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''a feel of discontent (i'm finally facing it all)'' is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' PatchworkFic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Strange_Things_Are_Happening_Here/pseuds/Strange%20Shards Strange Shards]] that can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37212361/chapters/92842591 here]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14048667/1/a-feel-of-discontent-i-m-finally-facing-it-all here.]] Metal Sonic, a.k.a. "Metallic," serves as the main protagonist of the story, taking what would be Sonic's place in this timeline's version of the ''Anime/SonicX'' series.

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''a feel of discontent (i'm finally facing it all)'' is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' PatchworkFic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Strange_Things_Are_Happening_Here/pseuds/Strange%20Shards Strange Shards]] that can be read in [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37212361/chapters/92842591 here]] Archive of our Own]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14048667/1/a-feel-of-discontent-i-m-finally-facing-it-all here.Fanfiction.net.]] Metal Sonic, a.k.a. "Metallic," serves as the main protagonist of the story, taking what would be Sonic's place in this timeline's version of the ''Anime/SonicX'' series.

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* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metallic and his/Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this.

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* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metallic and his/Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this.this.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Bokkun has a fit when Uncle Chuck calls him "Messenger Robo." Dialogue implies this happens on a regular basis, and it turns into a running gag as the story goes on. Also falls under DoNotCallMePaul.



* EverybodyKnewAlready: Partially subverted. Ella and Mr. Tanaka are shown to already know that they have Mobians in the house. Mr. Tanaka jokes that they should just purposefully barge in on Chris and Grandpa Thorndyke and tell them they know. In chapter 10, they actually follow through on that.



* GoodIsNotNice: Metallic may be TheAtoner and somewhat soft around Chris, but he's far from nice when it comes to the people who anger him. His other allies are no exception. In chapter 11, when Tails tries to apologize for what he said to Metallic in the previous chapter, he slaps his hand away. At the end of that same chapter, Metallic throws Sonic's roboticization in Tails' face, and tells him that he doesn't need him.

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* GoodIsNotNice: Metallic may be TheAtoner and somewhat soft around Chris, but he's far from nice when it comes to the people who anger him. His other allies are no exception. In chapter 11, when Tails tries to apologize for what he said to Metallic in the previous chapter, he slaps his hand away. At the end of that same chapter, Metallic throws Sonic's roboticization in Tails' face, and tells him that he doesn't need him.
him. The next chapter does imply some wondering regret on his part, though.
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* {{Precursors}}: In chapter 15, upon Lindsey being let in on the know about the Mobians, Amy alludes to the Ancient Risaeðlurs (a reference to the [[ComicBook/SonicTheComic dinosaurs in spacesuits]]) who were responsible for creating life on Mobius and presumably several other alien planets.
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* GoodIsNotNice: Metallic may be TheAtoner and somewhat soft around Chris, but he's far from nice when it comes to the people who anger him. His other allies are no exception. In chapter 11, when Tails tries to apologize for what he said to Metallic, he slaps his hand away. At the end of that same chapter, Metallic throws Sonic's roboticization in Tails' face, and tells him that he doesn't need him.

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* GoodIsNotNice: Metallic may be TheAtoner and somewhat soft around Chris, but he's far from nice when it comes to the people who anger him. His other allies are no exception. In chapter 11, when Tails tries to apologize for what he said to Metallic, Metallic in the previous chapter, he slaps his hand away. At the end of that same chapter, Metallic throws Sonic's roboticization in Tails' face, and tells him that he doesn't need him.
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* FantasticRacism: In chapter 15, it was explained that the Overlanders tried to wipe out the Mobians during the Great War. Additionally, in chapter 16 Captain Westwood makes it very clear he is not fond of Rouge.

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* FantasticRacism: In chapter 15, it was it's explained that the Overlanders tried to wipe out the Mobians during the Great War. Additionally, in chapter 16 Captain Westwood makes it very clear he is not fond of Rouge.
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* FantasticRacism: In chapter 15, it was explained that the Overlanders tried to wipe out the Mobians during the Great War. Additionally, in chapter 16 Captain Westwood makes it very clear he is not fond of Rouge.
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* ItIsDehumanizing: Played with. For about five and a half chapters Metallic thought of himself in narration with his POV as "it," only starting to use he/him pronouns when Uncle Chuck tells him that he ''is'' alive regardless of the fact that he is a machine.

