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* {{Xenofiction}}: Chapter 47 is from the perspective of the ravens that Edgar told about Amy.

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* SpannerInTheWorks: Taylor's FramingTheGuiltyParty on Sophia inadvertently helps expose the depths of Coil's influence in the PRT when the organization starts to investigate Sophia's case handler, and notices Coil's interference; even though the handler was a mixture of incompetent and corrupt, she did try to report ''some'' things that didn't make it through, and once she comes under scrutiny, Armsmaster spots the discrepancies. Later, Taylor [[spoiler:uses her trick to not only rescue Lisa from Coil's mercs "recruiting" her, but capture all of them and their van full of gear ''after'' he'd dropped the timeline where he didn't give the go-ahead]]. And after that, [[spoiler:she just goes and takes everything in Coil's base - including ''his mercenaries'' and ''Coil himself'']].

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Taylor's FramingTheGuiltyParty on Sophia inadvertently helps expose the depths of Coil's influence in the PRT when the organization starts to investigate Sophia's case handler, and notices Coil's interference; even though the handler was a mixture of incompetent and corrupt, she did try to report ''some'' things that didn't make it through, and once she comes under scrutiny, Armsmaster spots the discrepancies. Later, Taylor [[spoiler:uses her trick to not only rescue Lisa from Coil's mercs "recruiting" her, but capture all of them and their van full of gear ''after'' he'd dropped the timeline where he didn't give the go-ahead]]. And after that, [[spoiler:she just goes and takes everything in Coil's base - including ''his mercenaries'' and ''Coil himself'']].himself'']].
** The PRT sends an agent of their own posing as a police officer to check on Sophia's actions at Winslow. Taylor immediately suspects him, and Danny contacts a friend of his own in the force. Dancing very carefully around the issue, they realize who the agent really was, and Danny agrees to send his friend the data Taylor collected so he can channel it to the original "cop". As a result, the Brockton Bay Police Department receives hard data proving PRT involvement in Sophia's case and the complicit Winslow faculty, before the PRT does.
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** Danny Hebert is a moral man, but seeing the sheer depths of the depravity Coil has sunken into leads him to genuinely question if Kurt's suggestion to JustShootHim and dump his corpse in the bay is such a bad idea.

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** Danny Hebert is a moral man, but seeing the sheer depths of the depravity Coil has sunken into leads him to genuinely question if Kurt's suggestion to JustShootHim [[CombatPragmatist Just Shoot Him]] and dump his corpse in the bay is such a bad idea.
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** Piggot is flabbergasted and angered by Sophia risking her own freedom just to make one girl's life a living nightmare, on top of stupidly trying to frame that same girl for narcotics possession. Renick, after hearing about how Sophia was arrested for possession of drugs, even notes that her being high would explain a ''lot'' about the thought processes, or lack thereof, behind her more boneheaded decisions.

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** Piggot is flabbergasted and angered by Sophia risking her own freedom just to make one girl's life a living nightmare, on top of stupidly trying to frame that same girl for narcotics possession. Renick, after hearing about how Sophia was arrested for possession of drugs, even notes that her being high [[ThisExplainsSoMuch would explain a ''lot'' a]] ''[[ThisExplainsSoMuch lot]]'' about the thought processes, or lack thereof, behind her more boneheaded decisions.
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* BrickJoke: When Coil is captured by Taylor in both timelines, his narration gets cut-off mid-sentence - with the second half of both sentences appearing when he's pulled out from ''between'' seven chapters later.

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* BrickJoke: When Coil is captured by Taylor in both timelines, his narration gets cut-off mid-sentence - with the second half of both sentences appearing when he's pulled out from ''between'' ''beneath'' seven chapters later.
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* AlienGeometries: ''Between'' allows Taylor to do stuff that is utterly incomprehensible if using just normal dimensions, like [[spoiler:connecting a door in her house's basement to Coil's base and another to the Dockworkers' Association, even though they are a couple miles apart at least]].

