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Can be found on Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12752068/ here]]) and Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/395359/ here]]).
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Can be found on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12752068/ Fanfiction.net]] and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/395359/ SpaceBattles]].
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Can be found on [[https://www.Website/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12752068/ Fanfiction.net]] here]]) and [[https://forums.Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/395359/ SpaceBattles]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: Danny triggers as a Tinker and starts building Terran Dominion technology, up to and including a [[HumongousMecha Thor]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Danny triggers as a Tinker and starts building Terran Dominion technology, up to and including a [[HumongousMecha Thor]]Thor]].
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* CrazyPrepared: Taylor ramps up her quest to gain immunity to drugs after getting her severed hand taken by Armsmaster, even swapping spit with Newter. [[spoiler: Armsmaster's tranquillizer cocktail, which had a number of Tinker-derived drugs, including an immunosuppressant to delay her adaptation to the cocktail, as well as enough concentrated carfentanil (which is about ''10,000 times'' more potent than morphine) to kill a blue whale, fails to knock her out because it was partially derived from Newter's compounds, and just makes her high as a kite instead]].
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* CrazyPrepared: Taylor ramps up her quest to gain immunity to drugs after getting her severed hand taken by Armsmaster, even swapping spit with Newter. [[spoiler: Armsmaster's tranquillizer tranquilizer cocktail, which had a number of Tinker-derived drugs, including an immunosuppressant to delay her adaptation to the cocktail, as well as enough concentrated carfentanil (which is about ''10,000 times'' more potent than morphine) to kill a blue whale, fails to knock her out because it was partially derived from Newter's compounds, and just makes her high as a kite instead]].
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* DrivenToSuicide: Taylor considered suicide after her trigger mutated her, first by slitting her wrists, then stepping into the bay with rocks in her pockets when that failed. She ultimately decided not to go through with it... only for Sophia to try to kill her.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Taylor considered suicide after her trigger mutated her, first by slitting her wrists, then stepping into the bay with rocks in her pockets when that failed. She ultimately decided not to go through with it... only [[spoiler:only for Sophia to try to kill her.her]].
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: How the story ends, with Taylor pondering the future while several potential plot hooks are set up, [[spoiler:like a letter from Bonesaw]].
