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* MythologyGag: When Shirou's watchers from the History Compilation Committee appear in their maid uniforms, Illya's newly discovered [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya maid switch]] is triggered. Later, she wants to get a tan.

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When Shirou's watchers from the History Compilation Committee appear in their maid uniforms, Illya's newly discovered [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya maid switch]] is triggered. Later, she wants to get a tan.tan.
** At one point, Shirou's outfit gets covered in blood and ash until is resembles Archer's outfit.


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** [[spoiler: Ahriman's threat results in Circe granting Godou magical knowledge.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Referenced several times as the central reason behind Shirou's subordinates' UndyingLoyalty to him.
* NinjaMaid: Well, more of a magic fighter maid, in Manaka's case.
* NothingPersonal: Odysseus has nothing against Shirou, it's just that he believes that killing him is the key to unlocking the ability to travel to other worlds.


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* OnlyTheChosenMayWield: As in canon, any Noble Phantasm Shirou creates belongs to him so he can use them. He loans Illya Beautiful Head Taker, the naginata of Tomoe Gozen, because of a story where Gozen loaned it to one of her female servants, which allows any woman to wield it. The Halberd of Lu Bu Fengxian, Gae Dearg, Trap of Argalia, and Rhongomyniad's powers are always active, allowing anyone to use them. He is able to give Arondight to Lancelot because Lancelot is the alternate universe counterpart of its original owner.

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* FogOfDoom: When describing Shirou's "Armour of the Black Knight" Authority, the author said that it have a really good compatibility with "Curses Without End". When is finally show in action, it completely destroys [[spoiler: Lancelot's army, leaving her with only the incomplete Excalibur as a last-resort attack.]]

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* FogOfDoom: When describing Shirou's "Armour of the Black Knight" Authority, the author said that it have a really good compatibility with "Curses Without End". When it is finally show shown in action, it completely destroys [[spoiler: Lancelot's army, leaving her with only the incomplete Excalibur as a last-resort attack.]]



* HealingHands:
** Shirou's The Hero's Bride Authority heals any girl he rescues. It is enough to heal the damage to Illya's body from her being a [[CloneDegeneration short-lived homunculus]], meaning she can have a normal lifespan.
** Several of the characters like Guinevere can heal others.



** [[spoiler: Ahriman's threat results in Circe granting Godou magical knowledge.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Referenced several times as the central reason behind Shirou's subordinates' UndyingLoyalty to him.
* NinjaMaid: Well, more of a magic fighter maid, in Manaka's case.
* NothingPersonal: Odysseus has nothing against Shirou, it's just that he believes that killing him is the key to unlocking the ability to travel to other worlds.

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** [[spoiler: Ahriman's threat results in Circe granting Godou magical knowledge.]]
* NiceToTheWaiter: Referenced several times as the central reason behind OnlySaneMan: Shirou's subordinates' UndyingLoyalty to him.
* NinjaMaid: Well, more of a magic fighter maid, in Manaka's case.
* NothingPersonal: Odysseus has nothing against Shirou, it's just that he
first undead Servant, Yusuke, believes that killing him is the key to unlocking the ability to travel to other worlds.Japan has a monopoly on sane Campione after meeting Luo Hao.



* OnlySaneMan: Shirou's first undead Servant, Yusuke, believes that Japan has a monopoly on sane Campione after meeting Luo Hao.
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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Several characters do this when they see Shirou's magecraft. [[spoiler:Guinevere and Lancelot are baffled when Shirou uses Excalibur, Caliburn, Rhongomyniad, and Arondight. In the Campioneverse, Excalibur belongs to Artus, The King of the End, and no other. Caliburn, Rhongomyniad, and Arondight are mere stories and do not even exist in the Campioneverse, yet their senses tell them they are real. Everybody gets really baffled when he uses Unlimited Blade Works.]]

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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Several characters do this when they see Shirou's magecraft.Shirou or Illya's magecraft, as they can perform spells without calling upon gods or other magical beings for aid. [[spoiler:Guinevere and Lancelot are baffled when Shirou uses Excalibur, Caliburn, Rhongomyniad, and Arondight. In the Campioneverse, Excalibur belongs to Artus, The King of the End, and no other. Caliburn, Rhongomyniad, and Arondight are mere stories and do not even exist in the Campioneverse, yet their senses tell them they are real. Everybody gets really baffled when he uses Unlimited Blade Works.]]
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* YouRemindMeOfX: Shirou muses that Liliana Kranjcar somewhat resembles Saber in both looks and personality.
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-->'''Hades:''' Do you think I would concede to ever owe my life to one of your kind? I will not accept that, take my power bastard of Epimetheus, choke on it. And hear my last words, all your kind share the same fate, no matter how glutted on your stolen powers you become. You all die, either by the hands of one of my peers or at the hands of one of your own, in the end you all die.

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** After killing Angra Mainyu upon arriving in the Campione world, Shirou briefly dies of his injuries before Pandora revives him as a Campione. As a Campione, he becomes much stronger and tougher and has greater reserves of Mana, and since he now has Divinity, he can Trace and Project Divine weapons like Excalibur and Arondight. He also gains access to the memories of Archer, granting him much more experience and many of Gilgamesh’s weapons.

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** After killing Angra Mainyu upon arriving in the Campione world, Shirou briefly dies of his injuries before Pandora revives him as a Campione. As a Campione, he becomes much stronger and tougher and has greater reserves of Mana, and since he now has Divinity, he can Trace and Project Divine weapons like Excalibur and Arondight. He also gains access to the memories of Archer, granting him much more experience and many of Gilgamesh’s Gilgamesh's weapons.



** For Luo Hao, Honor IS Reason. For example, if she is imprisoned, she can escape by simply turning into mist, but she says it is not right to escape that way. She says she must prove herself by physically busting out. Unless a situation is desperate, she refuses to let allies help her if them joining would make them outnumber her opponents.

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** For Luo Hao, Honor IS Reason. For example, if she is imprisoned, she can escape by simply turning into mist, but she says it is not right to escape that way. She says she must prove herself by physically busting out. Unless a situation is desperate, she refuses to let allies help her if them joining would make them outnumber her opponents. She also refuses to use sneak attacks and becomes displeased if her allies use them, even to save her life.


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* HowIsThatEvenPossible: Several characters do this when they see Shirou's magecraft. [[spoiler:Guinevere and Lancelot are baffled when Shirou uses Excalibur, Caliburn, Rhongomyniad, and Arondight. In the Campioneverse, Excalibur belongs to Artus, The King of the End, and no other. Caliburn, Rhongomyniad, and Arondight are mere stories and do not even exist in the Campioneverse, yet their senses tell them they are real. Everybody gets really baffled when he uses Unlimited Blade Works.]]
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** After killing Angra Mainyu upon arriving in the Campione world, Shirou briefly dies of his injuries before Pandora revives him as a Campione. As a Campione, he becomes much stronger and tougher and has greater reserves of Mana, and since he now has Divinity, he can Trace and Project Divine weapons like Excalibur and Arondight.

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** After killing Angra Mainyu upon arriving in the Campione world, Shirou briefly dies of his injuries before Pandora revives him as a Campione. As a Campione, he becomes much stronger and tougher and has greater reserves of Mana, and since he now has Divinity, he can Trace and Project Divine weapons like Excalibur and Arondight. He also gains access to the memories of Archer, granting him much more experience and many of Gilgamesh’s weapons.
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** [[spoiler:When Arhiman, who is possessing Illya, is losing against Godou, he decides to throw himself onto Godou's sword Ame no Murakumo out of spite, saying that by killing Illya, he'll at least hurt Shirou. Fortunately, at the last second, Godou has Ame no Murakumo absorb the properties of the Warrior Authority, turning into a sword that cuts the soul and not flesh. So when they get impaled, Arhiman was the only one who was hurt.]]

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** [[spoiler:When Arhiman, Ahriman, who is possessing Illya, is losing against Godou, he decides to throw himself onto Godou's sword Ame no Murakumo out of spite, saying that by killing Illya, he'll at least hurt Shirou. Fortunately, at the last second, Godou has Ame no Murakumo absorb the properties of the Warrior Authority, turning into a sword that cuts the soul and not flesh. So when they get impaled, Arhiman Ahriman was the only one who was hurt.]]



** [[spoiler:Arhiman is one to Shirou. His BattleAura instantly corrupts and usurps anything it touches, including Noble Phantasms, so Shirou can't really hurt him and any weapon he tries to use just gets added to Arhiman's arsenal.]]
** [[spoiler:Godou turns out to be suited to fighting Arhiman, since his Ame no Murakumo and Warrior Authority both cannot be corrupted and the Warrior Authority can cut his soul.]]

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** [[spoiler:Arhiman [[spoiler:Ahriman is one to Shirou. His BattleAura instantly corrupts and usurps anything it touches, including Noble Phantasms, so Shirou can't really hurt him and any weapon he tries to use just gets added to Arhiman's Ahriman's arsenal.]]
** [[spoiler:Godou turns out to be suited to fighting Arhiman, Ahriman, since his Ame no Murakumo and Warrior Authority both cannot be corrupted and the Warrior Authority can cut his soul.]]

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* BerserkButton: When Shirou makes a copy of the sword Ame no Murakumo, Godou's version goes berserk at the souless copy and aims to destroy it.



** [[spoiler:Godou attempts to use his Stallion Authority, ThePowerOfTheSun, on Apollo. Both combatants then comment on how just stupid that was. It is more successful the second time, after Apollo's divinity is negated by the Warrior Authority.]]
** [[spoiler:Shirou tries to use Curses Without End on Ahriman, which fails spectacularly as Ahriman can effortlessly take control of the Curses.]]

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** [[spoiler:Godou attempts to use his Stallion Authority, ThePowerOfTheSun, on Apollo. Both combatants then comment on how just how stupid that was. It is more successful the second time, after Apollo's divinity is negated by the Warrior Authority.]]
** [[spoiler:Shirou tries to use Curses Without End on Ahriman, which fails spectacularly as Ahriman can effortlessly take control of the Curses. Ahriman can also corrupt and take control of anything that touches his BattleAura, including Noble Phantasms, so Shirou trying to attack him with them just adds to his arsenal.]]



* InertialImpalement: At the end of their fight, [[spoiler:Mordred]] angrily lunges at Shirou just as he summons Excalibur, causing him to be impaled.

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** [[spoiler:When Arhiman, who is possessing Illya, is losing against Godou, he decides to throw himself onto Godou's sword Ame no Murakumo out of spite, saying that by killing Illya, he'll at least hurt Shirou. Fortunately, at the last second, Godou has Ame no Murakumo absorb the properties of the Warrior Authority, turning into a sword that cuts the soul and not flesh. So when they get impaled, Arhiman was the only one who was hurt.]]



