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** No mention to what happened to Keiko, the first kunoichi in Minato and Inoichi's genin team, after Jiraiya dismisses her for Natsumi.

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** No mention to what happened to Keiko, the first kunoichi in Minato and Inoichi's genin team, after Jiraiya dismisses her for Natsumi. It's even lampshaded when Natsumi asks what happened to her. Keiko joins the Genin Corps and retired after she married.



** [[spoiler: Natsumi, who considered Sakumo her father in all but blood, is the one to finally end Danzo's life.]]

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** [[spoiler: Natsumi, who considered Sakumo her father in all but blood, is the one to finally end Danzo's life.]]]]

!Neko-chan's Pawprints contains examples of:
* ADayInTheLimelight: Many of the supporting characters get their own story such as Hiashi or Tsume telling a bedtime story to their children. Komushi getting his own apprentice [[spoiler: and sealing Gaara.]] Shikamaru getting advice on being a big brother before his younger sister's birth or Tenten asking for an explanation on what being a kunoichi entails.
* MasterApprenticeChain: Komushi takes Temari as his apprentice to become a sealing master and Kushina takes Tenten as her own apprentice.

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* AwwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Natsumi flips out when she learns Shikaku was injured during a mission. She is so distaught she runs from her wedding kimono fitting to the hospital.* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.

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* AwwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Natsumi flips out when she learns Shikaku was injured during a mission. She is so distaught she runs from her wedding kimono fitting to the hospital.* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.


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* LongHairIsFeminine: Natsumi has long dark hair that she's proud of. A young Kakashi says he can't imagine her with short hair.

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* AwwTheyDoLoveEachOther: Natsumi flips out when she learns Shikaku was injured during a mission. She is so distaught she runs from her wedding kimono fitting to the hospital.* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.

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* AwwTheyDoLoveEachOther: AwwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Natsumi flips out when she learns Shikaku was injured during a mission. She is so distaught she runs from her wedding kimono fitting to the hospital.* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.



* CloseCallHaircut: During an attempt on Eri's and Kakashi's lives, Natsumi gets half of her hair shorn of when she barely misses getting her head lopped off.



* FourthDateMarriage: Downplayed while Shikaku and Natsumi get engaged after a conversation, they where ChildhoodFriends and knew each other for years.
** Lampshaded by Shikaku, when he notes that since he straight up married his childhood crush he doesn't know the intricacies of dating.



* TheLadette: Natsumi is crude, casual in her language, can't color coordinate and can be very violent.

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* TheLadette: Natsumi is crude, casual in her language, can't color coordinate and coordinate, can be very violent.violent and was OneOfTheGuys in her childhood.



* LikeBrotherAndSister: Natsumi and Minato.

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* LikeBrotherAndSister: Natsumi and Minato. They are actually pretty happy that due to legal technicalities they are brother and sister.
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* AwTheyDoLoveEachOther: Natsumi flips out when she learns Shikaku was injured during a mission. She is so distaught she runs from her wedding kimono fitting to the hospital.* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.

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* AwTheyDoLoveEachOther: AwwTheyDoLoveEachOther: Natsumi flips out when she learns Shikaku was injured during a mission. She is so distaught she runs from her wedding kimono fitting to the hospital.* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.
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* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.

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* AwTheyDoLoveEachOther: Natsumi flips out when she learns Shikaku was injured during a mission. She is so distaught she runs from her wedding kimono fitting to the hospital.* TheBabyTrap: The less than kind people accuse [[spoiler: Eri]] of deliberately getting pregnant to trap Sakumo into marriage.
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* FiveStagesOfGrief: 
** Natsumi lived in denial for years after her first death, feeling horrible survival guilt at the death of her squad and how she's very far away from her original time, unsure if anything was real.
** Gai's quirk of making exercise challenges for himself resulted from his ailing grandfather, who would make promises of getting better if Gai won certain challenges.

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* AdultFear: Having your defenseless wife and baby threatened in their own home. Being attacked when you're at home by yourself. [[spoiler: Getting kidnapped with threats of losing your unborn child if you do not comply.]]

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* AdultFear: Having your defenseless wife and baby threatened in their own home. Being attacked when you're at home by yourself. Especially when its found out that wives of affluent clans were deliberately being targeted.
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[[spoiler: Getting kidnapped with threats of losing your unborn child if you do not comply.]]



* TheApprentice: [[spoiler:Komushi, a chunin of Suna and Sasori's best friend]], becomes Natsumi's sealing (fuuinjutsu) apprentice. Getting an apprentice is required for someone to become a master.

