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It was originally conceptualized by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1236084/Allfather-Ford Allfather-Ford]] with ''Persona Vein'', which started off as a six-chapter (including an Intermission) OVA fanfic. Over time, it grew to be more compelling for both Kanius and Allfather-Ford with exploring new concepts and the characters within. After the author completed the story, he officially passed over to Kanius by starting off with an official sequel with Allfather-Ford involved.
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It was originally conceptualized by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1236084/Allfather-Ford Allfather-Ford]] with ''Persona Vein'', which started off as a six-chapter (including an Intermission) OVA fanfic. Over time, it grew to be more compelling for both Kanius and Allfather-Ford with exploring to explore new concepts and the characters within. After the author completed the story, he officially passed over to Kanius by starting off with an official sequel with Allfather-Ford involved.
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As of May 14, 2023, Book II Chapter 25 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/47/Akane-no-Mai FF.Net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/118853518 AO3]].
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As of May 14, August 28, 2023, Book II Chapter 25 29 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/47/Akane-no-Mai net/s/13538181/51/Akane-no-Mai FF.Net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/118853518 org/works/23454220/chapters/125384497 AO3]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/1/Akane-no-Mai Akane no Mai]]'' - The consolidated story and definitive edition of both Persona Vein and Urban Legends with many new changes. The prologue chapter has been uploaded on the same day Persona 5 Royal's western release. The story will pick up with Chapter 1 onward in mid-April 2020. While Persona Vein and Urban Legends are early drafts, Akane no Mai is planned to be the revised/final draft and the ''real, official'' version of the complete story. It will consist of three books, with Persona Vein being 'Book I' and Urban Legends split into the latter two books. The three arcs will each have different titles.\\\
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/1/Akane-no-Mai Akane no Mai]]'' - The consolidated story and definitive edition of both Persona Vein and Urban Legends with many new changes. The prologue chapter has been was uploaded on the same day Persona 5 Royal's western release. The story will pick up with Chapter 1 onward in mid-April 2020. While Persona Vein and Urban Legends are early drafts, Akane no Mai is planned to be the revised/final draft and the ''real, official'' version of the complete story. It will consist of three books, with Persona Vein being 'Book I' and Urban Legends split into the latter two books. The three arcs will each have different titles.\\\
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Having the Phantom Thieves as adults, they explore events of encountering physical beings that are not cognitions. The involvement of Japanese mythos and Revenants of the alternate future expand their worldly view of human society. The main antagonist of ''Persona Vein'' is portrayed as a complex character rather than the twisted adults the Thieves previously fought.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Having the Phantom Thieves as adults, they explore events of encountering physical beings that are not cognitions. The involvement of Japanese mythos and Revenants of the alternate future expand expanded their worldly view of human society. The main antagonist of ''Persona Vein'' is portrayed as a complex character rather than the twisted adults the Thieves previously fought.
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* ImGoingToDisneyWorld: The setting takes place in the real-life Tokyo Disneyland and [=DisneySea=] instead of Destinyland like in game canon and various Persona 5 fanfics. This blends more with the characters' adaption to a real-life setting. Likewise, they also mention and went to Universal Studios Japan.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The lore of the Revenants from ''Code Vein'' are involved with the modern times of the Phantom Thieves and related characters.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The lore of the Revenants from ''Code Vein'' are involved with the modern times of the Phantom Thieves and related characters.
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* ImGoingToDisneyWorld: The setting takes place in the real-life Tokyo Disneyland and [=DisneySea=] instead of Destinyland like in game canon and various Persona 5 fanfics. This blends more with the characters' adaption to a real-life setting. Likewise, they also mention mentioned and went to Universal Studios Japan.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The lore of the Revenants from ''Code Vein''are is involved with the modern times of the Phantom Thieves and related characters.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The lore of the Revenants from ''Code Vein''
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''Fanfic/UrbanLegends'': The sequel of ''Persona Vein''. "It's coming. It's here." Said the female Revenant. A man with no memories and a Shogi woman meet again. Thieves and Revenants cross paths. Fates intertwine when dark entities manipulate and tweak the timeline. Mysteries of the dark entities will be unraveled.
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* ActionGirl: Ann, Makoto, and Haru continue the trend; with Hifumi, Mia, Io, Yumeko, and Mary joining. Futaba also becomes this after receiving the passive abilities of her Persona's Ascendancy.
* BloodierAndGorier: Taken up to eleven from ''Persona 5''. Since there are no Shadows the heroes fight, there are a lot of bloody deaths, such as the monsters' deaths being torn apart in graphic detail.
