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** The author notes this about what Kakashi's teaching style while other characters poke holes in why it doesn't work:

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* DudeNotFunny: In universe The jokes about how much of a dense dork or "dead-last" Naruto is, stop being used by characters as it is insulting to him and also not true.

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* DudeNotFunny: In universe InUniverse The jokes about how much of a dense dork or "dead-last" Naruto is, stop being used by characters as it is insulting to him and also not true.



* FragileSpeedster: Hinata is a mix of this and GlassCannon. She can cause a large amount of damage due to her Jyuuken training and while she's fast and good and evading attacks thanks to Tsunade's training she still can't take too much damage before she's taken out of the fight.



* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The advisers council in Konoha manage to cause more problems. Lampshaded as Tsunade notes that Konoha should be a military dictatorship instead of her having to worry about what the council thinks. It's shown the other villages never have to deal with this trope making proving her point.

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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The advisers council in Konoha manage to cause more problems. Lampshaded as Tsunade notes that Konoha should be a military dictatorship instead of her having to worry about what the council thinks. It's shown the other villages never have to deal with this trope making proving her point.


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* WeakButSkilled: To some extent, Naruto. He's hasn't got much in the way of long range techniques or ones that cause damage except the Rasengan but covers for it with a more refined and structured fighting style that helps him take advantage of his creativity and ConfusionFu.

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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Hyuuga of course. When they prefer [[spoiler: using infighting to prevent branch members from leaving the clan and getting their caged bird seals removed to actually changing the clan]], it's really a no-brainer.



* ChekovsGun: Kimimaro's body. Mentioned during an impromptu debriefing by Naruto and found and stored for later by Tsunade. It gets forgotten for an entire arc but [[spoiler: Tsunade and Shizune later get to dissect it and learn more about the curse seal. Which then makes what they learned from the autopsy help them find a "cure" for Isaribi.]]
* ChekovsSkill: Naruto spends the first two arcs incapacitated and forced to work on his tactics, diplomacy and control. Does this pay off immensely [[spoiler: during his fight with the Chameleon summon and later during the assault on Amachi's base.]]

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* ChekovsGun: ChekhovsGun: Kimimaro's body. Mentioned during an impromptu debriefing by Naruto and found and stored for later by Tsunade. It gets forgotten for an entire arc but [[spoiler: Tsunade and Shizune later get to dissect it and learn more about the curse seal. Which then makes what they learned from the autopsy help them find a "cure" for Isaribi.]]
* ChekovsSkill: ChekhovsSkill: Naruto spends the first two arcs incapacitated and forced to work on his tactics, diplomacy and control. Does this pay This pays off immensely [[spoiler: during his fight with the Chameleon summon and later summon, during the assault on Amachi's base.base and in Crater City.]]


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* TelescopingStaff: Naruto ends up signing the Monkey summoning scroll and uses Enma from time to time.


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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The advisers council in Konoha manage to cause more problems. Lampshaded as Tsunade notes that Konoha should be a military dictatorship instead of her having to worry about what the council thinks. It's shown the other villages never have to deal with this trope making proving her point.


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** Hinata has killed to protect Naruto and has on numerous occasions shown a desire to be by his side.

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* BrokenBird: Hinata shows signs of emotional abuse, the knowledge of the other seals placed has (in some way) emotionally crushed Naruto and Isaribi already went through something similar to Naruto [[spoiler: but the "cure" Tsunade gives her makes one wonder she made the right choice in taking it.]]

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* BrokenBird: Hinata shows signs of emotional abuse, the knowledge of the other seals placed has (in some way) emotionally crushed Naruto and Isaribi already went through something similar to Naruto [[spoiler: but the "cure" Tsunade gives her makes one wonder if she made the right choice in taking it.]]



* ChekovsGun: Kimimaro's body. Mentioned during an impromptu debriefing by Naruto and found and stored for later by Tsunade. It gets forgotten for an entire arc but [[spoiler: Tsunade and Shizune later get to dissect it and learn more about the curse seal. Which then makes what they learned from the autopsy help them find a "cure" for Isaribi.]]
* ChekovsSkill: Naruto spends the first two arcs incapacitated and forced to work on his tactics, diplomacy and control. Does this pay off immensely [[spoiler: during his fight with the Chameleon summon and later during the assault on Amachi's base.]]



