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* GildedCage: Fire Streak ends up in an attraction park allowed to fly free in his own spare time and people love him... also he is owned by the owner of said attraction forever and even Soarin knows there is no place for a pony to be truly free on earth; he does not even bother trying to escape.
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* GildedCage: Fire Streak ends up in an attraction park allowed to fly free in his own spare time and people love him... also he is owned by the owner of said attraction forever and even Soarin Fire Streak knows there is no place for a pony to be truly free on earth; he does not even bother trying to escape.
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* BornIntoSlavery: By time the first part starts there is already fillys and foals that do not know Equestrian culture, it has been so long that Spitfire does not even get weirded out when asked by foals "what are the wonderbolts".
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* SafeZoneHopeSpot: Thatch's whole plan is this trope, to take the foals back to Equestria with Spitfire's help.
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* SafeZoneHopeSpot: Thatch's whole plan is this trope, to take the foals back to Equestria with Spitfire's help."somewhere else".
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* GildedCage: Soarin ends up in an attraction park allowed to fly free in his own spare time and people love him... also he is owned by the owner of said attraction forever and even Soarin knows there is no place for a pony to be truly free on earth; he does not even bother trying to escape.
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* GildedCage: Soarin Fire Streak ends up in an attraction park allowed to fly free in his own spare time and people love him... also he is owned by the owner of said attraction forever and even Soarin knows there is no place for a pony to be truly free on earth; he does not even bother trying to escape.
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* SafeZoneHopeSpot: Thatch's whole plan is this trope, to take the foals/fillies back to Equestria with Spitfire's help.
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* SafeZoneHopeSpot: Thatch's whole plan is this trope, to take the foals/fillies foals back to Equestria with Spitfire's help.
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* SafeZonHopeSpot: Thatch's whole plan is this trope, to take the foals/fillies back to Equestria with Spitfire's help.
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* SafeZonHopeSpot: SafeZoneHopeSpot: Thatch's whole plan is this trope, to take the foals/fillies back to Equestria with Spitfire's help.
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* SafeZonHopeSpot: Thatch's whole plan is this trope, to take the foals/fillies back to Equestria with Spitfire's help.
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* ThePromisedLand: Ponies on earth seem to think Equestria is the land of honey and milk but as it turns out its been taken over by humans and the portals to Equestria's world are heavily monitored.
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** There is also a war between ponies and griffons.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Spitfire comments that she would have settled down after her servise in the equestrian army, but then a series of calamity's kept dropping and prevented this from happening.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Spitfire comments that she would have settled down after her servise service in the equestrian army, but then a series of calamity's kept dropping and prevented this from happening.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Spitfire comments that she would have settle down after her servise in the equestrian army, but then a series of calamity's kept dropping and prevented this from happening.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Spitfire comments that she would have settle settled down after her servise in the equestrian army, but then a series of calamity's kept dropping and prevented this from happening.
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* BabiesEverAfter: Spitfire comments that she would have settle down after her servise in the equestrian army, but then a series of calamity's kept dropping and prevented this from happening.
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* ThePlague: Implied to have happened before a war between ponies and changelings.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Spitfire's trust in Anon improves as the stories go on and even Spitfire reflects in "Fire's heart" how if it were not for her trust in Anon she would have taken a dark joke by him more literally.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Spitfire's trust in Anon improves as the stories go on and even Spitfire she reflects in "Fire's heart" how if it were not for her trust in Anon she would have taken a dark joke by him more literally.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Spitfire's trust in Anon improves as the stories go on and even Spitfire reflects in "Fire's heart" how if it were not for her trust in Anon she would have taken a dark joke by him more literally.
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** Downplayed for ponykind as a whole, it seems they where once like we see them in the show, but by the time the story starts it's been ages since then.
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** Downplayed Played with for ponykind as a whole, it seems they where once like we see them in the show, show but by the time the story starts it's been ages since then.then, we also see some low life ponies that play this trope straight.
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* SlaveCollar: Most ponies wear them by default, Spitfire spends most of the time with a special shock collar for the untamed ones.
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* SlaveCollar: Most ponies wear them by default, Spitfire spends most of the time with a special shock collar for the untamed ones.
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* SlaveCollar: Most ponies wear them by default, Spitfire spends most of the time with a special shock collar for the untamed ones.
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** Downplayed for ponykind as a whole, they where like we see them in the show.
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** Downplayed for ponykind as a whole, it seems they where once like we see them in the show.show, but by the time the story starts it's been ages since then.
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** Downplayed for ponykind as a whole, they where like we see them in the show.
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* RuleAbidingRebel: Justified, Spitfire would rather not return to her shitty cage, so while in human society she obeys the rules, she also makes Anon help her when trying to find her old connections.
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* RuleAbidingRebel: Justified, Spitfire would rather not return to her shitty cage, cage so while in human society she obeys the rules, she also makes Anon help her when with trying to find her old connections.