* CharacterDevelopment: As per taken, there are experiences being developed now that the Phantom Thieves are young adults in the real world.
* BloodierAndGorier: Taken up to eleven from ''Persona 5''. Since there are no Shadows the heroes fight, there are a lot of bloody deaths, such as the monsters' deaths being torn apart in graphic detail.
* CharacterDevelopment: As per taken, there are experiences being developed now that the Phantom Thieves are young adults in the real world.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: ''Persona Vein'' is an OVA fic written by [=Ford1114=], while the Intermission chapter is written by Kanius (for his first try at handling these characters). The sequel and subsequent works are to be written by Kanius.
** Even the early draft (Persona Vein and Urban Legends) comes off like this since they don't include the events of Persona 5 Royal and Scramble, alongside the completed Code Vein storyline. Sophia as Hifumi's goddess form was written before the actual Sophia is introduced in Scramble. The early draft has Sion's signature sword named the Regicide Blade taken from Code Vein's early developments, while the final draft is named the Queenslayer Blade from Code Vein proper in the game's official release.
* FantasyKitchenSink: We have the Personas based on various mythologies and public domain figures. Vampires and related monsters from the alternate future. The Japanese historical figures, Guardian Spirits, and Yokai. All blend into a modern society, oh and let's not forget the involvement of gamblers originated from an infamous high school.
** Even the early draft (Persona Vein and Urban Legends) comes off like this since they don't include the events of Persona 5 Royal and Scramble, alongside the completed Code Vein storyline. Sophia as Hifumi's goddess form was written before the actual Sophia is introduced in Scramble. The early draft has Sion's signature sword named the Regicide Blade taken from Code Vein's early developments, while the final draft is named the Queenslayer Blade from Code Vein proper in the game's official release.
* FantasyKitchenSink: We have the Personas based on various mythologies and public domain figures. Vampires and related monsters from the alternate future. The Japanese historical figures, Guardian Spirits, and Yokai. All blend into a modern society, oh and let's not forget the involvement of gamblers originated from an infamous high school.
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** Even the early draft (Persona Vein and Urban Legends) comes off like this since they don't include the events of Persona 5 Royal and Scramble, alongside the completed Code Vein storyline. Sophia as Hifumi's goddess form was written before the actual Sophia is introduced in Scramble. The early draft has Sion's signature sword named the Regicide Blade taken from Code Vein's early developments, while the final draft is named the Queenslayer Blade from Code Vein proper in the game's official release.
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* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: ''Kakegurui'' is the only one of the four franchises that is an Anime/Manga (While ''Persona 5'', ''Code Vein'', and ''Nioh'' are originated as video games), and the characters are not actual fighters in their canon stories. Them bonding with the Guardian Spirits of ''Nioh'' serves to make up for their involvement with the protagonists for their guest appearances.
** ''Nioh'' is the only one that has realistic character designs unlike the other three franchises with anime character designs.
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: Of ''VideoGame/Persona5'', ''VideoGame/CodeVein'', ''VideoGame/{{Nioh}}'' and ''Manga/{{Kakegurui}}''. However, it downplayed this trope as it mainly focuses on ''Persona 5'' and ''Code Vein''.
** ''Nioh'' is the only one that has realistic character designs unlike the other three franchises with anime character designs.
* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: Of ''VideoGame/Persona5'', ''VideoGame/CodeVein'', ''VideoGame/{{Nioh}}'' and ''Manga/{{Kakegurui}}''. However, it downplayed this trope as it mainly focuses on ''Persona 5'' and ''Code Vein''.
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* UrbanFantasy: This is obviously one of the main themes of the series, with the Phantom Thieves being heard as urban legends in contemporary Japan since the end of ''Persona 5''.
* {{Youkai}}: The Yokai of the ''Nioh'' lore are involved in the series that the characters encounter.
* {{Youkai}}: The Yokai of the ''Nioh'' lore are involved in the series that the characters encounter.
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As of October 31, 2022, Book II Chapter 24 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/46/Akane-no-Mai FF.Net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/107440848 AO3]].
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It was originally conceptualized by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1236084/Allfather-Ford Allfather-Ford]] with ''Persona Vein'', that started off as a six-chapter (including an Intermission) OVA fanfic. Over time, it grew to be more compelling for both Kanius and Allfather-Ford with exploring new concepts and the characters within. After the author completed the story, he officially passed over to Kanius by starting off with an official sequel with Allfather-Ford involved.
