but they care more about the independence of the South Speakers and the Land of Running Water than they do about peace or equine life. Strong Messenger ''hopes'' that the Griffon Empire will simply give up after the assassination, but his hopes are based wholly on emotion rather than reason.
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* MyCountryRightOrWrong: First Strong Messenger, and many others in on the team, are perfectly aware that they are risking a war, possibly a general war, but they care more about the independence of the South Speakers and the Land of Running Water than they do about peace or equine life. Strong Messenger ''hopes'' that the Griffon Empire will simply give up after the assassination, but his hopes are based wholly on emotion rather than reason.
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* WrongSideAllAlong: It is quite true that the Griffons originally oppressed and even preyed on the Ponies of Taura. But the Griffon Empire has long since become more civilized. First Strong Meesenger's mission, far from ''freeing'' the South Speakers, will plunge them, and all Taura, into a long and bloody war, whose true purpose is to weaken them all -- Griffon and Pony alike -- for conquest and consumption by the Night Shadows.
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* TheChosenOne: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]], as First Strong Messenger ''thinks'' he's been chosen by destiny for a sacred mission, but he's ''actually'' been chosen by [[spoiler:[[GodOfEvil Nyarlathotep]]]] to [[spoiler:start the Great War and neutralize the continent of Taura as an obstacle to coming of the [[DarkIsEvil Night]] [[LivingShadow Shadows]]]]
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* BombThrowingAnarchists: Politically true of some of the team, who are ''both'' anarchists and South Speaker nationalists. Also ''literally'' true, in that the team is armed with two main types of weapons -- concealable repreating crossbows, and hand grenades.
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* BombThrowingAnarchists: Politically true of some of the team, who are ''both'' anarchists and South Speaker nationalists. Also ''literally'' true, in that the team is armed with two main types of weapons -- concealable repreating crossbows, and hand hoof grenades.
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* WellIntentionedeExtremist: First Strong Messenger and the rest of the team to which he belongs. All of them are willing to risk and probably lose their lives in the name of freedom for the Land of Runnning Water.
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* WellIntentionedeExtremist: WellIntentionedExtremist: First Strong Messenger and the rest of the team to which he belongs. All of them are willing to risk and probably lose their lives in the name of freedom for the Land of Runnning Water.
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** Running Water = Bosnia.
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** Running (Land of)Running Water = Bosnia.
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: The Black HOof is clearly a terrorist organization, yet we see it from the First Strong Messenger's (sympathetic) point of view.
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* MyCountryRightOrWrong: First Strong Messenger, and many others in team, are perfectly aware that they are risking a war, possibly a general war, but they care more about the independence of the South Speakers and the Land of Running Water than they do about peace or equine life. Strong Messenger ''hopes'' that the Griffon Empire will simply give up after the assassination, but his hopes are based wholly on emotion rather than reason.
* WellIntentionedeExtremist: First Strong Messenger and the rest of the team to which he belongs. All of them are willing to risk and probably lose their lives in the name of freedom for the Land of Runnning Water.
* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: The BlackHOof Hoof is clearly a terrorist organization, yet we see it from the First Strong Messenger's (sympathetic) point of view.
* WellIntentionedeExtremist: First Strong Messenger and the rest of the team to which he belongs. All of them are willing to risk and probably lose their lives in the name of freedom for the Land of Runnning Water.
* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: The Black
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* BombThrowingAnarchists: Politically true of some of the team, who are ''both'' anarchists and South Speaker nationalists.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The story shows a whole host of them.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The story shows a whole host of them.
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* BombThrowingAnarchists: Politically true of some of the team, who are ''both'' anarchists and South Speaker nationalists.
nationalists. Also ''literally'' true, in that the team is armed with two main types of weapons -- concealable repreating crossbows, and hand grenades.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The story shows a whole host ofthem.them, many involving literal name translations Some important ones include:
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The story shows a whole host of
** Lippanzer = Austria.
** Peak of Running Water = Sarajevo.
** Red Speakers = Russians.
** Running Water = Bosnia.
** Shining City = Belgrade.
** Peak of Running Water = Sarajevo.
** Red Speakers = Russians.
** Running Water = Bosnia.
** Shining City = Belgrade.
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** Ten Tribes = Hungarians.
** Wolfen = Turks.
** Wolfen = Turks.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] set a third of the way around the world east of Equestria, in the southeastern mountains of the continent of Taura.
First Strong Messenger yearns for the freedom of his country, the Land of Running Water, from the Griffon Empire. When he is assigned to the mission of assassinating the heir to the Griffon throne, he is excited by the chance to make his mark on history. But who -- or what -- is really behind him? And what sort of mark will he make on history?
May be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/210355/his-mark-on-history here]].
!!Tropes in this story include
* BombThrowingAnarchists: Politically true of some of the team, who are ''both'' anarchists and South Speaker nationalists.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The story shows a whole host of them.
** Fighting Stallions = Serbs
** Griffon Empire = Combined Austro-Hungarian and German Empires.
** Speaker Ponies = Slavs
* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: The Black HOof is clearly a terrorist organization, yet we see it from the First Strong Messenger's (sympathetic) point of view.
First Strong Messenger yearns for the freedom of his country, the Land of Running Water, from the Griffon Empire. When he is assigned to the mission of assassinating the heir to the Griffon throne, he is excited by the chance to make his mark on history. But who -- or what -- is really behind him? And what sort of mark will he make on history?
May be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/210355/his-mark-on-history here]].
!!Tropes in this story include
* BombThrowingAnarchists: Politically true of some of the team, who are ''both'' anarchists and South Speaker nationalists.
* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The story shows a whole host of them.
** Fighting Stallions = Serbs
** Griffon Empire = Combined Austro-Hungarian and German Empires.
** Speaker Ponies = Slavs
* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: The Black HOof is clearly a terrorist organization, yet we see it from the First Strong Messenger's (sympathetic) point of view.
