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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Their hair is red, though it's is dyed.
* [[spoiler:CruelAndUnusualPunishment: In her execution, she is placed on a moving stage and essentially forced to dance until her medical condition overpowers her and she dies from it, and then she gets crushed by a giant speaker.]]
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* HumansAreInteresting: She's fascinated by the differences between Tim and Gugalanna's hair after she runs her fingers through it.
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* HumansAreInteresting: She's fascinated by the differences between Tim and Gugalanna's hair after she runs her fingers through it.it, as well as the other things that the human characters do.
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* [[spoiler:SchrodingersCat: While she is destroyed by Honoka and is one of the victims of Chapter 1, she technically isn't dead because she is still repairable.]]
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** Drops another after [[spoiler:Honoka's]] execution after everyone realizes that [[spoiler:MONO-9000 broke his own rules.]]
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* PrecisionFStrike: While Tim is normally very polite with his speech, this goes out the window just after the first execution. After he realizes that [[spoiler:MONO-9000 intentionally slashed Ishi's fingers and sent her tumbling into the execution chamber with Honoka because he wanted to get rid of her, [[DudeNotFunny Tim is ''not'' happy,] and ends up dropping ''two'' f-bombs, as well as some other words he definitely wouldn't normally say.]]
---> '''Tim:''' [[spoiler:She was just trying to ''not fucking die, asshole!'']]
---> '''Tim:''' [[spoiler:She was just trying to ''not fucking die, asshole!'']]
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* BluntYes: Deliver's a blunt "Nope." as their objection during the first trial.
* [[spoiler:WeHardlyKnewYe: She is the first killer of the story, having destroyed Ping and accidentally killed Gugalanna.]]
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* TheGlassesGottaGo: It's revealed in [[https://78.media.tumblr.com/082de5e65cbe73cf96604b0e9bec7579/tumblr_ozqbrvtu141vgqvnyo2_1280.jpg this picture drawn by the creator]] that Jurou has glasses. Why he doesn't wear them during the main story is still unknown.
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* TheGlassesGottaGo: It's revealed in [[https://78.media.tumblr.com/082de5e65cbe73cf96604b0e9bec7579/tumblr_ozqbrvtu141vgqvnyo2_1280.jpg this picture drawn by the creator]] that Jurou has glasses. Why he He doesn't wear them during the main story is still unknown.though because he doesn't like them.
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* ClosetGeek: She's a ''huge'' [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/StarTrek Star Trek]] fan. She has all the movies stashed in her room, and even cosplays the characters sometimes. She's even won second place in a cosplay contest at SDCC, which is a piece of information provided by Aoi.
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* ClosetGeek: She's a ''huge'' [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Franchise/StarTrek Star Trek]] fan. She has all the movies stashed in her room, and even cosplays the characters sometimes. She's even won second place in a cosplay contest at SDCC, which is a piece of information provided by Aoi.SDCC.
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* ClothingReflectsPersonality: Most characters seem to have a wardrobe that matches their personality.
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* NoIndoorVoice: There's practically no instance where she ''isn't'' yelling.
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* MaskedLuchador: Obviously one of these. She's only seen without the mask in two free time events.
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* ChildProdigy: Played with. It's revealed during an interaction between himself, Timaeus and Tiffani that he's been doing commercials ever since he was a kid.
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* InSeriesNickname: She acknowledges that her name is a mouthful, and insists that everyone call her "Vash" for short.
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* InSeriesNickname: She acknowledges that [[TheUnpronounceable her name is a mouthful, mouthful,]] and insists that everyone call her "Vash" for short.
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---> '''Nikola:''' Is Ragnvaldsson really ''that'' hard to say?
---> '''Timaeus:''' [[TheUnpronounceable Rag-uhn-vall-dussun… Rag-inv-alds-on? Y-yeah, it kinda is, haha.]]
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* OnlyOneName: She's known solely as "Ping". Seeing as how she's a robot, this fits.
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* [[spoiler:OnlyOneName: Salvatore's name is fake. Although his real name is unknown, he simply goes by his pen name, Janus (although he still allows the others to call him Sal anyway).]]
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* SomeCallMeTim: Quite literally.
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* TheGlassesGottaGo: It's revealed in [[https://78.media.tumblr.com/082de5e65cbe73cf96604b0e9bec7579/tumblr_ozqbrvtu141vgqvnyo2_1280.jpg this picture drawn by the creator]] that Jurou has glasses. Why he doesn't wear them during the main story is still unknown.
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* CuteBookworm: Seeing as how he's both {{Adorkable}} and a {{Bookworm}}, he's definitely one of these.
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* DubNameChange: Parodied in a way. During his American commercials, he's known as "Nick Raver", because, according to him, his production team thought his real name would be too hard for his American audience to say.