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* TheApprentice: [[spoiler:Komushi, Komushi, a chunin of Suna and Sasori's best friend]], friend, becomes Natsumi's sealing (fuuinjutsu) apprentice. Getting an apprentice is required for someone to become a master.
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* MismatchedEyes: Natsumi's eyes are one light-blue and one light-green, which she inherited from her mother. [[spoiler: There's been hints that her different colored eyes might be somehow related to her reincarnation.[[note]]They are. See {{Foreshadowing}} for what's up there.[[/note]]]]

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* MismatchedEyes: Natsumi's eyes are one light-blue and one light-green, which she inherited from her mother. [[spoiler: There's been hints that her different colored eyes might be somehow related to her reincarnation.[[note]]They are. See the {{Foreshadowing}} entry for what's up there.details.[[/note]]]]



** [[spoiler: Natsumi, who loved Sakumo like a father, is the one to finally end Danzo's life.]]

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** [[spoiler: Natsumi, who loved considered Sakumo like a father, her father in all but blood, is the one to finally end Danzo's life.]]
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* MismatchedEyes: Natsumi's eyes are one light-blue and one light-green, which she inherited from her mother. [[spoiler: There's been hints that her different colored eyes might be somehow related to her reincarnation.]]

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* MismatchedEyes: Natsumi's eyes are one light-blue and one light-green, which she inherited from her mother. [[spoiler: There's been hints that her different colored eyes might be somehow related to her reincarnation.]][[note]]They are. See {{Foreshadowing}} for what's up there.[[/note]]]]
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* ABoyAGirlAndABabyFamily: The Hakate children consists of Natsumi, Kakashi and baby Midori. Although Natsumi is a Hakate daughter through a technicality and is much older than Kakashi. She is already in her twenties and Kakashi is ten when Midori is born.

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* ABoyAGirlAndABabyFamily: The Hakate Hatake children consists of Natsumi, Kakashi and baby Midori. Although Natsumi is a Hakate Hatake daughter through a technicality and is much older than Kakashi. She is already in her twenties and Kakashi is ten when Midori is born.



* UndyingLoyalty: Natsumi has this for Minato and the Hakate family, she would do anything for them.

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* UndyingLoyalty: Natsumi has this for Minato and the Hakate Hatake family, she would do anything for them.



* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Son]]: [[spoiler: Koharu]] backstabs [[spoiler: Danzo]] and helps Natsumi set up a trap because ROOT was responsible for her only surviving student and surrogate son [[spoiler: Sakumo Hakate's death.]]

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* [[YouKilledMyFather You Killed My Son]]: [[spoiler: Koharu]] backstabs [[spoiler: Danzo]] and helps Natsumi set up a trap because ROOT was responsible for her only surviving student and surrogate son [[spoiler: Sakumo Hakate's Hatake's death.]]

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* EngagingConversation: After Natsumi rescues Shikaku from an uncomfortable discussion with his mother about marriage.
-->Natsumi: Who ''do'' you see yourself living with?
-->Shikaku: You.


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* EngagingConversation: After Natsumi rescues Shikaku from an uncomfortable discussion with his mother about marriage.
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-->Shikaku: You.
-->Natsumi: *nearly falls off roof*
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** [[spoiler: Shikaku and Natsumi have two kids, Shikamaru and Shikani.]]

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** [[spoiler: Shikaku and Natsumi have two kids, Shikamaru and Shikani.Shikaina.]]
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* TheUnishment: Natsumi gets in huge trouble with ANBU for revealing her codename to Kushina and Minato and chasing after Kushina's kidnapper without informing her superiors. Her punishment? Being benched from ANBU until she reaches chunnin and joining Jiraiya's genin team with her friends.

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* TheUnishment: {{Unishment}}: Natsumi gets in huge trouble with ANBU for revealing her codename to Kushina and Minato and chasing after Kushina's kidnapper without informing her superiors. Her punishment? Being benched from ANBU until she reaches chunnin and joining Jiraiya's genin team with her friends.
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** [[spoiler: Shikaku and Natsumi have two kids, Shikamaru and Shikako.]]

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** [[spoiler: Shikaku and Natsumi have two kids, Shikamaru and Shikako.Shikani.]]

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* AnimalMotifs: Cats for Natsumi. Big cats. Her codename in ANBU is Panther and is nick named "neko-chan" by Jiraiya. She also has the [[spoiler: Leopard Summoning Contract.]] Toads for Jiraiya and Minato, slugs for Tsunade, snakes for Orochimaru, tortoise for Gai, monkey for Koichi and Hiruzen, and dogs for the Hatake and Inuzuka Clan.