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* ItIsDehumanizing: Played with. For about five and a half chapters Metallic thought of himself in narration with his POV as "it," only starting to use he/him pronouns when Uncle Chuck tells him that he ''is'' alive regardless of the fact that he is a machine.
machine. This is not the only instance of this trope.

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* AdaptationNameChange: The X-Tornado, which has had various other designations in the ''Sonic X'' anime as well, has been renamed the "Tornado X-treme." And there's a partially subverted example in that Metal Sonic went by his original designation for the past 15 chapters, and was renamed Metallic towards the end of the 15th.

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* AdaptationNameChange: The X-Tornado, which has had various other designations in the ''Sonic X'' anime as well, has been renamed the "Tornado X-treme." And there's a partially subverted example in that Metal Sonic went by his original designation for the past 15 chapters, and was renamed Metallic towards the end of the 15th.
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* MeaningfulRename: Near the end of chapter 15, Chris renames Metal Sonic "Metallic."
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* AccidentalMisnaming: Bokkun has a fit when Uncle Chuck calls him "Messenger Robo." Dialogue implies this happens on a regular basis, and it turns into a running gag as the story goes on.

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* AccidentalMisnaming: Bokkun has a fit when Uncle Chuck calls him "Messenger Robo." Dialogue implies this happens on a regular basis, and it turns into a running gag as the story goes on.
on. Also falls under DoNotCallMePaul.
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''a feel of discontent (i'm finally facing it all)'' is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' PatchworkFic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Strange_Things_Are_Happening_Here/pseuds/Strange%20Shards Strange Shards]] that can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37212361/chapters/92842591 here]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14048667/1/a-feel-of-discontent-i-m-finally-facing-it-all here.]] Metal Sonic serves as the main protagonist of the story, taking what would be Sonic's place in this timeline's version of the ''Anime/SonicX'' series.

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''a feel of discontent (i'm finally facing it all)'' is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' PatchworkFic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Strange_Things_Are_Happening_Here/pseuds/Strange%20Shards Strange Shards]] that can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37212361/chapters/92842591 here]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14048667/1/a-feel-of-discontent-i-m-finally-facing-it-all here.]] Metal Sonic Sonic, a.k.a. "Metallic," serves as the main protagonist of the story, taking what would be Sonic's place in this timeline's version of the ''Anime/SonicX'' series.
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* AdaptationNameChange: The X-Tornado, which has had various other designations in the ''Sonic X'' anime as well, has been renamed the "Tornado X-treme." A partially subverted example in that Metal Sonic went by his original designation for the past 15 chapters, and was renamed Metallic towards the end of the 15th.

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* AdaptationNameChange: The X-Tornado, which has had various other designations in the ''Sonic X'' anime as well, has been renamed the "Tornado X-treme." A And there's a partially subverted example in that Metal Sonic went by his original designation for the past 15 chapters, and was renamed Metallic towards the end of the 15th.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Metal Sonic is a roboticized version of Sonic (who would have been around ''15 years old'' when he was roboticized). Tails is still grieving because of Sonic's "death," and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Julie-Su]] has nightmares after events involving the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW Metal Virus]]. It only continues to get worse.

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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Metal Sonic Metallic is a roboticized version of Sonic (who would have been around ''15 years old'' when he was roboticized). Tails is still grieving because of Sonic's "death," and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Julie-Su]] has nightmares after events involving the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW Metal Virus]]. It only continues to get worse.



* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Metal Sonic, due to his amnesia and then reacquiring of a memory in which Dr. Eggman ''wiped his memory,'' is no longer as much of a ruthless killing machine and is even actively fighting ''against'' Dr. Eggman. Grandpa Thorndyke is a lot more worried about his grandson's safety (with good reason). And Chris is really into butterflies.

* AdaptationNameChange: The X-Tornado, which has had various other designations in the ''Sonic X'' anime as well, has been renamed the "Tornado X-treme."

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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Metal Sonic, Metallic, due to his amnesia and then reacquiring of a memory in which Dr. Eggman ''wiped his memory,'' is no longer as much of a ruthless killing machine and is even actively fighting ''against'' Dr. Eggman. Grandpa Thorndyke is a lot more worried about his grandson's safety (with good reason). And Chris is really into butterflies.

* AdaptationNameChange: The X-Tornado, which has had various other designations in the ''Sonic X'' anime as well, has been renamed the "Tornado X-treme."
" A partially subverted example in that Metal Sonic went by his original designation for the past 15 chapters, and was renamed Metallic towards the end of the 15th.