* ManOfKryptonite: Although the two never fight, Athena comments that Godou would have had a hard time fighting [[spoiler:Mordred. Since Mordred can't be sensed, the Warrior Authority is all but useless against him.]]

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** [[spoiler:Arhiman is one to Shirou. His BattleAura instantly corrupts and usurps anything it touches, including Noble Phantasms, so Shirou can't really hurt him and any weapon he tries to use just gets added to Arhiman's arsenal.]]
** [[spoiler:Godou turns out to be suited to fighting Arhiman, since his Ame no Murakumo and Warrior Authority both cannot be corrupted and the Warrior Authority can cut his soul.
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** After killing Angra Mainyu upon arriving in the Campione world, Shirou briefly dies of his injuries before Pandora revives him as a Campione. As a Campione, he becomes much stronger and tougher and has greater reserves of Mana, and since he now has Divinity, he can Trace and Project Divine weapons.

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** After killing Angra Mainyu upon arriving in the Campione world, Shirou briefly dies of his injuries before Pandora revives him as a Campione. As a Campione, he becomes much stronger and tougher and has greater reserves of Mana, and since he now has Divinity, he can Trace and Project Divine weapons.weapons like Excalibur and Arondight.



* CombatPragmatist: Fitting for his role in mythology, Odysseus is this. When he wants to kill Shirou, he fires arrows at him while he's too far away to see and without announcing his presence.

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* CombatPragmatist: Fitting for his role in mythology, Odysseus is this. When he wants to kill Shirou, he fires arrows at him while he's too far away to see and without announcing his presence. The arrows explode and release poison.


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* InertialImpalement: At the end of their fight, [[spoiler:Mordred]] angrily lunges at Shirou just as he summons Excalibur, causing him to be impaled.


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* TheToothHurts: [[spoiler:When Mordred is revived as a woman and a God of Steel, she learns she can power up by eating metal. When she does the first time, she breaks her teeth and bleeds everywhere, but she keeps on eating it and her teeth regenerate.]]
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** For Luo Hao, Honor IS Reason.

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** For Luo Hao, Honor IS Reason. For example, if she is imprisoned, she can escape by simply turning into mist, but she says it is not right to escape that way. She says she must prove herself by physically busting out. Unless a situation is desperate, she refuses to let allies help her if them joining would make them outnumber her opponents.
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* HeroKiller: [[spoiler:Mordred]] is noted to have killed many Campione in his lifetime, several of whom were centuries old and very powerful and experienced. He is in utter disbelief that Shirou, who had only been a Campione for a few months, is able to fight on par with him and then defeat him.


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* ScrewDestiny: The spear Gae Bolg reverses causality to always pierce the target's heart, meaning it is destiny to be killed by it when its power is invoked. When it is used on Luo Hao, she is able to partially dodge it (it hits her in the shoulder instead of the heart). She points out Campione screw destiny all the time, starting with being a mortal that killed a God.

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* BullyingADragon: Shirou genuinely wanted to avoid a fight against Perseus, up until the Heretic God gloated he was going to make Illya his new bride after killing him. Cue [[KnightTemplarBigBrother über-protective big brother]] going MEDIEVAL on Perseus' ass.

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* RescueRomance: Shirou has this as an actual power. The Hero's Bride, an Authority he got from Perseus, heals any girl he saves and makes him appear far more attractive to them, subtly nudging their minds to fall in love with him.
* RetailTherapy: Much to his terror, Shirou discovers that after leaving Illya in London, she made really good use of her credit card.
-->'''Airport Employee''' (about Illya's luggage)''':''' I think you might want to have someone bring a truck rather than a van.



* PrecociousCrush: You would think that [[spoiler: being hundreds of years old would prevent Guinevere]] from having one of these on [[ChickMagnet Shirou]]. [[ForegoneConclusion You would be wrong.]] [[spoiler: Averted somewhat in Chapter 36, after she ages up into a teenager.]]



* PrecociousCrush: You would think that [[spoiler: being hundreds of years old would prevent Guinevere]] from having one of these on [[ChickMagnet Shirou]]. [[ForegoneConclusion You would be wrong.]] [[spoiler: Averted somewhat in Chapter 36, after she ages up into a teenager.]]

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* PrecociousCrush: You would RescueRomance: Shirou has this as an actual power. The Hero's Bride, an Authority he got from Perseus, heals any girl he saves and makes him appear far more attractive to them, subtly nudging their minds to fall in love with him.
* RetailTherapy: Much to his terror, Shirou discovers that after leaving Illya in London, she made really good use of her credit card.
-->'''Airport Employee''' (about Illya's luggage)''':''' I
think that [[spoiler: being hundreds of years old would prevent Guinevere]] from having one of these on [[ChickMagnet Shirou]]. [[ForegoneConclusion You would be wrong.]] [[spoiler: Averted somewhat in Chapter 36, after she ages up into you might want to have someone bring a teenager.]]truck rather than a van.
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* PowerMisidentification: Almost all the characters mistake Shirou's Noble Phantasms and Unlimited Blade Works for Authorities. Illya sets the record straight, but Alexander Gascoigne thinks this is a lie to make Shirou seem more impressive by pretending an Authority is mere mortal magic.
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* SoProudOfYou: Shirou sees Archer's memories and learns that the reason why Archer gave him his arm to save his life was because Archer became proud that Shirou did not make the same mistakes he did.
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** PlayedForLaughs with the curb-stomp NEGOTIATION that happened to Koizumi Watanabe. With the entire "discussion" being full of EntertaininglyWrong and yet perfectly logical conclusions, he even lampshades the fact that lost absolutely to Shirou. He was only saved because Shirou thought he was ill.

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** PlayedForLaughs with the curb-stomp NEGOTIATION that happened to Koizumi Watanabe. With the entire "discussion" being full of Watanabe reaching EntertaininglyWrong and yet perfectly logical conclusions, he even lampshades the fact that lost absolutely to Shirou. He was only saved because Shirou thought he was ill.Watanabe THINKS Shiro is curb-stomp negotiating him. Meanwhile Shiro has no idea how intimidating he's being, and mistakes Watanabe's distress for illness.
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** While under Venus' control, Shirou uses Excalibur Morgan. Guinevere assumes it is his regular Excalibur somehow corrupted by Venus' control, unaware he got it from watching and fighting Saber Alter.

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* ArmorPiercingAttack: [[spoiler:Rhongomyniad's]] power is that it ignores invulnerability, meaning it can pierce any flesh.



* ThisCannotBe: Guinevere's reaction to [[spoiler: Shirou presenting her Rhongomyniad, which in this verse is nothing more than a story that she herself invented.]]

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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8560965/1/God-Slaying-Blade-Works God Slaying Blade Works]] is a VisualNovel/FateStayNight[=/=]LightNovel/{{Campione}} crossover written by Marcus Galen Sands.

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[[http://www.''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8560965/1/God-Slaying-Blade-Works God Slaying Blade Works]] Works]]'' is a VisualNovel/FateStayNight[=/=]LightNovel/{{Campione}} ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight''[=/=]''LightNovel/{{Campione}}'' crossover written by Marcus Galen Sands.



* CameBackStrong: [[spoiler:Mordred may have been brought back as a woman, however she's now a God of Steel instead of merely a God of Earth.]]

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* CameBackStrong: CameBackStrong:
** After killing Angra Mainyu upon arriving in the Campione world, Shirou briefly dies of his injuries before Pandora revives him as a Campione. As a Campione, he becomes much stronger and tougher and has greater reserves of Mana, and since he now has Divinity, he can Trace and Project Divine weapons.
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[[spoiler:Mordred may have been brought back as a woman, however she's now a God of Steel instead of merely a God of Earth.]]
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* TheBlackDeath: [[spoiler:Yuri tells Godou that Ahriman was responsible for the Black Death, although no one knows for sure to what extent, whether he created it outright or else simply modified it in some fashion. What ''is'' known is that because of it, Ahriman was responsible for tens of millions of deaths, something which Godou rightly finds ''[[OhCrap terrifying]]''.]]

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* TheBlackDeath: [[spoiler:Yuri tells Godou that Ahriman was responsible for the Black Death, although no one knows for sure to what extent, whether he created it outright or else simply modified it in some fashion. What ''is'' known is that because of it, Ahriman was responsible for tens of millions of deaths, something which Godou rightly finds ''[[OhCrap terrifying]]''.]]
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* TheBlackDeath: [[spoiler:Yuri tells Godou that Ahriman was responsible for the Black Death, though she says that no one knows exactly to what extent, such as whether he created it outright or else simply modified it in some way. All that ''is'' known is that he was behind dozens of millions of deaths through it, something which Godou rightly finds ''[[OhCrap terrifying]]''.]]

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* TheBlackDeath: [[spoiler:Yuri tells Godou that Ahriman was responsible for the Black Death, though she says that although no one knows exactly for sure to what extent, such as whether he created it outright or else simply modified it in some way. All that fashion. What ''is'' known is that he because of it, Ahriman was behind dozens responsible for tens of millions of deaths through it, deaths, something which Godou rightly finds ''[[OhCrap terrifying]]''.]]



* BlessedWithSuck: Kaida's ability to "cleanse" people's souls made her unable to touch others for extended periods of time, as it specifically rids the souls of those she touches of ''all'' impurities, not just those that are actually "evil", and the damage inflicted upon them does not heal on its own. Cleansing [[spoiler:Kaida's mother]] completely is the reason why [[spoiler:she fell into a coma and could neither heal on her own nor be healed by anyone]].

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* BlessedWithSuck: Kaida's ability to "cleanse" people's souls made makes her unable to touch others for extended periods of time, as it specifically rids the souls of those she touches of ''all'' impurities, not just those that are actually "evil", and the damage inflicted upon them does not heal on its own. Cleansing [[spoiler:Kaida's mother]] completely is the reason why [[spoiler:she fell into a coma and could neither heal on her own nor be healed by anyone]].



** Chapter 36 has a massive one for [[spoiler: Alexander Gascoigne, who goes from nearly killing Guinevere to being pummeled massively and suffering constant threat of drowning, forcing him to swear to never even try going against Guinevere ever again or else Shirou will hunt him and never stop until he's dead. Afterwards, he's developed an almost phobic fear of Shirou and can barely take a shower without having a FreakOut.]]

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** Chapter 36 has a massive one for [[spoiler: Alexander Gascoigne, who goes from nearly killing Guinevere to being pummeled massively and suffering constant threat of drowning, forcing him to swear to never even try going against Guinevere ever again or else Shirou will hunt him down and never stop until he's dead. Afterwards, he's developed an almost phobic fear of Shirou and can barely take a shower without having a FreakOut.]]



