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* TheNeedsOfTheMany: [[spoiler: In the end, Lightning chooses to sacrifice the lives of the ponies in the stable in order to destroy the Darkness and save the Crystal Heart, instead of using the Crystal Heart to destroy the Darkness, which would have saved the ponies in the stable, but lost (or even destroyed) the Crystal Heart forever. With the Crystal Heart retrieved, it can be used to heal the wasteland and save many more lives.]]
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* ElaborateUndergroundBase: The stable itself is very large, and many parts aren't visited during the story.
** ''This stable was made to be a museum. Art, artefacts, technology, even the ponies in here... This place was designed to keep everything in here safely locked inside... Apparently most of them didn't know they were sharing this prison with... Something else.''
** ''This stable was made to be a museum. Art, artefacts, technology, even the ponies in here... This place was designed to keep everything in here safely locked inside... Apparently most of them didn't know they were sharing this prison with... Something else.''
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* HopeSpot: At the end of the story: [[spoiler: ''The darkness within the stable met a permanent end here, at least here that is. There will always be a darkness in the cold of night, but at least for now... The boogeyman is gone.'']]
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* SickeningCrunch: [[spoiler: The sound of the Darkness eating Diamond’s corpse.]]
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* SickeningCrunch: [[spoiler: The sound of the Darkness eating Diamond’s corpse.]]
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* TokenEvilTeammate: Mirage is extremely manipulative, condescending, and willing to kill the other members of the expedition if it means getting what she wants. Whenever she helps someone else, it’s ultimately just to help further her own goals.
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* XMeetsY: The story is like {{Fallout Fallout}} meets [[AlanWake Alan Wake]].
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* XMeetsY: The story is like Fallout {{Fallout Fallout}} meets [[AlanWake Alan Wake]].
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* AccidentalPun:AccidentalPun: Concerning the Crystal Heart
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* TheVirus: The Darkness [[spoiler: in the case of Sleet Gray.]]
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: The Crystal Heart is successfully retrieved, and its healing magic will likely go a long way to restoring Equestria to what it once was, but almost all of the ponies sent to find it are killed, and the two survivors are both haunted by what they experienced, in two different ways.]]
* ButThouMust: A voice tells Noria to go to the Overmare’s Office, through the Atrium. Noria decides that she wants to go to the Pipbuck Storage Area first, but the voice just tells her to go the Overmare’s Office.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Diamond Pick is eaten alive by the Darkness, and East Cost is frozen while being choked and pulled into the void.]]
* ButThouMust: A voice tells Noria to go to the Overmare’s Office, through the Atrium. Noria decides that she wants to go to the Pipbuck Storage Area first, but the voice just tells her to go the Overmare’s Office.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: [[spoiler: Diamond Pick is eaten alive by the Darkness, and East Cost is frozen while being choked and pulled into the void.]]
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* MindRape: How the Shadow operates if it doesn’t just try to kill you outright.
* NamedWeapons:
** Sleet Gray’s custom magical incineration pistol, Black Powder.
** The Lazer Phaser.
* NamedWeapons:
** Sleet Gray’s custom magical incineration pistol, Black Powder.
** The Lazer Phaser.
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* TheVirus: The Darkness [[spoiler: in the case of Sleet Gray.]]
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* SadisticChoice: Lightning has to make the choice of either destroying the Darkness but losing the Crystal Heart, and destroying the Darkness and saving the Crystal Heart but killing everyone else. [[spoiler: She chooses the latter.]]
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* ShoutOut
** The Darkness is implied to be a remnant of King Sombra’s magic.
** When Lightning turns on the light on her Pipbuck, the light creates a safe zone of light for a radius of 85 centimetres from the Darkness. This is a reference to Byakuya Kuchiki’s Bankai from Bleach, which has a safe zone of 85 centimetres.
** Nero remarks that a certain weapon looks like it was made in Pinkie’s dungeon, having heard stories of the notorious Pinkamena Diane Pie. Sounds kind of like a certain fanfiction…
** The Darkness is implied to be a remnant of King Sombra’s magic.
** When Lightning turns on the light on her Pipbuck, the light creates a safe zone of light for a radius of 85 centimetres from the Darkness. This is a reference to Byakuya Kuchiki’s Bankai from Bleach, which has a safe zone of 85 centimetres.
** Nero remarks that a certain weapon looks like it was made in Pinkie’s dungeon, having heard stories of the notorious Pinkamena Diane Pie. Sounds kind of like a certain fanfiction…
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* Irony: Nero finds a magazine titled "Ten tricks on how to pick a tough lock" immediately after losing a Lockpick on a tough lock.
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* Irony: {{Irony}}: Nero finds a magazine titled "Ten tricks on how to pick a tough lock" immediately after losing a Lockpick lockpick on a tough lock.
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* Irony: Nero finds a magazine titled "Ten tricks on how to pick a tough lock" immediately after losing a Lockpick on a tough lock.
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** Lemon Strudle towards Cadence.
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** Lemon Strudle towards Cadence.[[spoiler:Cadence.]]
