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* DoWithHimAsYouWill: The ultimate fate of [[PracticallyJoker Jeremiah Smile]] is to be handed owner to the stationmaster of a space station he recently visited. The stationmaster in question reflects on how Jeremiah [[NothingIsScarier had done something unspecified to his daughter]] and [[spoiler: promptly [[BoomHeadshot shoots Jeremiah in the head then and there]]]]

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* DoWithHimAsYouWill: The ultimate fate of [[PracticallyJoker Jeremiah Smile]] is to be handed owner over to the stationmaster of a space station he recently visited. The stationmaster in question reflects on how Jeremiah [[NothingIsScarier had done something unspecified to his daughter]] and [[spoiler: promptly [[BoomHeadshot shoots Jeremiah in the head then and there]]]]
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*DoWithHimAsYouWill: The ultimate fate of [[PracticallyJoker Jeremiah Smile]] is to be handed owner to the stationmaster of a space station he recently visited. The stationmaster in question reflects on how Jeremiah [[NothingIsScarier had done something unspecified to his daughter]] and [[spoiler: promptly [[BoomHeadshot shoots Jeremiah in the head then and there]]]]
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* MistakenForBadass: While Cain genuinely is a skilled fighter, others can't read his internal monologue to know that most of the fights he gets into are accidents or fights he felt obligated to join for fear of losing respect, and think he's just a badass fighter who always wants to jump into the front lines. There are also times where he makes a decision or takes an action that's random or only supposed to save himself or sabotage his side that turns out to have great results for his team (e.g. randomly firing his gun at Chenkov's charging men and hitting the knee of a Sentinel, disabling it), which makes people think he planned it all along or has great instincts.

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* MistakenForBadass: While Cain genuinely is a skilled fighter, others can't read his internal monologue to know that most of the fights he gets into are accidents or fights he felt obligated to join for fear of losing respect, and think he's just a badass fighter who always wants to jump into the front lines. There are also times where he makes a decision or takes an action that's random or only supposed to save himself or sabotage his side that turns out to have great results for his team (e.g. randomly firing his gun at Chenkov's charging men and hitting the knee of a Sentinel, disabling it), which makes people think he planned it all along or has great instincts. Given that this is Ciaphas Cain we're talking about, it's par for the course for him.

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* LighterAndSofter: Chaos in general is portrayed as this in this fic, at least on Slawkenberg. The positive aspects of the Chaos Gods are reflected in their followers on Slawkenberg: Slaaneshi characters such as Emeli and Krystabael are capable of genuine (if obsessive) love and affection towards Cain, while General Mahlone represents the martial honor aspect of Khorne rather than the typical "savage bloodlust" side typically seen by him. Even Chief Clerk Jafar, the primary Tzeentchian character, isn't interested in backstabbing Cain (although part of this is because he thinks that Cain is far too much of a genius for him to ever successfully backstab). He also utilizes his ambition and scheming capabilities to expand his sorcerous knowledge through more subtle and less harmful ways than the typical human sacrifices and daemon summoning (as both are banned by Cain's edict), and actually appreciates the long-term and practical benefits of turning away from Chaos' less abhorrent aspects. The only exception to this trope where Chaos is concerned is Nurgle, whose followers are depicted as every bit as abhorrent and disgusting as they are in canon, and who both Cain and Slawkenberg's Chaos followers are fully united and opposed against.



* SuccubusInLove: Make no mistake, despite being the newest daemon princess of Slaanesh, Emeli genuinely does love Cain to an obsessive degree to the point where her long term goal is the eventual ascendance of Cain. In fact, her love for him is the very reason for her ascension in the first place, as -in conjunction with the souls of many of Slaneesh's favorite meals- the strength of her obsession attracted the attention of the God of Excess.

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* SuccubusInLove: Make no mistake, despite being the newest daemon princess of Slaanesh, Emeli genuinely does love Cain to an obsessive degree to the point where her long term goal is the eventual ascendance of Cain. In fact, her love for him is the very reason for her ascension in the first place, as -in conjunction with the souls of many of Slaneesh's favorite meals- the strength of her obsession attracted the attention of the God of Excess. After all, obsession is still obsession, even if Emeli's love is a more positive one than is typically associated with Slaanesh.
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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuine about in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[spoiler: Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.

