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The actual summary: Brianna Wallace is an orphan who gets adopted by the Fentons. She has many doubts that linger from her past, making her seem a bit cold and a bit of an arsehole. It doesn't help when Skulker makes her life go upside down and making her have to learn things like trust, opening up completely, and how to interact appropriately.
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* TheGadfly: Brina is the [[TheTrickster trickster]] variant of this trope. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like when Skulker of all ghosts/people was her target) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.

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* TheGadfly: Brina is the [[TheTrickster trickster]] variant of this trope. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like when Skulker of all ghosts/people was her target) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.
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* TheGadfly: Brina is the [[TheTrickster trickster]] variant of this trope. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like in the case of Skulker) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.

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* TheGadfly: Brina is the [[TheTrickster trickster]] variant of this trope. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like in the case when Skulker of Skulker) all ghosts/people was her target) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.
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* TheGadfly: Brina is the TheTrickster variant of this trope. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like in the case of Skulker) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.

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* TheGadfly: Brina is the TheTrickster [[TheTrickster trickster]] variant of this trope. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like in the case of Skulker) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.
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* TheGadfly: Overlaps with TheTrickster somewhat in the case of Brina. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like in the case of Skulker) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.

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* TheGadfly: Overlaps with Brina is the TheTrickster somewhat in the case variant of Brina.this trope. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like in the case of Skulker) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.
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* TheGadfly: Overlaps with TheTrickster somewhat in the case of Brina. Brina embodies this trope in that she likes provoking her opponents until it begins to bite her in the ass (like in the case of Skulker) and has very poor social skills, primarily the latter especially when [[spoiler:Vlad]] becomes the target of her bluntness in chapter four.
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* PottyFailure: Brina implies she was once a bed-wetter much to Danny's disgust when the two are discussing Brina's [[PowerIncontinence]].

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* PottyFailure: Brina implies she was once a bed-wetter much to Danny's disgust when the two are discussing Brina's [[PowerIncontinence]].PowerIncontinence.
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-> "Hey guys! Time for chapter three! :3"\\

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-> "Hey guys! Time for chapter three! :3"\\
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'''Tucker:''' Come on you two! Just say "I love you" and make everything all better! Maybe it will make Danny less clueless! :D\\


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--> '''Tucker:''' Come on you two! Just say "I love you" and make everything all better! Maybe it will make Danny less clueless! :D\\

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* PottyFailure: Brina implies she was once a bed-wetter much to Danny's disgust.

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* PottyFailure: Brina implies she was once a bed-wetter much to Danny's disgust.disgust when the two are discussing Brina's [[PowerIncontinence]].
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* {{Jerkass}}: Brina is this, unfortunately. She will cuss out almost anyone, acts disrespectfully to almost everyone (it bites her in the ass in chapter four), etc.

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* {{Jerkass}}: Brina is this, unfortunately. She will cuss out almost anyone, acts act disrespectfully to almost everyone (it bites her in the ass in chapter four), etc.
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* HomemadeInventions: The Fenton Ghost Glue Gun like some of the canonical Fenton inventions (i.e. the Fenton Utility Weapon, which is a tube of lipstick that shoots anti-ghost energy).

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* HomemadeInventions: The Fenton Ghost Glue Gun like Gun, which fires [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin anti-ghost glue at ghosts]], trapping them. Like some of the canonical Fenton inventions inventions, it is reminiscent of an everyday object (i.e. the Fenton Utility Weapon, which is a tube of lipstick that shoots anti-ghost energy).
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A ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4158483/ princessbinas]]. This fanfiction is stated to take place after "D-Stabilized", but prior to the events of "Phantom Planet". The story is about an [[UsefulNotes/AspergersSyndrome Autistic]] orphan girl named Brianna "Brina" Oxana Wallace and her new life with the Fentons. She is easily summed up in five words: [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], [[TheBerserker reckless]], rude, childish, and [[CreepyChild creepy]].

