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It's been months since Applejack was cured and things returned to normal. Sure, there was the whole deal about swapped cutie marks, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure then Twilight becoming a princess,]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 and then something about a magic mirror and Spike getting his species demoted to "dog" temporarily,]] but otherwise it's business as usual.
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It's been months since Applejack was cured and things returned to normal. Sure, there was the whole deal about swapped cutie marks, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure then Twilight becoming a princess,]] princess]], [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 and then something about a magic mirror and Spike getting his species demoted to "dog" temporarily,]] temporarily]], but otherwise it's business as usual.
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It's been months since Applejack was cured and things returned to normal. Sure, there was the whole deal about swapped cutie marks, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure then Twilight becoming a princess,]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls1 and then something about a magic mirror and Spike getting his species demoted to "dog" temporarily,]] but otherwise it's business as usual.
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!!This FanFic contains examples of the following tropes:
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It's been months since Applejack was cured and things returned to normal. Sure, there was the whole deal about swapped cutie marks, [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E13MagicalMysteryCure then Twilight becoming a princess,]] [[WesternAniamtion/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyEquestriaGirls2013 and then something about a magic mirror and Spike getting his species demoted to "dog" temporarily,]] but otherwise it's business as usual.
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The story continues in ''[[{{Fanfic/SevenDaysInSunnyJune}} Seven Days in Sunny June]]''.
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The story continues in ''[[{{Fanfic/SevenDaysInSunnyJune}} ''[[Fanfic/SevenDaysInSunnyJune Seven Days in Sunny June]]''.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Rasperry Beryl. Oh boy, '''''Rasperry Beryl'''''.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Rasperry Raspberry Beryl. Oh boy, '''''Rasperry '''''Raspberry Beryl'''''.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Coco Pommel gets one scene with her boss, Suri Polomare. Neither are mentioned again in the story.
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* AbusiveParents: Beryl's father, Torchwood, pretty much crashes into this from double whammy of A.) Beryl being a filly instead of a coal, and B.) his wife dying from childbirth problems a week after Beryl was born.
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* AbusiveParents: Beryl's father, Torchwood, pretty much crashes into this from double whammy of A.) Beryl being a filly instead of a coal, colt, and B.) his wife dying from childbirth problems a week after Beryl was born.