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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuine openly honest about in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[spoiler: Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.
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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuinely honest about in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[spoiler: Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.

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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuinely honest genuine about in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[spoiler: Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.
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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuinely honest in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.

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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuinely honest about in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[Amberley [[spoiler: Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.

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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuinely honest in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.


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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuinely honest in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.
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* EvilVersusEvil: One of Cain's most successful manipulations of the Chaos followers of Slawkenberg (who serve Tzeentch, Khorne, and Slaanesh) is to unite them against Nurgle, who he has designated as Slawkenberg's primary enemy (even more so than the Imperium, as worship of the God-Emperor is at least tolerated as long as they don't become incompetent and corrupt like the Giorbas). It helps that Cain himself is genuinely disgusted by Nurgle and his corruption, and his disdain and enmity towards the Plague God is one of the few motivations he's genuinely honest in his interactions with the rest of the Liberation Council. This particular tactic is so successful that when Cain freely gives a copy of the Panacea to [[Amberley Veil]], his Chaos-aligned subordinates barely bat an eye.
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* BadassArmy: The Unified Slawkenberg Army (USA) combines Khornate ferocity, first rate disciple and morale, excellent equipment and logistics, exceptional physical fitness and the best medical care to produce troops that have won every engagement they've entered and that can keep up with a World Eater chaos marine.

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* BadassArmy: The Unified Slawkenberg Army (USA) combines Khornate ferocity, first rate disciple and morale, excellent equipment and logistics, exceptional physical fitness and the best medical care to produce troops that have won every engagement they've entered and that can keep up with a World Eater chaos space marine.
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* AssassinOutclassin: Cain fends off an assassination attempt by [[spoiler:Inquisitor Amberly Vail]] with (seemingly) casual ease.
* BadassArmy: The Unified Slawkenberg Army (USA) combines Khornite ferocity, first rate disciple and morale, excellent equipment and logistics, exceptional physical fitness and the best medical care.

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* AssassinOutclassin: Cain fends off an assassination attempt by [[spoiler:Inquisitor Amberly Vail]] with (seemingly) casual ease.
ease. He also avoids assassination attempts by [[spoiler:Inquisitor Tannenburg's Agent Orion]] with pure luck (or through something altering fate on his behalf; the assassin's minor psychic foresight was foiled during all of these attempts). Cain's enemies consistently conclude that getting rid of him will cause his Protectorate to collapse, but this is much easier said than done.
* BadassArmy: The Unified Slawkenberg Army (USA) combines Khornite Khornate ferocity, first rate disciple and morale, excellent equipment and logistics, exceptional physical fitness and the best medical care.care to produce troops that have won every engagement they've entered and that can keep up with a World Eater chaos marine.



* CallToAgriculture: After numerous failed attempts to assassinate Cain, one inquisition agent becomes certain that Cain still has the Emperor's blessings and retires to take up gardening.

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* CallToAgriculture: After numerous failed attempts to assassinate Cain, one inquisition Inquisition agent Orion becomes certain that Cain still has the Emperor's blessings and retires to take up gardening.



* EvilCannotComprehendGood: When Killian finds out that Cain is taking much of his fleet into the Torredon subsector he instantly assumes it must be because Cain knows about the [[ArtifactOfDoom shadowlight]] since otherwise why would he pick a fight with [[SpacePirates the Bloodied Crown]] on their home turf?

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: When Killian finds out that Cain is taking much of his fleet into the Torredon subsector he instantly assumes it must be because Cain knows about the [[ArtifactOfDoom shadowlight]] since otherwise why would he pick a fight with [[SpacePirates the Bloodied Crown]] Crown cartel]] on their home turf? Can't be because they expect retaliation for defeating the last attempt by the cartel to seize control of them, or because they want to help the subsector and rid it of pirates for moral reasons...



* VillainousRescue: For a certain definition of villain. The Valhallan 296th on Adumbria is saved from the Nurgleite monsters by Cain and the (admittedly Khornite) Slawkenberg Army.

