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* MoralMyopia: Sophia angrily accuses Alan Barnes of not teaching Emma that one shouldn't betray friends -- exactly the same thing she caused by essentially brainwashing Emma into betraying Taylor.

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* MoralMyopia: Sophia angrily accuses Alan Barnes of not teaching Emma that one shouldn't betray friends -- exactly the same thing she caused by essentially brainwashing Emma into betraying Taylor. Later, she gets enraged when [[spoiler:Calvert/Coil tells her that the Real Thing is going after her family to keep her quiet on their identities... despite Sophia having threatened the loved ones of Taylor and Emma herself.]]


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** Rune [[spoiler:inadvertently sends a hunk of concrete into Coil's living room, splattering him in his "safe" timeline and getting him caught interrogating Shadow Stalker about the identities of the Real Thing.]]
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** March can weave in and out of interstate traffic at over 100 miles per hour, and she takes cops trying to pull her over for speeding as a personal offense.


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** "Good steel" can ''somehow'' resist seemingly any and all dimensional shenanigans, up to and including Flechette's power, which can shear through Endbringers and pop Scion's avatar, and is supposed to be impossible for the Entities to stop.

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* LeaderWannabe: Sophia claims to be The Real Thing's leader due to her experience as a vigilante, but quickly proves unsuited to the task and Emma and Madison vote Emma in as the new leader, [[spoiler:and later ask Taylor to take the position). Emma even gets reminded of the [[Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire story she read]] that said "Any man who says I am the king is no king" when Sophia gets pissed at Madison saying that she thought that Emma was the leader already.

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* KansasCityShuffle: Firebird does a quick one [[spoiler:during her fight with Victor, showing an obvious "weak point" and a less obvious one, knowing Victor will "see through" the former and attempt to exploit the latter, giving her the opening to win]].
* LeaderWannabe: Sophia claims to be The Real Thing's leader due to her experience as a vigilante, but quickly proves unsuited to the task and Emma and Madison vote Emma in as the new leader, [[spoiler:and later ask Taylor to take the position).position]]. Emma even gets reminded of the [[Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire story she read]] that said "Any man who says I am the king is no king" when Sophia gets pissed at Madison saying that she thought that Emma was the leader already.
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* FeelingOppressedByTheirExistence: Sophia already hates Taylor to the point of willingly trying to make her look like a villain and get arrested, but after [[spoiler:that fails and they end up "rescuing" her instead Sophia eventually becomes so hateful towards Taylor that she suggests framing her for destroying Winslow, and later decides to ''murder Danny'' and FrameUp Taylor for it.]]


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* LeaderWannabe: Sophia claims to be The Real Thing's leader due to her experience as a vigilante, but quickly proves unsuited to the task and Emma and Madison vote Emma in as the new leader, [[spoiler:and later ask Taylor to take the position). Emma even gets reminded of the [[Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire story she read]] that said "Any man who says I am the king is no king" when Sophia gets pissed at Madison saying that she thought that Emma was the leader already.
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** When Flechette and two of her colleagues transfer in from Boston, Armsmaster has them test their powers against a good steel sample. Since good steel specifically resists dimensional shenanigans, it thwarts them all; even Flechette's power (which is used by the ''Entities'' to fight each other) can neither cut it nor empower it.

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** When Flechette and two of her colleagues transfer in from Boston, Armsmaster has them test their powers against a good steel sample. Since good steel specifically resists dimensional shenanigans, it thwarts them all; even Flechette's power (which is used by the ''Entities'' to fight each other) power, which makes her projectiles ignore physics and could kill an Endbringer or pop Scion's body, can neither cut it nor empower it.

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* UnstoppableForceMeetsImmovableObject: To demonstrate that she's stronger than she looks, Taylor tests her power against Madison's "good steel". All previous testing has indicated that "good steel" is indestructible; Armsmaster's nanothorns break when trying to cut it, and even Sophia's intangible state can't get through it. However, Taylor's power basically tells physics to go and sit in the corner. It's difficult for her to bend good steel, taking orders of magnitude more force than [[spoiler:ripping her entire school off its foundations and lifting it into the air]], but she can do it, and it can't penetrate her force field. (She does speculate, however, that if she extended her field over "good steel", it would become unbreakable even to her.)
--> '''Emma:''' I wouldn't have thought that was possible.\\