* BrutalHonesty: This is a defining trait of Lancelot. [[spoiler:For example, Guinevere and Tiamat start tiptoeing around the issue that they are both in love with Shirou but he only loves Sakura. Lancelot bluntly says that she's not in love with him and respects his relationship, but he's strong and handsome, so she might as well try to get a one-night stand with him.]]

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* BrutalHonesty: This is a defining trait of Lancelot. [[spoiler:For example, Guinevere and Tiamat start tiptoeing tend to tiptoe around the issue that they are both in love with Shirou but he only loves Sakura. Lancelot bluntly says states that she's not in love with him and respects his relationship, but he's strong and handsome, so she might as well try to get a one-night stand with him.]]
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Referenced several times as the central reason behind Shirou's subordinates' UndyingLoyalty to him.
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** Illya has a strange aversion as she's glad to have grown A-cups as it shows that not only has her growth stagnation ceased due to Shirou's RescueRomance power healing that part, but remembers her mother and knows she has the potential to grow more.
** Guinevere on the other hand plays it hilariously straight compared to the more voluptuous Tiamat.
* AdaptationalBadass / TookALevelInBadass: Shirou. Yes, he was already quite the badass in Heaven's Feel, but [[BadassTransplant it]] [[BlessedWithSuck came]] [[BodyHorror at]] [[DeadlyUpgrade a]] [[EmptyShell cost]]. After becoming a Campione, that ceased to be a problem, with more abilities to boot.
* AlasPoorVillain: Venus's last thoughts were why wasn't she able to have Shirou's full love. [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation Whether such thoughts are genuine or surprise at her power's inability to control him are up to debate.]]
* AllMythsAreTrue: Shirou claims they are, but just not in the same story in order to explain the existence of [[spoiler: Rhongomyniad, the spear of King Arthur to Guinevere, who had made it up as a part of Arthur's (Artus's) legend, and was baffled to see it.]]

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** Illya has is a strange aversion as odd subversion in that she's glad ''glad'' to have grown A-cups A-cups, as it shows indicates that not only has her growth stagnation ceased due to Shirou's RescueRomance power healing that part, but she also remembers her mother and knows she has the potential to grow more.
** Guinevere Guinevere, on the other hand hand, plays it hilariously straight compared to the more voluptuous Tiamat.
* AdaptationalBadass / TookALevelInBadass: AdaptationalBadass[=/=]TookALevelInBadass: Shirou. Yes, he was already quite the badass in Heaven's Feel, but however it [[BadassTransplant it]] came]] [[BlessedWithSuck came]] at]] [[BodyHorror at]] an]] [[DeadlyUpgrade a]] extreme]] [[EmptyShell cost]]. After becoming a Campione, that ceased to be a problem, with more abilities to boot.
* AlasPoorVillain: Venus's Venus' last thoughts were why wasn't she able to have Shirou's full love. [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation Whether such thoughts are genuine genuine, or else surprise at her power's inability to control him him, are up to for debate.]]
* AllMythsAreTrue: Shirou claims they are, but just not in the same story story, in order to explain the existence of [[spoiler: Rhongomyniad, the spear of King Arthur to Guinevere, who had made it up as a part of Arthur's (Artus's) (Artus') legend, and was baffled to see it.]]



* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: All [[GodSlayer Campione]] are this by default, but [[ArrogantKungFuGuy Luo Hao]] takes it a step further and bases her entire philosophy of Kingship around this concept: Her opinion on the matter is 'since [[ThirdPersonPerson Luo Hao]] is the greatest warrior in China, then ''shouldn't'' Luo Hao be entitled to rule it?'
* AuraVision: Manaka can see "Aura Signs" above the heads of others, which take the forms of symbols that represent the personality traits of the ones they belong to.

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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: All [[GodSlayer Campione]] are this by default, but [[ArrogantKungFuGuy Luo Hao]] takes it a step further and bases her entire philosophy of Kingship around this concept: Her opinion on the matter is 'since is, "Since [[ThirdPersonPerson Luo Hao]] is the greatest warrior in China, then ''shouldn't'' Luo Hao be entitled to rule it?'
it?"
* AuraVision: Manaka can see "Aura Signs" above the heads of others, which take the forms of symbols that represent representing the personality traits of the ones they belong to.



** BlasphemousBoast: Borderline when one understands the meaning of Steel and Strongest Steel in Campione. Steel is the domain solely of Hero Gods while the Strongest Steel is Artus, the most powerful Steel god. Shirou unknowingly declared himself superior to the King of the End.

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** BlasphemousBoast: Borderline when one understands the meaning meanings of Steel and Strongest Steel in Campione. Steel is the domain solely of Hero Gods Gods, while the Strongest Steel is Artus, the most powerful Steel god. God of Steel. In this, Shirou has unknowingly declared himself superior to the King of the End.



-->'''Shirou''': I am the bone of my sword.\\

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-->'''Shirou''': -->'''Shirou:''' I am the bone of my sword.\\



* BewareTheNiceOnes: Kaida may be one of the nicest person in the story but is still a bad idea to anger someone with an ability called "Dragon's Roar".

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Kaida may be one of the nicest person in the story story, but it is still a bad idea to anger someone with an ability called "Dragon's Roar"."[[MakeMeWannaShout Dragon's]] [[PersonofMassDestruction Roar]]".



** [[spoiler:Unlimited Blade Works (and to some degree, the Noble Phantasms within) is a magic of mortal origin, but is on the level of an Authority itself, if not even more powerful. Luo Hao gets briefly thrown off guard by this when fighting the Venus controlled Shirou, but gets past it when she remembers that Campione all do that when they kill a god, so it's not that surprising that Shirou can do something like that]].
** [[spoiler:Odysseus gazing into the unstable Kaleidoscope portal turns him into a MadGod, something Circe didn't think was possible]].
* TheBlackDeath:[[spoiler: Yuri tells Godou that Ahriman was responsible for the Black Death, though she says no one knows to what extent, such as if he created it outright or else merely modified it in some way. All is known is that he was behind dozens of millions of deaths through it, something which Godou rightly finds ''[[OhCrap terrifying]]''.]]

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** [[spoiler:Unlimited Blade Works (and to some degree, the Noble Phantasms within) is a magic of mortal origin, but is on the level of an Authority itself, if not even more powerful. Luo Hao gets briefly thrown off guard by this when fighting the Venus controlled Venus-controlled Shirou, but gets past it when she remembers that all Campione all do that when whenever they kill a god, so it's not that surprising that Shirou can do something like that]].
this.]]
** [[spoiler:Odysseus gazing into the unstable Kaleidoscope portal turns him into a MadGod, something Circe didn't think hadn't believed was possible]].
even possible.]]
* TheBlackDeath:[[spoiler: Yuri TheBlackDeath: [[spoiler:Yuri tells Godou that Ahriman was responsible for the Black Death, though she says that no one knows exactly to what extent, such as if whether he created it outright or else merely simply modified it in some way. All is that ''is'' known is that he was behind dozens of millions of deaths through it, something which Godou rightly finds ''[[OhCrap terrifying]]''.]]



* BlessedWithSuck: Kaida's ability to "cleanse" people's souls made her unable to touch others for extended periods of time since it specifically rids the souls of those she touches of all impurities, not only those that are actually "evil", and the damage inflicted on them does not heal on its own. Cleansing [[spoiler:Kaida's mother]] completely is the reason why [[spoiler:she fell into a coma and could neither heal on her own nor be healed by anyone]].
* BondVillainStupidity: [[spoiler: Apollo. See AnticlimaxBoss in the YMMV tab, EvilGloating, HarmlessVillain, and NiceJobFixingItVillain]]

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* BlessedWithSuck: Kaida's ability to "cleanse" people's souls made her unable to touch others for extended periods of time since time, as it specifically rids the souls of those she touches of all ''all'' impurities, not only just those that are actually "evil", and the damage inflicted on upon them does not heal on its own. Cleansing [[spoiler:Kaida's mother]] completely is the reason why [[spoiler:she fell into a coma and could neither heal on her own nor be healed by anyone]].
* BondVillainStupidity: [[spoiler: Apollo. See AnticlimaxBoss in the YMMV tab, EvilGloating, HarmlessVillain, and NiceJobFixingItVillain]]NiceJobFixingItVillain.]]



** In chapter 12, it happens to [[spoiler:Mordred who, after challenging Shirou to kill him has every single one of his stratagems foiled and goes through every single form he ever had only to get defeated by Excalibur, the weapon he thinks belongs to the one he sought to awaken and challenge]].
** In chapter 20, it is the turn of [[spoiler:Apollo who, sent to kill Godou by other gods, plays with him instead of treating him seriously and only woke up when the only thing awaiting him is returning to his legend, resulting in his battle being a thorough humiliation for him despite the fact that he had enough tools to overwhelm Godou and win easily.]]

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** In chapter 12, it this happens to [[spoiler:Mordred who, after challenging Shirou to kill him him, has every single one of his stratagems foiled and goes through every single form he ever had had, only to get be defeated by Excalibur, the weapon he thinks belongs to the one he sought to awaken and challenge]].
challenge.]]
** In chapter 20, it is the turn of [[spoiler:Apollo who, sent to kill Godou by other gods, plays with him instead of treating him seriously seriously, and only woke up in the first place when the only thing awaiting him is was returning to his legend, resulting in his battle being a thorough humiliation for him him, despite the fact that he had more than enough tools to overwhelm Godou and win easily.]]



** In chapter 13, Shirou nearly throws up when [[spoiler:he attempts to Trace Mordred's swords and sees every atrocity they have committed, and notes that if he hadn't stopped trying to Trace them, he would have gone insane]].
** In chapter 20 [[spoiler:Apollo attempts this as a finishing move. He's defeated before it takes hold]].
* BrutalHonesty: This is a defining trait of Lancelot. [[spoiler:For example, Guinevere and Tiamat start tiptoeing around the issue that they are both in love with Shirou but he only loves Sakura. Lancelot bluntly says that she's not in love with him and respects his relationship, but he's strong and handsome, so she might as well try to get a one night stand with him.]]
* BullyingADragon: Shirou genuinely wanted to avoid a fight against Perseus until the Heretic God gloated he was going to make Illya his new bride after killing him. Cue uberprotective big bro going MEDIEVAL on Perseus.
** [[spoiler:Alex steals the Gem Sword and attacks Guinevere. As many in and out of universe anticipated, it ended badly for him]].
* CameBackStrong: [[spoiler:Mordred may have been brought back as a woman, but she's now a God of Steel instead of a mere God of Earth.]]
* CantCatchUp: Illya is one of the most powerful non-Campione mages in the story and even she is helpless [[spoiler:to stop Venus from controlling Shirou or defending herself against Odysseus and Ahriman]].

