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* EasilyForgiven: Downplayed. While Sci-Twilight does forgive the Shadowbolts, she decides to wait a little bit before letting them make it up to her.
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* ForgivenButNotForgotten: While Twilight is no longer made at the Shadowbolts for the grief they caused her, she doesn't want to go back to Crystal Prep, and wants some time to herself before she can hang out with them.
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* CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon: Sci-Twilight (internally) began ranting about how her classmates would suffer very gruesome punishments.
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* CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon: CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon: Sci-Twilight (internally) began ranting about how her classmates would suffer very gruesome punishments.
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-->'''Sugarcoat''': Twilight, I... words cannot express what utter shame I am feeling right now. I have always believed in ideals of Crystal Prep, of competitiveness and constant race, because I truly believed that was an essential part of progress... but I forgot, in my blindness, that the Shadowbolts are supposed to take care of each other, and you were a Shadowbolt, since Cinch, er... chose you to represent our school. And I didn't do that. None of us did."
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-->'''Sugarcoat''': Twilight, I... words cannot express what utter shame I am feeling right now. I have always believed in ideals of Crystal Prep, of competitiveness and constant race, because I truly believed that was an essential part of progress... but I forgot, in my blindness, that the Shadowbolts are supposed to take care of each other, and you were a Shadowbolt, since Cinch, er... chose you to represent our school. And I didn't do that. None of us did."
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* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially averted this by giving Sci-Twilight some privileges, but then played this straight by blackmailing her into entering the Friendship Games. Small wonder she became so resentful and vindictive.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Sunny Flare asks the question that begins the story: "Why did Twilight turn into that demoness?"
* BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight ''any'' kind of respect and recognition for her hard work. Sci-Twilight felt outright betrayal when Cinch threatened to keep her from Everton.
* BewareTheQuietOnes: AnAesop that the Shadowbolts learn from Sci-Twilight.
* ButtMonkey: ''Viciously'' deconstructed.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Sunny Flare asks the question that begins the story: "Why did Twilight turn into that demoness?"
* BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight ''any'' kind of respect and recognition for her hard work. Sci-Twilight felt outright betrayal when Cinch threatened to keep her from Everton.
* BewareTheQuietOnes: AnAesop that the Shadowbolts learn from Sci-Twilight.
* ButtMonkey: ''Viciously'' deconstructed.
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* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite nutshell. Despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially averted this by giving Sci-Twilight some privileges, but then played this straight by blackmailing her into entering the Friendship Games. Small wonder she became so resentful and vindictive.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Sunny Flare asks the question that begins the story: "Why did Twilight turn into thatdemoness?"
demoness?" Sunny Flare gets her answer, though answering it is shown to be a rather long, complicated affair.
* BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight''any'' any kind of respect and recognition for her hard work. Sci-Twilight felt outright betrayal when Cinch threatened to keep her from Everton.
* BewareTheQuietOnes: AnAesop that the Shadowbolts learn fromSci-Twilight.
Sci-Twilight. Just because she was always quiet didn't mean that things didn't hurt.
* ButtMonkey:''Viciously'' deconstructed. Deconstructed. After being picked on and humiliated so long, it left some pretty deep psychological scars that led to Twilight feeling a ton of resentment and anger at the people around her.
* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Sunny Flare asks the question that begins the story: "Why did Twilight turn into that
* BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight
* BewareTheQuietOnes: AnAesop that the Shadowbolts learn from
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* DidYouThinkICantFeel: Sci-Twilight was so quiet, the Shadowbolts never realized they were driving her over the edge.
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* DidYouThinkICantFeel: Sci-Twilight was so quiet, the Shadowbolts never realized they were driving her over the edge. Twilight says as much when she tells them why she became Midnight Sparkle.
* RealityEnsues: The Shadowbolts wonder why a wallflower like Sci-Twi would have a SuperpoweredEvilSide like Midnight Sparkle. Turns out, it's from her classmates treating her with contempt. Being insulted, ignored, blackmailed, and suffering through all kinds of abuse in Crystal Prep gave Sci-Twi plenty of dark thoughts about the people around her, just like any real-life high school student might react.