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* VillainousRescue: For a certain definition of villain. The Valhallan 296th on Adumbria is saved from the Nurgleite monsters by Cain and the (admittedly Khornite) Khornate) Slawkenberg Army.
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* DefusingTheTykeBomb: 100% Cain's sole reason for adopting and raising Zerayah. [[Unreliable Narrator It is most definitely only for that purpose and not because he genuinely cares about her]].

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* DefusingTheTykeBomb: 100% Cain's sole reason for adopting and raising Zerayah. [[Unreliable Narrator [[UnreliableNarrator It is most definitely only for that purpose and not because he genuinely cares about her]].
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* DefusingTheTykeBomb: 100% Cain's sole reason for adopting and raising Zerayah. [[Unreliable Narrator It is most definitely only for that purpose and not because he genuinely cares about her]].
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* VillainousRescue: For a certain definition of villain. The Valhallan 296th on Adumbria is saved from the Nurgleite monsters by Cain and the (admittedly Khornite) Slawkenberg Army.
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* UnequalPairing: Cain is a seemingly normal human. Emeli is a Daemon Princess.

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* AssassinOutclassin: Cain fends off an assassination attempt by [[spoiler:Inquisitor Amberly Vail]] with (seemingly) casual ease.



* InSpiteOfANail: Despite all the changes brought about by Cain's new situation in the galaxy and the fact that Emeli now has no interest in it at all, Adumbria still finds itself suffering from a Chaos uprising.

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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite all the changes brought about by Cain's new situation in the galaxy and the fact that Emeli now has no interest in it at all, Adumbria still finds itself suffering from a Chaos uprising.uprising, although by Nurgle rather than Slaanesh.



* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: It appears that someone or something is manipulating things to "help" Cain. It may be Tzeentch, Cegorach or the Emperor . . . or a combination of them. Some of it could just be luck, too.

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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: It appears There are lots of [[InMysteriousWays odd strokes of luck]] that make it appear that someone or something is manipulating things to "help" Cain. It may be Tzeentch, Cegorach or the Emperor . . . or a combination of them. Some of it could It might just be luck, too.weird luck . . . .
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*EvilCannotComprehendGood: When Killian finds out that Cain is taking much of his fleet into the Torredon subsector he instantly assumes it must be because Cain knows about the [[ArtifactOfDoom shadowlight]] since otherwise why would he pick a fight with [[SpacePirates the Bloodied Crown]] on their home turf?
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** The initial difference between canon and this universe is that Cain got himself assigned to be the commissar for the Slawkenburg PDF after the old one died instead of getting attached to an artillery regiment of the Imperial Guard, which led to him being in place to rise to the top of the rebellion. Also notable is that Jurgen is a psyker who got trafficked to Slawkenburg instead of a blank who joined the Guard; the two differences may be connected.

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** The initial difference between canon and this universe is that Cain got himself assigned to be the commissar for the Slawkenburg Slawkenberg PDF after the old one died instead of getting attached to an artillery regiment of the Imperial Guard, which led to him being in place to rise to the top of the rebellion. Also notable is that Jurgen is a psyker who got trafficked to Slawkenburg Slawkenberg instead of a blank who joined the Guard; the two differences may be connected.



* GoneHorriblyWrong: Karamazov's response to Slawkenburg's rebellion. In his heavy prioritization of Chaos over all other threats and his absolute certainty that he's right and anyone who opposes him is an enemy, he purged the local sector's command of many competent officers and administrators who told him that they couldn't afford to move resources away from other fronts towards Slawkenburg, leaving the sector disorganized and in chaos (no pun intended). The only general who agreed to help him was Chenkov, who is incompetent and hated by his men. After his incompetence and wasteful human wave tactics lead to Slawkenburg winning handily against him and to almost all of the planetside soldiers defecting, Karamazov immediately turns to exterminatus of the planet, only to be killed by Cain and have his ship blown up. Karamazov's soul ends up in the clutches of Emeli, who plans to torture him for all eternity, and whose gratitude to Cain for giving her Karamazov's soul plays a part in Emeli arranging for the Space Hulk to arrive at Slawkenburg. Later, we see that Karamazov's purge of the local sector command led to the Imperium being in dire straits in the area, which means it can't spare resources to deal with Slawkenburg, and keeps having to pull resources away from areas to deal with more pressing threats, which provides an opportunity for Slawkenburg to sweep in and provide help, thereby gaining more allies. In summary, Karamazov's efforts to end a Chaos rebellion didn't hinder the rebellion, but instead massively helped it, ensured its ability to expand, and screwed over the Imperium, all while getting himself damned in the process.