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** In chapter 13, Shirou nearly throws up when [[spoiler:he attempts to Trace Mordred's swords and sees perceives every atrocity they have committed, and notes that if he hadn't stopped trying to Trace them, he would have gone insane]].
insane.]]
** In chapter 20 20, [[spoiler:Apollo attempts this as a finishing move. He's defeated before it takes hold]].
can take hold.]]
* BrutalHonesty: This is a defining trait of Lancelot. [[spoiler:For example, Guinevere and Tiamat start tiptoeing around the issue that they are both in love with Shirou but he only loves Sakura. Lancelot bluntly says that she's not in love with him and respects his relationship, but he's strong and handsome, so she might as well try to get a one night one-night stand with him.]]
* BullyingADragon: Shirou genuinely wanted to avoid a fight against Perseus Perseus, up until the Heretic God gloated he was going to make Illya his new bride after killing him. Cue uberprotective [[KnightTemplarBigBrother über-protective big bro brother]] going MEDIEVAL on Perseus.
Perseus' ass.
** [[spoiler:Alex steals the Gem Sword and attacks uses it to attack Guinevere. As many in in- and out of universe out-of-universe anticipated, it ended ends very badly for him]].
* CameBackStrong: [[spoiler:Mordred may have been brought back as a woman, but she's now a God of Steel instead of a mere God of Earth.
him.]]
* CameBackStrong: [[spoiler:Mordred may have been brought back as a woman, however she's now a God of Steel instead of merely a God of Earth.]]
* CantCatchUp: Illya is one of the most powerful non-Campione mages in the story story, and even she is helpless [[spoiler:to stop Venus from controlling Shirou or defending herself against Odysseus and Ahriman]].



* ClippedWingAngel: [[spoiler:When Mordred turns into a dragon, though his strength is greatly increased, his contradictory nature makes his form warped and misshapen, plus it renders him extra vulnerable to Shirou's Dragon Slaying Hero Authority.]]
* CluelessChickMagnet: Godou, like in the original series. [[HypocriticalHumor Shirou finds it ridiculous.]] Hilariously, by chapter 24 Shirou himself has fallen into a LoveTriangle he's unaware of between [[PrecociousCrush Guinevere]] and [[spoiler: [[InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons Tiamat]] ]] thanks to his RescueRomance power. Yes, [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer look up, and you'll see it IS a power]]. Chapter 36 adds [[spoiler: Lancelot]] to the party, and [[TheGadfly she loves every minute of it]].

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* ClippedWingAngel: [[spoiler:When Mordred turns into a dragon, though although his strength is greatly increased, his contradictory nature makes his this form warped and misshapen, plus it renders him extra vulnerable to Shirou's Dragon Slaying Hero Authority.]]
* CluelessChickMagnet: Godou, like in the original series. [[HypocriticalHumor Shirou finds it ridiculous.]] Hilariously, by chapter 24 24, Shirou himself has fallen into a LoveTriangle that he's unaware of of, between [[PrecociousCrush Guinevere]] and [[spoiler: [[InstantAwesomeJustAddDragons Tiamat]] ]] Tiamat]]]], thanks to his RescueRomance power. Yes, [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer look it up, and you'll see it IS a power]]. Chapter 36 adds [[spoiler: Lancelot]] to the party, and [[TheGadfly she loves every minute of it]].



** [[spoiler:Shirou]] is an odd variation. [[spoiler:Archer had synchronized with the Shirous in Fate and Unlimited Blade Works, their memories being stored in his soul. When Shirou became a Campione the memories of both Shirous and Archer were integrated into Shirou's mind]].
** [[spoiler: Mordred, the Knight of Betrayal]] is revealed to be the amalgamation of [[spoiler:several war gods such as Laran, Ares, and Mars.]] Which is pretty much a standard in the [=Campione!Verse=], although it is noted that [[spoiler:if he was to return to his myth the modern distinction between them would cause him to separate into the component gods. Ironically when Mordred [[CameBackStrong revives]] she [[TookALevelInBadass returns as a God of Steel]] instead of a God of Earth that he was before.]]
** [[spoiler:Venus]] is an amalgamation of [[spoiler:several love goddesses such as Ishtar and Inanna as well as the Greek version.]]
** Tiamat is an amalgamation of [[spoiler:the Babylonian deity Tiamat, the Greek princess Andromeda, Cetus, the sea monster who nearly ate Andromeda, and Keto/Ceto, the Mother of All Sea Monsters.]]
** Brynhildr is also [[spoiler: Jord and Fafnir.]]
** [[spoiler:Ahriman is not only Angra Mainyu, but it turns out he's also many of the original villains the old gods fought against in their earliest existence and, once he became named, the adversary of every religion with a malevolent, destructive spirit. His first origin is from the early days of Africa when Humanity was too primitive to understand that evil was their own fault and was their own choice to commit, or that evil could be without reason. They instead blamed their various sufferings on what would become the first nameless god of evil: that was the origin of Ahriman, who became an outsider to the other gods for being [[DeityOfHumanOrigin born of Humanity's evils]] while they were born of the world. [[TheDreaded So feared and reviled was he by the gods that he was automatically given the role of villain, to be the thing, reason, adversary and monster the gods needed to fight.]]]]

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** [[spoiler:Shirou]] is an odd variation. [[spoiler:Archer had already synchronized with the Shirous in of Fate and Unlimited Blade Works, their memories being stored in within his soul. When Shirou became a Campione Campione, the memories of both Shirous and Archer were integrated into Shirou's mind]].
** [[spoiler: Mordred, the Knight of Betrayal]] is revealed to be the amalgamation of [[spoiler:several war gods such as Laran, Ares, and Mars.]] Which is pretty much a standard in the [=Campione!Verse=], although it is noted that [[spoiler:if he was to return to his myth the modern distinction between them would cause him to separate into the component gods. Ironically when Mordred [[CameBackStrong revives]] she [[TookALevelInBadass returns as a God of Steel]] instead of a God of Earth that he was before.
mind.]]
** [[spoiler:Venus]] [[spoiler: Mordred, the Knight of Betrayal,]] is an revealed to be the amalgamation of [[spoiler:several love goddesses war gods such as Ishtar Laran, Ares, and Inanna as well as Mars.]] Which is pretty much a standard in the Greek version.[=Campione!Verse=], although it is noted that [[spoiler:if he were to return to his myth, the modern distinction between them would cause him to separate into the component gods. Ironically, when Mordred [[CameBackStrong revives]], she [[TookALevelInBadass returns as a God of Steel]], instead of the God of Earth that he was before.]]
** Tiamat [[spoiler:Venus]] is an amalgamation of [[spoiler:the Babylonian deity Tiamat, [[spoiler:several love goddesses, such as Ishtar and Inanna as well as the Greek princess Andromeda, Cetus, the sea monster who nearly ate Andromeda, and Keto/Ceto, the Mother of All Sea Monsters.version.]]
** Brynhildr Tiamat is also [[spoiler: Jord an amalgamation of [[spoiler:the Babylonian deity Tiamat, the Greek princess Andromeda, the sea monster Cetus who nearly ate Andromeda, and Fafnir.Keto/Ceto the Mother of All Sea Monsters.]]
** Brynhildr is also [[spoiler: Jord and Fafnir]].
** [[spoiler:Ahriman is not only Angra Mainyu, but it turns out he's also many of the original villains that the old gods fought against in their earliest existence existences and, once he became named, the adversary of every ''every'' religion with a malevolent, destructive spirit. His first origin is from the early days of Africa when Humanity was too primitive to understand that evil was their own fault and was their own choice to commit, or that evil could be without reason. They instead reason; instead, they blamed their various sufferings on what would become the first nameless god of evil: that was evil. This is the origin of Ahriman, who became an outsider to the other gods for being [[DeityOfHumanOrigin born of Humanity's evils]] while they were born of the world. [[TheDreaded So feared and reviled was he by the gods that he was automatically given the role of villain, to be the thing, reason, adversary adversary, and monster that the gods needed themselves existed to fight.]]]]



* CrazyPrepared: Shirou has prepared defenses for every single part of his house, and even has special measures for Illya [[spoiler: if he ever gets brainwashed.]]

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* CrazyPrepared: Shirou has prepared defenses for every single part of his house, and even has special measures for Illya [[spoiler: if he ever gets brainwashed.]]brainwashed]].



* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Yusuke's reaction to buying all sorts of legendary wines, not for his wine collection, but [[spoiler: for the other Campione to drink.]]
* TheCorruption: [[spoiler:Ahriman is able to twist and corrupt Rule Breaker and turn it against Shirou]].

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* CoolAndUnusualPunishment: Yusuke's reaction to buying all sorts of legendary wines, not for his wine collection, but [[spoiler: for the other Campione to drink.]]
drink]].
* TheCorruption: [[spoiler:Ahriman is able to twist and corrupt Rule Breaker and turn it against Shirou]].Shirou.]]



** PlayedForLaughs with the curb-stomp NEGOTIATION that happened to Koizumi Watanabe. With the entire "discussion" being full of EntertaininglyWrong and yet perfectly logical conclusions, he even lampshades the fact that absolutely lost to Shirou. He was only saved because Shirou thought he was ill.

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** PlayedForLaughs with the curb-stomp NEGOTIATION that happened to Koizumi Watanabe. With the entire "discussion" being full of EntertaininglyWrong and yet perfectly logical conclusions, he even lampshades the fact that lost absolutely lost to Shirou. He was only saved because Shirou thought he was ill.



* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Ahriman can possess people, giving him access to their skills and memories. This process kills the victim unless he chooses not to, like when he possesses Illya.]]
* {{Doorstopper}}: As of chapter 21 (Jan 2014) the story is closing in on 500k words. NarrativeFiligree is a large factor in this. Chapters 20 and 21 together are the length of a short novel and cover just one extended fight scene.

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* DemonicPossession: [[spoiler:Ahriman can possess people, giving him access to their skills and memories. This process kills the victim unless he chooses not to, like such as when he possesses Illya.]]
* {{Doorstopper}}: As of chapter 21 (Jan 2014) 2014), the story is closing in on 500k words. NarrativeFiligree is a large factor in this. Chapters 20 and 21 together are the length of a short novel and cover just one extended fight scene.



