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* LookBothWays: Hikari died after a hit-and-run.
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* LookBothWays: Hikari died after a hit-and-run.hit-and-run when she was crossing the road without looking.
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* SweetTooth: Used darkly with Shota. He is a terminally ill child who loves shortcake. His mother makes it for him every day and hands feed it to him after he grows too weak to feed himself.
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* SweetTooth: Used darkly with Shota. He is a terminally ill child who loves shortcake. His mother makes it for him every day and hands feed handfeeds it to him after he grows too weak to feed himself.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Reki's age isn't mentioned but it is stated that she's too young to be smoking as much as she does.
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Reki's age isn't mentioned but it is stated that she's too young to be smoking as much as she does.does.
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''Before We Had Wings'' is a short ''Anime/HaibaneRenmei'' oneshot that can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1757765/1/Before-We-Had-Wings here]]. It was written in 2004 by Shadsie.
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''Before We Had Wings'' is a short ''Anime/HaibaneRenmei'' oneshot that can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1757765/1/Before-We-Had-Wings here]]. It was written in 2004 2004 by Shadsie.
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* SweetTooth: Used darkly with Shota. He is a terminally ill child who loves shortcake. His mother makes it for him every day and hands feed it to him after he grows too weak to feed himself.himself.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Reki's age isn't mentioned but it is stated that she's too young to be smoking as much as she does.
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''Before We Had Wings'' is a short ''Anime/HaibaneRenmei'' oneshot that can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1757765/1/Before-We-Had-Wings here]]. It was written in 2004 by Shadsie.
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''Before We Had Wings'' is a short ''Anime/HaibaneRenmei'' oneshot that can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1757765/1/Before-We-Had-Wings here]]. It was written in 2004 2004 by Shadsie.
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''Before We Had Wings'' is a short ''Anime/HaibaneRenmei'' oneshot that can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1757765/1/Before-We-Had-Wings here]]. It was written in 2004 by Shadsie.
The concept behind the story is simple: What are the backstories of the various Haibane? ''Before We Had Wings'' goes with the interpretation that the Haibane are all deceased people. As a result, the story explains their deaths.
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!!''Before We Had Wings'' provides examples of:
* DeathOfAChild: The Haibane are all deceased children. The fic shows how several of them died.
* DrivenToSuicide:
** Rakka jumped off of her balcony because she felt she had no place in the world.
** A depressed Reki killed herself by laying on train tracks.
* LookBothWays: Hikari died after a hit-and-run.
* ParentalNeglect: Rakka mentions that her mother doesn't care about her anymore.
* SelfHarm: It's mentioned off-hand that Rakka cuts herself. Her parents don't understand why she does it.
* SweetTooth: Used darkly with Shota. He is a terminally ill child who loves shortcake. His mother makes it for him every day and hands feed it to him after he grows too weak to feed himself.
The concept behind the story is simple: What are the backstories of the various Haibane? ''Before We Had Wings'' goes with the interpretation that the Haibane are all deceased people. As a result, the story explains their deaths.
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!!''Before We Had Wings'' provides examples of:
* DeathOfAChild: The Haibane are all deceased children. The fic shows how several of them died.
* DrivenToSuicide:
** Rakka jumped off of her balcony because she felt she had no place in the world.
** A depressed Reki killed herself by laying on train tracks.
* LookBothWays: Hikari died after a hit-and-run.
* ParentalNeglect: Rakka mentions that her mother doesn't care about her anymore.
* SelfHarm: It's mentioned off-hand that Rakka cuts herself. Her parents don't understand why she does it.
* SweetTooth: Used darkly with Shota. He is a terminally ill child who loves shortcake. His mother makes it for him every day and hands feed it to him after he grows too weak to feed himself.