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: All the bullying Sci-Twilight has gone through is what pushed her off the deep end.
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: All the bullying Sci-Twilight has gone through is what pushed her off the deep end. She decided that if the students of Crystal Prep were going to crush her dreams, she was going to fight back.
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** Sci-Twilight being stuck in a school where nobody liked respected her, and resented her academic achievements.
** Sci-Twilight suffered blackmail at the hands of someone she trusted.
* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially averted this, by giving Sci-Twilight some privileges, but then played this straight by blackmailing her into entering the Friendship Games. So it's a small wonder she became so resentful and vindictive.
** Sci-Twilight suffered blackmail at the hands of someone she trusted.
* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially averted this, by giving Sci-Twilight some privileges, but then played this straight by blackmailing her into entering the Friendship Games. So it's a small wonder she became so resentful and vindictive.
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** Sci-Twilight being stuck in a school where nobody liked or respected her, and being resented for her academic achievements.
** Sci-Twilightsuffered blackmail at the hands of was blackmailed by someone she trusted.
* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially avertedthis, this by giving Sci-Twilight some privileges, but then played this straight by blackmailing her into entering the Friendship Games. So it's a small Small wonder she became so resentful and vindictive.
** Sci-Twilight
* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially averted
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* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: Sugarcoat's dad is a psychologist and she not only failed to see how Sci-Twilight was being treatd by others but played part in it herself.
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* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: Sugarcoat's dad is a psychologist and she not psychologist. Not only failed did she fail to see how Sci-Twilight was being treatd treated by others but others, she played a part in it herself.
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* CorruptTheCutie: The fic explores how Twilight grew increasingly vindictive toward her classmates, to the point where she sought power to fight back, enough to become Midnight Sparkle.
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* CorruptTheCutie: The fic explores how Twilight grew increasingly vindictive toward towards her classmates, to the point where she sought power to fight back, enough to become Midnight Sparkle.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Despite being a jock, Rainbow Dash dislikes people who look down at smart people.
* {{Foil}}: As Princess Twilight observed, both Sunset and Sci-Twilight both reached a point where they desired power. But while Sunset just wanted power to rule, Sci-Twilight grew to want power to punish those who had harmed her. But the result was the same.
* {{Foil}}: As Princess Twilight observed, both Sunset and Sci-Twilight both reached a point where they desired power. But while Sunset just wanted power to rule, Sci-Twilight grew to want power to punish those who had harmed her. But the result was the same.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Despite being a jock, Rainbow Dash dislikes people those who look down at on smart people.
* {{Foil}}: As Princess Twilight observed, both Sunset and Sci-Twilightboth reached a point where they desired power. But while Sunset just wanted power to rule, Sci-Twilight grew to want wanted power to punish those who had harmed her. But the The result was the same.
* {{Foil}}: As Princess Twilight observed, both Sunset and Sci-Twilight
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** The Shadowbolts are even ashamed of themselves for their personal role in driving Twilight into becoming Midnight Sparkle. Both Lemon Zest and Sunny Flare felt bad enough to vomit.
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** The Shadowbolts are even ashamed of themselves for their personal role in driving Twilight into becoming Midnight Sparkle. Both Lemon Zest and Sunny Flare felt bad enough to vomit.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: The Shadowbolts hyper-competitive nature made them oblivious to Twilight's emotions. But this only fueled Twilight's already growing despair, and made her more susceptible to her inner demons.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: The Shadowbolts Shadowbolts' hyper-competitive nature made them oblivious to Twilight's emotions. But this only fueled Twilight's already growing despair, and made her more susceptible to her inner demons.
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* TrueCompanions: The Humane Five, and Sunset for Sci-Twilight. Applejack and Rainbow Dash, in particular, wanted to beat up the kids who bullied Twilight in her old school.
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* TrueCompanions: The Humane Five, Five and Sunset for Sci-Twilight. Applejack and Rainbow Dash, in particular, wanted to beat up the kids who bullied Twilight in her old school.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Despite being a jock, Rainbow Dash dislikes people who look down at smart people.