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* AnimalMotifs: Cats for Natsumi. Big cats. Her codename in ANBU is Panther and is nick named nicknamed "neko-chan" by Jiraiya. She also has the [[spoiler: Leopard Summoning Contract.]] Toads for Jiraiya and Minato, slugs for Tsunade, snakes for Orochimaru, tortoise for Gai, monkey for Koichi and Hiruzen, and dogs for the Hatake and Inuzuka Clan.



*** [[spoiler: Koharu tries to take Midori out of the crib and almost gets smashed through a wall. Natsumi says that the reaction should have been more violent, if it weren't for the fact that the seal is old and may need touching up.]]
* CruelMercy: As she wished, [[spoiler: Uroko Kurama]] doesn't have to marry [[spoiler: her cousin and clan head Murakamo.]] [[spoiler: She became a pariah in the village, stripped of her ninja status and her clan is disbanded because she [[LaserGuidedKarma backstabbed her cousin Natsumi who wanted to help her]]. And everyone will always know what she did thanks to the scars Natsumi put on her face right before she captured.]]
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: Sealing is an extremely dangerous art. The seal can be affected by multiple factors: writing hand, chakra nature, hand-writing and the thought process of user. The wrong thing can cause the seal to explode.

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*** [[spoiler: Koharu tries to take Midori out of the crib and almost gets smashed through a wall. Natsumi says that the reaction should have been more violent, if it weren't for the fact that the seal is old and may need touching up. Hiashi is rather thankful for the effect when it prevents Hinata's kidnapping.]]
* CruelMercy: As she wished, [[spoiler: Uroko Kurama]] doesn't have to marry [[spoiler: her cousin and clan head Murakamo.]] [[spoiler: She became a pariah in the village, stripped of her ninja status and her clan is disbanded because she [[LaserGuidedKarma backstabbed her cousin Natsumi who wanted to help her]]. And everyone will always know what she did thanks to the scars Natsumi put on her face right before she captured.helped her family kidnap Natsumi.]]
* DangerousForbiddenTechnique: Sealing is an extremely dangerous and volitle art. The seal can be affected by multiple factors: writing hand, chakra nature, hand-writing and the thought process of user. The wrong thing can cause the seal to explode.



* EntertaininglyWrong: Since Natsumi is a extremely difficult person to gather information on, [[spoiler: her biological family the Kurama clan]] make assumptions as to who she is. They believe she is a [[spoiler:healthy Kurama bastard that has their bloodline manifested.]] She actually has a kinjutsu a result of her reincarnation [[spoiler:its rather ambiguous whether she has the bloodline or not.]] They know she is kenjutsu-specialist that doesn't actually do any kenjutsu specialist missions. [[spoiler:Once they realize she's ANBU, they assume she's a seduction specialist that uses their bloodline and illusions in her missions. In reality Natsumi is an assassination-specialist ANBU ''captain'' on her way to becoming the next ANBU General.]] They think because Shikaku slept through the Council meetings that he probably doesn't care for her that much. [[spoiler: Shikaku loves his wife dearly and tears them a new asshole.]] They assume she's an unimportant retired homemaker and that no one would miss her. [[spoiler: She has '''many''' friends and subordinates in high places and the Yondaime is her adoptive brother. They immediately close ranks to look for her.]] Since she married a Nara, who are known to be lazy and unmotivated they assume that she must be lazy and unmotivated and will wait for someone to rescue her.[[spoiler: She tore her way to becoming an ANBU captain and the respected lady of Nara and she rescues herself from their clutches. ]]

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* EntertaininglyWrong: Since Natsumi is a extremely difficult person to gather information on, [[spoiler: her biological family the Kurama clan]] make assumptions as to who she is. They believe she is a [[spoiler:healthy Kurama bastard that has their bloodline manifested.]] She actually has a kinjutsu a result of her reincarnation [[spoiler:its rather ambiguous whether she has [[spoiler: the bloodline or not.doesn't manifest until Natumi's fight with the Uchiha proxy.]] They know she is kenjutsu-specialist that doesn't actually do any kenjutsu specialist missions. [[spoiler:Once they realize she's ANBU, they assume she's a seduction specialist that uses their bloodline and illusions in her missions. In reality Natsumi is an assassination-specialist ANBU ''captain'' on her way to becoming the next ANBU General.]] They think because Shikaku slept through the Council meetings that he probably doesn't care for her that much. [[spoiler: Shikaku loves his wife dearly and tears them a new asshole.]] They assume she's an unimportant retired homemaker and that no one would miss her. [[spoiler: She has '''many''' friends and subordinates in high places and the Yondaime is her adoptive brother. They immediately close ranks to look for her.]] Since she married a Nara, who are known to be lazy and unmotivated they assume that she must be lazy and unmotivated and will wait for someone to rescue her.[[spoiler: She tore her way to becoming an ANBU captain and the respected lady of Nara and she rescues herself from their clutches. ]]



** Due to Natsumi making crib with powerful protections for her friends [[spoiler: Hinata is never kidnapped]] and Hizashi doesn't die.