* DoubleStandardRapeDivineOnMortal: [[spoiler: Averted oh so ''much'' when Venus mindfucks Shirou to make him her compliant boytoy. Even fellow goddess Tiamat was disgusted, and it's outright called rape with Shirou being very much affected by the ordeal.]]
* DoubleStandardRapeSciFi: Averted with the deconstruction of how a Earth Goddess devolves into an obedient and devoted bride after being vanquished. Athena shudders when she remembers how ''near'' Godou was to basically make a SexSlave of her and any Divine Ancestors won't like too much thinking about their past ''husbands''.

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* DoubleStandardRapeDivineOnMortal: [[spoiler: Averted oh ''oh so ''much'' much'' when Venus mindfucks Shirou to make him into her compliant boytoy. Even fellow goddess Tiamat was disgusted, and it's outright called rape with Shirou being very much affected by the ordeal.]]
* DoubleStandardRapeSciFi: Averted with the deconstruction of how a Earth Goddess devolves into an obedient and devoted bride after being vanquished. Athena shudders when she remembers just how ''near'' Godou was unknowingly came to basically make making a SexSlave of her her, and any Divine Ancestors won't typically don't like thinking too much thinking about their past ''husbands''.



** [[spoiler: Shirou's HeroicSecondWind against Mordred happened because [[LightNovel/FateZero Arondight]] had Lancelot's love for Guinevere embedded in it. [[AlternateUniverse It was not the same Guinevere, but it was Guinevere all the same]]. And that made all the difference.]]

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** [[spoiler: Shirou's HeroicSecondWind against Mordred happened happened, because [[LightNovel/FateZero Arondight]] had Lancelot's love for Guinevere embedded in it. as an integral part of its nature. [[AlternateUniverse It was may not have been the same Guinevere, but it was Guinevere all the same]]. nonetheless.]] And that made all the difference.]]



** The History Compilation Committee theorizes that Shirou and Illya are the apprentices of a hermetical mage among other things. Meanwhile Shirou believes the HCC to be similar to the Mage Association and prepares accordingly.

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** The History Compilation Committee theorizes that Shirou and Illya are the apprentices of a hermetical mage among other things. Meanwhile Meanwhile, Shirou believes the HCC to be similar to the Mage Association and prepares accordingly.



** Guinevere correctly deduces that Shirou has been separated from Sakura because one of them was sent to an AlternateUniverse and his goal is to reunite with her. However, she incorrectly assumes that Sakura is the one who was sent to another world, not Shirou.
** Alex thinks that UBW is a divine magic Shirou is masquerading as a mortal one.
** Since Shirou has the Authority Curses Without End, [[spoiler:Ahriman thinks that Shirou has somehow stolen some of his power and wants revenge. Ahriman is unaware Shirou got it from killing his Nasuverse counterpart Angra Mainyu. Later, when Ahriman possesses Illya and reads her memories, he finds out the truth, but decides it doesn't matter and he will kill Shirou anyway.]]

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** Guinevere correctly deduces that Shirou has been separated from Sakura because one of them was sent to an AlternateUniverse and his goal is to reunite with her. However, she incorrectly assumes that Sakura is was the one who was sent to another world, not Shirou.
** Alex thinks that UBW is a divine magic that Shirou is masquerading as a mortal one.
** Since Shirou has the Authority Curses Without End, [[spoiler:Ahriman thinks that Shirou has somehow stolen some of his power and wants revenge. Ahriman is unaware Shirou got it from killing his Nasuverse counterpart Angra Mainyu. Later, when Ahriman possesses Illya and reads her memories, he finds out the truth, but decides that it doesn't matter and he will kill Shirou anyway.]]



* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler:Mordred]] is one for Shirou. Both are considered fakers who can fight against the originals and possibly win. Both invoke themselves into steel. Also, [[spoiler:Mordred's line against Guinevere about how it's possible for an imitation to surpass the original resembles that of Shirou's when he faces Gilgamesh in the UBW route.]]

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* EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler:Mordred]] is one for Shirou. Both are considered fakers who can fight against the originals and possibly win. Both invoke themselves into steel.Steel. Also, [[spoiler:Mordred's line against Guinevere about how it's possible for an imitation to surpass the original resembles that of Shirou's when he faces Gilgamesh in the UBW route.]]



* EveryoneHasStandards: [[spoiler:Even when she's engulfed in the rush of her returned powers, Tiamat doesn't feel right crushing the wounded Campione and companions after the battle with Venus, and decides to spare them so they can have a fair fight in the future. Too bad Jord thought otherwise..]].
* EvilFeelsGood: [[spoiler:Godou, with the help of Circe, reveals that Ahriman's origin as the nameless god of evil created by primitive Humanity that was hated and pursed by the gods isn't a tragic tale of a misunderstood creature forced into the role of a monster. Ahriman is exactly what he's called; [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a god of evil]], one who enjoys being evil, creating evil, spreading evil and all that comes from him.]]

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* EveryoneHasStandards: [[spoiler:Even when she's engulfed in the rush of her returned powers, Tiamat doesn't feel right crushing the wounded Campione and his companions after the battle with Venus, and decides to spare them so they can have a fair fight in the future. Too bad Jord thought otherwise..]].
otherwise...]]
* EvilFeelsGood: [[spoiler:Godou, with the help of Circe, reveals that Ahriman's origin as the nameless god of evil created by primitive Humanity that was hated and pursed by the gods isn't ''isn't'' a tragic tale of a misunderstood creature forced into the role of a monster. No, Ahriman is exactly ''exactly'' what he's called; called: [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a god of evil]], evil]]; one who enjoys being evil, creating evil, spreading evil and all that comes from him.]]



** Chapter 14 gives us [[spoiler: Mordred]]. Justified due to it being a side-effect of one of his authorities; to be more specific it is [[spoiler:equipping his first armor that does it, by making him adopt his proud knight persona.]]
** Chapter 20 gives us [[spoiler: Apollo]] who did this every time Godou falls during their fight. [[spoiler:He got defeated in one chapter]].
* FantasticNuke: The [[spoiler: Gem Sword]] is constantly compared with one because of the sheer amount of prana stored inside, which is several time what a [[PersonOfMassDestruction Campione]] have. [[spoiler: When Alex steals it the whole world just want him to stop tampering with it and return it to Shirou.]]

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** Chapter 14 gives us [[spoiler: Mordred]]. Justified due to it being a side-effect of one of his authorities; Authorities; to be more specific specific, it is [[spoiler:equipping his first armor that does it, by making him adopt his proud knight persona.]]
** Chapter 20 gives us [[spoiler: Apollo]] Apollo]], who did this every time Godou falls during their fight. [[spoiler:He got gets defeated in one chapter]].
chapter.]]
* FantasticNuke: The [[spoiler: Gem [[spoiler:Gem Sword]] is constantly compared with one to one, because of the sheer amount of prana stored inside, within, which is several time times over what a [[PersonOfMassDestruction Campione]] have. possesses. [[spoiler: When Alex steals it it, the whole world just want wants him to stop tampering with it and return it the damn thing to Shirou.]]



** [[spoiler:Godou attempts to use his Stallion Authority, ThePowerOfTheSun, on Apollo. Both combatants then comment on how stupid that was. It is more successful after Apollo's divinity is negated by the Warrior Authority.]]

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** [[spoiler:Godou attempts to use his Stallion Authority, ThePowerOfTheSun, on Apollo. Both combatants then comment on how just stupid that was. It is more successful the second time, after Apollo's divinity is negated by the Warrior Authority.]]



* FieldOfBlades: It's Shirou. It takes a while for him to get to ''Unlimited Blade Works'', the chant has changed due to the changes in his distorted world view, but you knew it was coming.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: [[spoiler:Lancelot is significantly out of touch with modern customs]].
* FollowTheLeader: This is the first Fate Stay Night and Campione! crossover on Fanfiction.net. Now everyone has decided to get in on the fun bringing the Shirous' of the other routes.
* FogOfDoom: When describing Shirou's "Armour of the Black Knight" Authority, the author said that it have a really good compatibility with "Curses Without End". When is finally show in action it completely destroy [[spoiler: Lancelot's army, leaving her with only the incomplete Excalibur as a last resort attack]].
* FluffyTheTerrible: Behold Charlotte/Charlie, [[spoiler: beheaded spawn of Nidhogg.]]
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: When Alexander Gascoigne turns the Gem Sword into a bomb, Shirou agonizes over what to do, until he realizes he can [[spoiler:Trace a copy of the Gem Sword and harmlessly drain the first one's power into it]]. Afterwards, Shirou berates himself for not thinking of that sooner.
* GenderBender: [[spoiler:Mordred]] eventually gets resurrected as a girl. She merely finds this an annoyance and is still obsessed with [[spoiler:usurping King Arthur.]]

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* FieldOfBlades: [[CaptainObvious It's Shirou. Shirou.]] It takes a while for him to get to ''Unlimited Blade Works'', since the chant has changed due to the changes in his distorted world view, worldview, but you knew it was ultimately coming.
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: [[spoiler:Lancelot is significantly out of touch with modern customs]].
customs.]]
* FollowTheLeader: This is the first Fate Stay Fate[=/=]Stay Night and Campione! crossover on Fanfiction.net. Now everyone has decided to get in on the fun bringing in the Shirous' Shirous of the other routes.
* FogOfDoom: When describing Shirou's "Armour of the Black Knight" Authority, the author said that it have a really good compatibility with "Curses Without End". When is finally show in action action, it completely destroy destroys [[spoiler: Lancelot's army, leaving her with only the incomplete Excalibur as a last resort attack]].
* FluffyTheTerrible: Behold Charlotte/Charlie, [[spoiler: beheaded spawn of Nidhogg.
last-resort attack.]]
* FluffyTheTerrible: Behold Charlotte/Charlie, [[spoiler: beheaded spawn of Nidhogg]].
* ForgotAboutHisPowers: When Alexander Gascoigne Gascoigne's reckless tampering turns the Gem Sword into a bomb, Shirou agonizes over what to do, until he realizes he can [[spoiler:Trace [[spoiler:just Trace a copy of the Gem Sword and harmlessly drain the first one's power into it]]. Afterwards, Shirou berates himself for not thinking of that sooner.
* GenderBender: [[spoiler:Mordred]] eventually gets resurrected as a girl. She merely finds this merely an annoyance and is still obsessed with [[spoiler:usurping King Arthur.]]Arthur]].