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* ButtMonkey: ''Viciously'' deconstructed.
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Sci-Twilight, by the end of "[[VillainSong Unleash the Magic]]"
--> '''Midnight Sparkle''': Friendship Games are a lie. No one is interested in friendships, only victory. FRIENDSHIP IS A LIE! Power is what matters! And you can gain it right here, right now! So will you catch this chance? Or are you content with the ill fate that is about to befall you? You being hated even more? Denied everything? Having your dream shattered?!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!
--> '''Midnight Sparkle''': Friendship Games are a lie. No one is interested in friendships, only victory. FRIENDSHIP IS A LIE! Power is what matters! And you can gain it right here, right now! So will you catch this chance? Or are you content with the ill fate that is about to befall you? You being hated even more? Denied everything? Having your dream shattered?!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Sci-Twilight, by the end of "[[VillainSong Unleash the Magic]]"
--> '''Midnight Sparkle''': Friendship Games are a lie. No one is interested in friendships, only victory. FRIENDSHIP IS A LIE! Power is what matters! And you can gain it right here, right now! So will you catch this chance? Or are you content with the ill fate that is about to befall you? You being hated even more? Denied everything? Having your dream shattered?!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!ThenLetMeBeEvil:
--> '''Midnight Sparkle''': Friendship Games are a lie. No one is interested in friendships, only victory. FRIENDSHIP IS A LIE! Power is what matters! And you can gain it right here, right now! So will you catch this chance? Or are you content with the ill fate that is about to befall you? You being hated even more? Denied everything? Having your dream shattered?!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!
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* VillainHasAPoint: The dark side of Sci-Twilight's mind was able to sway her into becoming Midnight Sparkle by rightly pointing out how nobody gave her any respect. When Sci-Twilight apologizes for her dark emotions, the Shadowbolts themselves agreed that she was not wrong for feeling vindictive, and that she had nothing to be sorry for.
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* VillainHasAPoint: The dark side of Sci-Twilight's mind was able to sway her into becoming Midnight Sparkle by rightly pointing out how nobody gave her any respect. When Sci-Twilight apologizes for her dark emotions, the Shadowbolts themselves agreed that she was not wrong for feeling vindictive, and that she had nothing to be sorry for.for.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Sci-Twi, by the end of "[[VillainSong Unleash the Magic]]"
--> '''Midnight Sparkle''': Friendship Games are a lie. No one is interested in friendships, only victory. FRIENDSHIP IS A LIE! Power is what matters! And you can gain it right here, right now! So will you catch this chance? Or are you content with the ill fate that is about to befall you? You being hated even more? Denied everything? Having your dream shattered?!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Sci-Twi, by the end of "[[VillainSong Unleash the Magic]]"
--> '''Midnight Sparkle''': Friendship Games are a lie. No one is interested in friendships, only victory. FRIENDSHIP IS A LIE! Power is what matters! And you can gain it right here, right now! So will you catch this chance? Or are you content with the ill fate that is about to befall you? You being hated even more? Denied everything? Having your dream shattered?!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!
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--> '''Midnight Sparkle''': Friendship Games are a lie. No one is interested in friendships, only victory. FRIENDSHIP IS A LIE! Power is what matters! And you can gain it right here, right now! So will you catch this chance? Or are you content with the ill fate that is about to befall you? You being hated even more? Denied everything? Having your dream shattered?!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!
--> '''Sci-Twilight''': NO! I WON'T LET THEM DO THIS! NOT CINCH, NOT SHADOWBOLTS, AND NOT THIS GROUP OF "MAGIC GIRLS" EITHER! ALL OF THEM ONLY BROUGHT ME SADNESS AND MISERY, AND NOW THEY WANT TO SHATTER MY DREAMS! [[PunctuatedForEmphasis BUT I! HAVE! HAD! ENOUGH]]!!!
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* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially averted this, by giving Sci-Twilight some privileges, but then played this straight by blackmailing her into entering the Friendship Games. So it's a small wonder she became so resentful and vindictive.
