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* GettingTheBandBackTogether: The later parts of the story have multiple characters from past adventures joining the resistance to take down Bowser, Ludwig, and the Seven Stars.
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Not to be confused with Fanfic/FallenKing, a ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic with a similar premise and name.
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Not to be confused with Fanfic/FallenKing, ''Fanfic/FallenKing'', a ''Anime/YuGiOh'' fanfic with a similar premise and name.
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* RousingSpeech: Chapter 56 has each of the respective sides of the war, minus Ludwig, give one to their assembled armies as they begin to converge on the final battlefield.
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* InternalReveal: Chapter 42 has Kammy learn who was behind [[spoiler:Lavaria's death]] and vowing to bring the news to Bowser at once.
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* InternalReveal: Chapter 42 has Kammy learn who was behind [[spoiler:Lavaria's death]] and vowing to bring the news to Bowser at once. Chapter 55 has a majority of the cast learn the news.
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* WholeEpisodeFlashback: A majority of chapter 55 is a flashback detailing [[spoiler:Lavaria's death]].
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: In Chapter 53 [[spoiler:Peach]] gives such a speech to [[spoiler:Yoshi]] and offers him a chance to atone for his crimes and become the hero he once was.
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* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Rosalina once loved the world, but is now complicit in Antonio's plan to reshape it]].
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* KingKoopaCopy: Discussed and deconstructed in-universe, with K. Rool being bitter over being thought of as a second-rate Bowser. Cobal inspires him to fight by saying he can be more than that.
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* HeroicSecondWind: [[spoiler:During his battle with Roy, Luigi is beaten down, but remembers all the people he’s fighting for and defeats Roy with Thunderhand.]]
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* PurpleIsPowerful: Skallz Fortiscule has the rank of Purple Star in the Seven Stars, wears a fedora with a purple stripe, and is the second-most powerful being in the world.
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* SuperSpeed: Antonio was described by Kooperly as moving like a flash of light. [[spoiler:He shows this by moving fast enough to hold a knife to Skallz’s throat in the blink of an eye.]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The case for all four major factions in the setting:
** The resistance has Luigi, who can wreck tanks with one punch and even destroy Imperial buildings, as its leader. Other powerful heroes make up the inner circle like Mario’s old partners.
** The Koopa Empire is led by Emperor Bowser and the Koopa High Command as well as Bowser Jr and three of the Koopalings. While Bowser is weaker than before, he is still formidable, and Bowser Jr can fight Luigi evenly. The High Command is also quite powerful, consisting of Bowser’s strongest warriors.
** The Neo Empire is headed by Ludwig, Roy, and Larry. Larry can easily take on multiple heroes at the same time and Roy almost beat Luigi, while Ludwig easily defeated Morton Jr.
** Seven Stars is led by a Board of Directors consisting of some powerful fighters like Sthnadlash, the Silver Star, who can take on Cobal’s entire group. Above him is Skallz Fortiscule, the Purple Star who easily overpowered all the escapees of Stoneshell Prison singlehandedly. Finally their leader, the Grand Star [[spoiler:Antonio]], is the most powerful fighter in the world.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Skallz Fortiscule wears a fancy white suit and fedora, and is powerful enough to mow down many strong heroes at the same time.
** The resistance has Luigi, who can wreck tanks with one punch and even destroy Imperial buildings, as its leader. Other powerful heroes make up the inner circle like Mario’s old partners.
** The Koopa Empire is led by Emperor Bowser and the Koopa High Command as well as Bowser Jr and three of the Koopalings. While Bowser is weaker than before, he is still formidable, and Bowser Jr can fight Luigi evenly. The High Command is also quite powerful, consisting of Bowser’s strongest warriors.
** The Neo Empire is headed by Ludwig, Roy, and Larry. Larry can easily take on multiple heroes at the same time and Roy almost beat Luigi, while Ludwig easily defeated Morton Jr.
** Seven Stars is led by a Board of Directors consisting of some powerful fighters like Sthnadlash, the Silver Star, who can take on Cobal’s entire group. Above him is Skallz Fortiscule, the Purple Star who easily overpowered all the escapees of Stoneshell Prison singlehandedly. Finally their leader, the Grand Star [[spoiler:Antonio]], is the most powerful fighter in the world.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Skallz Fortiscule wears a fancy white suit and fedora, and is powerful enough to mow down many strong heroes at the same time.
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* CurbStompBattle:
** Luigi, Cobal, and the Toads easily defeat Boom Boom’s garrison in Peach’s Castle in their first battle.
** Ludwig’s Neo Empire crushes the sectors of Iggy, Lemmy, and Morton.
** Strike quickly apprehends Cobal when he catches him calling Luigi.
** Skallz Fortiscule isn’t even hit once when fighting the Stoneshell Prison escapees, and they only barely escape from him.