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* DubNameChange: Parodied in a way. During his American commercials, he's known as "Nick Raver", because, according to him, his production team the network thought his real name it would be too hard for Americans to "identify with his American audience to say.real name".
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* ShoutOut: According to her Electro ID, she's known as "Titty Typhoon," which is a callback to one of the buildings in SuperDanganRonpa2.
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* BerserkButton: If you know what's good for you, do NOT pick on her younger brother.
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* [[spoiler:HighVoltageDeath: Is on the receiving end of one of these in chapter one.]]
* DeadpanSnarker: Usually when irritated.
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* [[spoiler:BecomingTheMask: Whenever Sal is more serious and composed than he normally is, Timaeus mentions that he "must be talking to Janus".]]
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* TheSnarkKnight: See DeadpanSnarker above.Has an insult ready for just about anybody, and her mug in her introduction reads "I HAVE GIVEN UP".
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* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:Her real name is Gisela, and she was raised by nuns after she grew up in an orphanage. She got the name Gugalanna (as well as her stage name "El Toro de Cielo") from the story of Gilgamesh.]]
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* CostumeEvolution: Changes from an Edwardian era suit to a casual sweater and jeans during Chapter 1.
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* OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent: The only one without an SHSL talent, she got into the school via the reserve course.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Drops one of these during MONO-9000's introductions after the robot makes a joke about his talent.
---> '''MONO-9000:''' Now who sleeps in ''whose'' dorm, well that’s none of my business, kekekek! But if anyone wants to fill me in on the gossip– hey we got a paparazzi right here don’t we? That’s like your job right?!
---> '''Salvatore:''' You're not fucking funny.
---> '''MONO-9000:''' Now who sleeps in ''whose'' dorm, well that’s none of my business, kekekek! But if anyone wants to fill me in on the gossip– hey we got a paparazzi right here don’t we? That’s like your job right?!
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* ImprobableHairstyle: Tim lampshades this. ''"I quietly approached the short, chubby boy with his hair in round… pigtails? Buns? I couldn’t tell what exactly they were from here, but they looked for all the world like pompoms glued to his head."''
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* ImprobableHairstyle: Tim lampshades this. ''"I this.
---> '''Tim:''' I quietly approached the short, chubby boy with his hair in round… pigtails? Buns? I couldn’t tell what exactly they were from here, but they looked for all the world like pompoms glued to his head."''
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* DeadpanSnarker: ''"I am sorry for not feeling particularly comfortable talking to strangers when I have just been abducted!"''
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* {{Adorkable}}: Very clearly a dork, due to his talent and his overall demeanor, but Tim is also shown to be friendly and good-natured in canon. ''“S-sorry! I’m just– I’m in a library and I’m reverting to, um, help desk mode, aha.”''
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* {{Adorkable}}: Very clearly a dork, due to his talent and his overall demeanor, but Tim is also shown to be friendly and good-natured in canon. ''“S-sorry! canon.
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* GoshDangItToHeck: ''"'Yeah, In contrast to Ishi, Tim is more polite with his language.
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* YouthfulFreckles: Has these.
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* NoodleIncident: [[spoiler:Apparently, she hospitalized someone for weeks after a fight. Why that fight broke out is still a mystery.]]
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* EvilIsHammy: Most definitely.
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* HumansAreInteresting: She's fascinated by the differences between Tim and Gugalanna's hair after she runs he fingers through it.
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* TechnoWizard: Seeing as how sea the SHSL Tech Support, she has to be one of these.
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* StatisticStunner: She's ''SEVEN FEET TALL.''
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Stated by the creator that he hates wearing shoes, and only wears flip flops because the floors of the dreadnought is so cold.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Stated by the creator that he hates wearing shoes, and only wears flip flops because the floors floor of the dreadnought is so cold.
* BlushSticker: Has these.
* FunPersonified: Definitely the most cheerful of the cast.
* NoodleIncident: The creator has said that Nikola doesn't like to talk about anything family related. The reason for this, however, has not been stated.
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* ShesGotLegs: Does she ever.
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* StatisticStunner: She's ''SEVEN FEET TALL.''
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* WomanInWhite: With hair to match.
* ColorMotif: Yellow and black/grey.
* BilingualBonus: Speaks both Japanese and German.
* BilingualBonus: Speaks English and Japanese.
* BrutalHonesty: Likes to give "friendly" reminders to everyone that they could all die any minute.
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* TheSnarkKnight: See DeadpanSnarker above.
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* BilingualBonus: Shown to be able to speak Hawaiian and Japanese, and can presumably speak English as well.
* ColorMotif: Tan.
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* TeamMom: Acts somewhat like a bossy mother figure to the cast.