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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Karamazov's response to Slawkenburg's Slawkenberg's rebellion. In his heavy prioritization of Chaos over all other threats and his absolute certainty that he's right and anyone who opposes him is an enemy, he purged the local sector's command of many competent officers and administrators who told him that they couldn't afford to move resources away from other fronts towards Slawkenburg, Slawkenberg, leaving the sector disorganized and in chaos (no pun intended). The only general who agreed to help him was Chenkov, who is incompetent and hated by his men. After his incompetence and wasteful human wave tactics lead to Slawkenburg Slawkenberg winning handily against him and to almost all of the planetside soldiers defecting, Karamazov immediately turns to exterminatus of the planet, only to be killed by Cain and have his ship blown up. Karamazov's soul ends up in the clutches of Emeli, who plans to torture him for all eternity, and whose gratitude to Cain for giving her Karamazov's soul plays a part in Emeli arranging for the Space Hulk to arrive at Slawkenburg. Slawkenberg. Later, we see that Karamazov's purge of the local sector command led to the Imperium being in dire straits in the area, which means it can't spare resources to deal with Slawkenburg, Slawkenberg, and keeps having to pull resources away from areas to deal with more pressing threats, which provides an opportunity for Slawkenburg Slawkenberg to sweep in and provide help, thereby gaining more allies. In summary, Karamazov's efforts to end a Chaos rebellion didn't hinder the rebellion, but instead massively helped it, ensured its ability to expand, and screwed over the Imperium, all while getting himself damned in the process.



* GoodShepherd: Father Anthony is one of the priests of the God Emperor still practicing on Slawkenburg even after the Liberation. While most of the members of the Ecclesiarchy on the planet [[CorruptChurch were in it for the money and power]], Anthony actually wanted to help people, which pays off when his own followers kept him safe him during the tumult of the Liberation. Whenever we see him, he's providing help and advice to whoever he's talking to, which genuinely makes things better for them.

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* GoodShepherd: Father Anthony is one of the priests of the God Emperor still practicing on Slawkenburg Slawkenberg even after the Liberation. While most of the members of the Ecclesiarchy on the planet [[CorruptChurch were in it for the money and power]], Anthony actually wanted to help people, which pays off when his own followers kept him safe him during the tumult of the Liberation. Whenever we see him, he's providing help and advice to whoever he's talking to, which genuinely makes things better for them.



* TheLeader: Charismatic, but mistaken for The Mastermind. He has the loyalty and love of seemingly the entire population of Slawkenburg, he can unite all the various factions of Slawkenburg and convince them that what he wants is best, and his actions always appear heroic (or intelligent, depending on the person). Imperials who end up on Slawkenburg note that without Cain, the entire rebellion would likely fall apart.

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* TheLeader: Charismatic, but mistaken for The Mastermind. He has the loyalty and love of seemingly the entire population of Slawkenburg, Slawkenberg, he can unite all the various factions of Slawkenburg Slawkenberg and convince them that what he wants is best, and his actions always appear heroic (or intelligent, depending on the person). Imperials who end up on Slawkenburg Slawkenberg note that without Cain, the entire rebellion would likely fall apart.



* MysteriousPast: In canon, Cain's homeworld being unknown was a footnote. Here it's making the Inquisition very worried. The Inquisitor who launched the investigation into his background comes away assuming that he was corrupted before entering the Schola (he wasn't) and is part of a massive conspiracy that worked to place him into a position of power at the head of the Slawkenburg rebellion (he's not).

