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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Rory and Lelei]] .
* DeathOfAChild: The Doom Slayer is [[BerserkButton pissed]] to find the bodies of two elf children with their throats torn out from the demons' massacre on Tuka's village.
* DevelopingDoomedCharacters: At least two Imperial characters introduced in the first chapter.
** Tirus [[MyGirlBackHome Has a girl waiting back home]] that he wants to marry rather than wanting to fight in wars. He gets his wish by abandoning the army once the demons attack, [[YankTheDogsChain but only to be killed off by bandits/slavers, who captured his bride-to-be]].

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Rory and Lelei]] .
Lelei]].
* DeathOfAChild: The Doom Slayer is [[BerserkButton pissed]] to find the bodies of two elf children with their throats torn out from the demons' massacre on Tuka's village.
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* DevelopingDoomedCharacters: At least two Imperial characters introduced in the first chapter.
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** Tirus [[MyGirlBackHome Has a girl waiting back home]] that he wants to marry rather than wanting to fight in wars. He gets his wish by abandoning the army once the demons attack, [[YankTheDogsChain but only to be killed off by bandits/slavers, who captured his bride-to-be]].



* GrievousHarmWithABody: The Doom Slayer ripped [[OffWithHisHead a bandit's head off]] (along with its spinal cord) not unlike how [[VideoGame/GodOfWarIII Kratos dealt with Helios]], and using it as a improvised flail to flog another bandit to death.
* HarmfulToMinors: Pina and her Rose Knights come across a village that suffered a demon attack, where several children are seen sitting next to freshly dug up graves of their dead parents. Some are too traumatized to talk, including one child who lost his entire family except his grandfather.

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* GrievousHarmWithABody: The Doom Slayer ripped [[OffWithHisHead a bandit's head off]] (along with its spinal cord) not unlike how [[VideoGame/GodOfWarIII Kratos dealt with Helios]], and using it as a an improvised flail to flog another bandit to death.
* HarmfulToMinors: Pina and her Rose Knights come across a village that suffered a demon attack, where several children are seen sitting next to freshly dug up graves of their dead parents. Some are too traumatized to talk, including one child who lost his entire family except his grandfather.
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* WhipItGood: The Doom Slayer stole one off from one of the Rose Knights and adds it to his arsenal after giving the rod to Pina and her knights for being annoying nuisances for trying to recruit him.
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* AssholeVictim: The Imperial army were planning to use the Gate to invade another world so they can loot and take slaves. They instead got slaughtered by demons.

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* AssholeVictim: The Imperial army were planning to use the Gate to invade another world so they can loot and take slaves. They instead opened a portal to Hell and got slaughtered by demons.
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* AssholeVictim: The Imperial army were planning to use the Gate to invade another world so they can loot and take slaves. They instead got slaughtered by demons.

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Rory, Lelei, and Italica]] .

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Rory, Lelei, [[spoiler:Rory and Italica]] .Lelei]] .


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* TheSiege: Italica is under siege by both an army of deserters and demons. [[spoiler:The city ultimately fell to the demons led by Ankoriss]].
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* WhatTheHellHero: An elderly villager vent his anger on Pina over the Empire for doing a poor job on warning and protecting its subjects from the demon invasion that had cost the lives of his son and two grandchildren.

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* WhatTheHellHero: An elderly villager vent his anger on Pina over the Empire for doing a poor job on warning and protecting its their subjects from the demon invasion that had cost the lives of his son and two grandchildren. Specifically on how the Empire doesn't even bother to provide horses to messengers to quickly warn the villages about the demons.

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* NeckLift: Ankoriss neck-lift Rory to tell to her face that [[spoiler:all her gods are dead]] before slamming her skull into the ground.



* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Ankoriss had fought and killed other Apostles prior to meeting Rory.

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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Ankoriss [[spoiler:Ankoriss had fought and killed other Apostles prior to meeting Rory. Rory.]]


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* ThisCannotBe: Rory's shocked reaction from hearing from Ankoriss that the [[spoiler:Falmart gods are all dead]].


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* WhatTheHellHero: An elderly villager vent his anger on Pina over the Empire for doing a poor job on warning and protecting its subjects from the demon invasion that had cost the lives of his son and two grandchildren.


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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Intern is given the name Daniel Suzuki.
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* CurbStompBattle: The Doom Slayer come across a ramshackle fortress occupied by bandits and slavers, and execute unbridled rage against its occupants without even bothering to waste his guns on practically [[PunyEarthlings weak mortals]].

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* CurbStompBattle: The Doom Slayer come across a ramshackle fortress occupied by bandits and slavers, and execute unbridled rage against and, enraged, slaughters all of its occupants without even bothering to waste his guns on practically [[PunyEarthlings weak mortals]].
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** After Tirus fled from Alnus Hill, his fate is found out by the Doom Slayer from Tirus's lover who sadly confirmed that he had been killed off by bandits.