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* AlienGeometries: ''Between'' ''Beneath'' allows Taylor to do stuff that is utterly incomprehensible if using just normal dimensions, like [[spoiler:connecting a door in her house's basement to Coil's base and another to the Dockworkers' Association, even though they are a couple miles apart at least]].
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* PokeInTheThirdEye: [[spoiler:Thanks to QA, foreign Thinkers trying to get a read on Taylor get blocked, or even forget that they even tried. For Dinah, whenever she gets asked a question involving the Bay, it gives her a result saying that the probability is ''-1%''. She doesn't really mind though, since it makes her power much easier to handle, as the failed questions don't cause Thinker headaches.]]
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* MoreDakka: Taylor's ability to adjust the momentum of objects returning from Beneath allows her to shoot ball bearings at bullet speeds and beyond. And she can do it more rapidly than a machine gun; when testing it at a firing range, there's a buzzing sound and half the paper target drifts to the floor.
--> '''Anne:''' How many was that?\\
'''Lisa:''' Twenty eight plus the calibration shot. In just under a second.
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* CleverCrows: Edgar, a raven that Amy healed and who decided to [[TheThingThatWouldNotLeave stick around despite several attempts to make him leave]], is noted several times to be rather intelligent even by raven standards, doing things like changing the TV channel to the news when it's on a show he doesn't like and no one else is watching, using tools, and even understands when Amy tells him to bite Dennis's ear for teasing her.

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* CleverCrows: Edgar, a raven that Amy healed and who decided to [[TheThingThatWouldNotLeave stick around despite several attempts to make him leave]], is noted several times to be rather intelligent even by raven standards, doing things like changing the TV channel to the news when it's on a show he doesn't like and no one else is watching, using tools, and even understands when Amy tells him to bite Dennis's ear for teasing her. Later, he gets enough other ravens to go to her for healing that she suspects that she's seen most of the ravens in the ''city'' before too long, and several scientists are ''very'' interested in studying the phenomenon.
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* PlausibleDeniability: Danny doesn't want to be told exactly how Erwin is going to be getting answers from people, especially after a baseball bat is mentioned.
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* CoolOldGuy: Erwin, the old fisherman that keeps telling tall tales and never pays for his beers at the pub, turns out to be quite accomplished in the art of espionage, enough that ''the FBI'' has entire filing cabinets about his (mis)adventures. And he doesn't seem to have lost any of his skills either.

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* CoolOldGuy: Erwin, the old fisherman that keeps telling tall tales and never pays for his beers at the pub, turns out to be quite accomplished in the art of espionage, enough that ''the FBI'' has entire filing cabinets about his (mis)adventures. And he doesn't seem to have lost any of his skills either.either, given what he does when searching for the truth about [[spoiler:Rachel]].

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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: [[spoiler: Everyone in Brockton Bay, criminal and non-criminal (besides Lung and the ABB, of course), cheers when Danny (secretly) kills Oni Lee with his own grenades]].

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* AlienGeometries: ''Between'' allows Taylor to do stuff that is utterly incomprehensible if using just normal dimensions, like [[spoiler:connecting a door in her house's basement to Coil's base and another to the Dockworkers' Association, even though they are a couple miles apart at least]].
* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: [[spoiler: Everyone [[spoiler:Everyone in Brockton Bay, criminal and non-criminal (besides Lung and the ABB, of course), cheers when Danny (secretly) kills Oni Lee with his own grenades]].
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* CoolOldGuy: Erwin, the old fisherman that keeps telling tall tales and never pays for his beers at the pub, turns out to be quite accomplished in the art of espionage, enough that ''the FBI'' has entire filing cabinets about his (mis)adventures.

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* CoolOldGuy: Erwin, the old fisherman that keeps telling tall tales and never pays for his beers at the pub, turns out to be quite accomplished in the art of espionage, enough that ''the FBI'' has entire filing cabinets about his (mis)adventures. And he doesn't seem to have lost any of his skills either.

