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* AnimalEyeSpy: The Stranger's Champion can see through the eyes of animals.
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* OhCrap: After Nymeria uses Chrohea Thaiye, she asks Arturia if she figured out her name, and Arturia is shocked to discover she does not.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** After Nymeria uses Chrohea Thaiye, she asks Arturia if she figured out her name, and Arturia is shocked to discover she doesnot.not.
** Brandon has this reaction when Illya reveals she summoned the Warrior's Champion.
* PassThePopcorn: The Stranger's Champion literally munches on popcorn while spying on Shirou and Rin's group, highly entertained by them.
** After Nymeria uses Chrohea Thaiye, she asks Arturia if she figured out her name, and Arturia is shocked to discover she does
** Brandon has this reaction when Illya reveals she summoned the Warrior's Champion.
* PassThePopcorn: The Stranger's Champion literally munches on popcorn while spying on Shirou and Rin's group, highly entertained by them.
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* ThisCannotBe: As he dies, Angra Mainyu complains that it isn't fair and wonders how it's even possible for All the World's Evil to die.
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* WouldntHurtAChild: After being challenged by Illya, Rin prepares to attack, but Shirou protests that they can't attack her because she is a child. Illya scoffs because unknown to them, she [[OlderThanTheyLook is really 18]], while Rin gets annoyed and points out Illya threatened to enslave and probably kill him.
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-->'''Rin:''' You dare speak of being preoccupied with my safety!? Who are you to fret, to judge my ability to take care of myself, you lowly bore of a magus!? Do you think of me as some shy damsel in need of aid!? A distressed princess for you to fulfill an infantile savior's fantasy!? You honestly believe I need help from some delusional illiterate!? I can destroy my foes with Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, or Aether! All five of the basest Elements are at my beck and call! I need but lift finger to make Swiss cheese out of the likes of you! With my jewels, I can match the sorcerers of old and their forgotten arts! And I happen to be good at Chinese martial arts, so I don't even need magic to obliterate a plain human being into fine red powder. I could break you in half, with bare hands, arms, legs, and feet. Do you want me to spell it out some more!? You are talking with the heir to a two century old house of magi! The successor to a lineage containing some of the greatest minds ever dedicated to Thaumaturgy! The scion to a family that formulated the Heaven's Feel ceremony! The very means to obtain the Holy Grail, the cup of Jesus Christ, the Lamb of God! ''GOD''! I'm to reach what you, in your infinitesimal intellect, think of as the almighty above!
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-->'''Rin:''' You dare speak of being preoccupied with my safety!? Who are you to fret, to judge my ability to take care of myself, you lowly bore of a magus!? Do you think of me as some shy damsel in need of aid!? A distressed princess for you to fulfill an infantile savior's fantasy!? You honestly believe I need help from some delusional illiterate!? I can destroy my foes with Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, or Aether! All five of the basest Elements are at my beck and call! I need but lift finger to make Swiss cheese out of the likes of you! With my jewels, I can match the sorcerers of old and their forgotten arts! And I happen to be good at Chinese martial arts, so I don't even need magic to obliterate a plain human being into fine red powder. I could break you in half, with bare hands, arms, legs, and feet. Do you want me to spell it out some more!? You are talking with the heir to a two century old house of magi! The successor to a lineage containing some of the greatest minds ever dedicated to Thaumaturgy! The scion to a family that formulated the Heaven's Feel ceremony! The very means to obtain the Holy Grail, the cup of Jesus Christ, the Lamb of God! ''GOD''! I'm to reach what you, in your infinitesimal intellect, think of as the almighty above!above! Do you understand!? You're the one who should be trembling! You're the one who nearly got himself killed tonight! You're the inept practitioner of magecraft who stumbled onto the War and then, by some divine providence, not only survived but was bestowed a Servant. A chance that comes by once in a lifetime, something many magi labor to achieve for years on end, with little to no success to show for it! And you have the gall to think... THE GALL... to be afraid that ''I'' am the one putting myself in danger!? I am the danger, you fool! ''The'' Master every other dreads will come knocking on their doorstep! Of the two, I am the one who actually knows what she is doing... and Archer, if you treasure what's between your legs, you'll stop cackling like a demented hyena this instant! My warning from earlier still stands, you hear!?