* AllTakeAndNoGive: This was Sci-Twilight's relationship with her classmates in a nutshell: despite giving Crystal Prep prestige, her classmates only gave her scorn. Cinch initially averted this, by giving Sci-Twilight some privileges, but then played this straight by blackmailing her into entering the Friendship Games. So it's a small wonder she became so resentful and vindictive.
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* EnemyWithin: Sci-Twilight's negative emotions gradually became this, convincing her to use the magic she stored to hit back.
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* AdultFear:
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** Sci-Twilight suffered blackmail at the hands of someone she trusted
** Sci-Twilight being stuck in a school where nobody liked respected her, and resented her academic achievements.
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* MoreThanMindControl: The dark part of Twilight's mind fed off her desire for revenge and her lust for knowledge to allow her to become Midnight Sparkle. Just before Midnight came out, Twilight herself began to see other people as insects.
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* InnocentlyInsensitive: The Shadowbolts hyper-competitive nature made them oblivious to Twilight's emotions. But this only fueled Twilight's already growing despair, and made her more susceptible to her inner demons.
* MoreThanMindControl: The dark part of Twilight's mind fed off her desire for revenge and her lust for knowledge to allow her to become Midnight Sparkle. Just before Midnight came out, Twilight herself began to see other people as insects.
* MoreThanMindControl: The dark part of Twilight's mind fed off her desire for revenge and her lust for knowledge to allow her to become Midnight Sparkle.
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* PersecutedIntellectuals: Sci-Twilight was this and the hands of her classmates who resented her accomplishments.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301592/her-inner-demons Her Inner Demons]] is an ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames'' one-shot {{Continuation}} fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/233223/Extradimensional+Alien Extradimensional Alien]].
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301592/her-inner-demons Her Inner Demons]] is an a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames'' one-shot {{Continuation}} fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/233223/Extradimensional+Alien Extradimensional Alien]].
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--> '''Sci-Twilight''' ''(thinking)'': Are you (Sunny Flare) blind? Maybe I should perform laser surgery on your eyes... and "accidentally" burn them out! Oh, and here's the two-faced wrench...
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* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: Sugarcoat's dad is a psychologist and she not only failed to see how Sci-Twilight was being treatd by others but played part in it herself.
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* BaitTheDog[=/=]BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight ''any'' kind of respect and recognition for her hard work. Sci-Twilight felt outright betrayal when Cinch threatened to keep her from Everton.
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* BaitTheDog[=/=]BrokenPedestal: BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight ''any'' kind of respect and recognition for her hard work. Sci-Twilight felt outright betrayal when Cinch threatened to keep her from Everton.
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* DidYouThinkICantFeel: Sci-Twilight was so quiet, the Shadowbolts never realized they were driving her over the edge.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Sunny Flare asks the question that begins the story: "Why did Twilight turn into that demoness?"
* EasilyForgiven: Downplayed. While Sci-Twilight does forgive the Shadowbolts, she decides to wait a little bit before letting them make it up to her.
* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Sci-Twilight, by the end of "[[VillainSong Unleash the Magic]]"
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* VillainHasAPoint: The dark side of Sci-Twilight's mind was able to sway her into becoming Midnight Sparkle by rightly pointing out how nobody gave her any respect. The When Sci-Twilight apologizes for her dark emotions, the Shadowbolts themselves agreed that she was not wrong for feeling vindictive, and that she had nothing to be sorry for.
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-->'''Sugarcoat''': Twilight, I... words cannot express what utter shame I am feeling right now. I have always believed in ideals of Crystal Prep, of competitiveness and constant race, because I truly believed that was an essential part of progress... but I forgot, in my blindness, that the Shadowbolts are supposed to take care of each other, and you were a Shadowbolt, since Cinch, er... chose you to represent our school. And I didn't do that. None of us did."
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Lemon Zest takes off her beloved headphones, because she is that curious about how Sci-Twilight saw her. Sugarcoat took off her glasses when expressing her regret.