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* ControlFreak: Piggot outright describes Costa-Brown as is, and that she's someone who has to have everything her own way. In particular she kept putting pressure on Glenn Chambers to try and sweep the mess with Shadow Stalker under the rug, and gets mad when Piggot gets the Hebert and Barnes families to settle out of court for a fraction of the settlement that they could have gotten and avoiding the negative PR of a trial (not to mention how a NDA can't be used to cover up a crime, ruling it out as a solution), and isn't happy to have to accept the deal despite it being the best option that the PRT has.

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* ControlFreak: Piggot outright describes Costa-Brown as is, one, and that she's someone who has to have everything her own way. In particular she kept putting pressure on Glenn Chambers to try and sweep the mess with Shadow Stalker under the rug, and gets mad when Piggot gets the Hebert and Barnes families to settle out of court for a fraction of the settlement that they could have gotten and avoiding the negative PR of a trial (not to mention how a NDA can't be used to cover up a crime, ruling it out as a solution), and isn't happy to have to accept the deal despite it being the best option that the PRT has.has.
* CoolOldGuy: Erwin, the old fisherman that keeps telling tall tales and never pays for his beers at the pub, turns out to be quite accomplished in the art of espionage, enough that ''the FBI'' has entire filing cabinets about his (mis)adventures.



** As Erwin discovers, [[spoiler:Rachel "Bitch" Lindt]]'s case was full of this, with a foster mother who was in it only for the money and mistreated her charges and a corrupt judge that bribed his brother-in-law, a PRT agent, to classify [[spoiler:Rachel]] as a deliberate murderer to hide his dirty dealings.



** As Coil gets captured before he can start the Undersiders, [[spoiler:Rachel remains a runaway struggling to survive in Brockton Bay, which leads to her almost dying in a fight with some Merchants]].

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** As Coil gets captured before he can start the Undersiders, [[spoiler:Rachel remains a runaway struggling to survive in Brockton Bay, which leads to her almost dying in when one of her attempts to bust a fight with some Merchants]].dog-fighting ring gets her shot]].
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* TakingYouWithMe: Erwin's philosophy is that you should either push on with life and make things better for the next generation, or failing that, go out with someone else's throat between your hands.

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* CleverCrows: Edgar, a raven that Amy healed and who decided to [[TheThingThatWouldNotLeave stick around despite several attempts to make him leave]], is noted several times to be rather intelligent, doing things like changing the TV channel to the news when it's on a show he doesn't like and no one else is watching, using tools, and even understands when Amy tells him to bite Dennis's ear for teasing her.

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* CleverCrows: Edgar, a raven that Amy healed and who decided to [[TheThingThatWouldNotLeave stick around despite several attempts to make him leave]], is noted several times to be rather intelligent, intelligent even by raven standards, doing things like changing the TV channel to the news when it's on a show he doesn't like and no one else is watching, using tools, and even understands when Amy tells him to bite Dennis's ear for teasing her.



* InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler:Despite the differing circumstances, Taylor still meets Rachel, and Brutus and Judus still die.]]



* LoopholeAbuse: The reason that [[spoiler:QA is able to give Contessa, and then Rebecca, LaserGuidedAmnesia is by apparently exploiting a loophole in protections meant to keep the cycle going, since Taylor is currently the biggest source of new data out there, and they'd interfere with her making said data]].

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* LoopholeAbuse: The reason that [[spoiler:QA is able to give Contessa, then Rebecca, and then Rebecca, a bunch of Cauldron researchers, LaserGuidedAmnesia is by apparently exploiting a loophole in protections meant to keep the cycle going, since Taylor is currently the biggest source of new data out there, and they'd interfere with her making said data]].



* PunnyName: Amy names the raven she saved (and which keeps getting into the Dallons' home) "Edgar Dallon-Poe". She really meant to keep the name to herself, but it slips out when she's scolding him; Vicky stares for a moment, then collapses into laughter.