* DudeNotFunny: The jokes about how much of a dense dork or "dead-last" Naruto is, stop being used by characters as it is insulting to him and also not true.

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* DudeNotFunny: In universe The jokes about how much of a dense dork or "dead-last" Naruto is, stop being used by characters as it is insulting to him and also not true.



* GambitPileup: We have Tsunade's plan which kicks off the fic in the hopes of of either removing the advisers council from power or to prepare Naruto to take care of himself if he still gets banished. Jiraiya running damage control in Konoha for Tsunade's return. The council trying to turn the Hokage into a puppet ruler. The Daimyo supporting the council thinking it's the right thing to do at the moment. Orochimaru doing his best to ruin Tsunade's plan. [[spoiler: Oh, and a ROOT team sent to kill Naruto]].

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* GambitPileup: We have Tsunade's plan which kicks off the fic in the hopes of of either removing the advisers council from power or to prepare Naruto to take care of himself if he still gets banished. Jiraiya running damage control in Konoha for Tsunade's return. The council trying to turn the Hokage into a puppet ruler. The Daimyo supporting the council thinking it's the right thing to do at the moment. Orochimaru doing his best to ruin Tsunade's plan. [[spoiler: Oh, and a ROOT team sent to kill Naruto]].Naruto. Not to mention what the other villages are up to]].



* ImNotLeftHanded: An enemy ninja mocks Hinata when he [[AwesomeByAnalysis picks apart her fighting styles weakness]]. Hinata responds with [[spoiler: by using Tsunade's strength technique, along with her speed, to quickly and utterly decimate him.]]

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* ImNotLeftHanded: IAmNotLeftHanded: An enemy ninja mocks Hinata when he [[AwesomeByAnalysis picks apart her fighting styles weakness]]. Hinata responds with [[spoiler: by using Tsunade's strength technique, along with her speed, to quickly and utterly decimate him.]]


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* MyDefenseNeedNotProtectMeForever: Hinata's first use of [[spoiler: Protection of the 8 Trigrams: 64 palms at first stops a large chink of steel thrown at her before she sends it right back at the enemy.]]
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* BookDumb: Despite being a quick learner, quick thinker and resourceful kid, by Naruto's own admittance, he's bad with book knowlegde. Although this is just because he has a short attention span and lack of a proper education but when given a teacher who is patient enough he learns just as well as any other kid.


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* DudeNotFunny: The jokes about how much of a dense dork or "dead-last" Naruto is, stop being used by characters as it is insulting to him and also not true.


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* ImNotLeftHanded: An enemy ninja mocks Hinata when he [[AwesomeByAnalysis picks apart her fighting styles weakness]]. Hinata responds with [[spoiler: by using Tsunade's strength technique, along with her speed, to quickly and utterly decimate him.]]


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* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Naruto to Hinata yet he's unaware of this. Later during a heart-to-heart, Hinata states her intention to become one for Naruto.


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* TeamMom: Tsunade. While she gripes about it, she does take to and love the job and is [[SoProudOfYou proud of her apprentices.]]

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* BrokenBird: Hinata shows signs of emotional abuse, the knowledge of the other seals placed has (in some way) emotionally crushed Naruto and Isaribi already went through something similar to Naruto [[spoiler: but the "cure" Tsunade gives her makes one wonder she made the right choice in taking it.]]



* GetOutOfJailFreeCard: The council was willing to compromise on Sasuke's imprisonment because [[spoiler: they have the threat of Itachi hanging over their heads should anything bad happen to Sasuke.]]

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* GetOutOfJailFreeCard: The council was willing to compromise on Sasuke's imprisonment because [[spoiler: they have the threat of Itachi hanging over their heads should anything bad happen to Sasuke. Never gets used since they ultimately leave Sasuke to his fate.]]