** Larry easily defeats Cobal and company in their battle, even calling the fight boring.
** Luigi, Cobal, and the Toads easily defeat Boom Boom’s garrison in Peach’s Castle in their first battle.
** Ludwig’s Neo Empire crushes the sectors of Iggy, Lemmy, and Morton.
** Strike quickly apprehends Cobal when he catches him calling Luigi.
** Skallz Fortiscule isn’t even hit once when fighting the Stoneshell Prison escapees, and they only barely escape from him.
** Larry easily defeats Cobal and company in their battle, even calling the fight boring.
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* MindOverMatter: Skallz Fortiscule’s knowledge of Sun’s Amber Eyes magic grants him powerful telekinesis, even enough to lift entire towers.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: Mario’s father Antonio and Bowser’s father Morton were the most powerful fighters the world had ever known, destroying mountains and creating canyons in their battles.
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* YouCantFightFate: [[spoiler:Rosalina believes the future can't be changed and tries to get Cobal to give up while he can]].
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** Larry's battle with the armies is completely hopeless until [[spoiler: a freed Koops joins the fight and takes out Larry]].
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** Larry's battle with the armies Luigi's army is completely hopeless for them until [[spoiler: a freed Koops joins the fight and takes out Larry]].
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* BigDamnHeroes: In the Second Battle of Toad Town, despite Luigi's strengths the heroes are outnumbered until the prison escapees arrive to turn the tide.
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* BigDamnHeroes: BigDamnHeroes:
** In the Second Battle of Toad Town, despite Luigi's strengths the heroes are outnumbered until the prison escapees arrive to turn thetide.tide.
** Larry's battle with the armies is completely hopeless until [[spoiler: a freed Koops joins the fight and takes out Larry]].
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** Larry's battle with the armies is completely hopeless until [[spoiler: a freed Koops joins the fight and takes out Larry]].
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* {{Geas}}: Koops is kept in line via a magic rune that will kill him and his entire family if he disobeys.
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* {{Geas}}: Koops is kept in line via a magic Slave Seal rune that will kill him and his entire family if he disobeys.disobeys. [[spoiler:When Vivian burns it off, he's freed]].
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* ChekhovMIA: Peach goes missing at the start of the story, and Bowser's goal for the next 20 years is finding her. [[spoiler:Chapter 45 shows she's in Antonio's clutches]].
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* ChekhovMIA: Peach goes missing at the start of the story, and Bowser's goal for the next 20 years is finding her. [[spoiler:Chapter 45 shows she's in Antonio's clutches]].clutches, and chapter 46 has her finally reappear in the flesh]].
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* ChekhovMIA: Peach goes missing at the start of the story, and Bowser's goal for the next 20 years is finding her. [[spoiler:Chapter 45 shows she's in Antonio's clutches]].
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* FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler:Larry sends Koops out to deal with Mario's old partners]].
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* {{Geas}}: Koops is kept in line via a magic rune that, if he disobeys, will kill him and his entire family.
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* BigBad: Chapter 38 reveals that [[spoiler:Antonio]] planned out the course of Mario and Bowser's conflict, with ultimate plans to converge the Star Children and create a world of silence.
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Antonio]] plans a Societal Collapse to remove magic, wishes, and anything remotely powerful.
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Antonio]] plans a Societal Collapse Disruption to remove magic, wishes, and anything remotely powerful.
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* ApocalypseHow: [[spoiler:Antonio]] plans a Societal Collapse to remove magic, wishes, and anything remotely powerful.
* FreudianExcuse: [[spoiler:Antonio's plans of a world without powers stem from his highly destructive battles with Morton, which ravaged the kingdom and killed his wife]].
* {{Geas}}: Koops is kept in line via a magic rune that, if he disobeys, will kill him and his entire family.
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* OneManArmy: [[spoiler:Skallz Fortiscule fought in the first Koopa War and takes on all of the prison escapees himself, taking a sacrifice and a ''lot'' of luck to escape from him. Antonio is even ''stronger'']].
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* OneManArmy: [[spoiler:Skallz Fortiscule fought in the first Koopa War and takes on all of the prison escapees himself, taking a sacrifice and a ''lot'' of luck to escape from him. Antonio is even ''stronger'']].''stronger'', and his battles with Morton reshaped the landscapes of both kingdoms]].
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* WeUsedToBeFriends: Antonio and Morton were friends in their youth, until the First Koopa War made them enemies.
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* IveComeTooFar: By chapter 43, the only reason [[spoiler:Yoshi sticks with Fire Flower]] is because he feels he's come too far to stop.
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* LaResistance: The Fire Flower resistance, led by [[spoiler:Yoshi]], has been resisting Bowser since he took the world.
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* InternalReveal: Chapter 42 has Kammy learn who was behind [[spoiler:Lavaria's death]] and vowing to bring the news to Bowser at once.