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* MysteriousPast: In canon, Cain's homeworld being unknown was a footnote. Here it's making the Inquisition very worried. The Inquisitor who launched the investigation into his background comes away assuming that he was corrupted before entering the Schola (he wasn't) and is part of a massive conspiracy that worked to place him into a position of power at the head of the Slawkenburg Slawkenberg rebellion (he's not).



* NotHelpingYourCase: The initial Imperial response consists of [[TautologicalTemplar Inquisitor]] [[BurnTheWitch Karamazov]] and [[GeneralRipper General]] [[WeHaveReserves Chenkov]]. Chenkov fails miserably at retaking Slawkenburg after sending a bunch of his men out to get mowed down by the United Slawkenburg Army and getting shot in the back shortly afterward running away from an attack headed by Cain; Karamazov then proceeds to jump right to Exterminatus of the planet, spending hours and hours ranting to the populace, before getting killed by Cain and having his ship blown up shortly afterwards. Cain notes that most Imperial generals and Inquisitors are not this stupid or inclined towards pointless murder (at least according to what he learned in the Schola), but the fact that such people exist within the Imperium and have actual power really doesn't help its reputation, especially amongst the Slawkenburgians who've only ever had to deal with Imperial cruelty and incompetence.

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* NotHelpingYourCase: The initial Imperial response consists of [[TautologicalTemplar Inquisitor]] [[BurnTheWitch Karamazov]] and [[GeneralRipper General]] [[WeHaveReserves Chenkov]]. Chenkov fails miserably at retaking Slawkenburg Slawkenberg after sending a bunch of his men out to get mowed down by the United Slawkenburg Slawkenberg Army and getting shot in the back shortly afterward running away from an attack headed by Cain; Karamazov then proceeds to jump right to Exterminatus of the planet, spending hours and hours ranting to the populace, before getting killed by Cain and having his ship blown up shortly afterwards. Cain notes that most Imperial generals and Inquisitors are not this stupid or inclined towards pointless murder (at least according to what he learned in the Schola), but the fact that such people exist within the Imperium and have actual power really doesn't help its reputation, especially amongst the Slawkenburgians Slawkenbergians who've only ever had to deal with Imperial cruelty and incompetence.



* ThePowerOfLove: Emeli claims this is how she was able to [[spoiler:enter Commorragh and kill the Haemonculus trying to bring the Archon who attacked Slawkenburg back from the dead, thereby permanently killing all of the Drukhari who died while trying to raid Slawkenburg.]]

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* ThePowerOfLove: Emeli claims this is how she was able to [[spoiler:enter Commorragh and kill the Haemonculus trying to bring the Archon who attacked Slawkenburg Slawkenberg back from the dead, thereby permanently killing all of the Drukhari who died while trying to raid Slawkenburg.Slawkenberg.]]



* RedBaron: This version of Ciaphas Cain quickly becomes known as "The Liberator" for his (overestimated) part in helping the liberation of Slawkenburg.
* SpringtimeForHitler: The heart and soul of the fic, the more Cain tries to make Slawkenburg fail, the more it succeeds. Choosing to train and equip his current army extremely well instead of focusing on its expansion, banning the use of servitors and encouraging the Mechanicus to innovate, making Panacea available to the whole population, making education free and available to all... And those are just some of the policy decisions. It really says something about how dysfunctional the Imperium is that doing the opposite of what it says is necessary turns out extremely well. If Cain had actually tried to make Slawkenburg succeed, it would probably be doing significantly less well, or even have failed entirely.