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* TheNeedsOfTheMany: Deconstructed. While logical arguments are made for this stance, it's shown that the ones who make the choice CAN regret the decision and in some cases it isn't always the right choice and can cause more harm than good.

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* ItGetsEasier/ItNeverGetsEasier: Discussed when Naruto comforts Hinata after her first kill. While they do go back and forth with Hinata worried she'll get a taste for killing and Naruto saying it helps to dull your emotions when you kill, Naruto does tell her killing does come up in their line of work but reminds her she only killed to protect and that the context of a kill is important in learning to deal with it.

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* ItGetsEasier/ItNeverGetsEasier: ItGetsEasier / ItNeverGetsAnyEasier: Discussed when Naruto comforts Hinata after her first kill. While they do go back and forth with Hinata worried she'll get a taste for killing and Naruto saying it helps to dull your emotions when you kill, Naruto does tell her killing does come up in their line of work but reminds her she only killed to protect and that the context of a kill is important in learning to deal with it.


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* SupportingProtagonist: Tsunade.

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** The author notes this about what Kakashi's teaching style:
--> "If you take the basics of ninja balance into account, he clearly pigeonholes each into a specific sub-set without giving much in the ways of supplementary training."

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--> "If you take the basics of ninja balance into account, he clearly pigeonholes each (member of Team 7) into a specific sub-set without giving much in the ways of supplementary training." training. Naruto was his Taijutsu student, Sakura was the Genjutsu student and Sasuke was the Ninjutsu student. Therefore, Naruto uses the experience of the shadow clone jutsu to build up natural fighting skills, Sasuke learns jutsu through the Sharingan of doom and Sakura deals with any genjutsu issues that they cannot overcome with the strength of the Sharingan. Funny how badly he mistyped them, ne?"


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* GetOutOfJailFreeCard: The council was willing to compromise on Sasuke's imprisonment because [[spoiler: they have the threat of Itachi hanging over their heads should anything bad happen to Sasuke.]]


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* ItGetsEasier/ItNeverGetsEasier: Discussed when Naruto comforts Hinata after her first kill. While they do go back and forth with Hinata worried she'll get a taste for killing and Naruto saying it helps to dull your emotions when you kill, Naruto does tell her killing does come up in their line of work but reminds her she only killed to protect and that the context of a kill is important in learning to deal with it.
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* BreakingSpeech: Sakura is on the wrong side of two. One from an angry Sasuke and the other [[spoiler: from Yakumo's Ido demon.]]


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* CripplingOverspecialisation: Shizune is at least a Jonin level ninja. However on multiple occasions her mid to long range fighting style, centered around senbon and poison, gets neutralized by several people below her skill level with unique abilities making her put in more effort than she should in trying to win.
** The author notes this about what Kakashi's teaching style:
--> "If you take the basics of ninja balance into account, he clearly pigeonholes each into a specific sub-set without giving much in the ways of supplementary training."

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* ShipperOnDeck: Tsunade and Shizune ship Naruto and Hinata. Although they tend to push Hinata to make the first move.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: It's all right to grieve but at some point you'll have to learn to grow up and stop wallowing in self-pity. Just because [[WellIntentionedExtremist you mean well, it doesn't make what you're doing right.]] Idealism can, at times, cause problems if not kept in check.

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* ShipperOnDeck: Tsunade and Shizune ship Naruto and Hinata. Although they tend to push Hinata to make the first move.
* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: It's all right to grieve but at some point you'll have to learn to grow up and stop wallowing in self-pity. Just because [[WellIntentionedExtremist you mean well, it doesn't make what you're doing right.]] Idealism can, at times, cause problems if not kept in check.
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* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: It's all right to grieve but at some point you'll have to learn to grow up and stop wallowing in self-pity. Just because [[WellIntentionedExtremist you mean well, it doesn't make what you're doing right.]] Idealism can, at times, cause problems if not kept in check.
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* GambitPileup: We have Tsunade's plan which kicks off the fic in the hopes of of either removing the advisers council from power or to prepare Naruto to take care of himself if he still gets banished. Jiraiya running damage control in Konoha for Tsunade's return. The council trying to turn the Hokage into a puppet ruler. The Daimyo supporting the council thinking it's the right thing to do at the moment. [[spoiler: Oh, and a ROOT team sent to kill Naruto]].