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* PunnyName: Amy names the raven she saved (and which keeps getting into the Dallons' home) "Edgar Dallon-Poe". She really meant to keep the full name to herself, but it slips out when she's scolding him; Vicky stares for a moment, then collapses into laughter.

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-->'''Lisa''': "Are you thinking what I’m thinking, Agent Gimme?"
-->'''Taylor''': "I think so, Agent Thinky, but where are we going to get [[NoodleImplements a bucket of glue, five cats, and half a ton of blueberries]] at this time of night?"

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Gimme?"\\
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"I think so, Agent Thinky, but where are we going to get [[NoodleImplements a bucket of glue, five cats, and half a ton of blueberries]] at this time of night?"



* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler:Brutus and Judas die in a Merchants shootout instead of while fighting Leviathan.]]



* ForWantOfANail: The major divergence point here is that when Taylor recovers her mother's flute, Danny finds out and directs her to the titular ancestor's toolbox and journal in the attic in the quest to repair it. Soon, with Danny's help and Schimmelhorn's tools, Sophia's bullying is exposed, [[spoiler:Coil's plans to force Tattletale to work for him fail]], and [[spoiler:Piggot and the [=PRT=] discover Coil's infiltration and subterfuge]].

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* ForWantOfANail: ForWantOfANail:
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The major divergence point here is that when Taylor recovers her mother's flute, Danny finds out and directs her to the titular ancestor's toolbox and journal in the attic in the quest to repair it. Soon, with Danny's help and Schimmelhorn's tools, Sophia's bullying is exposed, [[spoiler:Coil's plans to force Tattletale to work for him fail]], and [[spoiler:Piggot and the [=PRT=] discover Coil's infiltration and subterfuge]].
** As Coil gets captured before he can start the Undersiders, [[spoiler:Rachel remains a runaway struggling to survive in Brockton Bay, which leads to her almost dying in a fight with some Merchants]].



* INeedAFreakingDrink: When Taylor tells her father how her latest experiment with her {{Hammerspace}} pocket has gone, he decides he needs food before dealing with the latest craziness in his life.

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When Taylor tells her father how her latest experiment with her {{Hammerspace}} pocket has gone, he decides he needs food before dealing with the latest craziness in his life.life.
** After realizing that Carol is slowly going paranoid over Edgar, Sarah goes to retrieve a bottle of wine and two glasses.



* LoopholeAbuse: The reason that [[spoiler:QA is able to give Contessa, and then Rebecca, LaserGuidedAmnesia is by apparently exploiting a loophole in protections meant to keep the cycle going, since Taylor is currently the biggest source of new data out there, and they'd interfere with her making said data.]]

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* LoopholeAbuse: The reason that [[spoiler:QA is able to give Contessa, and then Rebecca, LaserGuidedAmnesia is by apparently exploiting a loophole in protections meant to keep the cycle going, since Taylor is currently the biggest source of new data out there, and they'd interfere with her making said data.]]data]].



** It's also useful to keep injured people safe until they can be transported to a place where they can be healed, [[spoiler:which Taylor uses when the dockworkers find a gravely injured Rachel Lindt]].



** Lisa manages to outright [[spoiler:''blackmail her power'' into getting its restrictions loosened by the Queen Administrator by threatening to cut off the data the shard is getting from Taylor, which it desperately wants more of.]]

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** Lisa manages to outright [[spoiler:''blackmail her power'' into getting its restrictions loosened by the Queen Administrator by threatening to cut off the data the shard is getting from Taylor, which it desperately wants more of.]]of]].



*** When two truckers see Victoria and Amy flying and followed by an unkindness of ravens, one of the truckers mentions seeing something similar but with lizards.



** Later, [[spoiler:The QA shard expresses a low opinion of Scion and his mate's data-gathering methods, noting that cooperation, namely with Taylor, is providing ''much'' more useful information than their brute-force approach of generating data by causing conflict via traumatized people with powers fighting one another.]]