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To demonstrate that she's stronger than she looks, Taylor tests her power against Madison's "good steel". All previous testing has indicated that "good steel" is indestructible; Armsmaster's nanothorns break when trying to cut it, and even Sophia's intangible state can't get through it. However, Taylor's power basically tells physics to go and sit in the corner. It's difficult for her to bend good steel, taking orders of magnitude more force than [[spoiler:ripping her entire school off its foundations and lifting it into the air]], but she can do it, and it can't penetrate her force field. (She does speculate, however, that if she extended her field over "good steel", it would become unbreakable even to her.)
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Can also be found on Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/earning-her-stripes-worm-au-fanfic.815267 here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/earning-her-stripes-worm-au-fanfic.60317/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/earning-her-stripes-worm-au-fanfic.11145/ here]]).

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Can also be found on Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/earning-her-stripes-worm-au-fanfic.815267 here]]), Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/earning-her-stripes-worm-au-fanfic.60317/ here]]), and Questionable Questing ([[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/earning-her-stripes-worm-au-fanfic.11145/ here]]).


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--> '''Piggot:''' That is definitely a gold-plated coincidence, and no mistake.

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** Kaiser [[spoiler:had Victor go out as him several times in a public place with people like the Mayor, at the same time as Kaiser publicly committing crimes, in order to provide an alibi to "prove" that Max Anders isn't Kaiser.]]

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** Kaiser [[spoiler:had [[spoiler:sent Victor go out as him several times in Kaiser armor while the Empire was committing crimes while he was in a public place with people like the Mayor, at the same time as Kaiser publicly committing crimes, in order to provide an alibi to "prove" that Max Anders isn't Kaiser.]]



* ShoutOut: Powers in a test tube, uses a "frisbee shield", is physically perfect. Emma has become ComicBook/CaptainAmerica

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* ShoutOut: Powers in a test tube, uses a "frisbee shield", is physically perfect. Emma has become ComicBook/CaptainAmericaComicBook/CaptainAmerica.



* TemptingFate: While watching over the Empire's op to capture Blockade, Rune thinks that the Empire will demonstrate that "Those who played stupid games win [[TitleDrop stupid prizes]]." [[spoiler: She doesn't realize that it's the Empire that "played stupid games" by trying to track Blockade, and they are about to learn what their "stupid prizes" are.]]

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While watching over the Empire's op to capture Blockade, Rune thinks that the Empire will demonstrate that "Those who played stupid games win [[TitleDrop stupid prizes]]." [[spoiler: She [[spoiler:She doesn't realize that it's the Empire that "played stupid games" by trying to track Blockade, and they are about to learn what their "stupid prizes" are.]]
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* AccidentalTruth: Coil, as Thomas Calvert, tries to get the PRT to investigate The Real Thing by claiming they are responsible for the destruction of Winslow, unaware that its pretty close to the truth.

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* AccidentalTruth: Coil, as Thomas Calvert, tries to get the PRT to investigate The Real Thing by claiming they are responsible for the destruction of Winslow, unaware that its it's pretty close to the truth.

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* FakeAlibi: Some time before the story, the PRT captured Purity, but Max Anders still managed to convince everyone that he isn't Kaiser, despite being her husband. [[spoiler:Deputy Director Renick realises that the sightings of Kaiser and Max Anders in different places at the same time could have been faked by using Victor as a BodyDouble.]]



* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler:Max Anders tries to claim he's not Kaiser, even though he was caught wearing his armor and Piggot has enough proof to nail him with a warrant for an MRI, which will ''definitely'' prove he's a Parahuman.]]

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* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler:Max Max Anders tries [[spoiler:tries to claim he's not Kaiser, even though he was caught wearing his armor and Piggot has enough proof to nail him with a warrant for an MRI, which will ''definitely'' prove he's a Parahuman.]]



* MasqueradingAsTheUnseen: The Empire doesn't know who Blockade is, but they've narrowed down the area where Blockade's PoweredArmor seems to be stored, so they stake it out and watch for anyone who might be going to activate it. A man in a hoodie, carrying a toolbox, definitely fits the bill. [[spoiler:It's actually Taylor, using her force field to increase her apparent bulk, and of course when Alabaster tries to ambush her, his gun does absolutely nothing as she chases after him.]]
** [[spoiler:In order to provide an alibi for himself, Kaiser had Victor go out as him several times while he was in a public place with people like the Mayor.]]