* AntiHero: Metal Sonic, the main protagonist, is this.

* TheAtoner: Metal Sonic is also this.

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* AntiHero: Metal Sonic, Metallic, the main protagonist, is this.

* TheAtoner: Metal Sonic Metallic is also this.



* CompositeCharacter: Metal Sonic serves as this, as he's explicitly listed in the tags to be a roboticized Sonic and he takes what would be Sonic's place in this version of the ''Sonic X'' series.

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* CompositeCharacter: Metal Sonic Metallic serves as this, as he's explicitly listed in the tags to be a roboticized Sonic and he takes what would be Sonic's place in this version of the ''Sonic X'' series.



* FreakOut: Metal Sonic's transformation into Metal Overlord, in which he for a time "lost his marbles," is mentioned several times.

* GoodIsNotNice: Metal Sonic may be TheAtoner and somewhat soft around Chris, but he's far from nice when it comes to the people who anger him. His other allies are no exception. In chapter 11, when Tails tries to apologize for what he said to Metal, he slaps his hand away. At the end of that same chapter, Metal throws Sonic's roboticization in Tails' face, and tells him that he doesn't need him.

* HarmfulToMinors: The first full memory Metal Sonic regained was Dr. Eggman wiping his memory. Not to mention he's a roboticized version of Sonic, who in the anime and other Sonic the Hedgehog media is only ''15'' years old, meaning he was likely roboticized around that age. ''And'' not to mention it was revealed he had his vocal cords removed before being roboticized.

* ItIsDehumanizing: Played with. For about five and a half chapters Metal Sonic thought of himself in narration with his POV as "it," only starting to use he/him pronouns when Uncle Chuck tells him that he ''is'' alive regardless of the fact that he is a machine.

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* FreakOut: Metal Sonic's Metallic's transformation into Metal Overlord, in which he for a time "lost his marbles," is mentioned several times.

times. Also counts as SanitySlippage.

* GoodIsNotNice: Metal Sonic Metallic may be TheAtoner and somewhat soft around Chris, but he's far from nice when it comes to the people who anger him. His other allies are no exception. In chapter 11, when Tails tries to apologize for what he said to Metal, Metallic, he slaps his hand away. At the end of that same chapter, Metal Metallic throws Sonic's roboticization in Tails' face, and tells him that he doesn't need him.

* HarmfulToMinors: The first full memory Metal Sonic Metallic regained was Dr. Eggman wiping his memory. Not to mention he's a roboticized version of Sonic, who in the anime and other Sonic the Hedgehog media is only ''15'' years old, meaning he was likely roboticized around that age. ''And'' not to mention it was revealed he had his vocal cords removed before being roboticized.

roboticized. That's not the end of it, either.

* ItIsDehumanizing: Played with. For about five and a half chapters Metal Sonic Metallic thought of himself in narration with his POV as "it," only starting to use he/him pronouns when Uncle Chuck tells him that he ''is'' alive regardless of the fact that he is a machine.



* TheSpeechless: Subverted. Metal Sonic is not capable of vocal speech outside of beeps and buzzing, but he is still able to communicate through sign language. At the end of chapter 11, he gains a voice chip, ending the usage of this trope in the story.

* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic and Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this.

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* TheSpeechless: Subverted. Metal Sonic Metallic is not capable of vocal speech outside of beeps and buzzing, but he is still able to communicate through sign language. At the end of chapter 11, he gains a voice chip, ending the usage of this trope in the story.

* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic Metallic and Sonic's his/Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this.
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Actually, maybe I'll just remove the trope entirely.


* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic and Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this.

* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Until chapter 14, we had no idea what happened to the frog "Caramel" from chapter 7. He's been doing better since chapter 7.

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* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic and Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this.

* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Until chapter 14, we had no idea what happened to the frog "Caramel" from chapter 7. He's been doing better since chapter 7.
this.
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* CommonTongue: Everyone from Sonic's world so far speaks English. Surprisingly, no one has questioned this.

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* CommonTongue: Everyone from Sonic's world so far speaks English. Surprisingly, no one has questioned this.
It's explained in chapter 15 that this is probably due to the mysterious creators Amy talks about, as it's been theorized that the creators made it so as everyone evolved, they would develop similar languages.



* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We still have no idea what happened to the frog from chapter 7.