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* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rin's reaction when Brandon, whom she thinks is Archer, reveals his main weapon is a hammer.
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** After Brandon explains what Chrohea Thaiye does and how he saved her from Greyscale by chopping off her arm, Arturia can't believe she was cursed by a spear again (the first time was when she was stabbed by Gae Buidhe).
** Rin's reaction when Brandon, whom she thinks is Archer, reveals his main weapon is a
** After Brandon explains what Chrohea Thaiye does and how he saved her from Greyscale by chopping off her arm, Arturia can't believe she was cursed by a spear again (the first time was when she was stabbed by Gae Buidhe).
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-->'''Rin:''' You dare speak of being preoccupied with my safety!? Who are you to fret, to judge my ability to take care of myself, you lowly bore of a magus!?
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-->'''Rin:''' You dare speak of being preoccupied with my safety!? Who are you to fret, to judge my ability to take care of myself, you lowly bore of a magus!?magus!? Do you think of me as some shy damsel in need of aid!? A distressed princess for you to fulfill an infantile savior's fantasy!? You honestly believe I need help from some delusional illiterate!? I can destroy my foes with Fire, Earth, Water, Wind, or Aether! All five of the basest Elements are at my beck and call! I need but lift finger to make Swiss cheese out of the likes of you! With my jewels, I can match the sorcerers of old and their forgotten arts! And I happen to be good at Chinese martial arts, so I don't even need magic to obliterate a plain human being into fine red powder. I could break you in half, with bare hands, arms, legs, and feet. Do you want me to spell it out some more!? You are talking with the heir to a two century old house of magi! The successor to a lineage containing some of the greatest minds ever dedicated to Thaumaturgy! The scion to a family that formulated the Heaven's Feel ceremony! The very means to obtain the Holy Grail, the cup of Jesus Christ, the Lamb of God! ''GOD''! I'm to reach what you, in your infinitesimal intellect, think of as the almighty above!
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* BerserkButton: The Mother's Champion has two, harming Sakura and giving him orders, especially if he is forced to obey one with a Command Spell. He says as he is a king, he is commanded by no one, not even Sakura. He only tolerates having a Master because he needs one to exist.
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* BerserkButton: The Mother's Champion has two, harming Sakura (he beats up Shinji and nearly strangles him to death for trying to slap her) and giving him orders, especially if he is forced to obey one with a Command Spell. He says as he is a king, he is commanded by no one, not even Sakura. He only tolerates having a Master because he needs one to exist.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Unlike regular Servants, the Champions did not receive any knowledge about the modern world, only knowledge about their own world, Westeros, so they are shocked by certain things like cars.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Unlike regular Servants, the Champions did not receive any knowledge about the modern world, only knowledge about their own world, Westeros, so they are shocked by certain things like cars. The Stranger's Champion may be an exception because she gains the memories of the people she impersonates.
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* RantInducingSlight: When Shirou says he's worried about Rin's safety, Rin loses her temper and rants about how powerful she is compared to him.
-->'''Rin:''' You dare speak of being preoccupied with my safety!? Who are you to fret, to judge my ability to take care of myself, you lowly bore of a magus!?
-->'''Rin:''' You dare speak of being preoccupied with my safety!? Who are you to fret, to judge my ability to take care of myself, you lowly bore of a magus!?
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* BlatantLies: When Brandon saves Shirou from being killed by Nymeria, he tries to convince Shirou that he's only dreaming. Shirou sees through it immediately.
* EmergingFromTheShadows: Zouken Matou performs the summoning ritual, but nothing seems to happen. Losing patience, he commands his "Servant" to come out. The Stranger's Champion steps out of the shadows, but shocks him by wearing the form of his lost love Justeaze von Einzbern.