* IncestIsRelative: [[spoiler: The Kurama clan]] frequently has members marry their cousins and do not care to stop. It bites them in the ass as they are so inbred, the bloodline doesn't manifest anymore and the clan is dying out. The children who have the bloodline often don't live to see adulthood. So when they find out [[spoiler: Natsumi]] is perfectly healthy, [[spoiler: might have their bloodline and is pregnant]] they get very desperate for her to join their clan as she is their last hope. When she repeatedly refuses for ignoring her since childhood? [[spoiler: They kidnap her and plan to make her a breeding slave.]]

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* IncestIsRelative: [[spoiler: The Kurama clan]] frequently has members marry their cousins and do not care to stop. It bites them in the ass as they are so inbred, the bloodline doesn't manifest anymore and the clan is dying out. The children who have the bloodline often don't live to see adulthood. So when they find out [[spoiler: Natsumi]] is perfectly healthy, [[spoiler: might have their bloodline and is pregnant]] they get very desperate for her to join their clan as she is their last hope. When she repeatedly refuses for ignoring because they ignored her since childhood? childhood and she knows that they only want her because they have no choice. [[spoiler: They kidnap her and plan to make her a breeding slave.]]



* InternalReformist: With Natsumi's encouragement, Hizashi confides to Hiashi that he doesn't want have children because he doesn't want them to suffer under the Caged Bird Seal. The brothers work to have the Caged Seal replaced with the Phoenix Seal made by Kushina and Orochimaru.

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* InternalReformist: With Natsumi's encouragement, Hizashi confides to Hiashi that he doesn't want have children because he doesn't want them to suffer under the Caged Bird Seal. The brothers work to have the Caged Seal replaced with the Phoenix Seal made by Kushina and Orochimaru. They succeed and note that the elders will have a nasty surprise when they can't hurt any Branch members with their seals.



** Keiko makes fun of Natsumi and mocks Minato and Inoichi's concern for her when Natsumi's mission lasts an extra week and casually says that Natsumi is KIA. Jiraiya is disgusted by Natsumi's mocking and her flippancy towards a comrade's death. Inoichi and Minato hate Keiko because she makes fun of Natsumi, terrible to work with and doesn't respect Minato's personal space. Due to all of this once Natsumi is benched from ANBU, Keiko is kicked out and replaced by Natsumi.

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** Keiko makes fun of Natsumi and mocks Minato and Inoichi's concern for her when Natsumi's mission lasts an extra week and casually says that Natsumi is KIA. Jiraiya is disgusted by Natsumi's Keiko's mocking and her flippancy towards a comrade's death. Inoichi and Minato hate Keiko because she makes fun of Natsumi, terrible to work with and doesn't respect Minato's personal space. Due to all of this once Natsumi is benched from ANBU, Keiko is kicked out and replaced by Natsumi.



** [[spoiler: Shikaku and Natsumi have two kids, Shikamaru and Shikako.]]



* RefugeInAudacity: During a fight agaist Kumo [[spoiler: Killer B]] ''flirts'' with Natsumi and ''asks her to run away with him'' in front of her ''husband'' to distract them. It worked perfectly.

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* RefugeInAudacity: During a fight agaist Kumo [[spoiler: Killer B]] ''flirts'' with Natsumi and ''asks her to run away with him'' in front of her ''husband'' to distract them. It worked works perfectly.



* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:The Kurama Clan. They were honestly stupid enough to believe they could get away with kidnapping the wife of another clan head to use as their breeding slave, in spite of living in a village with trackers such as the Inuzuka, the Aburame, and the ''Hyuga''. Just look at the EntertaininglyWrong entry for their assumptions about Natsumi, including their foolish belief that just because Shikaku sleeps through council meetings, he doesn't care about her -- completely discounting the fact that he's a ''Nara''.]]

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* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:The Kurama Clan. They were honestly stupid enough to believe they could get away with kidnapping the wife of another clan head to use as their breeding slave, in spite of living in a village with trackers such as the Inuzuka, the Aburame, and the ''Hyuga''.''Hyuuga''. Just look at the EntertaininglyWrong entry for their assumptions about Natsumi, including their foolish belief that just because Shikaku sleeps through council meetings, he doesn't care about her -- completely discounting the fact that he's a ''Nara''.]]


