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* CurbStompBattle: Glastig Uaine kills everyone in the Birdcage who worked for Teacher while the heroes were confronting him. Without hurting the PRT people keeping an eye on them. With such trivial ease that no one realises that there was a fight until she mentions she killed them. Turns out she used a Stranger power to make everyone she wasn't killing not notice her.

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* CurbStompBattle: Glastig Uaine kills everyone in the Birdcage who worked for Teacher while the heroes were confronting him. Without hurting the PRT people keeping an eye on them. With such trivial ease that no one realises realizes that there was a fight until she mentions she killed them. Turns out she used a Stranger power to make everyone she wasn't killing not notice her.



* {{Expy}}: To quote a commenter: "Spidermads, Spidermads, does whatever a Spidermads does." Many other characters end up in situations mirroring those from the Franchise/SpiderMan mythos as well.

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* {{Expy}}: To quote a commenter: "Spidermads, Spidermads, does whatever a Spidermads does." Many other characters end up in situations mirroring those from the Franchise/SpiderMan mythos as well. Ironically, Armsmaster is the only one of the cast who's actually familiar with the Spiderman mythos, so he's the only one who really notices the similarites.
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As Atonement is a fast-moving fanfiction with a lot of content and plenty of [[WhamEpisode Wham Episodes]], most, if not all spoilers below are unmarked. YouHaveBeenWarned.

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As Atonement is a fast-moving fanfiction with a lot of content and plenty of [[WhamEpisode Wham Episodes]], most, if not all spoilers below are unmarked. YouHaveBeenWarned.Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.
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* TemptingFate: In arc 10, the Wards are watching a delivery truck, and Vicky is about to tell it will be a boring watch... when all cut her off, shouting: "DON'T SAY IT!" Needless to say, trouble came straight after.

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* TemptingFate: In arc 10, the Wards are watching a delivery truck, and Vicky is about to tell say that it will be a boring watch... when all watch, only to be immediately cut her off, shouting: off with a chorus of "DON'T SAY IT!" Needless to say, trouble came comes straight after.
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* SpitTake: When her brother Trevor says Tether is cute, Madison discovers it is possible spitting your food out and retching simultaneously.

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* SpitTake: When her brother Trevor says Tether is cute, Madison discovers it is possible spitting to spit your food out and retching retch simultaneously.



* TemptingFate: In arc 10, the Wards are watching a delivery truck, and Vicky is about to tell it willl be a boeing watch... when all cut her off, shouting: "DON'T SAY IT!" Needless to say, trouble came straight after.

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* TemptingFate: In arc 10, the Wards are watching a delivery truck, and Vicky is about to tell it willl will be a boeing boring watch... when all cut her off, shouting: "DON'T SAY IT!" Needless to say, trouble came straight after.



* TheUnSmile: Due to the circumstances of her creation, Pandora does not know how expressing her emotions naturally. Thus, when she tries to smile sincerely, her expression looks real creepy.

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* TheUnSmile: Due to the circumstances of her creation, Pandora does not know how expressing to express her emotions naturally. Thus, when she tries to smile sincerely, her expression looks real creepy.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Samantha and Ethan took [[spoiler:Madison]] in after her fathers died during the Leviathan battle.

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* ParentalSubstitute: Samantha and Ethan took [[spoiler:Madison]] in after her fathers parents died during the Leviathan battle.
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* ParentalObliviousness: Madison's parents had no idea that their daughter was a bully. When her mother sees the papers that they must sing in so that Madison joins the Wards, she is aghast because it means her daughter has gone through a traumatic experience which granted her powers, and she never noticed.

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* ParentalObliviousness: Madison's parents had no idea that their daughter was a bully. When her mother sees the papers that they must sing sign in so that Madison joins the Wards, she is aghast because it means her daughter has gone through a traumatic experience which granted her powers, and she never noticed.
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* BetaCouple: Vicky and Dennis.

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* BetaCouple: Vicky and Dean, Cassie and Theo, Hunter and Dennis.
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* DeathByAdaption: Several, given ForWantOfANail.

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* DeathByAdaption: DeathByAdaptation: Several, given ForWantOfANail.

