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** Patricia is the Human with the Patience SOUL.
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** Patricia is the Human with the Patience SOUL.[[spoiler:She was once an Orphan,but made it to the Underground and meeted Toriel.She sneaked away from the Ruins and did an "Pacifist Route" over the Underground,until meeting her Last Fate with Asgore.]]
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** Patricia is the Human with
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**Also,unlike on the Original Undertale,where is hinted that No Human expect Frisk ever reached [[spoiler:Asgore]],in Chapter 5 it looks like [[spoiler:All the humans made it trough the Underground but never beated Asgore]].
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* {{Original Character}}:Caroline is an Alternate for Chara Dremurr:She's the First Fallen Human,and has an Physical similarity to Coraline,using an Green shirt with Yellow Stars,Brown pants and Red Boots.However,she also has Paler skin and Rosy Cheeks like Chara.
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* {{Original Character}}:Caroline is an Alternate for Chara Dremurr:She's Dremmurr:She's the First Fallen Human,and has an Physical similarity to Coraline,using an Green shirt with Yellow Stars,Brown pants and Red Boots.However,she also has Paler skin and Rosy Cheeks like Chara.Chara.
**Patricia is the Human with
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* {{Not Quite Dead}}:[[spoiler:Beldam/The Other Mother]] seems to be following Coraline on the Underground as seen in the Chapter 2.
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* {{Not Quite Dead}}:[[spoiler:Beldam/The Other Mother]] seems to be following Coraline on the Underground as seen in the Chapter 2.2 and lightly hinted on the Prologue.
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**The Fifth Chapter,"A Mother's Heartache",is about the eventual Fight you do with Toriel and it's Pacifist ending.
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** Another version is delivered by Coraline after recieving [[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] message.
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** Another version is delivered by Coraline after recieving [[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] message.message.
*{{The Rival}}:[[spoiler:Beldam/Other Mother]] to Flowey as revealed in Chapter 5.
*{{The Rival}}:[[spoiler:Beldam/Other Mother]] to Flowey as revealed in Chapter 5.
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** The Fourth Chapter,"Patient Patricia",introduces in the End the titular Patricia,the Fanfic's version for the Fallen Human of Patience virtue.
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*{{Meaningful Name}}:For each of the Chapters.
**The Prologue,"Lingering Nightmare",shows that Coraline has Nightmares about her experience on [[spoiler:The Other World]]
**The First Chapter,"When People Call her Name",presents Caroline,the Coraline version of Chara.
**On the Second Chapter,"Old Friends",[[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] and [[spoiler:The Cat]],both knowed ones of Coraline,appear.
**The Third Chapter,"A Minor Roadblook",ends with an Fight with Napstablook.
**The Prologue,"Lingering Nightmare",shows that Coraline has Nightmares about her experience on [[spoiler:The Other World]]
**The First Chapter,"When People Call her Name",presents Caroline,the Coraline version of Chara.
**On the Second Chapter,"Old Friends",[[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] and [[spoiler:The Cat]],both knowed ones of Coraline,appear.
**The Third Chapter,"A Minor Roadblook",ends with an Fight with Napstablook.
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*{{Old Friend}}:[[spoiler:The Cat]] reveals to be One of Toriel,but claims that keeping his eyes on [[spoiler:The Other Mother]] leaved him without time to visit Toriel more.
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** Toriel on Chapter 3 also briefly thinked somehow Caroline "returned" to her,before being taken back to reality by Coraline.
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** Toriel on Chapter 3 also briefly thinked somehow Caroline "returned" to her,before being taken back to reality by Coraline.
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*{{Original Character}}:Caroline is an Alternate for Chara Dremurr:She's the First Fallen Human,and has an Physical similarity to Coraline,using an Green shirt with Yellow Stars,Brown pants and Red Boots.However,she also has Paler skin and Rosy Cheeks like Chara.
* {{Reincarnation}}:At least,this is what Flowey thinks Coraline is of Caroline.
* {{Reincarnation}}:At least,this is what Flowey thinks Coraline is of Caroline.
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** Another version is delivered by Coraline after recieving [[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] message.message.
*{{Reincarnation}}:At least,this is what Flowey thinks Coraline is of Caroline.
**Toriel on Chapter 3 also briefly thinked somehow Caroline "returned" to her,before being taken back to reality by Coraline.
*{{Reincarnation}}:At least,this is what Flowey thinks Coraline is of Caroline.
**Toriel on Chapter 3 also briefly thinked somehow Caroline "returned" to her,before being taken back to reality by Coraline.
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* {{This Cannot Be}}:An version of it is delivered by Flowey after he discover Coraline name.
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**Another version is delivered by Coraline after recieving [[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] message.
**Another version is delivered by Coraline after recieving [[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] message.
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**In Chapter 2,[[spoiler:The Other Wybie]] warning,possibly on [[spoiler:The Other Mother]],shows that the main threat of Coraline possibly wans't completely eliminated.