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** Later, [[spoiler:The [[spoiler:the QA shard expresses a low opinion of Scion and his mate's data-gathering methods, noting that cooperation, namely with Taylor, is providing ''much'' more useful information than their brute-force approach of generating data by causing conflict via traumatized people with powers fighting one another.]]



* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia, and every time the teachers try to get him to leave he simply finds his way back to Amy. Eventually they just stop trying because Edgar is fairly well-behaved as long as they leave him alone.

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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia, and every time the teachers try to get him to leave leave, he simply finds his way back to Amy. Eventually they just stop trying because Edgar is fairly well-behaved as long as they leave him alone.



* {{Troll}}: After bringing Coil out of {{Hammerspace}} and telling Coil to sit in a particular chair, every time Coil tries to get rid of it, she either puts it back in the same place or (if he breaks it) replaces it with an identical chair.
** The incident turns out to leave Coil with a fear of chairs in general. After she gets her hands on him, Piggot takes to showing pictures of a chair to him to make him freak out.
** Edgar the raven seems to take a liking to messing with Carol, much to the amusement of the other Dallons.

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After bringing Coil out of {{Hammerspace}} and telling Coil to sit in a particular chair, every time Coil tries to get rid of it, she Taylor either puts it back in the same place or (if he breaks it) replaces it with an identical chair.
** *** The incident turns out to leave Coil with a fear of chairs in general. After she gets her hands on him, Piggot takes to showing pictures of a chair to him to make him freak out.
** Edgar the raven seems to take a liking to messing with Carol, much to the amusement of the other Dallons. Victoria even notes that Edgar would stop messing with Carol if the latter just stopped freaking out every time she saw him.



* [[{{Manchild}} Womanchild]]: Piggot considers Costa Brown to be so bratty and demanding that Taylor comes across as more mature than her despite being only fifteen.

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* [[{{Manchild}} Womanchild]]: Piggot considers Costa Brown to be so bratty and demanding that Taylor [[WiseBeyondTheirYears Taylor]] comes across as more mature than her despite being only fifteen.
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* PunnyName: Amy names the raven she saved (and which keeps getting into the Dallons' home) "Edgar Dallon-Poe".

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* PunnyName: Amy names the raven she saved (and which keeps getting into the Dallons' home) "Edgar Dallon-Poe". She really meant to keep the name to herself, but it slips out when she's scolding him; Vicky stares for a moment, then collapses into laughter.
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** Kaiser throws an outright temper tantrum [[spoiler:after Alabaster goes missing]].
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* LaughThemselvesSick: When Taylor reveals to Anne and Lisa that she's [[spoiler:put Alabaster in her {{Hammerspace}} pocket]] by doing a ShoutOut, the other girls begin laughing so hard that Anne has to pull over.


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** After [[spoiler:stealing Alabaster]], Taylor tells Anne and Lisa [[Series/SesameStreet "Two. I have two Nazis. Ha Ha Ha."]]
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* AbsenceOfEvidence: When Armsmaster and Dragon [[spoiler:find proof that Coil's base ''was'' were he and his mercs say it should be, they're baffled because there's no known method, via parahuman powers or Tinker technology, that could produce such an effect, and regardless teleportation abilities and tech always leave identifiable traces, none of which are present, which makes it clear to them that something ''very'' out of the ordinary is going on.]]

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* AbsenceOfEvidence: When Armsmaster and Dragon [[spoiler:find proof that Coil's base ''was'' were where he and his mercs say it should be, they're baffled because there's no known method, via parahuman powers or Tinker technology, that could produce such an effect, and regardless teleportation abilities and tech always leave identifiable traces, none of which are present, which makes it clear to them that something ''very'' out of the ordinary is going on.]]

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* RefugeInAudacity: Taylor manages to get away with recording everything that happens at school (particularly the bullying) by carrying a placard stating that she's recording everything. If [[CassandraTruth no one believes her]], and even ramps up the bullying in reaction, that's their business. And if the teachers attempt to take the recorder (even though they have no standing to do so), she can give them a fake one, keep recording, and warn Danny so he can report it as theft.
** Lisa manages to outright [[spoiler:''blackmail her power'' into getting its restrictions loosened by the Queen Administrator by threatening to cut off the data the shard is getting from Taylor.]]