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** In ANBU, if a ninja survives past their expected expiration date they usually get promoted. The life expetancy of assassination is five years, a sabotage specialist one years, [[spoiler: So Natsumi and Koichi Sarutobi get promoted after they survive past it.]]
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** It's also her reasoning when she becomes close to [[spoiler: Eri, Sakumo's wife in the hope that having Eri would prevent Sakumo's downspiral. It also the reason why she took Komushi as a sealing apprentice, he's Sasori's best friend. Eri was a given, but she also became genuinely fond of Komushi and very good acquaintances with Sasori as well.]]

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** It's also her reasoning when she becomes close to [[spoiler: Eri, Sakumo's wife in the hope that having Eri would prevent Sakumo's downspiral. It also the reason why she took Komushi as a sealing apprentice, he's Sasori's best friend. Eri was a given, but she also became genuinely fond of Komushi and is very good acquaintances with Sasori as well.]]

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** Natsumi herself seems to be starting one in sealing. She gains apprentices in [[spoiler:Komushi and Ibiki]], and passes on her skill while in exchange being considered a master. [[spoiler:Komushi in turn ends up passing on his skills to Temari]].



** It's also her reasoning when she becomes close to [[spoiler: Eri, Sakumo's wife in the hope that having Eri would prevent Sakumo's downspiral. It also the reason why she took Komushi as a sealing apprentice, he's Sasori's best friend.]]

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** It's also her reasoning when she becomes close to [[spoiler: Eri, Sakumo's wife in the hope that having Eri would prevent Sakumo's downspiral. It also the reason why she took Komushi as a sealing apprentice, he's Sasori's best friend. Eri was a given, but she also became genuinely fond of Komushi and very good acquaintances with Sasori as well.]]


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** Natsumi's justification for hating on Kiri in later years, besides the scars on Shikaku's face. [[spoiler:It took them well over a ''decade'' to realize there was something wrong with their Kage, when it was blatantly obvious to everyone else. The fact that it was a ''sixteen year old kunoichi'' (Mei Terumi) that finally did something about was just icing on the cake. According to Natsumi, there are only three notable people exempt from her dislike: Kisame's exempt as he attempted to do something about it, even if he ended up leaving, and Zabuza gets a pass because he tried to kill the Mizukage in order to fix things. Mei gets her approval because she ended up succeeding, and gets a pass for being late because she was all of six when it started.]]

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* ArrangedMarriage: The Uchiha clan, namely [[spoiler: Fugaku and Mikoto]], and the Hyuuga clan, for [[spoiler: Hizashi and Misaki, as well as Hiashi and Hisana]]. Prevented by Shikaku [[spoiler: when his parents were about to pair him off to Yoshino by springing a surprise proposal on Natsumi]].

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* ArrangedMarriage: The Uchiha clan, namely [[spoiler: Fugaku and Mikoto]], and the Hyuuga clan, for [[spoiler: Hizashi and Misaki, as well as Hiashi and Hisana]]. Prevented by Shikaku [[spoiler: when [[spoiler:when his parents were about to pair him off to Yoshino by springing a surprise proposal on Natsumi]].



** Minato [[spoiler: rips a clan apart for endangering Natsumi and her unborn child.]]

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** Thanks to [[spoiler:Komushi]] attaining a sealing specialty during his apprenticeship with Natsumi, [[spoiler:Sasori never left the village or killed the Sandaime Kazekage (Satoshi). Thus, when Suna needs a jinchuriki and necessitates sealing it into Gaara, whose father, the canon Yondaime Kazekage, is the Sandaime's son, Komushi is the one designated with sealing Shukaku into Gaara and prevents the faulty seal that caused all of canon Gaara's problems from being used. Thanks to that, Karura survives the sealing, and is able to prevent her husband from destroying her youngest son's childhood. And since Sasori never left, it's implied that ''he'' will become Yondaime Kazekage rather than Gaara's father.]]

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* [[spoiler:AssassinOutclassin]]: Being an [[spoiler:assassin]] herself, Natsumi has been in the position to foul not only the [[spoiler:assassination of Sakumo’s Wife, Eri]] but also [[spoiler:her own assassination]]

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* [[spoiler:AssassinOutclassin]]: Being an [[spoiler:assassin]] herself, Natsumi has been in the position to foul not only the [[spoiler:assassination of Sakumo’s Wife, Eri]] but also [[spoiler:her own assassination]] assassination]].



* CruelMercy: As she wished, [[spoiler: Uroko Kurama]] doesn't have to marry [[spoiler: her cousin and clan head Murakamo.]] [[spoiler: She became a pariah in the village, stripped of her ninja status and her clan is disbanded because she [[LaserGuidedKarma backstabbed her cousin Natsumi who wanted to help her]].]]