* GoOutWithASmile: Perseus is very happy to lose to a WorthyOpponent like Shirou, and he dies giving Shirou his blessing and many of his Authorities.
* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: Snow, the Pegasus Shirou gets from Perseus, becomes more alive after Shirou names him, becoming more than just a part of Shirou's power. [[spoiler:He even defends his master against Mordred without being ordered to]].
* HarmlessVillain: [[spoiler: Apollo again. After spending a lot of chapters just to summon him, he got defeated by Godou just one chapter after his appearance. This is after Athena thinks of him of dangerous because he seems to not care about pride and just going for the kill. He doesn't, he spends most of his time gloating at Godou when he should have just kill him.]]
* HateSink: Whether intentional or not, Alex seems to be even more hated that in the original work. The author even made an omake solely to kill him in every way the fans wanted Shirou to kill him.

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* GoOutWithASmile: Perseus is very quite happy to lose to a WorthyOpponent like Shirou, and he dies giving Shirou his blessing and many of his Authorities.
* GrewBeyondTheirProgramming: Snow, the Pegasus Shirou gets from Perseus, becomes more alive after Shirou names him, becoming more than just a part of Shirou's power. [[spoiler:He even defends his master against Mordred without being ordered to]].
to.]]
* HarmlessVillain: [[spoiler: Apollo again. After spending a lot of multiple chapters just to summon him, he got gets defeated by Godou just one chapter after his appearance. This is after Athena thinks of him of dangerous dangerous, because he seems to not care about pride and just going for the kill. He doesn't, he spends most of his time gloating at Godou when he should have just kill killed him.]]
* HateSink: Whether intentional or not, Alex seems to be even more ''more'' hated that in the original work. The author even made an omake solely to kill him in every possible way that the fans wanted Shirou to kill him.



** Shirou doesn't use Caliburn or Excalibur until the later parts of his fight with [[spoiler: Mordred]] because something in him tells him to do it later. [[JustifiedTrope He's right.]]

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** Shirou doesn't use Caliburn or Excalibur until the later parts of his fight with [[spoiler: Mordred]] Mordred]], because something in him tells him to do it later. [[JustifiedTrope He's right.]]



* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: Half the reason Mordred died. The other reason was getting [[WaveMotionGun Excaliblasted]] in the face right after.]]

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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: Half the reason Mordred died. The other reason half was getting [[WaveMotionGun Excaliblasted]] in the face right after.afterward.]]



* IWillFindYou: After learning her beloved Senpai is alive but stuck in another world, Sakura immediately goes to England, asks Zelretch to take her as his apprentice, and throws herself into studying the Kaleidoscope, all to find Shirou and bring him back to her.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Back in the Fate/Stay Night universe, several members of the Mage Association want to kill Rin as a scapegoat for the events of the Fifth Holy Grail War and capture Sakura as a research specimen due to her unique powers. They back off because Rin is protected by Zelretch and Sakura is protected by Rider, and trying to fight either of those two is suicide, even with an army of mages. However, they then start plotting ways to circumvent that protection.

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* IWillFindYou: After learning that her beloved Senpai is alive but stuck in another world, Sakura immediately goes to England, asks Zelretch to take her as his apprentice, and throws herself into studying the Kaleidoscope, all to find Shirou and bring him back to her.
* KnowWhenToFoldEm: Back in the Fate/Stay Night universe, several members of the Mage Association want to kill Rin as a scapegoat for the events of the Fifth Holy Grail War and capture Sakura as a research specimen due to her unique powers. They back off because Rin is protected by Zelretch and Sakura is protected by Rider, and where trying to fight either of those two is suicide, even with an army of mages. However, they then start plotting ways to circumvent that protection.



* LemonyNarrator: Occasionally, like when it lampshades Godou's CluelessChickMagnet status.
* LetsYouAndHimFight: Shortly after Shirou killed Angra Mainyu, Perseus attacks him because he sensed Angra's energy coming from Shirou and thought he actually was the evil being. When Shirou defeats him, he realizes his mistake.

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* LemonyNarrator: Occasionally, like such as when it lampshades Godou's CluelessChickMagnet status.
* LetsYouAndHimFight: Shortly after Shirou killed Angra Mainyu, Perseus attacks him because he sensed Angra's energy coming from Shirou and mistakenly thought he actually was him to be the evil being.being itself. When Shirou defeats him, he realizes his mistake.



* LookingForLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Circe is always looking for a new lover because the men she picks are always either already attached or don't have her best interests at heart.
* MadGod: [[spoiler:Odysseus becomes this after staring into a dimensional tunnel for far too long... and, according to Circe, ''that isn't supposed to happen!'']]
* MadeOfIndestructium: Somehow, Shirou's cellphone survives all the punishment of his battle with [[spoiler: Mordred]]. It also survives his battles against [[spoiler: Godou and Luo Hao, Aphrodite, Tiamat and Jord, Alex and Lancelot]]. The only thing that managed to make it non-operational was a dead ("flat", to be precise) battery, and even then Shirou managed to turn the phone on and use it to record [[spoiler:Alex Gascoine swearing to leave Guinevere alone]] without charging it so either there is more to the phone or Shirou caries spare batteries that are made out of the same material. Turns out that the battery WAS dying and it made the phone unresponsive. Even so he later change the battery and it still works fine.
* MagiBabble: Pops up from time to time, like when Illya tries to explain what a Reality Marble is to the others. The others can barely understand it, while Godou is completely lost.
* MagicallyBindingContract: The Circle of the Chosen have an altar that forces whomever makes a BloodOath upon it to obey their promise. It works on gods and Campione despite their natural AntiMagic. After the Circle is defeated, Illya and Shirou take possession of it.
* ManOfKryptonite: Though the two never fight, Athena comments that Godou would have a hard time fighting [[spoiler:Mordred. Since Mordred can't be sensed, the Warrior Authority is all but useless against him.]]

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* LookingForLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Circe is always looking for a new lover because the men she picks are always either already attached or else don't have her best interests at heart.
* MadGod: [[spoiler:Odysseus becomes this after staring into a dimensional tunnel for far too long... and, according to Circe, ''that isn't supposed to happen!'']]
be possible!'']]
* MadeOfIndestructium: Somehow, Shirou's cellphone survives all the punishment of his battle with [[spoiler: Mordred]]. It also survives his battles against [[spoiler: Godou and Luo Hao, Aphrodite, Tiamat and Jord, Alex and Lancelot]]. The only thing that managed to make it non-operational was a dead ("flat", to be precise) battery, and even then then, Shirou managed to turn the phone on and use it to record [[spoiler:Alex Gascoine swearing to leave Guinevere alone]] without charging it so it. So either there is more to the phone phone, or Shirou caries spare batteries that are made out of the same material. Turns out that the battery WAS dying and it that just made the phone unresponsive. Even so so, he later change changes out the battery and it still works fine.
* MagiBabble: Pops up from time to time, like such as when Illya tries to explain what a Reality Marble is to the others. The others can barely understand it, while Godou is completely lost.
* MagicallyBindingContract: The Circle of the Chosen have an altar that forces capable of forcing whomever makes a BloodOath upon it to obey their promise. It even works on gods and Campione Campione, despite their natural AntiMagic. After the Circle is defeated, Illya and Shirou take possession of it.
* ManOfKryptonite: Though Although the two never fight, Athena comments that Godou would have had a hard time fighting [[spoiler:Mordred. Since Mordred can't be sensed, the Warrior Authority is all but useless against him.]]



** After a while the head of the History Compilation Committee stopped wanting to hear anything about Shirou for the massive headaches and nervous breakdowns that he give her for anything he did.
* {{Meido}}: Kaida and Manaka start working as this in the Emiya mansion. Shirou wanted to tell them he was just joking.
* MistakenIdentity: Perseus senses Angra Mainyu's Authority in Shirou and thinks he's the evil God himself, only realizing the truth too late.
* MontyHaul: The entire mage community sees the [[spoiler: Feast of Kings as an amazing event. After an incredible battle of four Campione versus four Heretic Gods, Shirou invites the three Campione and a Divine Ancestor to a banquet with amazing food and drink, a contest of kings and, the most mind-boggling part, legendary weapons for all those attending.]]

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** After a while while, the head of the History Compilation Committee stopped stops wanting to hear anything about Shirou for Shirou, because of the massive headaches and nervous breakdowns that he give it gives her for anything every time he did.
does something.
* {{Meido}}: Kaida and Manaka start working as this in the Emiya mansion. Shirou wanted ''wanted'' to tell them he was just joking.
* MistakenIdentity: Perseus senses Angra Mainyu's Authority in within Shirou and thinks he's the evil God himself, only realizing the truth too late.
* MontyHaul: The entire mage community sees the [[spoiler: Feast of Kings as an amazing event. After an incredible battle of four Campione versus four Heretic Gods, Shirou invites the three Campione and a Divine Ancestor to a banquet with amazing food and drink, a contest of kings and, kings, and the most mind-boggling part, legendary weapons for all those attending.]]



** Shirou's [[RescueRomance Hero's Bride]] Authority makes him more attractive to women he saves (Illya is magically aware enough to notice it, and her magic resistance is high enough to counter it) but besides that and bolstering their health and the like, they're mentally unaffected.
** Venus's plan was to do this to Shirou, replacing his love for other things with love for herself, but it doesn't quite work out as she planned. [[spoiler: This led to her death when she threatens to kill Sakura Matou and [[NiceJobFixingItVillain break the very control she had with Shirou]].]]

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** Shirou's [[RescueRomance Hero's Bride]] Authority makes him more attractive to women he saves (Illya is magically aware enough to notice it, this, and her magic resistance is high enough to counter it) it), but besides that and bolstering their health and the like, they're mentally unaffected.
** Venus's Venus' plan was to do this to Shirou, replacing his love for other things with love for herself, but it doesn't quite work out as she planned. [[spoiler: This led leads to her death when she threatens to kill Sakura Matou and [[NiceJobFixingItVillain break breaks the very control she had with Shirou]].]]



** Shirou uses four Noble Phantasms as a light source, a fountain, an air purifier, and air circulator. He lampshades it.

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** Shirou uses four Noble Phantasms as a light source, a fountain, an air purifier, and air circulator. He lampshades it.this.



* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: Mordred now really fits this trope. Between the [[spoiler: betrayal Mordred set in the pact between Venus, Tiamat, and Brynhildr via the Valkyrie]] and the fact that [[spoiler: in the wake of the battle with Alexander Gascoigne that '''she''' now is in the position of Artus' handmaiden formerly held by Guinevere.]]

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* MyDeathIsJustTheBeginning: Mordred now really fits this trope. Between the [[spoiler: betrayal that Mordred set in the pact between Venus, Tiamat, and Brynhildr via the Valkyrie]] Valkyrie]], and the fact that [[spoiler: in the wake of the battle with Alexander Gascoigne that Gascoigne, '''she''' now is in the position of Artus' handmaiden handmaiden, formerly held by Guinevere.]]



