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!Exiled contains examples of the following: (Gatecrash goes in its own section below)
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* RealityEnsues:
** A weapon designed to defeat DeflectorShields and future armour is going to do nasty things to people who only have present-day non-Tinkertech gear. Sebastian even lampshades it.
** All the damage Taylor did to [[spoiler:Ayres]] after the Leviathan attack ends up fatally wounding him and he dies before help can come. No "didn't confirm the kill = NotQuiteDead, he'll be back later" trope in effect here.
** A weapon designed to defeat DeflectorShields and future armour is going to do nasty things to people who only have present-day non-Tinkertech gear. Sebastian even lampshades it.
** All the damage Taylor did to [[spoiler:Ayres]] after the Leviathan attack ends up fatally wounding him and he dies before help can come. No "didn't confirm the kill = NotQuiteDead, he'll be back later" trope in effect here.
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** In 5.11 Sebastian tells [[spoiler:Bakuda]] that "[[Disney/AladdinTheReturnOfJafar You’d be absolutely astounded what we, as a species, can live through.]]"
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** In 5.11 Sebastian tells [[spoiler:Bakuda]] that "[[Disney/AladdinTheReturnOfJafar "[[WesternAnimation/AladdinTheReturnOfJafar You’d be absolutely astounded what we, as a species, can live through.]]"
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Ayres's team had three members. [[spoiler:He and Lo Wang are dead by story end]], but nothing is known about the fate of the third.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Ayres's team had three members. [[spoiler:He and Lo Wang are dead by story end]], but nothing is known about the fate of the third. [[spoiler:''Gatecrash'' reveals Bellatrix is part of the conspiracy behind Sebastian's appearance on Earth Bet and is still alive]].
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* AndIMustScream: Taylor killed [[spoiler:Heartbreaker]] by having her insects eat him from the outside in.
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* AndIMustScream: Taylor killed [[spoiler:Heartbreaker]] by having her insects eat him from the outside in. It's not stated how long it took, but he was alive and struggling for at least fifteen minutes of it.
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* WomanScorned: After being brainwashed by [[spoiler:Heartbreaker]], Taylor was desperately in love with him. However his only interest in Taylor was getting to Dinah and he had no intention of ever consummating their "relationship". After learning her love would never be returned, Taylor managed to work herself into a fury and proceeded to kill him ''very slowly''.
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* WomanScorned: After being brainwashed by [[spoiler:Heartbreaker]], Taylor was desperately in love with him. However his only interest in Taylor was getting to Dinah and he had no intention of ever consummating their "relationship". After learning her love would never be returned, returned and that going through with his plan would destroy her friendships, Taylor managed decided to work herself into a fury and proceeded to kill him ''very slowly''.destroy everything she cared about personally, starting with him.
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* AndIMustScream: Taylor killed [[spoiler:Heartbreaker]] by having her insects eat him from the outside in.
* BrainwashResidue: Taylor was captured and brainwashed by [[spoiler:Heartbreaker]] between the two stories but managed to kill him and escape. Years later she's still torn by the love he implanted in her and her knowledge that it's fake. [[spoiler:The Rachni help clear it away]].
* FakeMemories: Sebastian's memories on Earth Bet are revealed to have been edited, including substituting [[spoiler:Tali as the love interest rather than Taylor]].
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Sebastian's arrival in Taylor's dimension is revealed to be part of a plan by [[spoiler:an alternate Sebastian and Taylor trying to reach a "golden ending". They've repeated this series of events multiple times and only stop because the current Taylor finds out and demands they do so]].
* WomanScorned: After being brainwashed by [[spoiler:Heartbreaker]], Taylor was desperately in love with him. However his only interest in Taylor was getting to Dinah and he had no intention of ever consummating their "relationship". After learning her love would never be returned, Taylor managed to work herself into a fury and proceeded to kill him ''very slowly''.
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* DynamicEntry: In 1.5 Sebastian Charges into Lung.
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* DynamicEntry: In 1.5 Sebastian Charges into Lung. Although to be fair, Biotic Charge is basically "This Trope: The Superpower."
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** [[Anime/{{Robotech}} Ayres]] ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15961834/ confirmed by the author]]) leads a mercenary team that includes a member named [[Main/ShadowWarrior Lo Wang]].
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** [[Anime/{{Robotech}} Ayres]] leads a mercenary team that includes a member named [[VideoGame/ShadowWarrior1997 Lo Wang]] ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15961834/ confirmed by the author]]) leads a mercenary team that includes a member named [[Main/ShadowWarrior Lo Wang]].author]]).
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** Paige's new song in 7.7 is none other than [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVUORmlk4p4 Look Up!]] from Anime/{{Robotech}}.