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* GambitPileup: We have Tsunade's plan which kicks off the fic in the hopes of of either removing the advisers council from power or to prepare Naruto to take care of himself if he still gets banished. Jiraiya running damage control in Konoha for Tsunade's return. The council trying to turn the Hokage into a puppet ruler. The Daimyo supporting the council thinking it's the right thing to do at the moment. Orochimaru doing his best to ruin Tsunade's plan. [[spoiler: Oh, and a ROOT team sent to kill Naruto]].
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: While Naruto comforts Hinata, he says something that makes her angrily snap that she cares about him more than he knows. [[NoSocialSkills Being who he is]], [[ObliviousToLove it flies over Naruto's head.]]


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* FairWeatherMentor: Deconstructed. Kakashi certainly doesn't mean to be one, but his teaching method is dissected and shown to paint him as one.


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* GambitPileup: We have Tsunade's plan which kicks off the fic in the hopes of of either removing the advisers council from power or to prepare Naruto to take care of himself if he still gets banished. Jiraiya running damage control in Konoha for Tsunade's return. The council trying to turn the Hokage into a puppet ruler. The Daimyo supporting the council thinking it's the right thing to do at the moment. [[spoiler: Oh, and a ROOT team sent to kill Naruto]].


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* WeCouldHaveAvoidedAllThis: Homura at one point actually asks Koharu if what they're doing is right as Tsunade has seen through their plot and neutralized it and maybe they should try helping her since the village doesn't need to be divided as it is right now.
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*BrutalHonesty: Hanabi loses her position as heir and ends up either bullied or treated with indifference by her clan. She does eventually get to voice her frustration to Neji and asks why they are treating her like that while they only have nice things to say about Hinata. Neji replies by telling her that it's because she isn't a nice person and Hinata is liked because the Branch members don't want to torment the only Main branch Hyuuga who is genuinely nice to them.
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*HoistByHisOwnPetard: The Third Hokage's law about not telling anyone Naruto has the Kyuubi sealed in him. The parents of Konoha used it to turn him into a pariah. When Ino and Choji actually call their parents out on it and ask '''WHY''' they did it, the law prevents them from telling them the real reason and they end up looking like hateful pricks to an orphan.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As the Daimyo later reveals [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is the reason he had to use the advisers council as his regents. As he puts it, the Third was thought to have been too old and weary for being Hokage and his waiting too long to name the next Hokage. The Daimyo's council then argued that he should be more involved in how Konoha is run at least until they recover from the Sound/Suna invasion. Thus the council who hope to usurp power from Tsunade now have the power of the Daimyo to call on.]]

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As the Daimyo later reveals [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is the reason he had to use the advisers council as his regents. As he puts it, the Third was thought to have been too old and weary for being Hokage and his waiting too long to name the next Hokage. Hokage is making damage control more difficult. The Daimyo's council then argued that he should be more involved in how Konoha is run to help the current Hokage, at least until they recover from the Sound/Suna invasion. Thus the council who hope to usurp power from Tsunade now have the power of the Daimyo to call on.]]



** Konohamaru, Udon and Moegi end up stalking and embarrassing many of Naruto's detractors. With the Sexy Jutsu.

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** Konohamaru, Udon and Moegi end up stalking and embarrassing many of Naruto's detractors. With the Sexy Jutsu.[[DistractedByTheSexy Sexy]] [[{{Nosebleed}} Jutsu]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: As the Daimyo later reveals [[spoiler: The Third Hokage is the reason he had to use the advisers council as his regents. As he puts it, the Third was thought to have been too old and weary for being Hokage and his waiting too long to name the next Hokage. The Daimyo's council then argued that he should be more involved in how Konoha is run at least until they recover from the Sound/Suna invasion. Thus the council who hope to usurp power from Tsunade now have the power of the Daimyo to call on.]]


