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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Yes, the regime under Chris Chandler is full of corruption, and the EHPF are the living embodiment of police brutality, but the PVCC isn't above committing horrific war crimes against the Chus, like repeatedly murdering their young.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Yes, the regime under Chris Chandler is full of corruption, the Chus look down on humans a lot and the EHPF are the living embodiment of police brutality, but the PVCC isn't above committing horrific war crimes against the Chus, like repeatedly murdering their young.
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** The PVCC has the BattleAXEs, who are its most pathetic members. To motivate them into fighting properly, Liquid Chris promises them double XP, and it works.
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** The PVCC has the BattleAXEs, [=BattleAXEs=], who are its most pathetic members. To motivate them into fighting properly, Liquid Chris promises them [[BlatantLies double XP, XP]], and it works.
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* HeteronormativeCrusader: [=CWCville=] rounds up all homosexuals and sends them to horrific "straight camps" or enslaves them to serve as caretakers to chu larva. [[NotMakingthisUpDisclaimer In a storyline pulled directly from the original webcomic, Mayor Chandler attempts to conduct a global genocide of the homosexual population via a campaign of bioterrorism later in the story.]] [[spoiler:Fortunately, it fails in this version.]]
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* HeteronormativeCrusader: [=CWCville=] rounds up all homosexuals and sends them to horrific "straight camps" or enslaves them to serve as caretakers to chu larva. Including [[spoiler:Heather Inglesias]]. [[NotMakingthisUpDisclaimer In a storyline pulled directly from the original webcomic, Mayor Chandler attempts to conduct a global genocide of the homosexual population via a campaign of bioterrorism later in the story.]] [[spoiler:Fortunately, it fails in this version.]]
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* OneSteveLimit: Weaponized by Kevin. Aware he is sharing the same name with a Jew who was once Cera's playdate, he pretends to be a grown-up version of the other Kevin [[spoiler:which allows him to properly plan Hedgeclipper]].
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* RightHandVersusLeftHand: Happens within the PVCC later in the story: [[spoiler: Clyde Cash and Jack Thaddeus undertake a mission without prior approval from Mary Lee Walsh, to rescue Naitsirhc for Giovanni.]]
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* RightHandVersusLeftHand: RightHandVersusLeftHand:
** Happens within the PVCC later in the story: [[spoiler: Clyde Cash and Jack Thaddeus undertake a mission without prior approval from Mary Lee Walsh, to rescue Naitsirhc for Giovanni.]]]]
** Happens among the chus as well. Magi-Chan has his own agenda, separate from Chris, which puts the two at odds with each other close to the end. [[spoiler:Chris Prime averts this with ''their'' Magi-Chan, though.]]
* SergeantRock: Steve Morrison, one of the Honey Badger leaders, is tough but fair.
** Happens within the PVCC later in the story: [[spoiler: Clyde Cash and Jack Thaddeus undertake a mission without prior approval from Mary Lee Walsh, to rescue Naitsirhc for Giovanni.
** Happens among the chus as well. Magi-Chan has his own agenda, separate from Chris, which puts the two at odds with each other close to the end. [[spoiler:Chris Prime averts this with ''their'' Magi-Chan, though.]]
* SergeantRock: Steve Morrison, one of the Honey Badger leaders, is tough but fair.
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* WaveOfBabies: [[spoiler: Kevin has a vision of the final end of Planet Earth, eaten alive by a tidal wave of Sonees and Roseys, led by Sonichu's children, and left a dying, polluted husk.]]
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* WaveOfBabies: [[spoiler: Kevin has a vision of the final end of Planet Earth, eaten alive by a tidal wave of Sonees and Roseys, led by Sonichu's children, and left a dying, polluted husk.husk, with not even Chris being safe. This is a warning from Graduon about what will happen if the chus win.]]
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* BoisterousWeakling:
** Some of the Sonees and Roseys are very delusional about their own strength.
** The PVCC has the BattleAXEs, who are its most pathetic members. To motivate them into fighting properly, Liquid Chris promises them double XP, and it works.
** Some of the Sonees and Roseys are very delusional about their own strength.
** The PVCC has the BattleAXEs, who are its most pathetic members. To motivate them into fighting properly, Liquid Chris promises them double XP, and it works.
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* CuteCrittersActChildlike: Sonees and Rosees, the larval forms of Sonichus and Rosechus, are a rare evil example, embodying all the aggravating and unpleasant aspects of immature children, being self-centered, solipsistic tantrum throwers with bottomless appetites, screeching voices and disgusting hygiene. They'd normally be no threat at all, but the humans of [=CWCville=] are forced by the Electric Hedgehog Police Force to cater to the larva's every whim under threat of PoliceBrutality.