Unlike Kanius's past fanfics, this fan-continuity is envisioned more like a draft of a novel series, that although it has a few AU traits (Such as the Persona characters having romance couples while in canon they don't have, and that Tokyo Disneyland/[=DisneySea=] is used instead of Tokyo Destinyland), this feels closer to an 'official canon' feel and not a full-out AU (Such as no AU backstories of the Phantom Thieves). Because of this, Kanius has the chance to hone more of his novel writing skills early, while the author is currently writing his debut novel.
Unlike Kanius's past fanfics, this fan-continuity is envisioned more like a draft of a novel series, that although it has a few AU traits (Such as the Persona characters having romance couples while in canon they don't have, and that Tokyo Disneyland/[=DisneySea=] is used instead of Tokyo Destinyland), this feels closer to an 'official canon' feel and not a full-out AU (Such as no AU backstories of the Phantom Thieves). Because of this, Kanius has the chance to hone more of his novel writing skills early, while the author is currently writing his debut novel.
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It was originally conceptualized by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1236084/Allfather-Ford Allfather-Ford]] with ''Persona Vein'', that which started off as a six-chapter (including an Intermission) OVA fanfic. Over time, it grew to be more compelling for both Kanius and Allfather-Ford with exploring new concepts and the characters within. After the author completed the story, he officially passed over to Kanius by starting off with an official sequel with Allfather-Ford involved.
Unlike Kanius's past fanfics, this fan-continuity is envisioned more like a draft of a novel series,that although it has a few AU traits (Such as the Persona characters having romance romantic couples while in canon they don't have, and that Tokyo Disneyland/[=DisneySea=] is used instead of Tokyo Destinyland), this feels closer to an 'official canon' feel and not a full-out AU (Such as no AU backstories of the Phantom Thieves). Because of this, Kanius has the chance to hone more of his novel writing skills early, while the author is currently writing his debut novel.
Unlike Kanius's past fanfics, this fan-continuity is envisioned more like a draft of a novel series,
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As of October 9, 2022, Book II Chapter 23 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/1/Akane-no-Mai FF.Net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/56222743 AO3]].
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As of October 9, 31, 2022, Book II Chapter 23 24 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/1/Akane-no-Mai net/s/13538181/46/Akane-no-Mai FF.Net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/56222743 org/works/23454220/chapters/107440848 AO3]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13322133/1/Akane-no-Kingdom-Nintendo Akane no Kingdom Nintendo]]'' - A trio of video game characters from another reality fall into another: the world of the Phantom Thieves. This is a fanfic collaboration between [=Ford1114=] and [=KingdomKey23=]. This is a non-canon crossover one-shot of our Akane no Mai series and [=KingdomKey23's=] Kingdom Hearts: The Nintendo Version Remixed fic.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13322133/1/Akane-no-Kingdom-Nintendo Akane no Kingdom Nintendo]]'' - A trio of video game characters from another reality fall falls into another: the world of the Phantom Thieves. This is a fanfic collaboration between [=Ford1114=] and [=KingdomKey23=]. This is a non-canon crossover one-shot of our Akane no Mai series and [=KingdomKey23's=] Kingdom Hearts: The Nintendo Version Remixed fic.
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* ActionGirl: Ann, Makoto, and Haru continue the trend; with Hifumi, Mia, Io, Yumeko, and Mary joining. Futaba also become this after receiving the passive abilities of her Persona's Ascendancy.
* BloodierAndGorier: Taken up to eleven from ''Persona 5''. Since there are no Shadows the heroes fight, there are a lot of bloody deaths, such as the monsters' deaths are being torn apart in graphic detail.
* BloodierAndGorier: Taken up to eleven from ''Persona 5''. Since there are no Shadows the heroes fight, there are a lot of bloody deaths, such as the monsters' deaths are being torn apart in graphic detail.
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* ActionGirl: Ann, Makoto, and Haru continue the trend; with Hifumi, Mia, Io, Yumeko, and Mary joining. Futaba also become becomes this after receiving the passive abilities of her Persona's Ascendancy.
* BloodierAndGorier: Taken up to eleven from ''Persona 5''. Since there are no Shadows the heroes fight, there are a lot of bloody deaths, such as the monsters' deathsare being torn apart in graphic detail.