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* RefugeInAudacity: Tsunade's plan is (even InUniverse) refereed to as this trope. She made it that way to prove the point to both the council and the Daimyo about respecting her authority and power.
**Konohamaru, Udon and Moegi end up stalking and embarrassing many of Naruto's detractors. With the Sexy Jutsu.


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* SureWhyNot: While thinking of a way to save Naruto from banishment, Tsunade comes to the conclusion that countering the council will cause more problems than Konoha can deal with at the time. After a brief mental pause she actually goes through with it.


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* UndyingLoyalty: While the ANBU serve Tsunade and Jiraiya because it's their job, they only display this trope after [[spoiler: they shut down ROOT and kill Danzo while witnessing the horrific acts and methods ROOT uses.]]

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* BrokenBase: InUniverse. The reaction to the extra seals on Naruto and Tsunade's decrees lead to differing opinions between the ninja and civilians.



** The civilian council is actually far smarter than they are given credit for like when [[spoiler: the more influential members don't buy into the Uchiha breeding program considering what Sasuke did.]]



* GuiltComplex: Sakura and Ino develop a minor case of this.

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* GuiltComplex: Sakura and Ino develop a minor case of this.this over Naruto's treatment.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Tsunade, Jiraiya and the Daimyo. Although in the Daimyo's case he ends up unfortunately helping the council.

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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Tsunade, Jiraiya and the Daimyo. Although in the Daimyo's case he ends up unfortunately helping the council.council while genuinely believing he's doing the right thing but he does [[spoiler: end up calling Danzo and the council out on trying to abuse his power and sends them an ultimatum to keep Jiraiya in check or else he'll stop offering them his support]].
* SanitySlippage: [[spoiler: Sasuke goes through this early what with being in prison.]]
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: How the council gets away with threatening Tsunade with Naruto's banishment. [[spoiler: Tsunade however later notes during their travels, that Naruto is slowly shaping up to do this since he's known and trusted by various Daimyo around the Elemental Countries.]]



* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: How the council gets away with threatening Tsunade with Naruto's banishment. [[spoiler: Tsunade however later notes during their travels, that Naruto is slowly shaping up to do this since he's known and trusted by various Daimyo around the Elemental Countries.]]

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* AntiVillain: Koharu and Homura.



* GuiltComplex: Sakura and Ino develop a minor case of this.



* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Tsunade, Jiraiya and the Daimyo. Although in the Daimyo's case he ends up unfortunately helping the council.
* ShipperOnDeck: Tsunade and Shizune ship Naruto and Hinata. Although they tend to push Hinata to make the first move.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: How the council gets away with threatening Tsunade with Naruto's banishment. [[spoiler: Tsunade however later notes during their travels, that Naruto is slowly shaping up to do this since he's known and trusted by various Daimyo around the Elemental Countries.]]



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Tenten subtly gives one to Kakashi

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Tenten subtly gives one to KakashiKakashi.
* TookALevelInKindness: Played with in that while Sakura wasn't a complete {{Jerkass}}, she still wasn't a nice person either. Suffice to say after a few BreakTheHaughty moments and several reality checks, she reevaluates herself and [[CharacterDevelopment tries to be both a better person and ninja]] even going as far as asking [[AbhorrentAdmirer Lee]] out on a date and having a much needed SorkinRelationshipMoment with Naruto where she practically begs him to find someone who'll reciprocate his feelings rather than be her HopelessSuitor.



* RonTheDeathEater: Averted very hard. Sakura, Kakashi and Sasuke's character are treated with dignity. Sasuke goes to jail but that's because he was about to defect to a known enemy of Konoha. Sakura actually feels guilty for Naruto getting hurt bringing Sasuke back, actually acknowledges that what Sasuke did was wrong and starts trying to be a better person to everyone. While Kakashi is called out for being a "negligent teacher", he at least gets a chance to defend himself and actually cares for '''all''' of Team 7 and is just shown to have a minor yet justified case of SkewedPriorities.
* OnlySaneMan: Onoki for Iwa. The rest of Iwa is still bitter and resentful of Konoha after the war. He's just trying to keep the place running and rebuilding his forces as he fully admits [[GracefulLoser they lost to a better opponent]] and he can't blame the Fourth for protecting his home.

