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* DeathByAdaptation: One of the major factors of this fic- ''anyone'' can die. Victims so far (on the side of good, anyway) include [[spoiler: Ren Akatsuki, Atsui, the majority of Edolas' Fairy Tail, and Urouge.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: One of the major factors of this fic- ''anyone'' can die. Victims so far (on the side of good, anyway) include [[spoiler: Ren Akatsuki, Atsui, the majority of Edolas' Fairy Tail, Urouge, and Urouge.Yumichika Ayasegawa.]]
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** Kisuke took a page out of [[JurassicPark Nedry's]] book when designing a computer virus.
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*** Chapter 70 of the second installment is titled "[[AttackOnTitan Attack on Admiral.]]"
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*** Chapter 70 of the second installment is titled "[[AttackOnTitan "[[Franchise/AttackOnTitan Attack on Admiral.]]"
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* {{Trigger}}: [[spoiler:Ace]], after seeing Bazz-B create lava during their fight, admits to feeling a little triggered. [[spoiler:Not surprising, considering how he died.]]
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* {{Trigger}}: TraumaButton: [[spoiler:Ace]], after seeing Bazz-B create lava during their fight, admits to feeling a little triggered. [[spoiler:Not surprising, considering how he died.]]
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** The Battle of Magnolia's big bad is none other than ''[[spoiler:Yhwach]].''
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** The Battle of Magnolia's big bad is none other than ''[[spoiler:Yhwach]].''[[spoiler: Royd Lloyd disguised as Yhwach]].
** The Battle of Nirvana is led once again by Orochimaru.
** The Battle of Nirvana is led once again by Orochimaru.
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** However, Chitsujo decides to turn the bet in his favor by resurrecting [[spoiler:Ace, Neji, Hashirama, and Tobirama]] and placing them on the battlefield.
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* {{Trigger}}: [[spoiler:Ace]], after seeing Bazz-B create lava during their fight, admits to feeling a little triggered. [[spoiler:Not surprising, considering how he did.died.]]
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** The person for the Battle of Magnolia remains anonymous.
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** The person for the Battle of Magnolia remains anonymous. Magnolia's big bad is none other than ''[[spoiler:Yhwach]].''
** To a certain extent, [[spoiler:Portgas D. Ace, Neji Hyuuga, Hashirama Senju, and Tobirama Senju]] are this during the Battle of Magnolia.
** When [[spoiler:Yhwach]] is destroying the Fairy Tail guild hall during the Battle of Magnolia, Makarov gets angry. Why? Because last time the guild hall destroyed, it took two hours to fix- which is apparently a ''really'' long time for wizards.
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** Orochimaru for many Leaf ninja. It is implied that he became something of boogeyman for them in their youth due to all the horrible stories about him. When this is pointed out to him, he nonchalantly admits that those stories are most likely true.
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** WordOfGod states that Natsu and Grimmjow's rematch in the Second Battle of Hargeon is a shout out to Goku and Vegeta's first battle in DragonBallZ, right down to the winner of the fight telling his comrades not to kill the loser.
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** WordOfGod states that Natsu and Grimmjow's rematch in the Second Battle of Hargeon is a shout out to Goku and Vegeta's first battle in DragonBallZ, ''Anime/DragonBallZ'', right down to the winner of the fight telling his comrades not to kill the loser.
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* TheBet: A huge one is made between Chitsujo and Zeref right before the Battle of Magnolia. If the Alliance takes the city on the first try, Zeref will reveal his location. If the Alliance fails to take Magnolia, then Chitsujo has to give himself up to the Coalition.
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** Laxus Dreyar loses an arm during his fight with NaNaNa Najahkoop.
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** The person for the Battle of Magnolia remains anonymous.
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* EyesAlwaysShut: [[spoiler:Gin Ichimaru.]] Sasuke expresses annoyance that he can't tell if the man's eyes are open or not.
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** Lampshaded again in chapter 120 of the second installment by [[spoiler:Gin Ichimaru]] during his fight with Sasuke. He wonders where it came from.
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** In chapter 119, Suigetsu gets the dubious pleasure of working with an idiotic "Whitebeard Pirate" named [[Machinima/RedVsBlue Caboose]].