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We still have Until chapter 14, we had no idea what happened to the frog "Caramel" from chapter 7. He's been doing better since chapter 7.
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* AdaptationNameChange: The X-Tornado, which has had various other designations in the ''Sonic X'' anime as well, has been renamed the "Tornado X-treme."
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* {{Sadist}}: Eggman is especially this in chapter 13, to the point where it's even lamp shaded in-narration.

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* {{Sadist}}: Eggman is especially this in chapter 13, to the point where it's [[LampshadeHanging even lamp shaded lampshaded]] in-narration.
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* {{Sadist}}: Eggman is especially this in chapter 13.

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* {{Sadist}}: Eggman is especially this in chapter 13.
13, to the point where it's even lamp shaded in-narration.
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* {{Sadist}}: Eggman is especially this in chapter 13.
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* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic and Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this. Metal Sonic has all but outright been said to be a roboticized version of Sonic.

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* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic and Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this. Metal Sonic has all but outright been said to be a roboticized version of Sonic.
this.
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* CompositeCharacter: Metal Sonic serves as this, as he's explicitly listed in the tags to be a roboticized Sonic and he takes what would be Sonic's place in this version of the Sonic X series.

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* CompositeCharacter: Metal Sonic serves as this, as he's explicitly listed in the tags to be a roboticized Sonic and he takes what would be Sonic's place in this version of the Sonic X ''Sonic X'' series.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Metal Sonic is a roboticized version of Sonic (who would have been around ''15 years old'' when he was roboticized) and even had his vocal cords surgically removed by Dr. Eggman prior to roboticization, among other tragic things. Tails is still grieving because of Sonic's "death," and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Julie-Su]] has nightmares after events involving the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW Metal Virus]]. It only continues to get worse.

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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Metal Sonic is a roboticized version of Sonic (who would have been around ''15 years old'' when he was roboticized) and even had his vocal cords surgically removed by Dr. Eggman prior to roboticization, among other tragic things.roboticized). Tails is still grieving because of Sonic's "death," and [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Julie-Su]] has nightmares after events involving the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW Metal Virus]]. It only continues to get worse.
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* AreTheseWiresImportant: In chapter 5, Knuckles literally says "This looks important!" before ripping the power source off the jaguar robot.



* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic and Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this. Metal Sonic has all but outright been said to be a roboticized version of Sonic.

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* UnwillingRoboticisation: Both Metal Sonic and Sonic's Uncle Chuck are explicitly this. Metal Sonic has all but outright been said to be a roboticized version of Sonic.Sonic.

* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: We still have no idea what happened to the frog from chapter 7.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Metal Sonic is a roboticized version of Sonic (who would have been around ''15 years old'' when he was roboticized) and even had his vocal cords surgically removed by Dr. Eggman prior to roboticization, among other tragic things. Tails is still grieving because of Sonic's "death," and Julie-Su has nightmares after events involving the Metal Virus. It only continues to get worse.

* AdaptationalIntelligence: Knuckles is a lot less gullible than his Sonic X counterpart, to the point of ''threatening'' Dr. Eggman if he doesn't leave him alone.

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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Metal Sonic is a roboticized version of Sonic (who would have been around ''15 years old'' when he was roboticized) and even had his vocal cords surgically removed by Dr. Eggman prior to roboticization, among other tragic things. Tails is still grieving because of Sonic's "death," and Julie-Su [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Julie-Su]] has nightmares after events involving the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogIDW Metal Virus.Virus]]. It only continues to get worse.

* AdaptationalIntelligence: Knuckles is a lot less gullible than his Sonic X ''Sonic X'' counterpart, to the point of ''threatening'' Dr. Eggman if he doesn't leave him alone.
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''a feel of discontent (i'm finally facing it all)'' is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' PatchworkFic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Strange_Things_Are_Happening_Here/pseuds/Strange%20Shards Strange Shards]] that can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37212361/chapters/92842591 here.]] Metal Sonic serves as the main protagonist of the story, taking what would be Sonic's place in this timeline's version of the ''Anime/SonicX'' series.

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''a feel of discontent (i'm finally facing it all)'' is a ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' PatchworkFic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Strange_Things_Are_Happening_Here/pseuds/Strange%20Shards Strange Shards]] that can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37212361/chapters/92842591 here]] and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14048667/1/a-feel-of-discontent-i-m-finally-facing-it-all here.]] Metal Sonic serves as the main protagonist of the story, taking what would be Sonic's place in this timeline's version of the ''Anime/SonicX'' series.

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