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* RonTheDeathEater: Averted very hard. Sakura, Kakashi and Sasuke's character are treated with dignity. Sasuke goes to jail but that's because he was about to defect to a known enemy of Konoha. Sakura actually feels guilty for Naruto getting hurt bringing Sasuke back, actually acknowledges that what Sasuke did was wrong and starts trying to be a better person to everyone. While Kakashi is called out for being a "negligent teacher", he at least gets a chance to defend himself and actually cares for '''all''' of Team 7 and is just shown to have a minor yet justified case of SkewedPriorities.
* OnlySaneMan: Onoki for Iwa. The rest of Iwa is still bitter and resentful of Konoha after the war. He's just trying to keep the place running and rebuilding his forces as he fully admits [[GracefulLoser they lost to a better opponent]] and he can't blame the Fourth for protecting his home.home.
* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Ino's father feels this way [[spoiler: when some of the villagers are proud of what Yamanaka Kenshin and Jinzo did to Naruto.]]
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* RonTheDeathEater: Averted very hard. Sakura, Kakashi and Sasuke's character are treated with dignity. Sasuke goes to jail but that's because he was about to defect to a known enemy of Konoha. Sakura actually feels guilty for Naruto getting hurt bringing Sasuke back, actually acknowledges that what Sasuke did was wrong and starts trying to be a better person to everyone. While Kakashi is called out for being a "negligent teacher", he at least gets a chance to defend himself and actually cares for '''all''' of Team 7 and is just shown to have a minor yet justified case of SkewedPriorities.

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* RonTheDeathEater: Averted very hard. Sakura, Kakashi and Sasuke's character are treated with dignity. Sasuke goes to jail but that's because he was about to defect to a known enemy of Konoha. Sakura actually feels guilty for Naruto getting hurt bringing Sasuke back, actually acknowledges that what Sasuke did was wrong and starts trying to be a better person to everyone. While Kakashi is called out for being a "negligent teacher", he at least gets a chance to defend himself and actually cares for '''all''' of Team 7 and is just shown to have a minor yet justified case of SkewedPriorities.SkewedPriorities.
* OnlySaneMan: Onoki for Iwa. The rest of Iwa is still bitter and resentful of Konoha after the war. He's just trying to keep the place running and rebuilding his forces as he fully admits [[GracefulLoser they lost to a better opponent]] and he can't blame the Fourth for protecting his home.
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* FriendshipMoment: Naruto and Hinata get a couple. Most notable is when [[spoiler: he comforts her after first kill and when he asks her out on a date.]]

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* BreakTheHaughty: Sasuke and Kakashi.



** The stock "Naruto gets banished" fic gets this considering the reason the council want to banish him is different and far more complex rather than being done out of hate. Also Tsunade immediately acts against the council when they inform her of Naruto being banished.

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** The stock "Naruto gets banished" fic gets this considering the reason the council want to banish him is different and far more complex rather than being done out of hate. Also Tsunade immediately acts against the council when they inform her of Naruto being banished.wanting to banish Naruto.



* DumbassNoMore: Tsunade's main goal when training Naruto is to remove his tendency to be LeeroyJenkins-incarnate. [[spoiler: She succeeds considering Naruto later beats her in an argument and manages to defend and justify his actions to her on two separate occasions]].



* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Hinata has self worth issues what with being looked down on by her family.



--> '''Hinata:''' "Y-y-yes."

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--> '''Hinata:''' "Y-y-yes.""
* RonTheDeathEater: Averted very hard. Sakura, Kakashi and Sasuke's character are treated with dignity. Sasuke goes to jail but that's because he was about to defect to a known enemy of Konoha. Sakura actually feels guilty for Naruto getting hurt bringing Sasuke back, actually acknowledges that what Sasuke did was wrong and starts trying to be a better person to everyone. While Kakashi is called out for being a "negligent teacher", he at least gets a chance to defend himself and actually cares for '''all''' of Team 7 and is just shown to have a minor yet justified case of SkewedPriorities.

