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** After Azula coincidentally runs into Izo's platoon, she has the Rough Rhinos capture them and bring them to her. When Calvin asks if Gaan and Zhu are going to show, he's genuinely surprised when they ''don't'' appear.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Zuko made Azula promise not to hunt Aang anymore, but forgot to make sure that she couldn't go after Aang's ''friends'', allowing her to have the Rough Rhinos capture Calvin and Susie.
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* MistakenForRomance: Calvin mistook Zuko and Katara leaving to find her mother's killer as a romantic rendezvous.
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* MostFanficWritersAreGirls: There are hints that Susie might be a writer, like her lampshading meeting the White Lotus Flower guy, for example.
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* IronicEchoCut: When Zuko, Sokka, and Calvin raid Boiling Rock Prison, Calvin lets the other two know he left a message that was sure not to arouse suspicion. What does Suzie say upon reading the note?
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--> "My suspicions are aroused."
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* WhatDidIDoLastNight: Invoked. When Calvin is being interrogated as to why he didn't speak the local language upon being arrested and not being able to tell the warden his hometown, Calvin smartly replies "That was some party." The warden muses (once he's alone) that he never gets invited to parties.
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* IOweYouMyLife: Azula after Zuko saves her.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Azula, [[EvilCannotComprehendGood unable to believe]] that Zuko would save her ''just'' because they're family, and despising the very ''thought'' of being in his debt, ''demands'' that Zuko tell her what he wants from her. Zuko uses this opprotunity to forbid her from chasing Aang anymore (or sending anyone ''else'' after him), knowing that her honor would keep her from refusing.
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** Azula infiltrates the Western Air Temple in an attempt to steal the teleporter. She manages to get her hands on it - only to discard it, assuming it to be a piece of junk.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood Azula adamantly ''refuses'' to believe that Zuko would save her life ''just'' because she's his sister.
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** [[spoiler: When talking to Mei again for the first time after her HeelRealization]], Ty Lee asks her that, if the purpose of the war was to [[WhiteMansBurden share the Fire Nation's greatness with the world]], would there be a ''need'' for a war if the rest of the world ''wanted'' to share in that greatness? And if they don't want to share that greatness, what right do they have to ''force'' it on them?
** Zuko saves Azula's life when her attempt to [[spoiler: capture the teleporter at the Air Temple]] goes south, and when Azula ''demands'' he enact some kind of price for it, both out of hatred of the thought of being indebted to him and an honest disbelief that he'd save her if he ''didn't'' have some scheme to benefit from it instead of it just being because they're siblings, Zuko tells her that his price is that she stops hunting the Avatar, and she isn't to send anyone ''else'' after him either. When Azula asks him why he thinks that she'd agree to that, he asks her if her honor really means so little to her, which stops her in her tracks.
** After Zuko rescues Azula, Susie asks Katara what she'd do if ''her'' sibling had done terrible things and then ended up in a life-threatening situation, with her in a position to save him, with Katara being unable to answer.
** [[spoiler: When talking to Mei again for the first time after her HeelRealization]], Ty Lee asks her that, if the purpose of the war was to [[WhiteMansBurden share the Fire Nation's greatness with the world]], would there be a ''need'' for a war if the rest of the world ''wanted'' to share in that greatness? And if they don't want to share that greatness, what right do they have to ''force'' it on them?
** Zuko saves Azula's life when her attempt to [[spoiler: capture the teleporter at the Air Temple]] goes south, and when Azula ''demands'' he enact some kind of price for it, both out of hatred of the thought of being indebted to him and an honest disbelief that he'd save her if he ''didn't'' have some scheme to benefit from it instead of it just being because they're siblings, Zuko tells her that his price is that she stops hunting the Avatar, and she isn't to send anyone ''else'' after him either. When Azula asks him why he thinks that she'd agree to that, he asks her if her honor really means so little to her, which stops her in her tracks.
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** At the Boiling Rock, Calvin instigates the riot by saying something about one of the inmate's mother.
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* BareYourMidriff: Calvin lampshades this with the uniforms of the female guards at the Boiling Rock, pointing out how it leaves several important organs undefended.
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** "All was laid to [[WebAnimation/HomestarRunner BURNINATION!]]"
** At one point, Susie compares Calvin to [[Manga/FairyTail Natsu Dragneel.]]
** At one point, Susie compares Calvin to [[Manga/FairyTail Natsu Dragneel.]]
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** After fleeing from Ba Sing Se, the group manages to wander right into Zuko's camp.
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