** If [[spoiler:Gin]] couldn't break out of some rocks, [[Manga/BlackButler then what kind of soul reaper captain would he be?]]
** If [[spoiler:Gin]] couldn't break out of some rocks, [[Manga/BlackButler then what kind of soul reaper captain would he be?]]
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** In chapter 88 of the second installment, [[spoiler: Gajeel]] manages to get ''both'' his arms blown off by Gladius. Despite this, he ''still'' manages to win his fight. That's determination for you. Baki comments Hachigen is going to be busy.
** Baki loses a hand, Cana Alberona gets her arm aged, and Rojuro Otoribashi loses an arm during the Battle of Mount Hakobe.
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** Baki loses a hand, Cana Alberona gets her arm aged, and Rojuro Otoribashi loses an arm during the Battle of Mount Hakobe. Baki comments Hachigen is going to be busy.
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** Jushiro Ukitake. In the manga he died from having Mimihagi torn from him, but in this story Chitsujo's healers saved him before he could. He's gotten so much better that his chronic illness is almost completely gone.
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** In chapter 88 of the second installment, [[spoiler: Gajeel]] manages to get ''both'' his arms blown off by Gladius. Despite this, he ''still'' manages to win his fight. That's determination for you.
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** In chapter 88 of the second installment, [[spoiler: Gajeel]] manages to get ''both'' his arms blown off by Gladius. Despite this, he ''still'' manages to win his fight. That's determination for you. Baki comments Hachigen is going to be busy.
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** Baki loses a hand, Cana Alberona gets her arm de-aged, and Rojuro Ototoribashi loses an arm during the Battle of Mount Hakobe.
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* RescueRomance: There might be one starting between Ino and Usopp, starting during the Battle of Mount Hakobe, but the author has admitted he doesn't know if it's permanent or not yet.
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** As revealed during the Battle of Mount Hakobe, [[spoiler:X-Drake and Scratchman Apoo]] are spying on the Alliance for [[spoiler:Kaido]]. However, the avert the trope slightly in that Chitsujo already knew they were moles and allowed them to remain anyway.
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** Byakuya gives [[spoiler:Shamon]] an truly epic one during the Battle of Mount Hakobe.
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** Baraggan Louisenbairn [[spoiler: and 2nd Kazekage Shamon]] for the Battle of Mount Hakobe.
** When facing a Pacifista, Gildarts learns that to the Coalition, he is a low S-Class target. Much like A, Gildarts immediately demands to know who is higher than him.
* [[HalfTheManHeUsedToBe Half The Girl She Used To Be]]: Momo Hinamori, thanks to [[spoiler:Shamon's]] chakra strings. Miraculously, she didn't die.
* PoisonedWeapons: Many of the ninja characters use these, such as Sasori and [[spoiler:Shamon]].
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* [[BonusMaterial Omake]]: The author sometimes puts these at the end of chapters. They range from Kizaru trying to pronounce his new attack right, to the author and his beta tormenting the characters with the [[DragonBallZAbridged pecking order]], to the Four Acts playing video games.
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* [[BonusMaterial Omake]]: The author sometimes puts these at the end of chapters. They range from Kizaru trying to pronounce his new attack right, to the author and his beta tormenting the characters with the [[DragonBallZAbridged [[WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged pecking order]], to the Four Acts playing video games.
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* ShoutOut: There are numerous shout outs, many of which are to DragonBallZAbridged, of the which the author is a fan. Here are a few noteworthy ones:
** Toby Horhorta's newest attack is called "Super Paralysis Claws: [[YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries Super Special Awesome]] Mega Ultra Jellyfish".
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* ShoutOut: There are numerous shout outs, many of which are to DragonBallZAbridged, WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged, of the which the author is a fan. Here are a few noteworthy ones:
** Toby Horhorta's newest attack is called "Super Paralysis Claws:[[YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries [[WebVideo/YuGiOhTheAbridgedSeries Super Special Awesome]] Mega Ultra Jellyfish".