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* DeconstructionFic: The ''[[FanNickname "evil council of doom"]]'' is shown to just be {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}s doing what they think is best for Konoha and it's people.

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* DeconstructionFic: The ''[[FanNickname "evil council of doom"]]'' (Homura and Koharu) is shown to just be {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}s doing what they think is best for Konoha and it's people. people and actually would have preferred if Sasuke was either dead or out of their hair.
** The stock "Naruto gets banished" fic gets this considering the reason the council want to banish him is different and far more complex rather than being done out of hate. Also Tsunade immediately acts against the council when they inform her of Naruto being banished.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4991314/1/Escape-from-the-Hokage-s-Hat Escape from the Hokage's Hat]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1897487/anothvortex anothvortex]]. According to the sumary, the fic happens some time after Naruto recaptures Sasuke after he defects from Konaha but is forced out of the village, taking with him some unexpected allies.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4991314/1/Escape-from-the-Hokage-s-Hat Escape from the Hokage's Hat]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1897487/anothvortex anothvortex]]. According to the sumary, summary, the fic happens some time after Naruto recaptures Sasuke after he defects from Konaha but is forced out of the village, taking with him some unexpected allies.


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* DeconstructionFic: The ''[[FanNickname "evil council of doom"]]'' is shown to just be {{Well Intentioned Extremist}}s doing what they think is best for Konoha and it's people.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Tenten subtly gives one to Kakashi

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Tenten subtly gives one to KakashiKakashi
* TwiceShy: Naruto and Hinata. Hinata's a ShrinkingViolet with low self-esteem who still thinks he holds a torch for Sakura. Naruto doesn't want to jeopardize one of the only healthy female relationship he has and is afraid to be rejected. It's takes a FreudianSlip to actually help them.
--> '''Naruto:''' "If I was to ever date a girl, I hope she's as cute as you are." (beat) OhCrap face then {{Facepalm}}
--> '''Hinata:''' "W-w-w-well. I..I..I wouldn't mind."
--> '''Naruto:''' "R-R-Really?"
--> '''Hinata:''' "Y-y-yes."
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* EasilyForgiven:
** '''Downplayed''' - Sakura comes to Hinata, in tears, over Naruto's injuries, and says Sasuke isn't worth Naruto getting hurt so badly. Hinata blames Sakura for what she did to Naruto- begging him to save Sasuke and having "hit him, yelled at him and used him,"- but gives her a hug because "If she cried for Naruto, she couldn't be all bad."
** '''Subverted''' - Naruto looks like he'll do this with Sasuke but comments he still can't forgive Sasuke due in part to Sasuke trying to KILL him while Naruto just wanted to incapacitate Sasuke.
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* CovertPervert: Due in part to having had a seal placed on him (multiple actually but just explaining this one is important for now) that screwed with his libido and hormones but was removed forcing the 13 year old to just deal with the overload. Naruto then travels in a group with Hinata, Shizune and Tsunade. Cue Naruto suddenly thinking about how bad he wants a backrub from Shizune, wants a hug (MarshmallowHell) from Tsunade, comments on how he wants to "hold Hinata and never let her go" and suddenly be turned on by Hinata's laugh.
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* RealityEnsues:
** The Sasuke retrieval mission was a success, although Naruto lost his right arm (worry not, for it grew back). Sasuke, however, is charged with treason and locked up in ANBU prison with his ninja status (his chakra network is also shut down) revoked without any chance to regain it or any parole. Made worse due to attacking Naruto, a fellow Leaf nin, and placing the others on the mission in danger. Naruto himself doesn't dispute the punishment.
** After years of dealing with Sakura (who'd commit DomesticAbuse on him at any time or call him an idiot or a perv), 13 year old Naruto has the notion that ALL women will beat him for anything even something [[AccidentalPervert out of his control]] leading to a rather OOC (read: quiet) Naruto on a trip with [[BadassGrandma Tsunade]], [[CoolBigSis Shizune]] and [[CuteBruiser Hinata]] and a case of accidental CovertPervert. Tsunade sits him down and tells him "No. Sakura just had issues. We are not going to beat you for something as stupid that."
** [[TheSmartGuy Shikamaru]] assumes Naruto and Hinata will become a couple not because [[EveryoneCanSeeIt everyone knows how Hinata feels about Naruto]], but because Tsunade is about to take a self depreciating ShrinkingViolet and an abused AttentionWhore desperate for a real friend into isolation. Naturally both will make the other a LivingEmotionalCrutch and become a couple from there.
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* ParentaSubstitute: Tsunade to all three of her students (Shizune, Naruto and Hinata). While Shizune is a fairly well adjusted adult, she spends most of her time helping Naruto and Hinata with their own personal issues.