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The Empire doesn't know who Blockade is, but they've narrowed down the area where Blockade's PoweredArmor seems to be stored, so they stake it out and watch for anyone who might be going to activate it. A man in a hoodie, carrying a toolbox, definitely fits the bill. [[spoiler:It's actually Taylor, using her force field to increase her apparent bulk, and of course when Alabaster tries to ambush her, his gun does absolutely nothing as she chases after him.]]
** [[spoiler:In order to provide an alibi for himself, Kaiser had [[spoiler:had Victor go out as him several times while he was in a public place with people like the Mayor.Mayor, at the same time as Kaiser publicly committing crimes, in order to provide an alibi to "prove" that Max Anders isn't Kaiser.]]
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** Coil has used a throwaway timeline to get Sophia to tell him who The Real Thing members are, and is already planning to use that knowledge to blackmail The Real Thing, [[spoiler:when Rune accidentally kills him in the "safe" timeline during her fight with Blockade, forcing him in the throwaway timeline, where he's promptly foamed and arrested]].

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** Coil has used a throwaway timeline to get Sophia to tell him who The Real Thing members are, and is already planning to use that knowledge to blackmail The Real Thing, [[spoiler:when Thing. [[spoiler:Then Rune accidentally kills him in the "safe" timeline during her fight with Blockade, forcing leaving him in locked into the throwaway timeline, where he's promptly foamed and arrested]].arrested.]]
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* EvilPowerVacuum:
** Director Piggot has been ''carefully'' defying this, choosing to slowly make Brockton Bay a poor choice for the gangs instead of taking them out and having replacements move in. When The Real Thing seems like they potentially could beat all the gangs, she asks then to slow down.
** Lisa [[spoiler:learns about the Empire capes all going down abruptly, and grabs the Undersiders to go raid all their stash houses before anyone else can react.]]

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** The Real Thing vs Empire 88, Part 2. [[spoiler:Firebird destroys Victor in combat, Blockade captures Rune when she tries to run away, and Monochrome lets Alabaster take her to the Empire's headquarters, allowing The Real Thing to capture the Empire's remaining Capes in one go.]]

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** The Real Thing vs Empire 88, Part 2. [[spoiler:Firebird destroys Victor in combat, Blockade captures Rune when she tries to run away, and Monochrome lets Alabaster take her to the Empire's headquarters, allowing The Real Thing to capture the Empire's remaining Capes in one go.go, ensuring the gang's disintegration.]]


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* EvilLaugh: Lisa lets one out [[spoiler:when the Undersiders set out to steal as much money as they can from the ABB and Empire 88's stashes, taking advantage of both gangs having all their capes under arrest]].


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* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler:Max Anders tries to claim he's not Kaiser, even though he was caught wearing his armor and Piggot has enough proof to nail him with a warrant for an MRI, which will ''definitely'' prove he's a Parahuman.]]


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** [[spoiler:In order to provide an alibi for himself, Kaiser had Victor go out as him several times while he was in a public place with people like the Mayor.]]
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: The Trio's plan consists of them literally turning Taylor into a supervillain so they can "defeat" her, get the credit for it, and have her put away.

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* CreateYourOwnVillain: The Trio's plan consists of them literally turning Taylor into a supervillain so they can "defeat" her, get the credit for it, and have her put away. [[spoiler:When Taylor passes out instead of going on a rampage, they spin it as rescuing her instead, but Sophia becomes so hateful towards Taylor that she plans to ''kill Danny'' and [[FrameUp frame Taylor for it]] in order to force Taylor into a position where she can take her down.]]

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* AwesomenessByAnalysis: [[spoiler:When Piggot learns that Calvert is a cape, it only takes an analysis of the situation for her to make an educated (and correct) guess at his Parahuman power.]]



** The Real Thing vs Empire 88, Part 2. [[spoiler:Firebird destroys Victor in combat, Blockade captures Rune when she tries to run away, and Monochrome lets Alabaster take her to the Empire's headquarters, allowing The Real Thing to capture the Empire's remaining Capes in one go.]]



