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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: It is not made clear at any point during the pasta whether or not the hack is supernatural or if it was created by some troll. This makes Bradley's SanitySlippage over playing it all the more inexplicable.
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: It is not made clear at any point during isn't until Mario's final message to the pasta whether or not the hack is player that anything seemingly supernatural happens with the game - and even that is just Mario addressing the player by his real name, which could be brushed off as either a coincidence, or if it was created by some troll. a deliberate prank from the friend who sent Bradley the game. This makes Bradley's his SanitySlippage over playing it all the more inexplicable.
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''[[https://trollpasta.com/wiki/Blood_Whistle Blood Whistle]]'' is a ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' {{creepypasta}} based off of ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros3''. It takes the form of a {{blog}} of a rather melodramatic college student as he plays through a ROMHack titled ''[=SMB3:BW=]''' that turns out to be full of "realistic blood." Much PurpleProse and other assorted hilarity ensues as the student proceeds to take everything far, ''far'' too seriously.
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''[[https://trollpasta.com/wiki/Blood_Whistle Blood Whistle]]'' is a ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros'' {{creepypasta}} based off of ''VideoGame/SuperMarioBros3''. It takes the form of a {{blog}} of a rather melodramatic college student as he plays through a ROMHack titled ''[=SMB3:BW=]''' ''[=SMB3:BW=]'' that turns out to be full of "realistic blood." Much PurpleProse and other assorted hilarity ensues as the student proceeds to take everything far, ''far'' too seriously.
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* MoodWhiplash: The blog goes from the narrator being excited to find the potential secret and seeing what it has to offer to wishing he hadn't unlocked it and declaring the game the bane of his existence.
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* ArtisticLicenseHistory: June 11th is mentioned as the date of D-Day when it was actually June 6th.
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: In addition to misunderstanding various phrases, the author of the story also seems to think the word 'egregious' refers to something being terrible by its nature, and not by its quality. For example, the author assumes the phrase "the background was an egregious smoke-filled black" means that the sky was scary to look at, when in reality it more accurately means that the background was terribly designed.