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* RedBaron: This version of Ciaphas Cain quickly becomes known as "The Liberator" for his (overestimated) part in helping the liberation of Slawkenburg.
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* SpringtimeForHitler: The heart and soul of the fic, the more Cain tries to make Slawkenburg Slawkenberg fail, the more it succeeds. Choosing to train and equip his current army extremely well instead of focusing on its expansion, banning the use of servitors and encouraging the Mechanicus to innovate, making Panacea available to the whole population, making education free and available to all... And those are just some of the policy decisions. It really says something about how dysfunctional the Imperium is that doing the opposite of what it says is necessary turns out extremely well. If Cain had actually tried to make Slawkenburg Slawkenberg succeed, it would probably be doing significantly less well, or even have failed entirely.
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* NoMrBondIExpectYouToDine: Cain does this to [[spoiler:a captive Inquisitor Amberly.]]
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* HorribleJudgeOfCharacter: [[AvertedTrope Surprisingly, averted]] for the fic's version of Jenit Sulla who ([[EasilyForgiven after one aborted coup attempt]]) concludes that Cain despite being the leader of a group who openly worships three of the four Chaos gods, is still a loyal servant of the Emperor of Mankind, thus giving her a far more accurate read on his motivations than her canon counterpart.
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The planet Slawkenberg is celebrating being liberated from the tyrannical government of the Imperium of Mankind, a revolution masterminded by the renegade Commisionar, Ciaphas Cain.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Cains view on why the previous ruling family wasn't corrupted by Chaos. They were so vile that the Ruinous Powers didn't want anything to do with them.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Cains Cain's view on why the previous ruling family wasn't corrupted by Chaos. They were so vile that the Ruinous Powers didn't want anything to do with them.



* FascistButInefficient: The Imperium of Man, it is quite telling that many of Cain's unintentional successes come from telling the people of Slawkenberg to abandon things the Imperium trained him to believe were utterly required for human society to function. As an example, Tesilon-Kappa the leader of the Liberation's tech-priests notes that they've been wanting to replace most servitors with trained workers and automation and increase safety in the factories, but their plans were always rejected. Once the revolution occurred and Cain told them to implement these things, the factories turn out much more efficient.

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* FascistButInefficient: The Imperium of Man, it is quite telling that many of Cain's unintentional successes come from telling the people of Slawkenberg to abandon things the Imperium trained him to believe were utterly required for human society to function. As an example, Tesilon-Kappa Tesilon-Kappa, the leader of the Liberation's tech-priests tech-priests, notes that they've been wanting to replace most servitors with trained workers and automation and increase safety in the factories, but their plans were always rejected. rejected by their superiors. Once the revolution occurred (and killed their superiors) and Cain told them to implement these things, the factories turn turned out much more efficient.



* MistakenForBadass: While Cain genuinely is a skilled fighter, others can't read his internal monologue to know that most of the fights he gets into are accidents or fights he felt obligated to join for fear of losing respect, and think he's just a badass fighter who always wants to jump into the front lines. There are also times where he makes a decision or takes an action that's random or only supposed to save himself or sabotage his side that turns out to have great results for his team (e.g. randomly firing his gun at Chenkov's charging men and hitting the knee of a Sentinel, disabling it), which makes people think he planned it all along or has great instincts.



* NeatFreak: This story's version of Ferik Jurgen prefers his surroundings to be clean as possible, as opposed to [[ThePigPen his canon self's more laid back approach to dirt and grime]], it's the result of having been held captive for an extended period of time by cultists of Nurgle.

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* NeatFreak: This story's version of Ferik Jurgen prefers his surroundings to be clean as possible, as opposed to [[ThePigPen his canon self's more laid back approach to dirt and grime]], it's grime]]. It's the result of having been held captive for an extended period of time by cultists of Nurgle.



* {{Panacea}}: An [[LostTechnology STC]] recovered by Protectorate forces aboard the 'Emeli's Gift' Space-Hulk is the Panacea, a medical marvel capable of curing Nurgulite plagues or Genestealer infection, while being cheap enough to produce to provide freely to the population.
* ThePowerOfLove: Emeli claims this is how she was able to [[spoiler:enter Commorragh and kill the Haemonculi trying to bring the Archon who attacked Slawkenburg back from the dead.]]