* TeethClenchedTeamwork: After being betrayed by Kiritsugu Emiya in the Fourth Holy Grail War, Arturia doesn't trust Rin and Brandon no matter how much they help her and is paranoid that they will betray her and Shirou. The only reason why she trusts Shirou is because she can see how naive and idealistic he is, so he would never betray anyone.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Stranger's Champion has the ability to take on the appearance of anyone who has died. It doesn't seem to matter where and when they died, as she is even able to appear as Justeaze von Einzbern, who had died over 200 years ago. She gains their memories as well, allowing her to impersonate them perfectly.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Stranger's Champion has the ability to take on the appearance of anyone who has died. It doesn't seem to matter where and when they died, as she is even able to appear as Justeaze von Einzbern, who had died over 200 years ago. She gains their memories as well, allowing her to impersonate them perfectly.perfectly.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rin's reaction when Brandon, whom she thinks is Archer, reveals his main weapon is a hammer.
* YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe: Rin's reaction when Brandon, whom she thinks is Archer, reveals his main weapon is a hammer.
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* CassandraTruth: Brandon repeatedly tries to explain to Rin about the Trial of Seven and the Champion, but she dismisses it.
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* CassandraTruth: Brandon repeatedly tries to explain to Rin about the Trial of Seven and the Champion, Champions, but she dismisses it.
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* {{Contortionist}}: Nymeria's body can bend and twist at near impossible angles, which she takes full advantage of in battle.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: As the Stranger's Champion is pretending to be a magus hired by Zouken, she pretends to be ignorant of the Trial of Seven when interacting with the Mother's Champion.
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* SafetyInMuggles: While Arturia and Brandon are walking to the school to pick up Shirou and Rin, the Stranger's Champion joins them pretending to be a civilian. When they realize she's an enemy, they can't attack her because they are in public during the day.
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* BridalCarry: After summoning the Mother's Champion and then transferring ownership to the Stranger's Champion, Sakura is exhausted, so the Mother's Champion carries her in his arms. She gets embarrassed by this treatment.
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* {{Troll}}: The Stranger's Champion finds enjoyment in messing with and humiliating Shinji however she can.
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* HumiliationConga: First, Shinji Matou gets his nuts crushed and then told how worthless he is by the Stranger's Champion. Then he gets beaten up by the Mother's Champion. A few days later, the Stranger's Champion comes to the school pretending to be his babysitter and acts like an AmazinglyEmbarrassingParent, treating him like a little kid who still needs to be walked home and causing all his classmates to laugh at him.
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* PlayingWithFire: The Mother's Champion can generate flames, and his body temperature is so high it makes Shinji's sweat evaporate when the Champion grabs him.
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* {{Protectorate}}: Though he does not obey her, the Mother's Champion feels the urge to keep Sakura safe. He eventually agrees to let the Stranger's Champion become his new Master because that will mean Sakura doesn't have to appear on the battlefield.
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* UnhandHimVillain: When the Mother's Champion beats up Shinji and then starts strangling him, Sakura asks him to let him go, but it doesn't work until she uses a Command Spell, at which point he complies by hurling Shinji into a wall hard enough to crack it. Sakura notes she should have worded that more specifically.
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* UnhandHimVillain: UnhandThemVillain: When the Mother's Champion beats up Shinji and then starts strangling him, Sakura asks him to let him go, but it doesn't work until she uses a Command Spell, at which point he complies by hurling Shinji into a wall hard enough to crack it. Sakura notes she should have worded that more specifically.
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* BerserkButton: The Mother's Champion has two, harming Sakura and giving him orders, especially if he is forced to obey one with a Command Spell. He says as he is a king, he is commanded by no one, not even Sakura. He only tolerates having a Master because he needs one to exist.
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* UnhandHimVillain: When the Mother's Champion beats up Shinji and then starts strangling him, Sakura asks him to let him go, but it doesn't work until she uses a Command Spell, at which point he complies by hurling Shinji into a wall hard enough to crack it. Sakura notes she should have worded that more specifically.
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* TheGadfly: Brandon enjoys teasing Rin and Arturia.
* GroinAttack: The Stranger's Champion grabs Shinji Matou's nuts and squeezes when he tries to insult her. She only lets go when Sakura asks her to.
* GroinAttack: The Stranger's Champion grabs Shinji Matou's nuts and squeezes when he tries to insult her. She only lets go when Sakura asks her to.
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* GroinAttack: The Stranger's Champion grabs Shinji Matou's nuts and squeezes when he tries to insult her. She only lets go when Sakura asks her to.
* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic, Chrohea Thaiye, on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat, as this means Brandon knows how to fight and counter her.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic, Chrohea Thaiye, on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat, as this means Brandon knows how to fight and counter her.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's InTheHood: In her true form, the Stranger's Champion uses wears a black and white cloak with a hood that makes it almost impossible to see her Semblant Relic, Chrohea Thaiye, on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat, as this means Brandon knows how to fight and counter her.face.
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* NameAmnesia: As a member of the House of Black and White, the Stranger's Champion had given up her name long ago. Between that and all the different identities she had assumed, she says she cannot remember her original name.
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* NameAmnesia: As a member Faceless Man of the House of Black and White, the Stranger's Champion had given up her name long ago. Between that and all the different identities she had assumed, she says she cannot remember her original name.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: The Stranger's Champion tells Shinji that he's completely useless as he cannot contribute to their cause in any meaningful way and the only reason why Zouken keeps him around is to eventually sire the next Matou generation.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Stranger's Champion has the ability to take on the appearance of anyone who has died. She gains their memories as well, allowing her to impersonate them perfectly.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Stranger's Champion has the ability to take on the appearance of anyone who has died. It doesn't seem to matter where and when they died, as she is even able to appear as Justeaze von Einzbern, who had died over 200 years ago. She gains their memories as well, allowing her to impersonate them perfectly.
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* GroinAttack: The Stranger's Champion grabs Shinji Matou's nuts and squeezes when he tries to insult her. She only lets go when Sakura asks her to.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Sakura, Shinji, and the Mother's Champion have no idea who or what the Stranger's Champion is. They think she's a human mercenary hired by Zouken.
* NestedOwnership: Zouken gives the Book of the False Attendant to the Stranger's Champion, making her the Mother's Champion's Master.
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* VictoryByEndurance: Nymeria's Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken is meant to drain her opponent's stamina. When they fight, Arturia has to deal with that plus her poor Prana supply from Shirou.
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* VictoryByEndurance: Nymeria's Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken is meant to drain her opponent's stamina. When they fight, Arturia has to deal with that plus her poor Prana supply from Shirou.Shirou.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Stranger's Champion has the ability to take on the appearance of anyone who has died. She gains their memories as well, allowing her to impersonate them perfectly.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The Stranger's Champion has the ability to take on the appearance of anyone who has died. She gains their memories as well, allowing her to impersonate them perfectly.
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* MercyKill: Shortly after being summoned, the Stranger's Champion tries to convince Zouken Matou to commit suicide. When he demands to know why, she says she's seen how horrible his life is and believed the best service she could give him is the gift of death. He absolutely refuses and she accepts his decision.
* NameAmnesia: As a member of the House of Black and White, the Stranger's Champion had given up her name long ago. Between that and all the different identities she had assumed, she says she cannot remember her original name.
* NameAmnesia: As a member of the House of Black and White, the Stranger's Champion had given up her name long ago. Between that and all the different identities she had assumed, she says she cannot remember her original name.
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* BareHandedBladeBlock: Shirou tries to ambush Nymeria with a knife. She catches it with her thumb and index finger.
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* BareHandedBladeBlock: Shirou tries to ambush Nymeria with a knife. She catches it with her thumb and index finger.pinky, then snaps the blade.
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* ExactlyWhatIAimedAt: When Nymeria activates Chrohea Thaiye and throws it, Arturia sidesteps the spear, but it hits Nymeria's shield, which was behind her, and bounces back to stab her in the arm.
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* KillItWIthIce: Angra Mainyu and his trademark black mud both freeze solid.
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* KillItWIthIce: KillItWithIce: Angra Mainyu and his trademark black mud both freeze solid.
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* OhCrap: After Nymeria uses Chrohea Thaiye, she asks Arturia if she figured out her name, and Arturia is shocked to discover she does not.
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* AbnormalLimbRotationRange: Arturia finds that her artifical arm's wrist and elbow can rotate all the way around. She decides to train to take advantage of this for sword duels.