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* FanGirl
** Lightning towards Twilight Sparkle.
** Lemon Strudle towards Cadence.
** Lightning towards Twilight Sparkle.
** Lemon Strudle towards Cadence.
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* DeathTrap: The stable, naturally. It’s mentioned how many ponies came looking for the place and never returned.
* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler: Sleet Gray closes East Cost’s eyes after he’s killed.]]
* [[spoiler: EatenAlive: Diamond Pick.]]
* EldritchLocation: The stable is this, even by Fallout: Equestria standards.
* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler: Sleet Gray closes East Cost’s eyes after he’s killed.]]
* [[spoiler: EatenAlive: Diamond Pick.]]
* EldritchLocation: The stable is this, even by Fallout: Equestria standards.
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* XMeetsY: The story is like Fallout Fallout meets [[AlanWake Alan Wake]].
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** [[spoiler: Cadence]]: I made a punny. Ohhh [[spoiler: Cadence...]] You still got it...
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** [[spoiler: Cadence]]: I know in my heart, you'll do the right thing...\\
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** [[spoiler: Cadence]]: I made a punny. Ohhh [[spoiler: Cadence...]] You still got it...
** [[spoiler: Cadence]]: I know in my heart, you'll do the right thing...\\
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** [[spoiler: Cadence]]: I made a punny. Ohhh [[spoiler: Cadence...]] You still got it...
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: The Darkness. It can’t be reasoned with, is always trying to kill you, and has a twisted sense of humour.
-->'''Lightning:''' What do you want with me? If you wanted to kill me you would have done it by now, so clearly you want me for something; so what is it?\\
'''Darkness:''' ''Oh? What if I simply enjoy getting to know lunch? Muahahaheheha…''
-->'''Lightning:''' What do you want with me? If you wanted to kill me you would have done it by now, so clearly you want me for something; so what is it?\\
'''Darkness:''' ''Oh? What if I simply enjoy getting to know lunch? Muahahaheheha…''
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'''What! I meant what we can get off! Meaning the terminal!\\terminal!
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-->'''Trinity:''' Never mind, awesome job! Let's go see if we can get off!\\
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-->'''Trinity:''' Never mind, awesome job! Let's go see if we can get off!\\
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* FriendOrFoe: Nero’s Echo Locator can determine if something is there, but not whether or not it’s hostile.
* GenkiGirl: Trinity, you are so... random.
* MacGuffin:the The Crystal Heart.
* GenkiGirl: Trinity, you are so... random.
* MacGuffin:
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* Macguffin: MacGuffin: the Crystal Heart.
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* Macguffin: the Crystal Heart.
* PutOnABus: Quick Buck, Debonaire, and Sky Lock all appear once and are then never heard from again.
* RecursiveFanfiction: Is one for the original Fallout: Equestria.
* RedHerring: Near the beginning of the story, Lightning picks up a key and puts it in her saddlebag. Towards the end of the story, she comes across a locked door that she can’t hack or pick, so she tries the key she picked up. It doesn’t work.
* PutOnABus: Quick Buck, Debonaire, and Sky Lock all appear once and are then never heard from again.
* RecursiveFanfiction: Is one for the original Fallout: Equestria.
* RedHerring: Near the beginning of the story, Lightning picks up a key and puts it in her saddlebag. Towards the end of the story, she comes across a locked door that she can’t hack or pick, so she tries the key she picked up. It doesn’t work.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: Sleet Gray.
* SequelHook: [[spoiler: ''“With the Crystal Heart in tow, history awaits your decision. What will be done about the heart, is a story for another day...”'']]
* TalkingToThemselves: Most of the characters, since they spend most of the story on their own.
* TokenRomance: Nero and Trinity.
* TragicKeepsake: Cadences’ Kiss for Lightning.
* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection: A mysterious voice speaks to Noria in her mind, telling her to get to the Overmare’s Office, and based on how it sounds, it’s likely not the Darkness. [[spoiler: May be Cadence.]]
* YourMindMakesItReal: The Darkness’ illusions, if you’re not smart enough to see through them.
* SequelHook: [[spoiler: ''“With the Crystal Heart in tow, history awaits your decision. What will be done about the heart, is a story for another day...”'']]
* TalkingToThemselves: Most of the characters, since they spend most of the story on their own.
* TokenRomance: Nero and Trinity.
* TragicKeepsake: Cadences’ Kiss for Lightning.
* VoiceWithAnInternetConnection: A mysterious voice speaks to Noria in her mind, telling her to get to the Overmare’s Office, and based on how it sounds, it’s likely not the Darkness. [[spoiler: May be Cadence.]]
* YourMindMakesItReal: The Darkness’ illusions, if you’re not smart enough to see through them.
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* Cyborg: Over half the player characters.
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* Cyborg: {{Cyborg}}: Over half the player characters.
* XMeetsY: The story is like[[Fallout Fallout]] Fallout Fallout meets [[AlanWake Alan Wake]].
* XMeetsY: The story is like
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* XMeetsY: The story is like [[Fallout3 [[Fallout Fallout]] meets [[AlanWake Alan Wake]].