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* {{Panacea}}: An [[LostTechnology STC]] recovered by Protectorate forces aboard the 'Emeli's Gift' Space-Hulk is the Panacea, a medical marvel capable of curing Nurgulite any illness or injury, including (early-stage) Nurglite plagues or and Genestealer infection, while being cheap enough to produce to provide freely to the population.
* ThePowerOfLove: Emeli claims this is how she was able to [[spoiler:enter Commorragh and kill the Haemonculi Haemonculus trying to bring the Archon who attacked Slawkenburg back from the dead.]]dead, thereby permanently killing all of the Drukhari who died while trying to raid Slawkenburg.]]
* PracticallyJoker: One of the members of the Bloodied Crown cartel, who is assigned to forcefully incorporate Adumbria into their sphere of influence after discovering that it's not actually dead, is Jeremiah Smile, who has a drug-addled, immensely strong sidekick Bane, pilots a ship called the Murderous Jest, wears a purple suit of armor, cackles maniacally on the regular, and is noted to enjoy torturing and killing anyone who displeases him in any way, or whom he thinks would be fun to victimize.



* SpringtimeForHitler: The heart and soul of the fic, the more Cain tries to make Slawkenburg fail, the more it succeeds. Choosing to train and equip his current army extremely well instead of focusing on its expansion, banning the use of servitors and encouraging the Mechanicus to innovate, making Panacea available to the whole population, making education free and available to all... It really says something about how dysfunctional the Imperium is that doing the opposite of what it says is necessary turns out extremely well. If Cain had actually tried to make Slawkenburg succeed, it would probably be doing significantly less well, or even have failed entirely.
* SuccubusInLove: Make no mistake, despite being the newest daemon princess of Slaanesh, Emeli genuinely does love Cain to an obsessive degree to the point where her long term goal is the eventual ascendance of Cain. In fact, her love for him is the very reason for her ascension in the first place, as -in conjunction with the souls of many of Slaneesh's favorite meals -the strength of her obsession attracted the attention of the God of Excess.

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* SpringtimeForHitler: The heart and soul of the fic, the more Cain tries to make Slawkenburg fail, the more it succeeds. Choosing to train and equip his current army extremely well instead of focusing on its expansion, banning the use of servitors and encouraging the Mechanicus to innovate, making Panacea available to the whole population, making education free and available to all... And those are just some of the policy decisions. It really says something about how dysfunctional the Imperium is that doing the opposite of what it says is necessary turns out extremely well. If Cain had actually tried to make Slawkenburg succeed, it would probably be doing significantly less well, or even have failed entirely.
* SuccubusInLove: Make no mistake, despite being the newest daemon princess of Slaanesh, Emeli genuinely does love Cain to an obsessive degree to the point where her long term goal is the eventual ascendance of Cain. In fact, her love for him is the very reason for her ascension in the first place, as -in conjunction with the souls of many of Slaneesh's favorite meals -the meals- the strength of her obsession attracted the attention of the God of Excess.
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* {{Panacea}}: An [[LostTechnology STC]] recovered by Protectorate forces aboard the 'Emeli's Gift' Space-Hulk is the Panacea, a medical marvel capable of curing Nurgulite plagues or Genesteal infection, while being cheap enough to produce to provide freely to the population.

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* {{Panacea}}: An [[LostTechnology STC]] recovered by Protectorate forces aboard the 'Emeli's Gift' Space-Hulk is the Panacea, a medical marvel capable of curing Nurgulite plagues or Genesteal Genestealer infection, while being cheap enough to produce to provide freely to the population.
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* GrandRomanticGesture: Emeli gifts her beloved Cain with a several thousand kilometres long collection of extremely valuable space junk known as a "Space Hulk", within which the actual factual Panacea

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* GrandRomanticGesture: Emeli gifts her beloved Cain with a several thousand hundred kilometres long collection of extremely valuable space junk known as a "Space Hulk", within which contains the actual factual Panacea[[LostTechnology STCs]] for advanced PoweredArmor, the {{Panacea}} and a SubspaceAnsible.

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* ChildrenRaiseYou: The duty of properly raising his adopted daughter forces Cain to stop drinking to excess.
* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: Cain raises the last child of [[PersonOfMassDestruction Legienstrasse]] as his adopted daughter.
* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:Cain is able to defeat and banish a Great Unclean One. And then Emeli gets hold of him.]]