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* AbnormalLimbRotationRange: Arturia finds that her artifical artificial arm's wrist and elbow can rotate all the way around. She decides to train to take advantage of this for sword duels.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat, as this means Brandon knows how to fight and counter her.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic Relic, Chrohea Thaiye, on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat, as this means Brandon knows how to fight and counter her.
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* LuckilyMyShieldWillProtectMe: Nymeria has a circular shield that can float in the air and automatically position itself to defend her against attacks.
* MakingASplash: Nymeria knows Watermancy, though she's not an expert.
* MakingASplash: Nymeria knows Watermancy, though she's not an expert.
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* StupidSexyFlanders: One of Nymeria's Semblant Relics is Kingtamer, which causes all kings to become attracted to her. This includes Arturia, the King of Knights and Great Britain. This really upsets Arturia.
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* ConfusionFu: Nymeria is incredibly agile and both her body and her spear are extremely flexible, allowing her to attack from unexpected angles.
* EnemyMine: Shirou, Rin, and their summons agree to an alliance until the other combatants of the war have been dealt with.
* FreudianThreat: To get Brandon to stop teasing her, Rin threatens to use a Command Spell to make him rip off his own genitals.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat.retreat, as this means Brandon knows how to fight and counter her.
* KillItWIthIce: Angra Mainyu and his trademark black mud both freeze solid.
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* SacredHospitality: After making their alliance, Shirou invites Rin and Brandon into his home. Arturia protests, believing they'll simply attack them when they drop their guard. Brandon becomes incredibly offended and says he'll never violate Guest Right.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Angra Mainyu is killed before he has a chance to do anything.
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* SparingTheAces: After Shirou manages to evade her several times, Nymeria is impressed by his skill and determination and comments it would be a waste to kill him, so she tries to convince him to come with her and become her Master's apprentice. He refuses.
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* SparingTheAces: After Shirou manages to evade her several times, Nymeria is impressed by his skill and determination and comments it would be a waste to kill him, so she tries to convince him to come with her and become her Master's apprentice. He refuses.refuses, not wanting to join someone willing to kill innocent bystanders. Nymeria then decides to take him by force before Arturia is summoned to stop her.
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* AbnormalLimbRotationRange: Arturia finds that her artifical arm's wrist and elbow can rotate all the way around.
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* SparingTheAces: After Shirou manages to evade her several times, Nymeria is impressed by his skill and determination and comments it would be a waste to kill him, so she tries to convince him to come with her and become her Master's apprentice. He refuses.
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* AffectionateNickname: Arturia won't tell Brandon her real name, so he decides to call her Lannie, because she resembles a Lannister.
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* AbnormalLimbRotationRange: Arturia finds that her artifical arm's wrist and elbow can rotate all the way around.
* AffectionateNickname: Arturia won't tell Brandon her real name, so he decides to call herLannie, "Lannie", because she resembles a Lannister.
* AffectionateNickname: Arturia won't tell Brandon her real name, so he decides to call her
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* InsistentTerminology: The Champions use Westerosi terminology whenever possible. For example, Brandon calls Kirei Kotomine a septon instead of a priest and calls teachers maesters. Instead of Noble Phantasms, they use Semblant Relics and Bloodline Relics.
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** The Champions use Westerosi terminology whenever possible. For example, Brandon calls Kirei Kotomine a septon instead of a priest and calls teachers maesters. Instead of Noble Phantasms, they use Semblant Relics and BloodlineRelics.Relics.
** As she still thinks this is the Holy Grail War, Rin continues to use the "proper" terms and always calls Brandon "Archer".
** The Champions use Westerosi terminology whenever possible. For example, Brandon calls Kirei Kotomine a septon instead of a priest and calls teachers maesters. Instead of Noble Phantasms, they use Semblant Relics and Bloodline
** As she still thinks this is the Holy Grail War, Rin continues to use the "proper" terms and always calls Brandon "Archer".
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* StatuesqueStunner: Nymeria is 6'4'' and is considered attractive by several characters.
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* VictoryByEndurance: Nymeria's Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken is meant to drain her opponent's stamina. When they fight, Arturia has to deal with that plus her poor Prana supply from Shirou.