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* VillainHasAPoint: The dark side of Sci-Twilight's mind was able to sway her by rightly pointing out how nobody gave her any respect. The Shadowbolts themselves agreed that her vindictive mind was pretty spot on.
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* VillainHasAPoint: The dark side of Sci-Twilight's mind was able to sway her by rightly pointing out how nobody gave her any respect. The Shadowbolts themselves agreed that her vindictive mind she was pretty spot on.not wrong for feeling vindictive, and that she had nothing to be sorry for.
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* CooldownHug: When Sci-Twilight was about to cry over Cinch's blackmail, the rest of the Rainbooms gave her one.
** Sugarcoat ends up feeling terrible for not noticing Sci-Twilight's breakdown.
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* UngratefulBastard: Sci-Twilight's classmates had no respect for Twilight winning them anything. Cinch sealed herself as this through her blackmail.
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* UngratefulBastard: Sci-Twilight's classmates had no respect for Twilight winning them anything. Cinch sealed herself as this through her blackmail.blackmail.
* VillainHasAPoint: The dark side of Sci-Twilight's mind was able to sway her by rightly pointing out how nobody gave her any respect. The Shadowbolts themselves agreed that her vindictive mind was pretty spot on.
* VillainHasAPoint: The dark side of Sci-Twilight's mind was able to sway her by rightly pointing out how nobody gave her any respect. The Shadowbolts themselves agreed that her vindictive mind was pretty spot on.
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** By the beginning of the movie, her equanimity was already coming apart from ridicule and disdain of the student body. The pressure and torment she faced during the events, plus Cinch's blackmail, drove her to the point of seeking revenge.
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* AnAesop: The Shadowbolts learn to BewareTheQuietOnes, for they can be capable of anything.
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* TrueCompanions: The Humane Five, and Sunset for Sci-Twilight. Applejack and Rainbow Dash, in particular, wanted to beat up the kids who bullied Twilight in her old school.
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301592/her-inner-demons Her Inner Demons]] is an ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames'' one-shot {{Continuation}} fanfic written by https://www.fimfiction.net/user/233223/Extradimensional+Alien Extradimensional Alien]].
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[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301592/her-inner-demons Her Inner Demons]] is an ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames'' one-shot {{Continuation}} fanfic written by https://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/233223/Extradimensional+Alien Extradimensional Alien]].
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* MoreThanMindControl: The dark part of Twilight's mind fed off her desire for revenge and her lust for knowledge to allow her to become Midnight Sparkle. Just before Midnight came out, Twilight herself began to see other people as insects.
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* CorruptTheCutie: The fic explores how Twilight grew increasingly vindictive toward her classmates, to the point where she sought power to fight back, enough to become Midnight Sparkle.
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--> '''Sci-Twilight''': '''Sci-Twilight''' ''(thinking)'': Are you (Sunny Flare) blind? Maybe I should perform laser surgery on your eyes... and "accidentally" burn them out! Oh, and here's the two-faced wrench...
* {{Foil}}: As Princess Twilight observed, both Sunset and Sci-Twilight both reached a point where they desired power. But while Sunset just wanted power to rule, Sci-Twilight grew to want power to punish those who had harmed her. But the result was the same.
* {{Foil}}: As Princess Twilight observed, both Sunset and Sci-Twilight both reached a point where they desired power. But while Sunset just wanted power to rule, Sci-Twilight grew to want power to punish those who had harmed her. But the result was the same.
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* TranquilFury: Sci-Twilight had to act meek toward the people she disliked to avoid retribution. Internally, her mind was a thunderstorm of hot rage.
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Twilight couldn't lash out at the students who tormented her since they came from powerful families.
* TranquilFury: Sci-Twilight had to act meek toward the people she disliked to avoid retribution. Internally, her mind was a thunderstorm of hotrage.rage.
* UngratefulBastard: Sci-Twilight's classmates had no respect for Twilight winning them anything. Cinch sealed herself as this through her blackmail.
* TranquilFury: Sci-Twilight had to act meek toward the people she disliked to avoid retribution. Internally, her mind was a thunderstorm of hot
* UngratefulBastard: Sci-Twilight's classmates had no respect for Twilight winning them anything. Cinch sealed herself as this through her blackmail.