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* CruelMercy: As she wished, [[spoiler: Uroko Kurama]] doesn't have to marry [[spoiler: her cousin and clan head Murakamo.]] [[spoiler: She became a pariah in the village, stripped of her ninja status and her clan is disbanded because she [[LaserGuidedKarma backstabbed her cousin Natsumi who wanted to help her]]. And everyone will always know what she did thanks to the scars Natsumi put on her face right before she captured.]]



** Skipping a grade is seen as a sign of accomplishment and intelligence to civilians and civilian-born ninja. For ninja, skipping a grade is used as a threat to get BrilliantButLazy students to work harder because it has '''dire''' consequences in a ninja's ability to socialize, earn promotions and work in groups.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Since Natsumi is a extremely difficult person to gather information on, [[spoiler: her biological family the Kurama clan]] make assumptions as to who she is. They believe she is a [[spoiler: healthy Kurama bastard that has their bloodline manifested.]] She actually has a kinjutsu a result of her reincarnation [[spoiler: its rather ambiguous whether she has the bloodline or not.]] They know she is kenjutsu-specialist that doesn't actually do any kenjutsu specialist missions. [[spoiler: Once they realize she's ANBU, they assume she's a seduction specialist that uses their bloodline and illusions in her missions. In reality Natsumi is an assassination-specialist ANBU ''captain'' on her way to becoming the next ANBU General.]] They think because Shikaku slept through the Council meetings that he probably doesn't care for her that much. [[spoiler: Shikaku loves his wife dearly and tears them a new asshole.]] They assume she's an unimportant retired homemaker and that no one would miss her. [[spoiler: She has '''many''' friends and subordinates in high places and the Yondaime is her adoptive brother. They immediately close ranks to look for her.]] Since she married a Nara, who are known to be lazy and unmotivated they assume that she must be lazy and unmotivated and will wait for someone to rescue her.[[spoiler: She tore her way to becoming an ANBU captain and the respected lady of Nara and she rescues herself from their clutches. ]]

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** Skipping a grade is seen as a sign of accomplishment and intelligence to civilians and civilian-born ninja. For ninja, skipping a grade is used as a threat to get BrilliantButLazy students to work harder because it has '''dire''' consequences in a ninja's ability to socialize, earn promotions and work in groups.
groups. Natsumi speculates that the main reason why Itachi and Kakashi were so well-known for graduating at such young ages in canon is because they survived ''in spite of that''.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Since Natsumi is a extremely difficult person to gather information on, [[spoiler: her biological family the Kurama clan]] make assumptions as to who she is. They believe she is a [[spoiler: healthy [[spoiler:healthy Kurama bastard that has their bloodline manifested.]] She actually has a kinjutsu a result of her reincarnation [[spoiler: its [[spoiler:its rather ambiguous whether she has the bloodline or not.]] They know she is kenjutsu-specialist that doesn't actually do any kenjutsu specialist missions. [[spoiler: Once [[spoiler:Once they realize she's ANBU, they assume she's a seduction specialist that uses their bloodline and illusions in her missions. In reality Natsumi is an assassination-specialist ANBU ''captain'' on her way to becoming the next ANBU General.]] They think because Shikaku slept through the Council meetings that he probably doesn't care for her that much. [[spoiler: Shikaku loves his wife dearly and tears them a new asshole.]] They assume she's an unimportant retired homemaker and that no one would miss her. [[spoiler: She has '''many''' friends and subordinates in high places and the Yondaime is her adoptive brother. They immediately close ranks to look for her.]] Since she married a Nara, who are known to be lazy and unmotivated they assume that she must be lazy and unmotivated and will wait for someone to rescue her.[[spoiler: She tore her way to becoming an ANBU captain and the respected lady of Nara and she rescues herself from their clutches. ]]



** Because Natsumi took control of the Academy (which eventually became Nara jurisdiction) and screwed around with the genin teams barring Minato's canon team, [[spoiler:Senju Nawaki never died like in canon nor expressed an interest in ever becoming Hokage. As a result, Tsunade opposed Dan's belief that there should be a medic on every team, citing her sensei's reasoning, and the two are unable to get along, hence they never became lovers.]]



* InSpiteOfANail: Even with Natsumi's presence, there are some things that still happen anyway. [[spoiler:Sakumo still dies, only instead of seppuku, he was killed in a last stand against ROOT agents. Orochimaru still does his experiments and Tenzou still gets the Mokuton, only he has another girl named Naomi with him who was also experimented on to become a pseudo-Uzumaki and Natsumi's counter, while Orochimaru is caught and executed. Itachi still gets his sharingan when he's four due to a lack of available babysitters. A clan is still effectively destroyed, only instead of the massacred and embittered Uchiha Clan, it had been a panicking Kurama Clan whose kekkai genkai was on the verge of extinction, and was only disbanded at that.]]



* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: [[CatsAreSnarkers Kenta]], Natsumi's first Summon.]]

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* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal: [[CatsAreSnarkers Kenta]], Natsumi's first Summon.Summon. Just for that, Natsumi made sure that the boss summon of the Leopards had his killer as a chew toy.]]



* MandatoryMotherhood: It is very important for shinobi with important family or dangerous jobs to have children. [[spoiler: It's implied that Konohamaru was born because his father, Koichi had a dangerous career and didn't get to live that long.]]

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* MandatoryMotherhood: It is very important for shinobi with important family or dangerous jobs to have children. [[spoiler: It's implied that Konohamaru was born because his father, Koichi Koichi, had a dangerous career and didn't get to live that long.]]



* MrsRobinson: Natsumi thinks she might be this, considering she's ''[[OlderThanTheyLook Older than she looks]]'' and she's attracted to people that are technically younger than her.

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* MrsRobinson: Natsumi thinks she might be this, considering she's ''[[OlderThanTheyLook Older older than she looks]]'' and she's attracted to people that are technically younger than her.



** This is why [[spoiler: Suna]] readily agreed to Natsumi's offer of an apprenticeship for [[spoiler: Komushi]]. They have no sealing specialists and they need one so they could have good exploding tags, refrigeration seals, storage scrolls and the like.

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** This is why [[spoiler: Suna]] readily agreed to Natsumi's offer of an apprenticeship for [[spoiler: Komushi]]. [[spoiler:Komushi]]. They have no sealing specialists and they need one so they could have good exploding tags, refrigeration seals, storage scrolls and the like.like with no risk of sabotage.



* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: The Uchiha Clan. [[spoiler: They felt slighted and left out from the village and acted rather difficult. Natsumi foresaw this and cleared up any misunderstanding that might have turned into resentment by talking to Fugaku and the other clan heads. Natsumi has since then been campaigning for the Uchiha clan by putting them in a good light and forcing them to interact around the village more often.]]
* NuclearFamily: Discounting Natsumi's informal adoption, the Hakate family consists of Eri, Sakumo and [[spoiler: their two children, Kakashi and Midori.]]

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* NotEvilJustMisunderstood: The Uchiha Clan. [[spoiler: They felt slighted and left out from the village and acted rather difficult. Natsumi foresaw this and cleared up any misunderstanding that might have turned into resentment by talking to Fugaku and the other clan heads. Natsumi has since then been campaigning for the Uchiha clan Clan by putting them in a good light and forcing them to interact around the village more often.]]
* NuclearFamily: Discounting Natsumi's informal adoption, the Hakate Hatake family consists of Eri, Sakumo and [[spoiler: their two children, Kakashi and Midori.]]


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* TooDumbToLive: [[spoiler:The Kurama Clan. They were honestly stupid enough to believe they could get away with kidnapping the wife of another clan head to use as their breeding slave, in spite of living in a village with trackers such as the Inuzuka, the Aburame, and the ''Hyuga''. Just look at the EntertaininglyWrong entry for their assumptions about Natsumi, including their foolish belief that just because Shikaku sleeps through council meetings, he doesn't care about her -- completely discounting the fact that he's a ''Nara''.]]

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* AlmightyJanitor: Most of Konoha's shinobi forces is under-ranked for security reasons. As being a jounin indicates reputable skill, it results in the ninja in question having a target painted on their back. Hence, it is a rarity for jounin to be found in ANBU, and clans have a set amount of jounin slots according to the number of members they have in order to prevent other villages and bounty hunters from hunting them down and dwindling the size of the clan. It also has the benefit of many of the other shinobi villages underestimating Konoha shinobi, which goes a long way into explaining why Naruto was never promoted from his genin rank for all of Part II in canon despite being by far the most powerful shinobi in Konoha at the time. [[note]]If Naruto ever did get promoted beyond genin rank, it was never shown as by the time of the epilogue, [[spoiler:he was already Hokage]].[[/note]]



* AnimalMotifs: Cats for Natsumi. Big cats. Her codename in ANBU is Panther and is nicknamed "neko-chan" by Jiraiya. She also has the [[spoiler: Leopard Summoning Contract.]] Toads for Jiraiya and Minato, slugs for Tsunade, snakes for Orochimaru, tortoise for Gai, monkey for Koichi and Hiruzen, and dogs for the Hatake and Inuzuka Clan.