* VictoryByEndurance: Nymeria's Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken is meant to drain her opponent's stamina. When they fight, Arturia has to deal with that plus her poor Prana supply from Shirou.
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* AmputationStopsSpread: When Arturia's left arm is stabbed by Nymeria's spear, Brandon quickly chops it off before her body gets infected with Greyscale.
* ArtificialLimbs: Brandon replaces Arturia's arm with a metal one fashioned from her own gauntlet, which he colors gold. She is able to control it perfectly.
* ArtificialLimbs: Brandon replaces Arturia's arm with a metal one fashioned from her own gauntlet, which he colors gold. She is able to control it perfectly.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11518909/1/Fate-Long-Night Fate／Long Night]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' / ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6613523/der-Reichtangle der Reichtangle]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11518909/1/Fate-Long-Night Fate／Long Fate/Long Night]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' / ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6613523/der-Reichtangle der Reichtangle]].
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* AHandfulForAnEye: Shirou temporarily escapes Nymeria by throwing the contents of a pepper shaker at her face.
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* HomeFieldAdvantage: Nymeria's Bloodline Relic, called Unbowed, Unbent, Unbroken, makes the battlefield experience the harsh heat of the Dornish deserts. As she lived in Dorne, it doesn't bother her much, while her opponents will quickly get exhausted and thirsty.
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* CassandraTruth: Brandon repeatedly tries to explain to Rin about the Trial of Seven and the Champion, but she dismisses it.
* DishingOutDirt: Brandon has the ability to make walls and pillars erupt out of the ground.
* DishingOutDirt: Brandon has the ability to make walls and pillars erupt out of the ground.
* AnIcePerson: Brandon's body is deathly cold and anyone he touches feels it harshly.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat.
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* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat.retreat.
* PoisonedWeapons: Nymeria's spear, Chrohea Thaiye, is imbued with several poisons and diseases that she can switch at will. One of the nastiest is Tanatha Rhoyne, aka Greyscale.
* StatuesqueStunner: Nymeria is 6'4'' and is considered attractive by several characters.
* PoisonedWeapons: Nymeria's spear, Chrohea Thaiye, is imbued with several poisons and diseases that she can switch at will. One of the nastiest is Tanatha Rhoyne, aka Greyscale.
* StatuesqueStunner: Nymeria is 6'4'' and is considered attractive by several characters.
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* AffectionateNickname: Arturia won't tell Brandon her real name, so he decides to call her Lannie, because she resembles a Lannister.
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Rin Tohsaka summons the Maiden's Champion, who freely identifies himself as Brandon Stark aka Bran the Builder, but she does not listen to him when he tries to explain the changed circumstances. Still thinking she's in the Holy Grail War, she adamantly calls him Archer as she believes he's just messing with her when he calls himself the Maiden's Champion. Kirei Kotomine informs her that all seven "Servants" have already been summoned. Things take a turn for the strange when Brandon gets into a fight with the Smith's Champion. Shirou Emiya witnesses the battle and the Smith's Champion decides to kill him to eliminate the witness. Shirou manages to summon Servant Saber, Arturia Pendragon, by instinct to defend himself. Now an eighth in a trial of seven, under the banner of no god, Shirou and Saber struggle to make sense of this different war they have been dragged into.
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Rin Tohsaka summons the Maiden's Champion, who freely identifies himself as Brandon Stark aka Bran the Builder, but she does not listen to him when he tries to explain the changed circumstances. Still thinking she's in the Holy Grail War, she adamantly calls him Archer as she believes he's just messing with her when he calls himself the Maiden's Champion. Kirei Kotomine informs her that all seven "Servants" have already been summoned. Things take a turn for the strange when Brandon gets into a fight with the Smith's Champion. Shirou Emiya witnesses the battle and the Smith's Champion decides to kill him to eliminate the witness. Shirou manages to summon Servant Saber, Arturia Pendragon, by instinct to defend himself. Now an eighth in a trial of seven, under the banner of no god, Shirou and Saber struggle to make sense of this different war they have been dragged into.into.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Unlike regular Servants, the Champions did not receive any knowledge about the modern world, only knowledge about their own world, Westeros, so they are shocked by certain things like cars.