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* {{Panacea}}: An [[LostTechnology STC]] recovered by Protectorate forces aboard the 'Emeli's Gift' Space-Hulk is the PanaceaPanacea, a medical marvel capable of curing Nurgulite plagues or Genesteal infection, while being cheap enough to produce to provide freely to the population.
* ThePowerOfLove: Emeli claims this is how she was able to [[spoiler:enter Commorragh and kill the Haemonculi trying to bring the Archon who attacked Slawkenburg back from the dead.]]

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* AssholeVictim: Cain has summoned a demon to eat an enemy's soul and turned over a prisoner to a Dark Eldar for "interrogation". These would normally be a MoralEventHorizon, but as these were a Dark Eldar Archon planning to return from the dead to destroy Slawkenberg and a PracticallyJoker SpacePirate, it's this instead.



* EvenEvilHasStandards: Cains view on why the previous ruling family wasn't corrupted by Chaos. They were so vile that the Ruinous Powers didn't want anything to do with them.



* NotHelpingYourCase: The initial Imperial response consists of [[TautologicalTemplar Inquisitor]] [[BurnTheWitch Karamazov]] and [[GeneralRipper General]] [[WeHaveReserves Chenkov]]. Chenkov fails miserably at retaking Slawkenburg after sending a bunch of his men out to get mowed down by the United Slawkenburg Army and getting shot in the back shortly afterward by a sneak attack headed by Cain; Karamazov then proceeds to jump right to Exterminatus of the planet, spending hours and hours ranting to the populace, before getting killed by Cain and having his ship blown up shortly afterwards. Cain notes that most Imperial generals and Inquisitors are not this stupid or inclined towards pointless murder (at least according to what he learned in the Schola), but the fact that such people exist within the Imperium and have actual power really doesn't help its reputation, especially amongst the Slawkenburgians who've only ever had to deal with Imperial incompetence.

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* NotHelpingYourCase: The initial Imperial response consists of [[TautologicalTemplar Inquisitor]] [[BurnTheWitch Karamazov]] and [[GeneralRipper General]] [[WeHaveReserves Chenkov]]. Chenkov fails miserably at retaking Slawkenburg after sending a bunch of his men out to get mowed down by the United Slawkenburg Army and getting shot in the back shortly afterward by a sneak running away from an attack headed by Cain; Karamazov then proceeds to jump right to Exterminatus of the planet, spending hours and hours ranting to the populace, before getting killed by Cain and having his ship blown up shortly afterwards. Cain notes that most Imperial generals and Inquisitors are not this stupid or inclined towards pointless murder (at least according to what he learned in the Schola), but the fact that such people exist within the Imperium and have actual power really doesn't help its reputation, especially amongst the Slawkenburgians who've only ever had to deal with Imperial cruelty and incompetence.
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** How good is he? He's one one of two people to understand Cain's Self-loathing and that other person was Amberly in canon.

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* GrandRomanticGesture: Emeli gifts her beloved Cain with a several thousand kilometres long collection of extremely valuable space junk known as a "Space Hulk", within which the actual factual Panacea



* {{Panacea}}: An [[LostTechnology STC]] recovered by Protectorate forces aboard the 'Emeli's Gift' Space-Hulk is the Panacea



* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: Cain's adopted daughter]] already looks likes she's in her late teens despite having not turned ten yet.
* GrandRomanticGesture: Emeli gifts her beloved Cain with a several thousand kilometres long collection of extremely valuable space junk known as a "Space Hulk", within which the actual factual Panacea
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: [[spoiler: Cain's adopted daughter]] already looks likes she's in her late teens despite having not turned ten yet.
* GrandRomanticGesture: Emeli gifts her beloved Cain with a several thousand kilometres long collection of extremely valuable space junk known as a "Space Hulk", within which the actual factual Panacea
* {{Panacea}}: An [[LostTechnology STC]] recovered by Protectorate forces aboard the 'Emeli's Gift' Space-Hulk is the Panacea
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*CallToAgriculture: After numerous failed attempts to assassinate Cain, one inquisition agent becomes certain that Cain still has the Emperor's blessings and retires to take up gardening.

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