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** Paige's new song in 7.7 is none other than [[https://www.''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVUORmlk4p4 Look Up!]] Up!]]'' from Anime/{{Robotech}}.''Anime/{{Robotech}}''.
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** [[Anime/{{Robotech}} Ayres]] leads a mercenary team that includes a member named [[Main/ShadowWarrior Lo Wang]].
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** Paige's new song in 7.7 is none other than [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVUORmlk4p4 Look Up!]] from Anime/{{Robotech}}.
** [[Anime/{{Robotech}} Ayres]] ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15961834/ confirmed by the author]]) leads a mercenary team that includes a member named [[Main/ShadowWarrior Lo Wang]].
** [[Anime/{{Robotech}} Ayres]] ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/15961834/ confirmed by the author]]) leads a mercenary team that includes a member named [[Main/ShadowWarrior Lo Wang]].
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** In 4.5 Sebastian has a fake ID created for Taylor with the name Allison Gunn, the same name that FShep (would have) used in Kasumi's Loyalty mission in [=ME2=].
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** In 4.5 Sebastian has a fake ID created for Taylor with the name Allison Gunn, the same name that FShep (would have) used by fem!Shep in Kasumi's Loyalty mission in [=ME2=].
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** In 4.5 Sebastian has a fake ID created for Taylor with the name Allison Gunn – the same name that FShep (would have) used in Kasumi's Loyalty mission in ME2.
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** In 4.5 Sebastian has a fake ID created for Taylor with the name Allison Gunn – Gunn, the same name that FShep (would have) used in Kasumi's Loyalty mission in ME2.[=ME2=].
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* MythologyGag: In 5.5 there's a "Project: Sir Isaac Newton" that is described as "the deadliest son of a bitch in space."
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* MythologyGag: In 5.5 there's a "Project: Sir Isaac Newton" that is described as "the deadliest son of a bitch in space."space".
** In 4.5 Sebastian has a fake ID created for Taylor with the name Allison Gunn – the same name that FShep (would have) used in Kasumi's Loyalty mission in ME2.
** In 4.5 Sebastian has a fake ID created for Taylor with the name Allison Gunn – the same name that FShep (would have) used in Kasumi's Loyalty mission in ME2.
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** In 5.11 [[spoiler:Bakuda]] finally experiences fear when she realises what Sebastian is about to do.
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** In 5.11 [[spoiler:Bakuda]] finally experiences fear when she realises realizes what Sebastian is about to do.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/exiled-worm-me.291414/ Exiled]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/exiled-worm-me.291414/ Exiled]]'' is a ''Franchise/MassEffect[=/=]Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover fanfic.
fanfic. Edited and cleaned up chapters can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10949432/1/Exiled FF.net]] for the first 3 arcs
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up. (In fact according to http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/16661191/ WoG Danny dies during Leviathan's attack while searching for Taylor]]
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up. (In fact according to http://forums.[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/16661191/ WoG WoG]] Danny dies during Leviathan's attack while searching for Taylor]]
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up. (In fact according to []http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/16661191/ WoG]] Danny dies during Leviathan's attack while searching for Taylor]]
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up. (In fact according to []http://forums.http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/16661191/ WoG]] WoG Danny dies during Leviathan's attack while searching for Taylor]]
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up. (In fact according to [http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/16661191/ WoG] Danny dies during Leviathan's attack while searching for Taylor]]
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up. (In fact according to [http://forums.[]http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/16661191/ WoG] WoG]] Danny dies during Leviathan's attack while searching for Taylor]]
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up.]]
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** 5.6. [[spoiler:Taylor falls out with Danny and leaves her home. And if the foreshadowing from the framing device is any indication, they never get to make up.]] (In fact according to [http://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/16661191/ WoG] Danny dies during Leviathan's attack while searching for Taylor]]
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* LeftHanging: A few things remain unresolved by the first story's end. For example -
** What the deal with Ayres's employers really is.
** Whether [[spoiler:Sebastian is the real Shepard, only de-aged, or a clone.]]
** What the deal with Ayres's employers really is.
** Whether [[spoiler:Sebastian is the real Shepard, only de-aged, or a clone.]]
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** All the damage Taylor did to [[spoiler:Ayres]] ends up fatally wounding him and he dies before help can come. No "didn't confirm the kill = he'll be back later" trope in effect here.
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** All the damage Taylor did to [[spoiler:Ayres]] after the Leviathan attack ends up fatally wounding him and he dies before help can come. No "didn't confirm the kill = NotQuiteDead, he'll be back later" trope in effect here.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Ayres's team had three members. [[spoiler:He and Lo Wang are dead by story end]], but nothing is known about the fate of the third.
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!Gatecrash contains examples of the following (Due to unavoidable {{Late Arrival Spoiler}}s, nothing regarding Exiled will be spoiler-marked!):