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* ShoutOut: The premise seems to be one for ''Film/{{But Im A Cheerleader}}''.
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* {{Covert Pervert}}:[[spoiler:''Fluttershy'']] of all ponies is one, apparently having a huge porn collection in her basement.
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* [[GirlOnGirlIsHot Mare On Mare Is Hot]]: [[spoiler:Celestia]] certainly seems to think so.
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--> '''Twilight''':Let’s see, uh, she must mean that, er, if we don’t all become heterosexual... then the Elements will turn us into bundles of sticks! No one’s documented extended exposure to them—who knows what will happen? But Celestia knows. She’s never wrong!
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--> '''Twilight''':Let’s see, uh, she must mean that, er, if we don’t all become heterosexual... then the Elements will turn us into bundles of sticks! No one’s documented extended exposure to them—who knows what will happen? But Celestia knows. She’s never wrong! wrong!
** Celestia herself is quite fond of this trope.
*IntrepidReporter: Averted. Breaking News frequently claims to be this, but should be quoting an [[WorstNewsJudgmentEver entirely different trope]] to describe herself.
** Celestia herself is quite fond of this trope.
*IntrepidReporter: Averted. Breaking News frequently claims to be this, but should be quoting an [[WorstNewsJudgmentEver entirely different trope]] to describe herself.
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Justified. [[spoiler:Rainbw Dash having sex causes the hurricane.]]
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Justified. [[spoiler:Rainbw [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash having sex causes caused the hurricane.hurricane when she had sex.]]
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* TeacherStudentRomance: Twilight's goal.
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''Clop It!'' is NOT a clop fic. It is a ''WesternAnimation/[[My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic]]'' Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by [=PrettyMonster=].
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''Clop It!'' is NOT a clop fic. It is a ''WesternAnimation/[[My ''My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic]]'' Magic'' Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by [=PrettyMonster=].
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''Clop It!'' is NOT a clop fic. It is a ''WesternAnimation/[[My Little Pony: Pony Friendship Is Magic]]'' Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by [=PrettyMonster=].
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''Clop It!'' is NOT a clop fic. It is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by [=PrettyMonster=].
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''Clop It!'' is NOT a clop fic. It is a My ''WesternAnimation/[[My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Is Magic]]'' Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by [=PrettyMonster=].
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* ShoutOut: The premise seems to be one for ''Film/{{But I'm A Cheerleader}}''.
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* ShoutOut: The premise seems to be one for ''Film/{{But I'm Im A Cheerleader}}''.
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* BetaCouple: By the end [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash and Soarin are together as are Luna and Rarity.]]
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* BetaCouple: By the end [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash and Soarin are together as are Luna and Rarity.]] Oh and Iron Will and ''Chrysalis''!]]
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* ButtMonkey: Shining Armor.
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* TheCameo: [[spoiler:Derpy]] makes a brief appearance near the end.
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* BetaCouple: By the end [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash and Soarin are together as are Luna and Rarity.]]
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* Insane Troll Logic: InsaneTrollLogic: Twilight Sparkle.
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* Insane Troll Logic: Twilight Sparkle.
--> '''Twilight''':Let’s see, uh, she must mean that, er, if we don’t all become heterosexual... then the Elements will turn us into bundles of sticks! No one’s documented extended exposure to them—who knows what will happen? But Celestia knows. She’s never wrong!
--> '''Twilight''':Let’s see, uh, she must mean that, er, if we don’t all become heterosexual... then the Elements will turn us into bundles of sticks! No one’s documented extended exposure to them—who knows what will happen? But Celestia knows. She’s never wrong!
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--> '''Iron Will''': [[spoiler:'' When somepony kidnaps your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ '']]
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--> '''Iron Will''': [[spoiler:'' When somepony kidnaps your mare… ‘’’IT’S '''IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ PAIR!''' '']]
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*{{Covert Pervert}}:[[spoiler:''Fluttershy'']] of all ponies is one, apparently having a huge porn collection in her basement.
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* YourCheatingHeart: Shortly after it is confirmed that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are marefriends, the former cheats on the latter. [[spoiler: Later we learn that there's more to this.]]
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Justified. [[spoiler:Rainbw Dash having sex is what causes the hurricane.]]
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Justified. [[spoiler:Rainbw Dash having sex is what causes the hurricane.]]
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* PoesLaw: Oh so much. Has developed a hatedom due to this.
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* CrackFic: Done right.
* HeterosexualLifePartners: [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy by the end.]]
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* SawedOffShotgun: Iron Will has one of a paintball variety.
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* SawedOffShotgun: Iron Will has one of a paintball variety. variety.
* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Justified. [[spoiler:Rainbw Dash having sex is what causes the hurricane.]]
* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Justified. [[spoiler:Rainbw Dash having sex is what causes the hurricane.]]
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--> '''Iron Will''': '' When somepony steals your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ ''
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--> '''Iron Will''': '' [[spoiler:'' When somepony steals kidnaps your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ '' '']]
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The work has been completed, read it [[here http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60284/clop-it]].
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The work has been completed, read it [[here http://www.[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60284/clop-it]].net/story/60284/clop-it here]].
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* {{Bloodless Carnage}}: The battle in chapter five is this.
* {{Bottomless Magazines}}: Averted, Iron Will’s paintball guns do run out of ammo.
* {{Combat Pragmatist}}: When his paintball machine pistols run out of ammo, Iron Will decides to throw them.
* {{Crowning Moment of Awesome}}: Rarity gets one when [[spoiler:she refuses to lay down and die after the Element of Magic drains her.]] To top it off, [[spoiler:after Luna revives her she ‘’puts the element back on delivers an awesome one liner.]]
* {{Demoted to Extra}}:Spike has become this, having perhaps three lines in the entirety of the story. This isn’t bad, mind you, at least the author remembered to include him.
* {{Guns Akimbo}}:Iron Will does this with a pair of paintball machine pistols.
* {{Harmless Villain}}:[[spoiler:Chrysalis]] is one, being nice if creepy and suggestive to the mane six.
* {{Pre-Asskicking One-Liner}}:--> '''Iron Will''': '' When somepony steals your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ ''
* {{Rhymes on a Dime}}:Iron Will in about 90% of his dialogue.
* {{Sawed Off Shotgun}}:Iron Will has one of a paintball variety.
* {{Super OCD}}: Twilight as usual.
* {{Bottomless Magazines}}: Averted, Iron Will’s paintball guns do run out of ammo.
* {{Combat Pragmatist}}: When his paintball machine pistols run out of ammo, Iron Will decides to throw them.
* {{Crowning Moment of Awesome}}: Rarity gets one when [[spoiler:she refuses to lay down and die after the Element of Magic drains her.]] To top it off, [[spoiler:after Luna revives her she ‘’puts the element back on delivers an awesome one liner.]]
* {{Demoted to Extra}}:Spike has become this, having perhaps three lines in the entirety of the story. This isn’t bad, mind you, at least the author remembered to include him.
* {{Guns Akimbo}}:Iron Will does this with a pair of paintball machine pistols.
* {{Harmless Villain}}:[[spoiler:Chrysalis]] is one, being nice if creepy and suggestive to the mane six.
* {{Pre-Asskicking One-Liner}}:--> '''Iron Will''': '' When somepony steals your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ ''
* {{Rhymes on a Dime}}:Iron Will in about 90% of his dialogue.
* {{Sawed Off Shotgun}}:Iron Will has one of a paintball variety.
* {{Super OCD}}: Twilight as usual.
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* {{Bloodless Carnage}}: BloodlessCarnage: The battle in chapter five is this.
*{{Bottomless Magazines}}: BottomlessMagazines: Averted, Iron Will’s paintball guns do run out of ammo.
*{{Combat Pragmatist}}: CombatPragmatist: When his paintball machine pistols run out of ammo, Iron Will decides to throw them.
*{{Crowning Moment of Awesome}}: Rarity gets one when [[spoiler:she refuses to lay down and die after the Element of Magic drains her.]] To top it off, [[spoiler:after Luna revives her she ‘’puts the element back on delivers an awesome one liner.]]
* {{Demoted to Extra}}:SpikeDemotedToExtra: Spike has become this, having perhaps three lines in the entirety of the story. This isn’t bad, mind you, at least the author remembered to include him.
*{{Guns Akimbo}}:Iron GunsAkimbo: Iron Will does this with a pair of paintball machine pistols.
*{{Harmless Villain}}:[[spoiler:Chrysalis]] HarmlessVillain: [[spoiler:Chrysalis]] is one, being nice if creepy and suggestive to the mane six.
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--> '''Iron Will''': '' When somepony steals your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ ''
*{{Rhymes on a Dime}}:Iron RhymesOnADime: Iron Will in about 90% of his dialogue.
*{{Sawed Off Shotgun}}:Iron SawedOffShotgun: Iron Will has one of a paintball variety.
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Clop It! is NOT a clop fic, as its official description makes sure to mention. What it actually is is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by PrettyMonster.
The story starts out with Twilight Sparkle waking up after having drunk drugged tea while Celestia was visiting Ponyville. the rest of the Mane Six are there as well and while Twilight begins formulating a plan of escape and daydreaming about Celestia, whom she is in love with, the Princess herself arrives. She reveals that she was the one who drugged Twilight and her friends and brought them to...