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Anyone at Crystal Prep who knew Twilight Sparkle would never assume that this shy bookworm with top grades in all subjects could hold something evil within.
Thus, when said bookworm turned into Midnight Sparkle under the influence of the magic she released, everyone present was shocked to see their classmate become a callous and ruthless she-demon.
Nobody could understand: why? Twilight wasn't evil... was she?
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301592/her-inner-demons Her Inner Demons]] is an ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames'' one-shot {{Continuation}} fanfic written by https://www.fimfiction.net/user/233223/Extradimensional+Alien Extradimensional Alien]].
Beware, there are spoilers for the original movie.
!!Tropes Are:
* AnAesop: The Shadowbolts learn to BewareTheQuietOnes, for they can be capable of anything.
* BaitTheDog[=/=]BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight ''any'' kind of respect and recognition for her hard work. Sci-Twilight felt outright betrayal when Cinch threatened to keep her from Everton.
* CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon: Sci-Twilight (internally) began ranting about how her classmates would suffer very gruesome punishments.
--> '''Sci-Twilight''':
* FromBadToWorse: Sci-Twilight, unfortunately, suffered this twofold.
** Sci-Twilight transferred to Crystal Prep [[HopeSpot believing that she would be better accepted there than at her old school]]. Unfortunately, she found an even more toxic and unfriendly environment.
** By the beginning of the movie, her equanimity was already coming apart from ridicule and disdain of the student body. The pressure and torment she faced during the events, plus Cinch's blackmail, drove her to the point of seeking revenge.
* HeelRealization:
** The Shadowbolts are even ashamed of themselves for their personal role in driving Twilight into becoming Midnight Sparkle. Both Lemon Zest and Sunny Flare felt bad enough to vomit.
** Sci-Twilight herself regrets letting her anger the better of her and becoming so cruel.
* TranquilFury: Sci-Twilight had to act meek toward the people she disliked to avoid retribution. Internally, her mind was a thunderstorm of hot rage.
Thus, when said bookworm turned into Midnight Sparkle under the influence of the magic she released, everyone present was shocked to see their classmate become a callous and ruthless she-demon.
Nobody could understand: why? Twilight wasn't evil... was she?
[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/301592/her-inner-demons Her Inner Demons]] is an ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirlsFriendshipGames'' one-shot {{Continuation}} fanfic written by https://www.fimfiction.net/user/233223/Extradimensional+Alien Extradimensional Alien]].
Beware, there are spoilers for the original movie.
!!Tropes Are:
* AnAesop: The Shadowbolts learn to BewareTheQuietOnes, for they can be capable of anything.
* BaitTheDog[=/=]BrokenPedestal: Principal Cinch was one of the few people at Crystal Prep who gave Sci-Twilight ''any'' kind of respect and recognition for her hard work. Sci-Twilight felt outright betrayal when Cinch threatened to keep her from Everton.
* CutYourHeartOutWithASpoon: Sci-Twilight (internally) began ranting about how her classmates would suffer very gruesome punishments.
--> '''Sci-Twilight''':
* FromBadToWorse: Sci-Twilight, unfortunately, suffered this twofold.
** Sci-Twilight transferred to Crystal Prep [[HopeSpot believing that she would be better accepted there than at her old school]]. Unfortunately, she found an even more toxic and unfriendly environment.
** By the beginning of the movie, her equanimity was already coming apart from ridicule and disdain of the student body. The pressure and torment she faced during the events, plus Cinch's blackmail, drove her to the point of seeking revenge.
* HeelRealization:
** The Shadowbolts are even ashamed of themselves for their personal role in driving Twilight into becoming Midnight Sparkle. Both Lemon Zest and Sunny Flare felt bad enough to vomit.
** Sci-Twilight herself regrets letting her anger the better of her and becoming so cruel.
* TranquilFury: Sci-Twilight had to act meek toward the people she disliked to avoid retribution. Internally, her mind was a thunderstorm of hot rage.