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A ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4158483/ princessbinas]]. This fanfiction is stated to take place after "D-Stabilized", but prior to princessbinas]], set between "[[Recap/DannyPhantomS3E11DStabilized D-Stabilized]]" and "WesternAnimation/PhantomPlanet", the events of "Phantom Planet".show's last two episodes. The story is about an [[UsefulNotes/AspergersSyndrome Autistic]] orphan girl named Brianna "Brina" Oxana Wallace and her new life with the Fentons. She is easily summed up in five words: [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], [[TheBerserker reckless]], rude, childish, and [[CreepyChild creepy]].
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->"Brianna, someone is here for you. This may be your lucky day."

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->"Brianna, ->''"Brianna, someone is here for you. This may be your lucky day.""''
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A ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4158483/ princessbinas]]. This fanfiction is stated to take place after "D-Stabilized" and the events of "Phantom Planet" never take place. The story is about an [[UsefulNotes/AspergersSyndrome Autistic]] orphan girl named Brianna "Brina" Oxana Wallace and her new life with the Fentons. She is easily summed up in five words: [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], [[TheBerserker reckless]], rude, childish, and [[CreepyChild creepy]].

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A ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4158483/ princessbinas]]. This fanfiction is stated to take place after "D-Stabilized" and "D-Stabilized", but prior to the events of "Phantom Planet" never take place.Planet". The story is about an [[UsefulNotes/AspergersSyndrome Autistic]] orphan girl named Brianna "Brina" Oxana Wallace and her new life with the Fentons. She is easily summed up in five words: [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], [[TheBerserker reckless]], rude, childish, and [[CreepyChild creepy]].
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The fic was originally posted in 2015 and was rewritten in 2016. Eventually it was removed from the internet for a period of time without any known backups, however, the authoress has [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14258533/1/ reuploaded the story]] as of July 21st, 2023.

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The fic was originally posted in 2015 and was rewritten in 2016. Eventually it was removed from the internet for a period of time without any known backups, however, backups. However, the authoress had a copy on her computer and has since [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14258533/1/ reuploaded the story]] as of July 21st, 2023.
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The fic was removed from the internet for a period of time without any known backups, however, the authoress has [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14258533/1/ reuploaded the story]] as of July 21st, 2023.

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The fic was originally posted in 2015 and was rewritten in 2016. Eventually it was removed from the internet for a period of time without any known backups, however, the authoress has [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14258533/1/ reuploaded the story]] as of July 21st, 2023.

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* FacePalm

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* FacePalmFacePalm A few of these happen throughout the story.
** Jazz does it in chapter two in response to Danny's cluelessness.
** Danny's response to Brina ComicallyMissingThePoint in chapter three after he [[StuffedIntoATrashCan pushed Brina into a trashcan]] to prevent people from seeing her transform back into human form.
** Chapter four has plenty of these.
*** Sam when Brina [[ComicallyMissingThePoint fails to realize]] the importance of using an alias for her ghost form.
**** Brina decides to use her middle name, Oxana, as her alias...
*** Danny again when Brina tells him that she will not promise to avoid [[spoiler:Vlad]].
*** Brina when Jack says it was [[spoiler:the Wisconsin Ghost who attack her and not Vlad]]...
** Jack in chapter six when he is trying to apologize to Danny by giving him a pet rock [[spoiler:after he realized he had been hunting his own son]].
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* AntiHero: This is what the author intends for Brina.

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* AntiHero: This is what the author intends for Brina.Brina based on the setup that is given in the six chapters that have been published.



* {{Kid Hero}}: Brianna is intended to be a anti-hero version of this, whether or not it happens is unknown due to the story still being abandoned.

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* {{Kid Hero}}: Brianna is intended to be a anti-hero version of this, whether or not it happens will actually happen is unknown due to the story still being abandoned.



* NukeEm: Brina's thoughts of dealing with a pesky AI while playing ''VideoGame/{{Civilization}} IV''.

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* NukeEm: Brina's thoughts of dealing with a pesky AI that is pressuring her to adopt certain policies while playing ''VideoGame/{{Civilization}} IV''.
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** In the rewrite, she actually swears and drops actual H-bombs.