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** After Tirus fled from Alnus Hill, his fate is found out by the Doom Slayer from Tirus's Tirus' lover who sadly confirmed that he had been killed off by bandits.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Tirus start running the moment he enters the Gate filled with glowing demon eyes looking right at him.

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Tirus start starts running the moment he enters the Gate filled with glowing demon eyes looking right at him.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Rory]] (see BreakTheHaughty above).

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Rory]] (see BreakTheHaughty above).[[spoiler:Rory, Lelei, and Italica]] .
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** After Tirus's fled from Alnus Hill, his fate is found out by the Doom Slayer from Tirus's lover who sadly confirmed that he had been killed off by bandits.

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** After Tirus's Tirus fled from Alnus Hill, his fate is found out by the Doom Slayer from Tirus's lover who sadly confirmed that he had been killed off by bandits.
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** Tirus [[MyGirlBackHome Has a girl waiting back home]] that he wants to marry rather than wanting to fight in wars. He gets his wish by abandoning the army once the demons attack, [[YankTheDogsCahin but only to be killed off by bandits/slavers, who captured his bride-to-be]].

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** Tirus [[MyGirlBackHome Has a girl waiting back home]] that he wants to marry rather than wanting to fight in wars. He gets his wish by abandoning the army once the demons attack, [[YankTheDogsCahin [[YankTheDogsChain but only to be killed off by bandits/slavers, who captured his bride-to-be]].



* DiesDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: The flame dragon is swarmed to death by demons and its corpse is used by Ankoriss for as of yet unspecific ritual.

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* DiesDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: The flame dragon is swarmed to death by demons and its corpse is used by Ankoriss for as of yet unspecific ritual.

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* DeathByAdaptation: The flame dragon is swarmed to death by demons and its corpse is used by Ankoriss for as of yet unspecific ritual.

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* DeathByAdaptation: The flame dragon is swarmed to death by demons and its corpse is used by Ankoriss for as of yet unspecific ritual. [[spoiler:Rory]] (see BreakTheHaughty above).



** Tirus [[MyGirlBackHome have a girl waiting back home]] that wants to marry rather than wanting to fight in wars. He gets his wish by abandoning the army once the demons attack, but only to be killed off by bandits/slavers, who captured his bride-to-be.
** Oros has a daughter waiting back home and he gets stomp to death by a Baron of Hell.

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** Tirus [[MyGirlBackHome have Has a girl waiting back home]] that he wants to marry rather than wanting to fight in wars. He gets his wish by abandoning the army once the demons attack, [[YankTheDogsCahin but only to be killed off by bandits/slavers, who captured his bride-to-be.bride-to-be]].
** Oros has a daughter waiting back home and he gets stomp to death by a Baron of Hell. Hell.
* DiesDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: The flame dragon is swarmed to death by demons and its corpse is used by Ankoriss for as of yet unspecific ritual.
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* RealityEnsues: Being in an unknown world and getting too focus on chasing demons without a thought, the Doom Slayer finds himself lost in Falmart. Furthermore, he couldn't be everywhere at once to stop the demons from massacring the next random village.

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* RealityEnsues: PowerfulAndHelpless: Being in an unknown world and getting too focus on chasing demons without a thought, the Doom Slayer finds himself lost in Falmart. Furthermore, he couldn't be everywhere at once to stop the demons from massacring the next random village.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Emperor Molt doesn't care about the Empire's peasants on a personal level, but he protects them from the demons as they are still vital for stabilizing the Empire with producing food and soldiers.

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* PragmaticVillainy: Emperor Molt doesn't care about the Empire's peasants on a personal level, but he protects them from the demons as they are still vital for stabilizing the Empire with producing food and contributing soldiers.
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* AgonyOfTheFeet: Tirus' left foot is badly wounded from stepping on a glass shard while running away from the demon massacre. He is forced to painfully remove the debris from his soles in order to prevent infection.

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* AgonyOfTheFeet: Tirus' left foot is badly wounded from stepping on a glass shard while running away from the demon massacre. He is forced to painfully remove the debris from his soles sole in order to prevent infection.
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* TheDarknessGazesBack: When the Imperial army enters the Gate, they are greeted by numerous glowing orange demonic eyes before being set upon by said demons.


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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Tirus start running the moment he enters the Gate filled with glowing demon eyes looking right at him.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Emperor Molt doesn't care about the Empire's peasants on a personal level, but he protects the peasants from the demons as they are vital for stabilizing the Empire with food and soldiers.

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* PragmaticVillainy: Emperor Molt doesn't care about the Empire's peasants on a personal level, but he protects the peasants them from the demons as they are still vital for stabilizing the Empire with producing food and soldiers.

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