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* ParentaSubstitute: ParentalSubstitute: Tsunade to all three of her students (Shizune, Naruto and Hinata). While Shizune is a fairly well adjusted adult, she spends most of her time helping Naruto and Hinata with their own personal issues.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4991314/1/Escape-from-the-Hokage-s-Hat Escape from the Hokage's Hat]]'' is an AlternateUniverseFic ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' fic written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1897487/anothvortex anothvortex]]. According to the sumary, the fic happens some time after Naruto recaptures Sasuke after he defects from Konaha but is forced out of the village, taking with him some unexpected allies.

!Tropes for ''Escape from the Hokage's Hat'':
*ArmorPiercingQuestion: Kakashi was on the receiving end of a couple for teaching Sasuke way more than Naruto and Sakura. To elaborate he only taught Naruto and Sakura ONE skill yet focused more on Sasuke.
--> '''Sakura''' : (Kakashi indirectly calls her weak in front of Jiraiya and Team 8 while she points out he abandoned training her) "What part of '''Those who abandon their allies are worse than trash''' do you believe?"
--> '''Jiraiya''' (On why he didn't teach Naruto ANYTHING) : "You didn't want to teach him (Naruto) anything that would've pissed off the Uchiha right?"
** Tenten gets a rapid fire version that lightly crosses with TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
---> "Then let me ask you a question Kakashi-san. Is it true that the only true technique that you taught Naruto and Sakura before the Chunin Exams was the ability to walk up trees with chakra? Or how about the rumor that Uchiha Sasuke started suddenly pulling new fire jutsu out of nowhere during that same period? The thing you should be asking yourself is not '''Where did I go wrong with the Uchiha?'''. It's '''What would have happened if I made the others stronger?'''. Would Sakura have been able to stop Sasuke from leaving in the first place? Would Naruto have been nearly killed twice because he couldn't go any farther on his own? It's because you're asking the wrong questions that you're not finding the right answers."
** Naruto is told TheNeedsOfTheMany speech from every leader he talks with. Upon asking if himself if he could do the same, he stalls when he [[FridgeHorror realizes he might have to force a childhood like his on someone else.]]
*DisproportionateRetribution: Invoked. The council want to banish Naruto, want Sasuke's prison sentence forgotten and were smart enough to get the Daimyo to agree with any of their decisions. Tsunade's response? Shove Sasuke in one of the darkest ANBU cells being kept barely alive, setting up the collapse of Konoha's economy, taking money from the accounts of every clan that ever wronged Naruto and finally making Jiraiya (temporary) Sixth Hokage while she leaves with Shizune, Hinata and Naruto for a six month training trip. [[RationalizingTheOverkill When she explains why she did it to Naruto]], she has this to say:
-->"I decided to teach those meddling old fools a lesson in respect. If the reason I came back to the village is kicked out, I am SO joining in the fun!"
*ParentaSubstitute: Tsunade to all three of her students (Shizune, Naruto and Hinata). While Shizune is a fairly well adjusted adult, she spends most of her time helping Naruto and Hinata with their own personal issues.
*ThereAreNoTherapists: Subversion. While Tsunade helps Naruto deal with his issues, she only tries to help when Naruto ''allows'' her to considering how stubborn he is. She does however lament that it would've been nice to have a Yamanaka along to help but since two of them where involved in brainwashing Naruto, the clan is on her shitlist at the moment.
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Tenten subtly gives one to Kakashi

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