* InsistentTerminology: The Champions use Westerosi terminology whenever possible. For example, Brandon calls Kirei Kotomine a septon instead of a priest and calls teachers maesters. Instead of Noble Phantasms, they use Semblant Relics and Bloodline Relics.
* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWater: Unlike regular Servants, the Champions did not receive any knowledge about the modern world, only knowledge about their own world, Westeros, so they are shocked by certain things like cars.
* InsistentTerminology: The Champions use Westerosi terminology whenever possible. For example, Brandon calls Kirei Kotomine a septon instead of a priest and calls teachers maesters. Instead of Noble Phantasms, they use Semblant Relics and Bloodline Relics.
* IKnowYourTrueName: The Smith's Champion uses her Semblant Relic on Arturia and she is shocked when she doesn't recognize it nor her opponent. However, Brandon recognizes it and quickly identifies her as Nymeria Martell, Warrior Queen of the Rhoynar. This causes Nymeria to retreat.
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Rin Tohsaka summons the Maiden's Champion, who freely identifies himself as Brandon Stark aka Bran the Builder, but she does not listen to him when he tries to explainexplain the changed circumstances. Still thinking she's in the Holy Grail War, she adamantly calls him Archer as she believes he's just messing with her when he calls himself the Maiden's Champion. Kirei Kotomine informs her that all seven "Servants" have already been summoned. Things take a turn for the strange when Brandon gets into a fight with the Smith's Champion. Shirou Emiya witnesses the battle and the Smith's Champion decides to kill him to eliminate the witness. Shirou manages to summon Servant Saber, Arturia Pendragon, by instinct to defend himself. Now an eighth in a trial of seven, under the banner of no god, Shirou and Saber struggle to make sense of this different war they have been dragged into.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11518909/1/Fate-Long-Night Fate／Long Night]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' / ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6613523/der-Reichtangle der Reichtangle]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11518909/1/Fate-Long-Night Fate／Long Night]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' / ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6613523/der-Reichtangle der Reichtangle]].Reichtangle]].
During the Great Fuyuki Fire caused by the destruction of the Holy Grail, a cold and dark presence attacks and kills off Angra Mainyu, Servant Avenger and All the World's Evil. Ten years later, the seven Masters are completely unaware that this is no longer the Holy Grail War, but the Trial of Seven. Instead of seven Servants, seven Champions are summoned. These Champions each represent a member of the Faith of the Seven and superficially resemble the seven Servant classes, but are not them and have different skills and traits. Maiden's Champion resembles Archer, Smith's Champion resembles Lancer, Stranger's Champion resembles Assassin, Mother's Champion resembles Rider, Warrior's Champion resembles Berserker, Father's Champion resembles Saber, and Crone's Champion resembles Caster. The Master/Champion team to be the last one standing gets one wish, but the true purpose of the Trial is to decide which god gets to rule over all creation, at least until the next Trial.
Rin Tohsaka summons the Maiden's Champion, who freely identifies himself as Brandon Stark aka Bran the Builder, but she does not listen to him when he tries to explain
During the Great Fuyuki Fire caused by the destruction of the Holy Grail, a cold and dark presence attacks and kills off Angra Mainyu, Servant Avenger and All the World's Evil. Ten years later, the seven Masters are completely unaware that this is no longer the Holy Grail War, but the Trial of Seven. Instead of seven Servants, seven Champions are summoned. These Champions each represent a member of the Faith of the Seven and superficially resemble the seven Servant classes, but are not them and have different skills and traits. Maiden's Champion resembles Archer, Smith's Champion resembles Lancer, Stranger's Champion resembles Assassin, Mother's Champion resembles Rider, Warrior's Champion resembles Berserker, Father's Champion resembles Saber, and Crone's Champion resembles Caster. The Master/Champion team to be the last one standing gets one wish, but the true purpose of the Trial is to decide which god gets to rule over all creation, at least until the next Trial.
Rin Tohsaka summons the Maiden's Champion, who freely identifies himself as Brandon Stark aka Bran the Builder, but she does not listen to him when he tries to explain
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11518909/1/Fate-Long-Night Fate／Long Night]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' / ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' crossover by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6613523/der-Reichtangle der Reichtangle]].
