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* AllThereInTheManual: Practically everything in this tale comes out of canon: most of the countries visited are explicitly named in the ''Compleat Discworld Atlas'', and even White Howondaland is hinted at in canon. Red Indians in the middle of [[DarkestAfrica Howondaland]] may seem odd and out of place - but according to ''Literature/ReaperMan'', that's exactly where Pratchett himself put them.
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* AllThereInTheManual: Practically everything in this tale comes out of canon: most of the countries visited are explicitly named in the ''Compleat Discworld Atlas'', and even White Howondaland is hinted at in canon. The Discworld's version of [[UsefulNotes/NativeAmericans Red Indians Indians]] in the middle of [[DarkestAfrica Howondaland]] may seem odd and out of place - but according to ''Literature/ReaperMan'', that's exactly where Pratchett himself put them.
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* CuteAndPsycho: Rivka.[[note]]Technically this is a ZCE, although Rivka is the walking embodiment of the trope and that one-word definition here should stand. But it needs not to be a ZCE, so it needs to be reiterated: even Mariella says of her beautiful and lethal best friend that "she has depths. I would not care to swim in them."[[/note]]
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* CuteAndPsycho: Rivka.[[note]]Technically this is a ZCE, although Rivka is the walking embodiment of the trope and that one-word definition here should stand. But it needs not to be a ZCE, so it needs to be reiterated: even Mariella says of her beautiful and lethal best friend that "she has depths. I would not care to swim in them."[[/note]]
* DiggingToChina: the author speculates that on a flat world, all the places with a name like "That Place Where The Sun Doth Not Shine" are linked by a sort of portal network. Thus, in ''Fanfic/GapYearAdventures'', a Dwarf who falls into the geological anomaly in Slice, Lancre, called "The Place Where The Sun Does Not Shine" re-emerges in En-El-Sams-Le-Raina in Klatch (also "The Place Where The Sun Shines Not" in Klatchian).
* DiggingToChina: the author speculates that on a flat world, all the places with a name like "That Place Where The Sun Doth Not Shine" are linked by a sort of portal network. Thus, in ''Fanfic/GapYearAdventures'', a Dwarf who falls into the geological anomaly in Slice, Lancre, called "The Place Where The Sun Does Not Shine" re-emerges in En-El-Sams-Le-Raina in Klatch (also "The Place Where The Sun Shines Not" in Klatchian).
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* CuteAndPsycho: Rivka.[[note]]Technically this is a ZCE, although Rivka is the walking embodiment of the trope and that one-word definition here should stand. But it needs not to be a ZCE, so it needs to be reiterated: reiterated: even Mariella says of her beautiful and lethal best friend that "she has depths. I would not care to swim in them."[[/note]]
* DiggingToChina: the author speculates that on a flat world, all the places with a name like "That Place Where The Sun Doth Not Shine" are linked by a sort of portal network. Thus, in''Fanfic/GapYearAdventures'', this tale, a Dwarf who falls into the geological anomaly in Slice, Lancre, called "The Place Where The Sun Does Not Shine" re-emerges in En-El-Sams-Le-Raina in Klatch (also "The Place Where The Sun Shines Not" in Klatchian).
* DiggingToChina: the author speculates that on a flat world, all the places with a name like "That Place Where The Sun Doth Not Shine" are linked by a sort of portal network. Thus, in
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* CuteAndPsycho: Rivka.[[note]]Technically this is a ZCE, although Rivka is the walking embodiment of the trope and that one-word definition here should stand. But it needs not to be a ZCE, so it needs to be reiterated: even Mariella says of her beautiful and lethal best friend that "she has depths. I would not care to swim in them."[[/note]]
* DiggingToChina: the author speculates that on a flat world, all the places with a name like "That Place Where The Sun Doth Not Shine" are linked by a sort of portal network. Thus, in ''Fanfic/GapYearAdventures'', a Dwarf who falls into the geological anomaly in Slice, Lancre, called "The Place Where The Sun Does Not Shine" re-emerges in En-El-Sams-Le-Raina in Klatch (also "The Place Where The Sun Shines Not" in Klatchian).
* DiggingToChina: the author speculates that on a flat world, all the places with a name like "That Place Where The Sun Doth Not Shine" are linked by a sort of portal network. Thus, in ''Fanfic/GapYearAdventures'', a Dwarf who falls into the geological anomaly in Slice, Lancre, called "The Place Where The Sun Does Not Shine" re-emerges in En-El-Sams-Le-Raina in Klatch (also "The Place Where The Sun Shines Not" in Klatchian).