** [[spoiler: Guinevere has one of her own when she accepts said invitation.]] It is also PlayedForLaughs, and becomes something of a RunningGag.

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** [[spoiler: Guinevere has one of her own when she accepts said invitation.]] It is also Also PlayedForLaughs, and becomes something of a RunningGag.



* NarrativeFiligree: One of the flaws in the story is this.

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* NarrativeFiligree: One of the larger flaws in the story is this.



** [[spoiler: Apollo ''again''. For all this time, Godou only had [Persian Warlord] as his Authority, a common complain among many fans. Then, he just got defeated and thus, [[YouKillItYouBoughtIt got his power taken by Godou because of it]].]]
** [[spoiler: Venus manages a form of this, in the end it was her threatening to kill Sakura that finally allowed Shirou to overcome her Heart Thief Authority.]]
** [[spoiler: Ahriman's threat results in Circe granting Godou magical knowledge]].
* NinjaMaid: Well, more of a magic fighter maid in Manaka's case.
* NothingPersonal: Odysseus has nothing against Shirou, it's just that he believes killing him is the key to unlocking the ability to travel to other worlds.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: [[spoiler: Shirou notes that the controlled Illya just throwing people around and moving on without a word is uncharacteristic, given how she likes "big and flashy" like her Berserker Puppet]].

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** [[spoiler: Apollo ''again''. For all this time, Godou has only had [Persian Warlord] as his Authority, a common complain complaint among many fans. Then, Then he just got gets defeated and thus, [[YouKillItYouBoughtIt got his power taken by Godou because of it]].]]
** [[spoiler: Venus manages a form of this, as in the end it was her threatening to kill Sakura that finally allowed allows Shirou to overcome break free of her Heart Thief Authority.]]
** [[spoiler: Ahriman's threat results in Circe granting Godou magical knowledge]].
knowledge.]]
* NinjaMaid: Well, more of a magic fighter maid maid, in Manaka's case.
* NothingPersonal: Odysseus has nothing against Shirou, it's just that he believes that killing him is the key to unlocking the ability to travel to other worlds.
* OutOfCharacterAlert: [[spoiler: Shirou notes that the controlled Illya just throwing people around and moving on without a word is uncharacteristic, given how she likes "big and flashy" like her Berserker Puppet]].Puppet Berserker.]]



** Illya, having been overexposed to modern entertainment, now uses her new skills as a MetaGirl to get personal entertainment from [[CluelessChickMagnet Godou]] and his harem. It's affected her taste in naming as well...

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** Illya, having been overexposed to modern entertainment, now uses her new skills as a MetaGirl to get personal entertainment from [[CluelessChickMagnet Godou]] and his harem. It's also affected her taste in naming as well...



* RetailTherapy: Much to his terror, Shirou discover that after leaving Illya in London she made really good use of her credit card.
-->'''Airport Employee''' (about Illya's luggage): I think you might want to have someone bring a truck rather than a van.
* PetTheDog: In spite of the fact she was basically brainwashed to become his adoring spouse, [[spoiler: Tiamat]] does admit that Perseus always treated her well and was a faithful husband - mind you, Ancient Greeks had no qualms about cheating or openly taking a mistress, so Perseus was really nice by wanting only Andromeda.

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* RetailTherapy: Much to his terror, Shirou discover discovers that after leaving Illya in London London, she made really good use of her credit card.
-->'''Airport Employee''' (about Illya's luggage): luggage)''':''' I think you might want to have someone bring a truck rather than a van.
* PetTheDog: In spite of the fact she was basically brainwashed to become his adoring spouse, [[spoiler: Tiamat]] does admit that Perseus always treated her well and was a faithful husband - mind you, the Ancient Greeks had no qualms about cheating or openly taking a mistress, so Perseus was really in fact very nice by wanting only Andromeda.



** Shirou was only able to draw [[spoiler:Lancelot's]] sword because his love of [[spoiler:Guinevere]] was so deeply imprinted on the blade that it actually helped Shirou bring itself into existence so it could defend her.
** After two monster sized chapters of fighting, it wasn't [[spoiler: Luo Hao's martial prowess, Kusanagi's dogged determinism or even [[AntiMagic Rule Breaker]] that overcomes Venus' hold over Shirou, but his all consuming love of Sakura that won the day.]]
* RedBaron: Guinevere eventually names Shirou "King of Steel" (she wanted to call him "King of Swords" but Salvatore Doni already has that title). Some also call him "King Shrouded in Mystery" since his past is unknown, "All Wealthy" for his Rule of the Underworld making him very rich, "Host of the Divine" for taking in Guinevere, Tiamat, and Lancelot, and "Impossible Mage" for his amazing abilities. His critics call him "Heartless King" for killing Venus the Goddess of Love, and "Sir Shirou the Weak" and "Traitor King" for refusing to kill Tiamat and Lancelot and instead offering them shelter.
* PrecociousCrush: You would think that [[spoiler: being hundreds of years old would prevent Guinevere]] from having one of these on [[ChickMagnet Shirou]]. [[ForegoneConclusion You would be wrong.]] [[spoiler: Averted in Chapter 36, after she's aged up into a teenager]].

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** Shirou was only able to draw [[spoiler:Lancelot's]] sword sword, because his love of [[spoiler:Guinevere]] was so deeply imprinted on the blade that it actually helped Shirou bring itself into existence existence, so that it could defend her.
** After two monster sized monster-sized chapters of fighting, it wasn't [[spoiler: Luo Hao's martial prowess, Kusanagi's dogged determinism determinism, or even [[AntiMagic Rule Breaker]] that overcomes Venus' hold over Shirou, but his all consuming all-consuming love of Sakura that won the day.]]
* RedBaron: Guinevere eventually names Shirou "King of Steel" (she wanted ''wanted'' to call him "King of Swords" but Swords", however Salvatore Doni already has that title). Some also call him "King Shrouded in Mystery" since because of his past is unknown, unknown past, "All Wealthy" for his Rule of the Underworld making him very rich, "Host of the Divine" for taking in Guinevere, Tiamat, and Lancelot, and "Impossible Mage" for his amazing abilities. His critics call him "Heartless King" for killing Venus the Goddess of Love, and "Sir Shirou the Weak" and "Traitor King" for refusing his refusal to kill Tiamat and Lancelot and instead offering them shelter.
* PrecociousCrush: You would think that [[spoiler: being hundreds of years old would prevent Guinevere]] from having one of these on [[ChickMagnet Shirou]]. [[ForegoneConclusion You would be wrong.]] [[spoiler: Averted somewhat in Chapter 36, after she's aged she ages up into a teenager]].teenager.]]



* ShutUpHannibal: When Alex tries to convince Shirou with "reasonable" words, Shirou almost immediately stops him, tells him exactly how much of an hypocrite he is, and gives him two options: either he goes away and never goes after Guinevere again, or he gets his ass kicked. [[TooDumbToLive Guess what he chooses.]]

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* ShutUpHannibal: When Alex tries to convince Shirou with "reasonable" words, Shirou almost immediately stops him, tells him exactly how much of an hypocrite he is, and gives him two options: either he goes away and never goes after Guinevere again, or else he gets his ass kicked. [[TooDumbToLive Guess what which one he chooses.]]



* SplitPersonality: Shirou adopts a fake persona he calls The Fake King when conversing with Campione, the Committee, and other important magical figures. Recent chapters, however, have him slip into it subconciously.

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* SplitPersonality: Shirou adopts a fake persona he calls The Fake King when conversing with Campione, the Committee, and other important magical figures. Recent chapters, however, have him slip slipping into it subconciously.



** [[spoiler: Guinevere]] most definitely is not in love with Shirou and just wants to be on his good side in order to make use of him. Yes, it is definitely not because she like his eyes or wants him to praise her or wants him to hold her in his arms. Really.
** [[spoiler: Tiamat]] wants nothing of that either.

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** [[spoiler: Guinevere]] is most definitely is not in love with Shirou and just wants to be on his good side in order to make use of him. Yes, it is definitely not because she like his eyes or wants him to praise her or wants him to hold her in his arms. Really.
** [[spoiler: Tiamat]] wants nothing of that it either.



** [[spoiler: Ahriman has this reaction to Godou managing to learn of their origins, not knowing that he had Circe's help]].

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** [[spoiler: Ahriman has this reaction to Godou managing to learn of their origins, not knowing that he had Circe's help]].help.]]



* TheWarSequence: [[spoiler: Shirou's undead army versus Mordred's magic knights. First Shirou is losing... And then he traces [[LightNovel/FateZero Gae]] [[AntiMagic Dearg]] copies for half his army, and then it becomes a CurbStompBattle in his favor.]]

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* TheWarSequence: [[spoiler: Shirou's undead army versus Mordred's magic knights. First Shirou is losing... And then he traces copies of [[LightNovel/FateZero Gae]] [[AntiMagic Dearg]] copies for half his army, and then at which point it quickly becomes a CurbStompBattle in his favor.]]



** Even for all that Alex sees himself as the intellectually superior individual for some reason he always dismiss the absolutelly sound advice of other people telling him to [[spoiler: return the Gem Sword to Shirou]], not even when John Pluto Smith tell him that's a really bad idea. [[spoiler:Take a look at BreakTheHaughty above for the aftermath.]]

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** Even for all that Alex sees himself as the intellectually superior individual individual, for some reason he always dismiss dismisses the absolutelly absolutely sound advice of other people telling him to [[spoiler: [[spoiler:just return the Gem Sword to Shirou]], not even when John Pluto Smith tell tells him that's a really bad idea. [[spoiler:Take a look at [[spoiler:See BreakTheHaughty above for the aftermath.]]



** Shirou experiences this in the beginning as the most recent Campione. Even after his getting used to his abilities as a Campione, he is looked down upon, often with dreadful results. [[spoiler:Ask Perseus, Hades, Mordred, Venus, and Alexander Gascoigne. With exception of [[BreakTheHaughty Alex]], all the others are dead (though Mordred was revived afterwards), and this may also be the case for [[MadGod Odysseus]] and [[BadPowersBadPeople Ahriman]]. [[OnlySaneWoman Circe]] is getting second thoughts about messing with Shirou.]]

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** Shirou experiences this in the beginning as the most recent Campione. Even after his getting used to his abilities as a Campione, he is still looked down upon, often with dreadful results. [[spoiler:Ask [[spoiler:Just ask Perseus, Hades, Mordred, Venus, and Alexander Gascoigne. With exception of [[BreakTheHaughty Alex]], all the others are dead (though Mordred was revived afterwards), and this may also be the case for [[MadGod Odysseus]] and [[BadPowersBadPeople Ahriman]]. [[OnlySaneWoman Circe]] is getting second thoughts about messing with Shirou.]]