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** In the rewrite, she actually swears and drops actual H-bombs.almost constantly says the other H-Word.
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--> "Hey guys! Time for chapter three! :3"\\

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--> -> "Hey guys! Time for chapter three! :3"\\:3"\\
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---> '''Danny:''' Oh come on! That last prank I did on Dash was hilarious! XD He looked like a Barbie reject!\\

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---> --> '''Danny:''' Oh come on! That last prank I did on Dash was hilarious! XD He looked like a Barbie reject!\\
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** In chapter four, Brina does something similar with Vlad. It ends badly for Brina to the point [[spoiler:she has a full-blown meltdown in chapter 5]], and that's not even scratching the surface.

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** In chapter four, Brina does something similar with Vlad.[[spoiler:Vlad]]. It ends badly for Brina to the point [[spoiler:she has a full-blown meltdown in chapter 5]], and that's not even scratching the surface.



* TheTrickster: Brina shows signs of becoming one... One sign of this can be seen in how she interacted with Skulker in chapter one and Vlad in chapter four.

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* TheTrickster: Brina shows signs of becoming one... One sign of this can be seen in how she interacted with Skulker in chapter one and Vlad one. Another sign can be seen when she interacts with [[spoiler:Vlad in chapter four.four]].
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A ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4158483/ princessbinas]]. This fanfiction is stated to take place after "D-Stabilized" and the events of "Phantom Planet" never take placeF. The story is about an [[UsefulNotes/AspergersSyndrome Autistic]] orphan girl named Brianna "Brina" Oxana Wallace and her new life with the Fentons. She is easily summed up in five words: [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], [[TheBerserker reckless]], rude, childish, and [[CreepyChild creepy]].

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A ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4158483/ princessbinas]]. This fanfiction is stated to take place after "D-Stabilized" and the events of "Phantom Planet" never take placeF.place. The story is about an [[UsefulNotes/AspergersSyndrome Autistic]] orphan girl named Brianna "Brina" Oxana Wallace and her new life with the Fentons. She is easily summed up in five words: [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], [[TheBerserker reckless]], rude, childish, and [[CreepyChild creepy]].
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The story has been reuploaded.

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->"Brianna, someone is here for you. This may be your lucky day."
-->-- '''Orphanage Lady'''

A ''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'' fanfiction by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4158483/ princessbinas]]. This fanfiction is stated to take place after "D-Stabilized" and the events of "Phantom Planet" never take placeF. The story is about an [[UsefulNotes/AspergersSyndrome Autistic]] orphan girl named Brianna "Brina" Oxana Wallace and her new life with the Fentons. She is easily summed up in five words: [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]], [[TheBerserker reckless]], rude, childish, and [[CreepyChild creepy]].

The actual summary: Brianna Wallace is an orphan who gets adopted by the Fentons. She has many doubts that linger from her past, making her seem a bit cold and a bit of an arsehole. It doesn't help when Skulker makes her life go upside down and making her have to learn things like trust, opening up completely, and how to interact appropriately.

The fic was removed from the internet for a period of time without any known backups, however, the authoress has [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14258533/1/ reuploaded the story]] as of July 21st, 2023.

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!!''Adoption Nightmare'' contains examples of:

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* AllMenArePerverts: The reason why Danny and Tucker decided to take Health was because of the pictures shown during the Sex-Ed unit. This gets {{Lampshaded}} by Sam who would rather not know but does.
* AntiHero: This is what the author intends for Brina.
* BerserkButton: Brina has a disproportionate hatred of obstacle courses. She practically destroyed the one that was in the lab when Danny was attempting to teach her how to use her powers.
** Brina's biggest one yet: Calling her a retard is like calling [[Manga/FullMetalAlchemist Ed Elric a pipsqueak]] right in front of him.
* BrainBleach:
** Danny is still waiting for some after Brina repeatedly turns her clothes invisible on accident.
** Danny needs it again after he heard the Box Ghost and Lunch Lady making out in the thermos.
* ButtMonkey:
** Tucker gets beaten up by Sam for putting a virus in Sam's computer... Sam is revealed to have confiscated Sasha, Tucker's PDA in chapter 2.
** The rewrite adds Sam furthering this by trying to put lipstick on Tucker's PDA, much to the tech geek's horror.
* CallingYourBathroomBreaks Brina does this in chapter 2 when she claims she needs to pee.
* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Brina's responses are made up of these half the time. She does not understand things like keeping SecretIdentity and prefers being more honest, not realizing just how much danger she would be putting herself in by casually dropping the fact she half-ghost in conversations or transforming where people can see her.
--> '''Brina''': What does an [[StrappedToAnOperatingTable operating table]] have to do with anything? I don't have [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking appendicitis, a deadly tumor, or any other nasty stuff like that]]!
** The rewrite changes "deadly tumor" to "cancer"...
* CuckoldHorns: Brina gives this to ''Skulker'' of all the characters... It's a miracle she isn't dead yet...
** It was changed to the more offensive [[FlippingTheBird middle finger]] in the rewrite. It still ticks off Skulker.
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Brina lost both of her birth parents to terminal illnesses (Her dad died of Pneumonia and her mother died of Ebola).
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu Brina did when she gave CuckoldHorns to Skulker. This ends with her being chased by a very ticked off Skulker...
** In the rewrite this was changed to Brina FlippingTheBird. It still has the same effect of Skulker chasing her around the lab.
* DisabledSnarker: Brina in spades, especially when annoyed.
* [[AsianRudeness European Rudeness]]: Brina is pretty crass and rude. She calls someone a dunderhead at some point. Most notably in chapter 2 when she has a meltdown.
** In the rewrite, she is even more so. Going as far as to call almost everyone, including herself, some derivative of the word "ass". So far the words asshat, asshole, and dumbass have appeared.
* {{Drama Queen}}: Being a bit hot tempered Brianna does act like Drama Queen sometimes. Most notably in chapter four.
** Her best example is in her Chapter 2 meltdown.
* {{Emoticon}}: The author uses this occasionally in her author notes.
--> "Hey guys! Time for chapter three! :3"\\
** Danny, Sam, and Tucker use these when they are passing notes in Mr. Lancer's class during chapter three.
---> '''Danny:''' Oh come on! That last prank I did on Dash was hilarious! XD He looked like a Barbie reject!\\
'''Sam:''' Have you learned ''anything'' from the Poindexter incident? -.-#\\
'''Tucker:''' Come on you two! Just say "I love you" and make everything all better! Maybe it will make Danny less clueless! :D\\