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*{{Not Quite Dead}}:[[spoiler:Beldam/The Other Mother]] seems to be following Coraline on the Underground as seen in the Chapter 2.
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* {{Lost World}}:Caroline claimed that Humanity got "dull" since the time she falled there.
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Its an fanfic mixing WesternAnimation/{{Coraline}} and VideoGame/Undertale on what if instead of Frisk falling on the Underground,it was Coraline.
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Its an fanfic mixing WesternAnimation/{{Coraline}} and VideoGame/Undertale VideoGame/{{Undertale}} on what if instead of Frisk falling on the Underground,it was Coraline.
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* {{Alternate Universe}}:Without counting the fact that is Coraline the eight fallen human of the Underground,there are expected changes along the road of the story.One of them,visible on the First Chapter,is that Chara is replacer with Caroline,an character with an similar backstory but with an appearence that resemble more Coraline than Frisk.
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* {{Alternate Universe}}:Without counting the fact that is Coraline the eight fallen human of the Underground,there are expected changes along the road of the story.One of them,visible on the First Chapter,is that Chara is replacer replaced with Caroline,an character with an similar backstory but with an appearence that resemble more Coraline than Frisk.Frisk.
* {{Crossover}}:Of Coraline and Undertale.
* {{Crossover}}:Of Coraline and Undertale.
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*{{Lost World}}:Caroline claimed that Humanity got "dull" since the time she falled there.
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*{{Mood Whiplash}}:Just like in the Original Undertale,after Coraline avoids all of Flowey's bullets,he attempts to end Coraline life,but not before claiming that "Caroline" (who Flowey misunderstood with Coraline) never changed from the resilient person she is.
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* {{This Cannot Be}}:An version of it is delivered by Flowey after he discover Coraline name:"Could it be? Are you......no......that's....crazy!Isn't it?"
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* {{This Cannot Be!}}:An version of it is delivered by Flowey after he discover Coraline name.[[subscript:"Could it be? Are you......no......that's....crazy!Isn't it?"]]
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* {{This Cannot Be!}}:An Be}}:An version of it is delivered by Flowey after he discover Coraline name.[[subscript:"Could name:"Could it be? Are you......no......that's....crazy!Isn't it?"]]it?"
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!! Coratale contains examples of:
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!! Coratale contains examples of:of:
*{{Alternate Universe}}:Without counting the fact that is Coraline the eight fallen human of the Underground,there are expected changes along the road of the story.One of them,visible on the First Chapter,is that Chara is replacer with Caroline,an character with an similar backstory but with an appearence that resemble more Coraline than Frisk.
*{{This Cannot Be!}}:An version of it is delivered by Flowey after he discover Coraline name.
[-"Could it be? Are you......no......that's....crazy!Isn't it?"-]
*{{Alternate Universe}}:Without counting the fact that is Coraline the eight fallen human of the Underground,there are expected changes along the road of the story.One of them,visible on the First Chapter,is that Chara is replacer with Caroline,an character with an similar backstory but with an appearence that resemble more Coraline than Frisk.
*{{This Cannot Be!}}:An version of it is delivered by Flowey after he discover Coraline name.
[-"Could it be? Are you......no......that's....crazy!Isn't it?"-]
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!! Coratale contains examples of:
!! Coratale contains examples of:
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Coratale is an {{Crossover}} fanfic on DeviantART who's writted by http://redknight33.deviantart.com/ and have the covers drawed and story's published on http://minecraftfan11scr.deviantart.com/.It's an fanfic mixing Western Animation/{{Coraline}} and the video-game on what if
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Coratale is an {{Crossover}} fanfic on DeviantART who's writted by http://redknight33.deviantart.com/ and have the covers drawed and story's published on http://minecraftfan11scr.deviantart.com/.It's com/ .
Its an fanfic mixingWestern Animation/{{Coraline}} WesternAnimation/{{Coraline}} and the video-game VideoGame/Undertale on what ifif instead of Frisk falling on the Underground,it was Coraline.
These are the avalible chapters:
-Prologue: http://minecraftfan11scr.deviantart.com/art/Coratale-Prologue-Lingering-Nightmare-666610981
-Chapter 1: http://minecraftfan11scr.deviantart.com/art/Coratale-Ch-1-When-people-call-her-Name-666856568
Its an fanfic mixing
These are the avalible chapters:
-Prologue: http://minecraftfan11scr.deviantart.com/art/Coratale-Prologue-Lingering-Nightmare-666610981
-Chapter 1: http://minecraftfan11scr.deviantart.com/art/Coratale-Ch-1-When-people-call-her-Name-666856568
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Coratale is an {{Crossover}} fanfic on DeviantART who's writted by http://redknight33.deviantart.com/ and have the covers drawed and story's published on http://minecraftfan11scr.deviantart.com/.It's an fanfic mixing Western Animation/{{Coraline}} and the video-game on what if