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* AnimalMotifs: Cats for Natsumi. Big cats. Her codename in ANBU is Panther and is nicknamed nick named "neko-chan" by Jiraiya. She also has the [[spoiler: Leopard Summoning Contract.]] Toads for Jiraiya and Minato, slugs for Tsunade, snakes for Orochimaru, tortoise for Gai, monkey for Koichi and Hiruzen, and dogs for the Hatake and Inuzuka Clan.
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** Skipping a grade is seen as a sign of accomplishment and intelligence to civilians and civilian-born ninja. For ninja, skipping a grade is used as a threat to get BrilliantButLazy students to work harder because it has '''dire''' consequences an ninja's ability to socialize, earn promotions and work in groups.

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** Skipping a grade is seen as a sign of accomplishment and intelligence to civilians and civilian-born ninja. For ninja, skipping a grade is used as a threat to get BrillantButLazy students to work harder because it has '''dire''' consequences an ninja's ability to socialize, earn promotions and work in groups.

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** Skipping a grade is seen as a sign of accomplishment and intelligence to civilians and civilian-born ninja. For ninja, skipping a grade is used as a threat to get BrillantButLazy BrilliantButLazy students to work harder because it has '''dire''' consequences an ninja's ability to socialize, earn promotions and work in groups.
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** Skipping a grade is seen as a sign of accomplishment and intelligence to civilians and civilian-born ninja. For ninja, skipping a grade is used as a threat to get BrillantButLazy students to work harder because it has '''dire''' consequences an ninja's ability to socialize, earn promotions and work in groups.








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* GradeSkipper: A misguided Academy teacher attempts to have Kakashi skip a grade, without considering the consequences it would have on Kakashi's social life and ninja career. Thankfully, Natsumi puts a stop to it.
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--> Inoichi: There was also that Vale-in-tines day thing; originally about the goats, dogs, and some dead priest. That was celebrated with candy and flowers given between lovers or complete strangers after a few centuries. Then the fat red man that broke into people's homes in the dead of night using a chimney of all things, celebrated with gift giving.Then the rabbit laying eggs one, which had somthing to do with a martyr's undead state. I stopped questioning her old culture after that one.

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--> Inoichi: There was also that Vale-in-tines day thing; originally about the goats, dogs, and some dead priest. That was celebrated with candy and flowers given between lovers or complete strangers after a few centuries. Then the fat red man that broke into people's homes in the dead of night using a chimney of all things, celebrated with gift giving.Then the rabbit laying eggs one, which had somthing something to do with a martyr's undead state. I stopped questioning her old culture after that one.

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--> Inoichi: There was also that Vale-in-tines day thing; originally about the goats, dogs, and some dead priest. That was celebrated with candy and flowers given between lovers or complete strangers after a few centuries. Then the fat red man that broke into people's homes in the dead of nigh using a chimney of all things, celebrated with gift giving.Then the rabbit laying eggs one, which had somthing to do with a martyr's undead state. I stopped questioning her old culture after that one.

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--> Inoichi: There was also that Vale-in-tines day thing; originally about the goats, dogs, and some dead priest. That was celebrated with candy and flowers given between lovers or complete strangers after a few centuries. Then the fat red man that broke into people's homes in the dead of nigh night using a chimney of all things, celebrated with gift giving.Then the rabbit laying eggs one, which had somthing to do with a martyr's undead state. I stopped questioning her old culture after that one.


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* ParentalSubstitute: Both Sakumo [[spoiler: and Eri]] become surrogate parents to Natsumi.
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** [[spoiler: Natsumi is the one to finally end Danzo's life.]]

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** [[spoiler: Natsumi Natsumi, who loved Sakumo like a father, is the one to finally end Danzo's life.]]
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Now with a ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10700648/1/Neko-chan-s-Pawprints side-fic]]'' of between-scenes... well... [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin scenes]].
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* GlamorousSingleMother: Tsume Inuzaka refuses to get married and has two children [[spoiler: out of wedlock.]] She balances raising her children, being a kunoichi of Leaf and being Inuzaka clan head.

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* GlamorousSingleMother: Tsume Inuzaka Inuzuka refuses to get married and has two children [[spoiler: out of wedlock.]] She balances raising her children, being a kunoichi of Leaf and being Inuzaka Inuzuka clan head.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of completion, Déjà vu no Jutsu weighs in at a whopping 554,296 words. The author, Vixen Tail, averaged 20,000 words per chapter for 24 chapters.

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* {{Doorstopper}}: As of completion, completion and epilogue, Déjà vu no Jutsu weighs in at a whopping 554,296 572,468 words. The author, Vixen Tail, averaged 20,000 words per chapter for 24 25 chapters.

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