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** In a shout-out to DragonBallZAbridged, Totomaru makes an [[IncrediblyLamePun incredibly lame pun]] about making his opponent "Indigo boom." When no says anything...
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** ''Wendy Marvell.'' While arguably one of the weaker dragon slayers, Chitsujo reveals that thanks to being the Sky Dragon Slayer she has the potential to be the strongest slayer- even stronger than ''Natsu'' (who is one of Chitsujo's ''Acts of Order'').
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* AgentPeacock: Yumichika Ayasegawa, Cavendish, and Emporio Ivankov.
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* BloodKnight: Kenpachi Zaraki, Ikkaku Madarame, Yumichika Ayasegawa, Grimmjow Jaegarjaquez, Nnoitra Gilga, Roronoa Zoro, Ryuuma, Kaku, Rob Lucci, Suigetsu Hozuki, Hidan, Mangetsu Hozuki, any of the other Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, Azuma... we could be here all day listing them off.
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* BloodKnight: Kenpachi Zaraki, Ikkaku Madarame, Yumichika Ayasegawa, Grimmjow Jaegarjaquez, Nnoitra Gilga, Roronoa Zoro, Ryuuma, Kaku, Rob Lucci, Suigetsu Hozuki, Hidan, Mangetsu Hozuki, any of the other Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, Azuma...Azuma, Abirama Redder... we could be here all day listing them off.
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* HiddenDepths: The normally meek and unremarkable [[spoiler:Shiho]] is more than just a bureaucrat/desk jockey/pencil pusher; when [[spoiler:she]] chooses to apply [[spoiler:herself]], [[spoiler: she's]] actually capable of being a master detective (comparable to the caliber of Holmes, Poirot, Marple, and Nancy Drew). [[spoiler:This is clearly demonstrated by her decisive victory over Treasury Minister Vitai (the mole/traitor who was covertly assisting the Rakuen Tax Collectors) during their cat-and-mouse game of accusations and counterarguments.]] See "I Never Said It Was Poison" for more details.
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* HiddenDepths: The HiddenDepths:
**The normally meek and unremarkable [[spoiler:Shiho]] is more than just a bureaucrat/desk jockey/pencil pusher; when [[spoiler:she]] chooses to apply [[spoiler:herself]], [[spoiler: she's]] actually capable of being a master detective (comparable to the caliber of Holmes, Poirot, Marple, and Nancy Drew). [[spoiler:This is clearly demonstrated by her decisive victory over Treasury Minister Vitai (the mole/traitor who was covertly assisting the Rakuen Tax Collectors) during their cat-and-mouse game of accusations and counterarguments.]] See "I Never Said It Was Poison" for more details.
**The normally meek and unremarkable [[spoiler:Shiho]] is more than just a bureaucrat/desk jockey/pencil pusher; when [[spoiler:she]] chooses to apply [[spoiler:herself]], [[spoiler: she's]] actually capable of being a master detective (comparable to the caliber of Holmes, Poirot, Marple, and Nancy Drew). [[spoiler:This is clearly demonstrated by her decisive victory over Treasury Minister Vitai (the mole/traitor who was covertly assisting the Rakuen Tax Collectors) during their cat-and-mouse game of accusations and counterarguments.]] See "I Never Said It Was Poison" for more details.
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** In chapter 103 of the second installment, the author uses "Tilm" instead of "Tearm" for Eve's last name.
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* BenevolentBoss: Chitsujo to the max. He's one of the kindest, most reasonable characters in the fic.
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* WasTooHardOnHim: Several adult ninjas of the Leaf like Tsume and [[spoiler:Inoichi]] feel this way about Naruto, having mistreated him in the past because of his jinchuriki status. They now try to make up for it by being there for him now.
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** Is confirmed to be this in chapter 102, and for a [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil horrible, horrible reason...]]
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** When thinking of encouraging words for the mole's former assistant, Nemu tells her to [[GurrenLagann believe in herself, and if she can't, to believe in Nemu who believes in her]].
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* HavingABlast: The Coalition Bomb Squad: Jackal, Deidara, Mr. 5, Bambietta Basterbine, Gladius, and Gari; also Azuma who could make explosions with his plants.