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* RefugeInAudacity: RefugeInAudacity:
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Taylor manages to get away with recording everything that happens at school (particularly the bullying) by carrying a placard stating that she's recording everything. If [[CassandraTruth no one believes her]], and even ramps up the bullying in reaction, that's their business. And if the teachers attempt to take the recorder (even though they have no standing to do so), she can give them a fake one, keep recording, and warn Danny so he can report it as theft.
** Lisa manages to outright [[spoiler:''blackmail her power'' into getting its restrictions loosened by the Queen Administrator by threatening to cut off the data the shard is getting from Taylor.Taylor, which it desperately wants more of.]]



* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia, and every time the teachers try to get him to leave he simply finds his way back to Amy, and eventually they just stop trying because Edgar is fairly well-behaved as long as they leave him alone.

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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia, and every time the teachers try to get him to leave he simply finds his way back to Amy, and eventually Amy. Eventually they just stop trying because Edgar is fairly well-behaved as long as they leave him alone.
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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Danny uses Anton's trick to blow up Oni Lee with the very grenades he was using to terrorize Brockton Bay.]]

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* KarmicDeath: [[spoiler: Danny [[spoiler:Danny uses Anton's trick to blow up Oni Lee with the very grenades he was using to terrorize Brockton Bay.Bay - and he was able to do it only because the villain stopped teleporting so he could so some EvilGloating at Ms. Militia.]]
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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia, and every time the teachers try to get him to leave he simply finds his way back to Amy, and eventually they just stop trying.

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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia, and every time the teachers try to get him to leave he simply finds his way back to Amy, and eventually they just stop trying.trying because Edgar is fairly well-behaved as long as they leave him alone.
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** When Taylor figures out how to craft a crystal she can use [[spoiler:to let Administrator access ''beneath'']], Lisa's shard states ''[[MemeticMutation Administrator suffering from near-Taylor experience]]''.
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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia.

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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Amy heals and feeds an injured raven, but no matter how many times she lets him outside he keeps coming back into the Dallon house whenever he can. Eventually they just give up on trying to make him leave. Later, he even follows Amy to Arcadia.Arcadia, and every time the teachers try to get him to leave he simply finds his way back to Amy, and eventually they just stop trying.

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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: [[spoiler: Everyone in Brockton Bay, criminal and non-criminal, cheers when Danny (secretly) kills Oni Lee with his own grenades]].

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* AndThereWasMuchRejoicing: [[spoiler: Everyone in Brockton Bay, criminal and non-criminal, non-criminal (besides Lung and the ABB, of course), cheers when Danny (secretly) kills Oni Lee with his own grenades]].



** The PRT assumes that the drugs being found on Sophia was simply because she botched framing Taylor, since it makes more sense than her just ''happening'' to have the powerset needed to plant said drugs on Sophia when she never got close to her when they have no evidence that Taylor's triggered.

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** The PRT assumes that the drugs being found on Sophia was simply because she botched framing Taylor, since it makes more sense than her Taylor just ''happening'' to have the powerset needed to plant said drugs on Sophia when she never got close to her when and they have no evidence that Taylor's triggered.



* StupidEvil: Piggot is flabbergasted and angered by Sophia risking her own freedom just to make one girl's life a living nightmare, on top of stupidly trying to frame that same girl for narcotics possession. Renick, after hearing about how Sophia was arrested for possession of drugs, even notes that her being high would explain a ''lot'' about the thought processes, or lack thereof, behind her more boneheaded decisions.
** Later, [[spoiler:The QA shard expresses a low opinion of Scion and his mate's data-gathering methods, noting that cooperation, namely with Taylor, is providing ''much'' more useful information than their brute-force approach of generating data by causing conflict via traumatized people with powers.]]