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* CuteCrittersActChildlike: Sonees and Rosees, the larval forms of Sonichus and Rosechus, are a rare evil example, embodying all the aggravating and unpleasant aspects of immature children, being self-centered, solipsistic tantrum throwers with bottomless appetites, screeching voices and disgusting hygiene. They'd normally be no threat at all, but the humans of [=CWCville=] are forced by the Electric Hedgehog Police Force to cater to the larva's every whim under threat of PoliceBrutality.PoliceBrutality, and the ferals can eat a person if they are in huge groups and starving.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Robotnik and Giovanni, and the latter's son, are evil due to their canon counterparts, but they still oppose the even worse Chris and his tyrannical regime.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** Robotnik and Giovanni, and the latter's son, are evil due to their canoncounterparts, counterparts also being evil, but they still oppose the even worse Chris and his tyrannical regime.regime.
** Count Graduon is manipulative and dislikes humans, but he still opposes the Chaos Gods of Warhammer.
** Robotnik and Giovanni, and the latter's son, are evil due to their canon
** Count Graduon is manipulative and dislikes humans, but he still opposes the Chaos Gods of Warhammer.
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* MadeOfPlasticine: Sonees and Roseys are incredibly easy to kill, as they are basically waddling, twee-speaking sacks of flab. At one point, one of the Honey Badgers [[CruelAndUnusualDeath kills a Rosey by shoving it into a VCR.]] At another, Zoey, a Honey Badger, removes her bra and kills a Sonee via [[{{Nosebleed}} nosebleed]].
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* MadeOfPlasticine: Sonees and Roseys are incredibly easy to kill, as they are basically waddling, twee-speaking sacks of flab. Even the True Blue admit this. At one point, one of the Honey Badgers [[CruelAndUnusualDeath kills a Rosey by shoving it into a VCR.]] At another, Zoey, a Honey Badger, removes her bra and kills a Sonee via [[{{Nosebleed}} nosebleed]].
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* FountainOfMemes: In-Universe, the Devil Trolls and other LIESA units speak in memes.
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The story up to Chapter 19 is on fanfiction.net, while the complete story along with bits canon to the story can be found on the author's [[https://www.deviantart.com/manajerkop/gallery/37201789/cwcollateral-a-tale-of-the-resistance DeviantArt page]], though much of the content is age-restricted and requires an account to view.
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The story up to Chapter 19 is was on fanfiction.net, while the complete story along with bits canon to the story can be found on the author's [[https://www.deviantart.com/manajerkop/gallery/37201789/cwcollateral-a-tale-of-the-resistance DeviantArt page]], even though the account is deactivated, though much of the content is age-restricted and requires an account to view.
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* TookALevelInBadass:
** Kevin. He starts as a mere redshirt, [[spoiler:ends up an OneManArmy that can fight just as well as Sonichu himself]].
** The Rosechus. In the final battle, [[spoiler:Chris makes all of them Lionesses, causing them to surpass their male counterparts for once.]]
** Sonichu turns into a Metonic towards the end of the story.
** Kevin. He starts as a mere redshirt, [[spoiler:ends up an OneManArmy that can fight just as well as Sonichu himself]].
** The Rosechus. In the final battle, [[spoiler:Chris makes all of them Lionesses, causing them to surpass their male counterparts for once.]]
** Sonichu turns into a Metonic towards the end of the story.
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* PoliticallyIncorrectHero: The PVCC hate all chus with a passion, with few exceptions, and feel no remorse torturing them. Their reason is that Chandler is creating an apartheid between humans and chus in favor of the latter.
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* TheCorruptible:
** Sonichu, once a hero, became a corrupt enforcer of Chris, [[spoiler:disappointing Sonic]].
** [[spoiler:Kevin himself, after he loses Matt]], gets deeper into evil, and horrifies even Allie to the point she gets mad at him.
** Sonichu, once a hero, became a corrupt enforcer of Chris, [[spoiler:disappointing Sonic]].
** [[spoiler:Kevin himself, after he loses Matt]], gets deeper into evil, and horrifies even Allie to the point she gets mad at him.
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* PowerfulButIncompetent: Chris. A gibbering moron with weird priorities, he is a terrible leader most of the time. He also has little fighting skill and once shoots himself by accident. But he is probably the strongest character of the story, as [[spoiler:even after he can no longer use the powers of the Combo, he still takes teamwork to go down and barely does.]]