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** Cherish never joins the Slaughterhouse Nine, but Valefor and original character Horde do.

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** Cherish never joins the Slaughterhouse Nine, Nine (since Bonesaw left beforehand), but Valefor and original character Horde do.


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* BreakingTheFellowship: Several examples.
** Madison breaks off from Emma and Sophia following Taylor's death in the locker.
** New Wave doesn't survive the death of Brandish, with its members either retiring from hero work or joining the Protectorate.
** It's a rather twisted example, but the Slaughterhouse Nine doesn't survive its visit to Brockton Bay. Bonesaw and the Siberian left beforehand (Bonesaw pulled a HeelFaceTurn, Manton left to look for her and got captured by Faultline's crew), and every other member except Mannequin and Burnscar (who end up joining Coil) die while they're there.


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* DeathByAdaption: Several, given ForWantOfANail.
** Brandish manages to survive all the way through canon (no mean feat). Here, she dies fighting Leviathan, resulting in New Wave breaking up.
** In canon, Glory Girl survives to narrate ''Worm'''s sequel. Here, she dies fighting the fourth Endbringer, Anubis.
** Cherish's canon fate is ambiguous ([[AndIMustScream but nasty]]). Here, she's KilledOffscreen by Jack rather than joining the Slaughterhouse Nine, as Jack didn't have Bonesaw to upgrade the Nine against her powers.
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Krousse is willing to do ''anything'' to save Noelle. Anything.

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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Krousse is willing The Travellers want to save their teammate Noelle from her out-of-control powers, and they've done some pretty bad stuff in pursuit of that. Marissa drops out first after a conversation with Madison about where to set the lines, and most of the team eventually follows. Krouse, on the other hand, never sets any lines, and will do ''anything'' anything to save Noelle. Anything.[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Anything. At. All.]]
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** Glastig Uaine shows up out of nowhere and drives of the Simurgh when she attacks Brockton Bay while the core cast is off-planet in Interlude 30.

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** Glastig Uaine shows up out of nowhere and drives of off the Simurgh when she attacks Brockton Bay while the core cast is off-planet in Interlude 30.
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* FluffyTamer: Dinah wonders at one point if there's some kind of prize for collecting S-class threats like Pokémon.
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** The various Pandoras literally starting developing individual characters, along with slowly learning the basics of morality and human social interaction.


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* KilledOffForReal: Rho and Eta Pandora, at the hands of Hatchet Face.
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* {{Badass}}: Tether has taken on some very powerful capes and come out on top, quipping all the way.
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** [[spoiler: Coil's attempt to frame Danny Hebert as Coil works pretty well, but it's not a perfect job because Coil is very rich and well-connected, while Danny was perpetually broke. It's not solid evidence, but it's enough to make Armsmaster suspect.]]
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** Vista has spent years as a Ward, meaning that her life has been focused on fighting villains and working with her teammates, and as a result, she has no friends outside the Wards and cannot relate to others around her age. Her interlude shows that her so-called 'vacation' is terrible for her because she has nothing to do, nobody to talk to and yet she's supposed to be having fun (the author explicitly compared her situation to raising an animal in captivity, then putting it back in the wild for a few weeks and expecting it to fit in with and resemble one of the wild animals).
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** During the PHO interlude, a lot of users call for various members of the Protectorate to be arrested or sued for child endangerment, because the Wards, aka children, have had to fight off [[spoiler: the Slaughterhouse Nine]] and others, have been forced to kill, and have been subjected to a lot of horrible things.

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** During the third PHO interlude, a lot of users call for various members of the Protectorate to be arrested or sued for child endangerment, because the Wards, aka children, have had to fight off [[spoiler: the Slaughterhouse Nine]] and others, have been forced to kill, and have been subjected to a lot of horrible things.

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** Played straight with Sophia. Her step-father never hit her or touched her, but he suffered from bipolar disorder, and his mood changed brusquely. During one of his depressed episodes [[spoiler:he huged Sophia and leapt off a roof, crying that he was sparing them more pain.]] Sophia triggered, and since then she hates weak people can not solve their problems.