The story starts out with Twilight Sparkle waking up after having drunk drugged tea while Celestia was visiting Ponyville. the rest of the Mane Six are there as well and while Twilight begins formulating a plan of escape and daydreaming about Celestia, whom she is in love with, the Princess herself arrives. She reveals that she was the one who drugged Twilight and her friends and brought them to...
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Clop It! is NOT a clop fic, as its official description makes sure to mention. What it actually is fic. It is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by PrettyMonster.
The story starts out with Twilight Sparkle waking and her friends wake up after having drunk drugged tea while Celestia was visiting in a stupor during Celestia's visit to Ponyville. the rest of the Mane Six are there Just as well and while Twilight begins formulating a plan of to escape and daydreaming about Celestia, whom she is in love with, grow closer to her crush and mentor, the Princess herself arrives. She reveals that she was the one who drugged Twilight and her friends and brought them to...
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The work has been completed, read it here http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60284/clop-it.
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*{{Bloodless Carnage}}: The battle in chapter five is this.
*{{Bottomless Magazines}}: Averted, Iron Will’s paintball guns do run out of ammo.
*{{Combat Pragmatist}}: When his paintball machine pistols run out of ammo, Iron Will decides to throw them.
*{{Crowning Moment of Awesome}}: Rarity gets one when [[spoiler:she refuses to lay down and die after the Element of Magic drains her.]] To top it off, [[spoiler:after Luna revives her she ‘’puts the element back on delivers an awesome one liner.]]
*{{Demoted to Extra}}:Spike has become this, having perhaps three lines in the entirety of the story. This isn’t bad, mind you, at least the author remembered to include him.
*{{Guns Akimbo}}:Iron Will does this with a pair of paintball machine pistols.
*{{Harmless Villain}}:[[spoiler:Chrysalis]] is one, being nice if creepy and suggestive to the mane six.
*{{Pre-Asskicking One-Liner}}:--> '''Iron Will''': '' When somepony steals your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ ''
*{{Rhymes on a Dime}}:Iron Will in about 90% of his dialogue.
*{{Sawed Off Shotgun}}:Iron Will has one of a paintball variety.
*{{Super OCD}}: Twilight as usual.
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*{{Bloodless Carnage}}: The battle in chapter five is this.
*{{Bottomless Magazines}}: Averted, Iron Will’s paintball guns do run out of ammo.
*{{Combat Pragmatist}}: When his paintball machine pistols run out of ammo, Iron Will decides to throw them.
*{{Crowning Moment of Awesome}}: Rarity gets one when [[spoiler:she refuses to lay down and die after the Element of Magic drains her.]] To top it off, [[spoiler:after Luna revives her she ‘’puts the element back on delivers an awesome one liner.]]
*{{Demoted to Extra}}:Spike has become this, having perhaps three lines in the entirety of the story. This isn’t bad, mind you, at least the author remembered to include him.
*{{Guns Akimbo}}:Iron Will does this with a pair of paintball machine pistols.
*{{Harmless Villain}}:[[spoiler:Chrysalis]] is one, being nice if creepy and suggestive to the mane six.
*{{Pre-Asskicking One-Liner}}:--> '''Iron Will''': '' When somepony steals your mare… ‘’’IT’S TIME TO GROW A PAIR!’’’ ''
*{{Rhymes on a Dime}}:Iron Will in about 90% of his dialogue.
*{{Sawed Off Shotgun}}:Iron Will has one of a paintball variety.
*{{Super OCD}}: Twilight as usual.
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Clop It! is NOT a clop fic, as its official description makes sure to mention. What it actually is is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Romantic Comedy FanFic staring the Mane Six and written by PrettyMonster.
The story starts out with Twilight Sparkle waking up after having drunk drugged tea while Celestia was visiting Ponyville. the rest of the Mane Six are there as well and while Twilight begins formulating a plan of escape and daydreaming about Celestia, whom she is in love with, the Princess herself arrives. She reveals that she was the one who drugged Twilight and her friends and brought them to...
Straight Camp!
and it only escalates from there.
The work has been completed, read it here http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60284/clop-it.
The story starts out with Twilight Sparkle waking up after having drunk drugged tea while Celestia was visiting Ponyville. the rest of the Mane Six are there as well and while Twilight begins formulating a plan of escape and daydreaming about Celestia, whom she is in love with, the Princess herself arrives. She reveals that she was the one who drugged Twilight and her friends and brought them to...
Straight Camp!
and it only escalates from there.
The work has been completed, read it here http://www.fimfiction.net/story/60284/clop-it.