* ForWantOfANail: The point of divergence [[spoiler:happened years before the start of the story, when William Manton's daughter did not have a bad reaction to the vial he stole for her]]. As a result, [[spoiler:he never had the motivation to become the Siberian]], resulting in a number of differences from the canon timeline:
** Hero is still alive. [[spoiler:As a result, Cauldron is more benevolent in their work, and haven't been doing things like the Parahuman Feudalism experiment they run on Brockton Bay.]]
*** After Ellisburg went totally pear-shaped, Hero helped turn the city into slag.
** Legend broke off from the Protectorate for reasons unknown to the general public.
** [[spoiler:Without the Siberian's protection,]] Jack Slash died in 2005 to [[spoiler:Riley's father]] with a shotgun, and the Slaughterhouse Nine has been going downhill ever since, nowhere near as feared as the canon version.
** The PRT ENE office has more resources in men, support and material. Among other things, Purity, Night, and Fog were arrested a couple of years before, greatly reducing the gang's ability to project force.


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* PointOfDivergence: [[spoiler:William Manton's daughter did not have a bad reaction to the vial he stole for her.]] As a result, [[spoiler:he never had the motivation to become the Siberian]], resulting in a number of differences from the canon timeline:
** Hero is still alive. [[spoiler:As a result, Cauldron is more benevolent in their work, and haven't been doing things like the Parahuman Feudalism experiment they run on Brockton Bay.]]
*** After Ellisburg went totally pear-shaped, Hero helped turn the city into slag.
** Legend broke off from the Protectorate for reasons unknown to the general public.
** [[spoiler:Without the Siberian's protection,]] Jack Slash died in 2005 to [[spoiler:Riley's father]] with a shotgun, and the Slaughterhouse Nine has been going downhill ever since, nowhere near as feared as the canon version.
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* ShoutOut: Powers in a test tube, uses a "frisbee shield", is physically perfect. Emma has become ComicBook/CaptainAmerica

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* ManOfKryptonite: Victory's power allows him to take non-Parahuman skills from someone and add them to his own skills. [[spoiler:Firebird's fighting skills come directly from her power, meaning Victor can't steal them, and her InstantExpert power allows her to identify the weaknesses of Victor's fighting skills, letting her [[CurbStompBattle destroy him in half a minute]].]]

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* ManOfKryptonite: Victory's Victor's power allows him to take non-Parahuman skills from someone and add them to his own skills. [[spoiler:Firebird's fighting skills come directly from her power, meaning Victor can't steal them, and her InstantExpert power allows her to identify the weaknesses of Victor's fighting skills, letting her [[CurbStompBattle destroy him in half a minute]].]]


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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler:Coil got Sophia to reveal the civilian identities of The Real Thing, and is ready to discard the "throwaway" timeline where he interrogated Sophia - and suddenly Rune accidentally kills him in the "safe" timeline, locking him into the path that gets him con-foamed and arrested.]]
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Of all the places Rune's flying concrete chunk could have crashed into, [[spoiler:it was Coil's home that got hit, killing him in his "safe" timeline and ruining his plans]].
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* MasqueradingAsTheUnseen: The Empire doesn't know who Blockade is, but they've narrowed down the area where Blockade's PoweredArmor seems to be stored, so they stake it out and watch for anyone who might be going to activate it. A man in a hoodie, carrying a toolbox, definitely fits the bill. [[spoiler:It's actually Taylor, using her force field to increase her apparent bulk, and of course when Alabaster tries to ambush her, his gun does absolutely nothing as she chases after him.]]

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* PedestrianCrushesCar: Taylor inadvertently does this multiple times, starting with Uber and Leet fleeing the police straight through the park she's in, which is how she realises that she has powers. The second time, she manages to shield her dad and have him break the car.

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* PedestrianCrushesCar: Taylor inadvertently does this multiple times, starting with Uber and Leet fleeing the police straight through the park she's in, which is how she realises realizes that she has powers. The second time, she manages to shield her dad and have him break the car.


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* RelativeButton: One of Sophia's (very few) soft points is her family. [[spoiler:Coil manages to get her to tell him about The Real Thing's {{Secret Identit|y}}ies by claiming the latter intend to attack her family.]]
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* ScrewThisIAmOuttaHere:

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** Similarly, [[spoiler:Rune flies as fast as she can when Blockade flies to meet her.]]

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