* FacePalm
* FanDisservice: PlayedForLaughs with a naked Brina and Danny overreacting to the horrifying sight in chapter 2. ''Twice''.
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* GoshDangItToHeck: Brina has a very [[SirSwearsALot "foul" mouth]]. The word heck is used practically every other sentence as if it were the other H-Word.
** She even makes use of the word crap.
** In the rewrite, she actually swears and drops actual H-bombs.
* HalfHumanHybrid: Brina is now the fourth halfa to exist. And this did not happen in an accident and she is not a clone... [[spoiler: She is Skulker's attempt at getting a ''substitute pelt'' for until he can get a hold of Danny's. It doesn't work out so well and settles for ''[[EyeScream gorging her ghost form's eyes out]]''.]]
* HomemadeInventions: The Fenton Ghost Glue Gun like some of the canonical Fenton inventions (i.e. the Fenton Utility Weapon, which is a tube of lipstick that shoots anti-ghost energy).
* InHarmsWay: Brianna is TheTrickster version of this trope. She shows shades of this, especially when she is laughing like a nut job while running away from Skulker in chapter one.
** In chapter four, Brina does something similar with Vlad. It ends badly for Brina to the point [[spoiler:she has a full-blown meltdown in chapter 5]], and that's not even scratching the surface.
* {{Irony}}: [[spoiler: Brianna the doubter becomes half-ghost]]...
* {{Jerkass}}: Brina is this, unfortunately. She will cuss out almost anyone, acts disrespectfully to almost everyone (it bites her in the ass in chapter four), etc.
** Brina even vandalized Paulina's car with a Swiss Army Knife while in ghost form after Paulina called her retarded. Paulina was not happy and hoped Danny Phantom would tear Brina apart.
* {{Kid Hero}}: Brianna is intended to be a anti-hero version of this, whether or not it happens is unknown due to the story still being abandoned.
** Also Danny, Sam, and Tuck already are this.
* LiteralSurveillanceBug: One is mentioned to be wondering around the classroom unnoticed by anyone...
** This was taken out of chapter 3 and put into chapter 2 in the form of a metallic stink bug. Brina threw it out the window, thinking it was an actual stink bug.
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%%* OriginalCharacter
* OrphansOrdeal: Brina has been adopted and abandoned by ''one hundred and ten'' households for various and uncontrollable reasons. No wonder why she doesn't trust many people.
* {{Parody}}:
** [=DemonArt=] is Website/DeviantArt.
** Portals 8.1 is Windows 8.1. Not too subtle, are you, author?
* PottyFailure: Brina implies she was once a bed-wetter much to Danny's disgust.
* PowerIncontinence: Instead of intangibility problems, Brina has invisibility problems... The worse part, it's her clothes that become invisible majority of the time.
* NakedPeopleAreFunny: To us that is. But in the fanfic, Danny is trying to erase the images of Brina being naked.
* NoodleIncident: We never know what exactly happened to Brina while she was with those 110 households that gets her kicked out. All we know is that it left her with emotional wounds.
* NoSenseOfPersonalSpace: This trope is done half way when Brina does this to Paulina because she is angry at her.
* NoSocialSkills: Brina is unable to socialize appropriately due to her autism.
* NothingButSkinAndBones: The authoress states that Brina is this because she takes Strattera, an ADHD medication that causes weight loss and decreases appetite.
* NukeEm: Brina's thoughts of dealing with a pesky AI while playing ''VideoGame/{{Civilization}} IV''.
* SelfHarm: Brina bites herself and bangs her head on the wall in the first chapter.
* SmartPeoplePlayChess: Jazz a character who is smart plays a game of chess against Brina [[spoiler: to learn more about her]].
* StockForeignName: Brina's name is a pretty common one. Brianna has been becoming more popular in the United States and in Scotland.
** Then there is her middle name: Oxana. It is pretty popular in Ukraine.
* StuffedIntoATrashCan: Inverted. Danny shoves Brina into a trashcan when the latter begins to transform into her human form out in the open. Brina is not very happy...
* TaughtByExperience: Brina has some signs that she learns how to control her new powers by fooling around with them. This is hinted at in chapter two when she messes with her intangible hand and makes Danny fall through his chair.
* TheKlutz: Brina is constantly falling down the stairs and bumping into something. And unlike Danny, it is not her power's fault...
* ThePratfall: Brina rides down the stairs in chapters 2 and 3 [[Anime/SailorMoonCrystal Usagi Style]].
* {{The Seventies}}: Brina wears red bellbottoms to school. Paulina lampshades this when she is [[FashionDissonance teasing]] Brina.
* TheTrickster: Brina shows signs of becoming one... One sign of this can be seen in how she interacted with Skulker in chapter one and Vlad in chapter four.
* TooMuchInformation: Almost everywhere, including the reason why Brina was adopted...
** And the fact Brina doesn't know what is appropriate to say.
* TrashLanding: In chapter three, Brina crash lands into a garbage can when she tried to land.
* UnholyMatrimony: Danny accidentally caused this trope to happen when he stuffed the Box Ghost and the Lunch Lady in the thermos together.
* [[YellowEyesOfSneakiness Yellow Eyes of Sneakiness]]/[[SupernaturalGoldEyes Supernatural Gold Eyes]]: Brina sports fluorescent golden-yellow eyes in her ghost form.
** Her human form contains a more natural version of these eyes as well.
** Considering the signs of her being TheTrickster, her eyes in both forms are very fitting.
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