* BloodierAndGorier: Taken up to eleven from ''Persona 5''. Since there are no Shadows the heroes fight, there are a lot of bloody deaths, such as the monsters' deaths
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: ''Persona Vein'' is an OVA fic written by [=Ford1114=], while the Intermission chapter is written by Kanius (for his first try of handling these characters). The sequel and subsequent works are to be written by Kanius.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: ''Persona Vein'' is an OVA fic written by [=Ford1114=], while the Intermission chapter is written by Kanius (for his first try of at handling these characters). The sequel and subsequent works are to be written by Kanius.
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* FantasyKitchenSink: We have the Personas based on various mythologies and public domain figures. Vampires and related-monsters from the alternate future. The Japanese historical figures, Guardian Spirits, and Yokai. All blend into a modern society, oh and let's not forget the involvement of gamblers originated from an infamous high school.
* ImGoingToDisneyWorld: The setting takes place in the real-life Tokyo Disneyland and [=DisneySea=] instead of Destinyland like in game canon and various Persona 5 fanfics. This blends more to the characters' adaption to a real-life setting. Likewise, they also mention and went to Universal Studios Japan.
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: ''Kakegurui'' is the only one of the four franchises that is an Anime/Manga (While ''Persona 5'', ''Code Vein'', and ''Nioh'' are originated as video games), and that the characters are not actual fighters in their canon stories. Them bonding with the Guardian Spirits of ''Nioh'' serves to make up their involvement with the protagonists for their guest appearances.
* ImGoingToDisneyWorld: The setting takes place in the real-life Tokyo Disneyland and [=DisneySea=] instead of Destinyland like in game canon and various Persona 5 fanfics. This blends more to the characters' adaption to a real-life setting. Likewise, they also mention and went to Universal Studios Japan.
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: ''Kakegurui'' is the only one of the four franchises that is an Anime/Manga (While ''Persona 5'', ''Code Vein'', and ''Nioh'' are originated as video games), and that the characters are not actual fighters in their canon stories. Them bonding with the Guardian Spirits of ''Nioh'' serves to make up their involvement with the protagonists for their guest appearances.
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* FantasyKitchenSink: We have the Personas based on various mythologies and public domain figures. Vampires and related-monsters related monsters from the alternate future. The Japanese historical figures, Guardian Spirits, and Yokai. All blend into a modern society, oh and let's not forget the involvement of gamblers originated from an infamous high school.
* ImGoingToDisneyWorld: The setting takes place in the real-life Tokyo Disneyland and [=DisneySea=] instead of Destinyland like in game canon and various Persona 5 fanfics. This blends moreto with the characters' adaption to a real-life setting. Likewise, they also mention and went to Universal Studios Japan.
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: ''Kakegurui'' is the only one of the four franchises that is an Anime/Manga (While ''Persona 5'', ''Code Vein'', and ''Nioh'' are originated as video games), andthat the characters are not actual fighters in their canon stories. Them bonding with the Guardian Spirits of ''Nioh'' serves to make up for their involvement with the protagonists for their guest appearances.
* ImGoingToDisneyWorld: The setting takes place in the real-life Tokyo Disneyland and [=DisneySea=] instead of Destinyland like in game canon and various Persona 5 fanfics. This blends more
* TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers: ''Kakegurui'' is the only one of the four franchises that is an Anime/Manga (While ''Persona 5'', ''Code Vein'', and ''Nioh'' are originated as video games), and
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* UrbanFantasy: This is obviously one of the main themes of the series, with the Phantom Thieves are heard as urban legends in contemporary Japan since the end of ''Persona 5''.
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* UrbanFantasy: This is obviously one of the main themes of the series, with the Phantom Thieves are being heard as urban legends in contemporary Japan since the end of ''Persona 5''.
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As of October 9, 2022, Book II Chapter 23 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/1/Akane-no-Mai]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/56222743]].
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As of October 9, 2022, Book II Chapter 23 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/45/Akane-no-Mai FF.net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/106141917 AO3]].
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As of October 9, 2022, Book II Chapter 23 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/45/Akane-no-Mai FF.net]] net/s/13538181/1/Akane-no-Mai]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/106141917 AO3]].org/works/23454220/chapters/56222743]].
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As of July 14, 2022, Book II Chapter 21 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/43/Akane-no-Mai FF.net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/100966143 AO3]].
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As of July 14, October 9, 2022, Book II Chapter 21 23 has been posted: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13538181/43/Akane-no-Mai net/s/13538181/45/Akane-no-Mai FF.net]] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/23454220/chapters/100966143 org/works/23454220/chapters/106141917 AO3]].