** Guinevere and Lancelot towards Artus [[spoiler: though that gets changed over to Shirou in chapter 32]], Manaka towards Kaida, and all of Godou's harem towards him, especially Erica.

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** Guinevere and Lancelot towards Artus [[spoiler: though Artus, [[spoiler:although that gets changed over to Shirou in chapter 32]], Manaka towards Kaida, and all of Godou's harem towards him, especially Erica.



** Shirou comments that Hades is far stronger than him and could crush him like a bug if he could get his hands on him. But similar to Gilgamesh, Hades is a ruler, not a trained warrior, so Shirou is able to defeat him in a sword fight.
** The narration points this out about Tiamat. She was one of the most powerful goddesses, and even in her weakened form, she is no pushover. However, she lacks combat experience, allowing opponents to outmaneuver and trick her.

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** Shirou comments that Hades is far stronger than him and could crush him like a bug if he could get his hands on him. But However, similar to Gilgamesh, Hades is a ruler, not a trained warrior, so Shirou is able to defeat him in a sword fight.
** The narration points this out about Tiamat. She was one of the most powerful goddesses, and even in her weakened form, form she is no pushover. However, she lacks combat experience, allowing opponents to outmaneuver and trick her.



* WhatIf: Some of the omakes deal with one question: What if a Campione was summoned as a servant in the [[LightNovel/FateZero 4th Holy Grail War]]? Not a whole much change at the end, but a pretty damn fun read.

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* WhatIf: Some of the omakes deal with one question: What if a Campione was summoned as a servant in the [[LightNovel/FateZero 4th Holy Grail War]]? Not a whole much change at lot changes by the end, but a pretty damn fun read.read nonetheless.



** Perseus dueled Shirou on the assumption he actually was his old foe Ahriman (since gods are often composites of older deities in the Campioneverse), which meant Perseus himself was TheHero and Illya the DamselInDistress who would become the StandardHeroReward. After being thoroughly defeated, he realizes he actually assaulted an innocent youth and concedes it was a dick move.

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** Perseus dueled Shirou on the assumption he actually was his old foe Ahriman (since gods are often composites of older deities in the Campioneverse), which meant Perseus himself was TheHero and Illya the DamselInDistress who would become the StandardHeroReward. After being thoroughly defeated, he realizes he had actually assaulted an innocent youth and concedes it was a rather dick move.



** The {{Omake}} sections show what happens when the siblings think this is happening to each other. Shirou starts having nightmares of Illya fighting [[HumongousMecha evil emperor Gilgatron]] with her own [[TransformingMecha transforming]] [[Anime/CarnivalPhantasm Bersercar]], while Illya is horrified of Shirou acting like a Franchise/KamenRider. Shirou then wonders if [[EpicFail it would be better if Illya watched]] ''Anime/YuGiOh'', while Illya hopes [[TemptingFate nothing could possibly go wrong]] if Shirou watched Franchise/{{Batman}}.

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** The {{Omake}} sections show what happens when the siblings think this is happening to each other. Shirou starts having nightmares of Illya fighting [[HumongousMecha evil emperor Gilgatron]] with her own [[TransformingMecha transforming]] {{transforming|Mecha}} [[Anime/CarnivalPhantasm Bersercar]], while Illya is horrified of Shirou acting like a Franchise/KamenRider. Shirou then wonders if [[EpicFail it would be better if Illya watched]] ''Anime/YuGiOh'', while Illya hopes [[TemptingFate nothing could possibly go wrong]] if Shirou watched Franchise/{{Batman}}.
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* EvilFeelsGood: [[spoiler:Godou, with the help of Circe, reveals that Ahriman's origin as the nameless god of evil created by primitive Humanity that was hated and pursed by the gods isn't tragic tale of a misunderstood creature forced into the role of a monster. Ahriman is exactly what he's called; [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a god of evil]], one who enjoys being evil, creating evil, spreading evil and all that comes from him.]]

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* EvilFeelsGood: [[spoiler:Godou, with the help of Circe, reveals that Ahriman's origin as the nameless god of evil created by primitive Humanity that was hated and pursed by the gods isn't a tragic tale of a misunderstood creature forced into the role of a monster. Ahriman is exactly what he's called; [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a god of evil]], one who enjoys being evil, creating evil, spreading evil and all that comes from him.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ahriman is not only Angra Mainyu, but it turns out he also many of the original villains the old gods fought against in their earliest existence and, once he became named, the adversary of every religion with a malevolent, destructive spirit. His first origin is from the early days of Africa when Humanity was too primitive to understand that evil was their own fault and was their own choice to commit, or that evil could be without reason. They instead blamed their various sufferings on what would become the first nameless god of evil: that was the origin of Ahriman, who became an outsider to the other gods for being [[DeityOfHumanOrigin born of Humanity's evils]] while they were born of the world. [[TheDreaded So feared and reviled was he by the gods that he was automatically given the role of villain, to be the thing, reason, adversary and monster the gods needed to fight.]]]]

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** [[spoiler:Ahriman is not only Angra Mainyu, but it turns out he he's also many of the original villains the old gods fought against in their earliest existence and, once he became named, the adversary of every religion with a malevolent, destructive spirit. His first origin is from the early days of Africa when Humanity was too primitive to understand that evil was their own fault and was their own choice to commit, or that evil could be without reason. They instead blamed their various sufferings on what would become the first nameless god of evil: that was the origin of Ahriman, who became an outsider to the other gods for being [[DeityOfHumanOrigin born of Humanity's evils]] while they were born of the world. [[TheDreaded So feared and reviled was he by the gods that he was automatically given the role of villain, to be the thing, reason, adversary and monster the gods needed to fight.]]]]
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* DoubleStandardRapeSciFi: Averted with the deconstruction of how a Earth Goddess devolves into an obedient and devoted bride after being vainquished. Athena shudders when she remembers how ''near'' Godou was to basically make a SexSlave of her and any Divine Ancestors won't like too much thinking about their past ''husbands''.

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* DoubleStandardRapeSciFi: Averted with the deconstruction of how a Earth Goddess devolves into an obedient and devoted bride after being vainquished.vanquished. Athena shudders when she remembers how ''near'' Godou was to basically make a SexSlave of her and any Divine Ancestors won't like too much thinking about their past ''husbands''.



* MadeOfIndestructium: Somehow, Shirou's cellphone survives all the punishment of his battle with [[spoiler: Mordred]]. It also survives his battles against [[spoiler: Godou and Luo Hao, Aphrodite, Tiamat and Jord, Alex and Lancelot]]. The only thing that managed to make it non-operational was a dead ("flat", to be precise) battery, and even then Shirou managed to turn the phone on and use it to record [[spoiler:Alex Gascoine swearing to leave Guinevere alone]] without charging it so either there is more to the phone or Shirou caries spare batteries that are made out of the same material.
** Turns out that the battery WAS dying and it made the phone unresponsive. Even so he later change the battery and it still works fine.

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* MadeOfIndestructium: Somehow, Shirou's cellphone survives all the punishment of his battle with [[spoiler: Mordred]]. It also survives his battles against [[spoiler: Godou and Luo Hao, Aphrodite, Tiamat and Jord, Alex and Lancelot]]. The only thing that managed to make it non-operational was a dead ("flat", to be precise) battery, and even then Shirou managed to turn the phone on and use it to record [[spoiler:Alex Gascoine swearing to leave Guinevere alone]] without charging it so either there is more to the phone or Shirou caries spare batteries that are made out of the same material.
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material. Turns out that the battery WAS dying and it made the phone unresponsive. Even so he later change the battery and it still works fine.fine.
* MagiBabble: Pops up from time to time, like when Illya tries to explain what a Reality Marble is to the others. The others can barely understand it, while Godou is completely lost.
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** Replace the second story with world. He was skirting on the details, but he did say the truth.

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* SeriousBusiness:
** Meta-Example. The author has alienated several Nasuverse fans with rather lax handling of Nasuverse mechanics. He even managed to hit the FandomBerserkButton by mentioning in an Author's note his belief that Campiones are capable of defeating [[WorldsStrongestMan Gil]][[GameBreaker ga]][[PersonofMassDestruction mesh]] and [[EldritchAbomination TYPES]]/[[UltimateLifeform Aristoteles]]. He quickly retracted these statements after being pressured by angry reviewers into doing more in depth research into what he's talking about.
** Shirou for cooking [[SupremeChef as]] [[ChefOfIron usual]]. Now extends to his new maid Asuka, who [[UpToEleven surpasses his godly cooking.]]

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* SeriousBusiness:
** Meta-Example. The author has alienated several Nasuverse fans with rather lax handling of Nasuverse mechanics. He even managed to hit the FandomBerserkButton by mentioning in an Author's note his belief that Campiones are capable of defeating [[WorldsStrongestMan Gil]][[GameBreaker ga]][[PersonofMassDestruction mesh]] and [[EldritchAbomination TYPES]]/[[UltimateLifeform Aristoteles]]. He quickly retracted these statements after being pressured by angry reviewers into doing more in depth research into what he's talking about.
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SeriousBusiness: Shirou for has cooking [[SupremeChef as]] [[ChefOfIron usual]]. Now extends to his new maid Asuka, who [[UpToEleven surpasses his godly cooking.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ahriman is not only Angra Mainyu, but it turns out he also the many of the original villains the old gods against in their earliest existence and, once he became named, the adversary of every religion with a malevolent, destructive spirit. His first origin is from the early days of Africa when Humanity was too primitive to understand that evil was their own fault and was their own choice to commit, or that evil could be without reason. They instead blamed their various sufferings on what would become the first nameless god of evil: that was the origin of Ahriman, who became an outsider to the other gods for being [[DeityOfHumanOrigin born of Humanity's evils]] while they were born of the world. [[TheDreaded So feared and reviled was he by the gods that he was automatically given the role of villain, to be the thing, reason, adversary and monster the gods needed to fight.]]]]

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** [[spoiler:Ahriman is not only Angra Mainyu, but it turns out he also the many of the original villains the old gods fought against in their earliest existence and, once he became named, the adversary of every religion with a malevolent, destructive spirit. His first origin is from the early days of Africa when Humanity was too primitive to understand that evil was their own fault and was their own choice to commit, or that evil could be without reason. They instead blamed their various sufferings on what would become the first nameless god of evil: that was the origin of Ahriman, who became an outsider to the other gods for being [[DeityOfHumanOrigin born of Humanity's evils]] while they were born of the world. [[TheDreaded So feared and reviled was he by the gods that he was automatically given the role of villain, to be the thing, reason, adversary and monster the gods needed to fight.]]]]

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