* LaResistance: The Fire Flower resistance, led by [[spoiler:Yoshi]], has been resisting Bowser since he took the world. Luigi later leads his own branch of the resistance.
* LaResistance: The Fire Flower resistance, led by [[spoiler:Yoshi]], has been resisting Bowser since he took the world. Luigi later leads his own branch of the resistance.
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Mario was kept alive through magic and technology, suspended in amber crystal until he's ready to be awakened]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [[spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and Antonio is the Grand Star with plans to de-power everyone powerful in the world, especially the Star Children]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [[spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and his father Antonio is the Grand Star with plans to de-power everyone powerful in the world, especially the Star Children]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13101437/1/Fallen-Kingdom The story can be found here.]]
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The story can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13101437/1/Fallen-Kingdom The story can be found here.]]
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* BigBad: Chapter 38 reveals that [[spoiler:Antonio]] planned out the course of Mario and Bowser's conflict, with ultimate plans to converge the Star Children to create a world of silence.
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* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:Bowser's queen, Lavaria, was seemingly murdered after Bowser Jr. was born, and her death caused Bowser to renew his focus on his childhood crush Peach]].
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* TheLostLenore: [[spoiler:Bowser's queen, Lavaria, was seemingly murdered after Bowser Jr. was born, and her death caused Bowser to renew his focus on his childhood crush Peach]].
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* DePower: [[spoiler:Antonio plans to de-power everyone extraordinary in the Mushroom Kingdom to create a balanced world]].
* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler:Antonio]] laments the destructive powers of the Star Children and wants to bring about a world of balance, ignoring that he and his organization are incredibly powerful themselves.
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler:Mario was kept alive through magic and technology, suspended in amber crystal until he's ready to be awakened]].
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* VisionaryVillain: Ludwig laments his siblings' creative droughts and vows to expand the Koopa Empire into space.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [[spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and Antonio is the Grand Star with plans to do ''something'' to the world and the Star Children]].
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* VisionaryVillain: VisionaryVillain:
** Ludwig laments his siblings' creative droughts and vows to expand the Koopa Empire into space.
** [[spoiler:Antonio]] has grand visions of a world of balance without super-powered beings shaping destinies.
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 38 has a double-whammy. [[spoiler:Mario is being kept alive by Seven Stars, and Antonio is the Grand Star with plans todo ''something'' to de-power everyone powerful in the world and world, especially the Star Children]].
** Ludwig laments his siblings' creative droughts and vows to expand the Koopa Empire into space.
** [[spoiler:Antonio]] has grand visions of a world of balance without super-powered beings shaping destinies.
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* OneManArmy: [[spoiler:Skallz Fortiscule fought in the first Koopa War and takes on all of the prison escapees himself, taking a sacrifice and a ''lot'' of luck to escape from him]].
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* OneManArmy: [[spoiler:Skallz Fortiscule fought in the first Koopa War and takes on all of the prison escapees himself, taking a sacrifice and a ''lot'' of luck to escape from him]].him. Antonio is even ''stronger'']].
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* {{Precursors}}: The deceased Antonio, his brother Giovanni, and Emperor Morton's powers are said to far surpass Mario, Luigi, and Bowser's, and the First Koopa War sowed the seeds of Mario and Bowser's conflict.
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* {{Precursors}}: The deceased Antonio, his brother Giovanni, and Emperor Morton's powers are said to far surpass Mario, Luigi, and Bowser's, and the First Koopa War sowed the seeds of Mario and Bowser's conflict. [[spoiler:Subverted with Antonio, who's still alive and very active in reshaping the world]].
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* HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler:Yoshi][ slowly became as bad as, if not worse, than the Koopas he fought over time.
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Now, 20 years later, Luigi steps up to dismantle the Koopa Empire castle by castle, joined by Cobal the Yoshi kid and the Fire Flower resistance. With in-fighting among the empire weakening it from within, this may be the only chance at restoring peace to the Mushroom World once and for all.
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Now, 20 years later, Luigi steps up to dismantle the Koopa Empire castle by castle, joined by Cobal the Yoshi kid and the Fire Flower resistance. With kid. An uphill battle awaits them, but with in-fighting among the empire weakening it from within, this may be the only chance at restoring peace to the Mushroom World once and for all.
* BigDamnHeroes: In the Second Battle of Toad Town, despite Luigi's strengths the heroes are outnumbered until the prison escapees arrive to turn the tide.
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler:Yoshi][ slowly became as bad as, if not worse, than the Koopas he fought over time.
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* {{Precursors}}: The deceased Antonio Antonio, his brother Giovanni, and Emperor Morton's powers are said to far surpass Mario Mario, Luigi, and Bowser's, and the First Koopa War sowed the seeds of Mario and Bowser's conflict.