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** Played straight with Sophia. Her step-father never hit her or touched her, but he suffered from bipolar disorder, and his mood changed brusquely. During one of his depressed episodes [[spoiler:he huged Sophia and leapt off a roof, crying that he was sparing them more pain.]] Sophia triggered, and since then she hates weak people can not solve their problems.



* RealityEnsues: Sure, Tether's got a great reputation, but once word gets out about what she did to Taylor, a lot of people lose faith in her.
** [[spoiler: As soon as it's revealed that Glaistig Uaine beat up the Simurgh because she'd prevented Madison from visiting her, a lot of people conclude that Madison and GU are lovers.]]
** During the PHO interlude, a lot of users call for various members of the Protectorate to be arrested or sued for child endangerment, because the Wards, aka children, have had to fight off [[spoiler: the Slaughterhouse Nine]] and others, have been forced to kill, and have been subjected to a lot of horrible things.




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* ZombieApocalypse: What [[spoiler: Anubis does. Instead of fighting, he floats around raising the dead. Every dead creature he raises can infect others, any living person who enters an area he's been will turn into a zombie if they're killed for up to three months, and the area where he's been will always turn anything that dies there into zombies.]]
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* NotHisSled: Despite the premise of the story (Taylor dies and so causes Madison to become a better person), Madison eventually catches a glimpse of a dark-haired girl controlling a swarm of insects early on. Sound familiar? [[spoiler: It's actually Pandora, transforming her biomass into said swarm, not a Taylor that managed to somehow cheat death by triggering in the locker, as some other fics have done.]]
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Redheaded Hero is being cut per the Appearance tropes cleanup thread.


* RedHeadedHero: Emma after her HeelRealization moment genuinely tries to be a hero.
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* RedheadedBully: Emma betrayed and bullied Taylor for over a year. After Taylor's death she stil abused Madison -for a while- and other students until [[spoiler:Dinah]] forced her to confront her actions.
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* PowersInTheFirstEpisode: In the first episode Madison feels so guilty about Taylor's death that she triggers and gains the power to connect any two non-living objects and then pull them together or push them apart.
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* LovelyAngels: Tether and Vista. After training together for a while they become a very effective combat unit.
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* BetaBitch:
** Madison used to be this to Sophia and Emma.
** Emma was this to Sophia before [[spoiler:she got beaten by Madison.]]
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* BetaCouple: Vicky and Dennis.


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* BrokenPedestal: [[spoiler:Tether]] became this to some of her fans when [[spoiler:her past as a bully was made public.]]

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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Krousse is willing to do ''anything'' to save Noelle. Anything.



* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: Marissa has the speech from all Wards.




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* YouKilledMyFather: Coil got Madison's parents assassinated.

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[-[[caption-width-right:350:''[[Literature/ParadiseLost "Long is the way, and hard, that out of Hell leads up to the light."]]''\\
Tether by Holocene]]-]



A ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by Cerulean. Can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/atonement-worm-au.312449/ SpaceBattles]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10771504/1/Atonement FF.net]] and [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/atonement-worm-au.11480/ Sufficient Velocity]].

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A ''Atonement'' is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' AlternateUniverse ForWantOfANail fanfic by Cerulean. Can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/atonement-worm-au.312449/ SpaceBattles]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10771504/1/Atonement FF.net]] and [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/atonement-worm-au.11480/ Sufficient Velocity]].
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''Atonement'' can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/atonement-worm-au.312449/ SpaceBattles]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10771504/1/Atonement FF.net]] and [[http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/atonement-worm-au.11480/ Sufficient Velocity]].

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* ParentalSubstitute: Samantha and Ethan took [[spoiler:Madison]] in after her fathers died during the Leviathan battle.



* TooDumbToLive: Emma wished becoming Tether's sidekick so that she tried to follow the Wards during their patrols in order to impress her. Of course, she bumped into someone extremely dangerous and almost got murdered.




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* TheWormThatWalks: One of the forms of Pandora is a humanoid-mass of insects: flies, bees, spiders...
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* TorpedoTits: As if she was ''[[Anime/MazingerZ Aphrodite A]]'', Bakuda gains "cannon boobs" in the tenth arc.

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