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* StupidEvil: StupidEvil:
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Piggot is flabbergasted and angered by Sophia risking her own freedom just to make one girl's life a living nightmare, on top of stupidly trying to frame that same girl for narcotics possession. Renick, after hearing about how Sophia was arrested for possession of drugs, even notes that her being high would explain a ''lot'' about the thought processes, or lack thereof, behind her more boneheaded decisions.
** Later, [[spoiler:The QA shard expresses a low opinion of Scion and his mate's data-gathering methods, noting that cooperation, namely with Taylor, is providing ''much'' more useful information than their brute-force approach of generating data by causing conflict via traumatized people with powers.powers fighting one another.]]



* TooCleverByHalf: It's noted that while Coil, while smart and cunning, was far from the genius he thought himself as being, and wasn't nearly as clever with his power as he thought, as otherwise the deep scan Armsmaster did wouldn't have exposed his presence in the PRT systems so easily. They even say that they're lucky that someone ''truly'' competent didn't get his power, otherwise he would have been almost impossible to stop.

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* TooCleverByHalf: It's noted that while Coil, while smart and cunning, was far from the genius he thought ''thought'' himself as being, and wasn't nearly as clever with his power as he thought, as otherwise the deep scan Armsmaster did wouldn't have exposed his presence in the PRT systems so easily.easily, for starters. They even say that they're lucky that someone ''truly'' competent didn't get his power, otherwise he would have been almost impossible to stop.



* WowingCthulhu: [[spoiler:Lisa's shard and the Queen Administrator are amazed by Taylor and company, not just by Papa's tech and Anton's trick (though that's a big part of it), but also Taylor's intelligence and capability to use aforementioned things to get new and interesting data, as well as managing to figure out key aspects of the shard network, including Taylor even managing to notice the QA shard ''before'' triggering. QA even ''actively interferes with Contessa and the rest of Cauldron'' to keep her from harming Taylor and company and cutting off said data, and is genuinely impressed and eager to see what else she does.]]

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* WowingCthulhu: [[spoiler:Lisa's shard and the Queen Administrator are amazed by Taylor and company, not just by Papa's tech and Anton's trick (though that's a big part of it), but also Taylor's intelligence and capability to use aforementioned things to get new and interesting data, as well as managing to figure out key aspects of the shard network, including Taylor even managing to notice the QA shard ''before'' triggering. triggering just to start with. QA even ''actively interferes with Contessa and the rest of Cauldron'' to keep her them from harming Taylor and company and cutting off said data, and is genuinely impressed and eager to see what else she does.]]
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** Later, [[spoiler:The QA shard expresses a low opinion of Scion and his mate's data-gathering methods, noting that cooperation, namely with Taylor, is providing ''much'' more useful information than their brute-force approach of generating date by causing conflict via traumatized people with powers.]]

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** Later, [[spoiler:The QA shard expresses a low opinion of Scion and his mate's data-gathering methods, noting that cooperation, namely with Taylor, is providing ''much'' more useful information than their brute-force approach of generating date data by causing conflict via traumatized people with powers.]]
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* CleverCrows: Edgar, a raven that Amy healed and who decided to [[TheThingThatWouldNotLeave stick around despite several attempts to make him leave]], is noted several times to be rather intelligent, doing things like changing the TV channel to the news when it's on a show he doesn't like and no one else is watching, using tools, and even understands when Amy tells him to bite Dennis's ear for teasing her.


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* FailsafeFailure: [[spoiler:Coil's shard attempted to reconnect with him after Taylor put him in her pocket, like Lisa's did, but thanks to being "dead" all that does is speed up its loss of power, since it can't really recharge due to being improperly deployed. By the time that Taylor steals it, it's completely out of juice.]]
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* FunWithAcronyms: United National Intervention Operators Network, aka U.N.I.O.N.

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* FunWithAcronyms: United National Intervention Operators Network, aka U.N.I.O.N. Even after the acronym starts to spread, no-one thinks to connect it with the Dockworkers' Association.

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