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** Marina is a big fan of the two-girl band called [[FanFic/FutariWaPrettyCureBlueMoon Blue Moon.]]
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* TheDitz: Beileag, Zenjin's lackey and adoptive mother. Riko has some shades of this, but it's nowhere near the extent of [[Anime/YesPrettyCure5 Nozomi]] or [[Anime/SmilePrettyCure Miyuki.]] When she does act a bit ditzy, it's NOT PlayedForLaughs.
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* TheDitz: Beileag, Zenjin's lackey and adoptive mother. Riko has some shades of this, but it's nowhere near the extent of [[Anime/YesPrettyCure5 Nozomi]] or [[Anime/SmilePrettyCure Miyuki.]] When she does act a bit ditzy, ditzy (which is justified because she's autistic), it's NOT PlayedForLaughs.
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Story synopsis: Years ago, a race of aliens tried to settle on Earth. They didn't find it to their tastes, so they created their own planet, which they named [[MagicalLand Rozaniela]]. They also gained a habit of taking in huge troves of orphaned children and babies from Earth, saving them from neglectful or abusive environments to give them the love and care they needed. For many years, their plight was successful until one day, a human boy named Zenjin got his hands on the [[{{MacGuffin}} Energia]], a jewel containing all the power in the world, and used it to decimate 80% of the planet. Rozaniela's queen, Malgorzata, asks four fairy sisters to go to Earth and find humans who can become Pretty Cure and stop him from whatever it is he plans to do.
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Story synopsis: Years ago, a race of aliens tried to settle on Earth. They didn't find it to their tastes, so they created their own planet, which they named [[MagicalLand Rozaniela]]. They also gained a habit of taking in huge troves of orphaned children and babies from Earth, saving them from neglectful or abusive environments to give them the love and care they needed. For many years, their plight was successful until one day, a human boy named Zenjin [[TheSociopath Zenjin]] got his hands on the [[{{MacGuffin}} Energia]], a jewel containing all the power in the world, and used it to decimate 80% of the planet. Rozaniela's queen, Malgorzata, asks four fairy sisters to go to Earth and find humans who can become Pretty Cure and stop him from whatever it is he plans to do.
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* HotBlooded: Marina and Zenjin are both loud and active, but on different sides.
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* NoIndoorVoice: A lot of people accuse Riko of having this. But Zenjin is the one who yells the most in the series.
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* TheHighQueen: Queen Malgorzata rules over the ''entire planet'' alongside her husband, King Ghislain.
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* PickyEater: Both Rina and Riko. Rina absolutely HATES vegetables, especially spinach, while Riko hates anything that's spicy, sour, or bland.
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* CoolSword: Decebal has a pretty fancy rapier he uses for battle.
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* FinishingMove: ''"Pretty Cure [[Franchise/{{Pokemon}} Dazzling Gleam!]]"''
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* LightEmUp: All of the Pretty Cure's attacks are light and energy based.
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* RoyalRapier: Decebal has one and he's very royal in that he dresses like he came out of the 17th century.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Chinami Takayama --> MinamiTakayama and ChinamiNishimura, Fukiko Dounowaki --> KyokoDounowaki, Yoshie Inoue --> KazuhikoInoue, Natsuko Mukai --> NatsumiMukai, Hanae Tanaka --> RieTanaka, Sasami Kanai --> MikaKanai, Hiroto Sagisu --> ShiroSagisu, Toshiko Shiina --> Shiina Nagano (Two-Mix) and ToshikoFujita, Queen Malgotzata --> Malgorzata Szymanska (The Polish voice actress of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fluttershy]]), etc.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Chinami Takayama --> MinamiTakayama and ChinamiNishimura, Fukiko Dounowaki --> KyokoDounowaki, Yoshie Inoue --> KazuhikoInoue, Natsuko Mukai --> NatsumiMukai, Hanae Tanaka --> RieTanaka, Sasami Kanai --> MikaKanai, Hiroto Sagisu --> ShiroSagisu, Toshiko Shiina --> Shiina Nagano (Two-Mix) and ToshikoFujita, Queen Malgotzata Malgorzata --> Malgorzata Szymanska (The Polish voice actress of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fluttershy]]), etc.
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* TheFashionista: Beileag. She lives for dressing up in flashy outfits, especially 1960s style hippie outfits.
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* TheFashionista: Beileag. She lives for dressing up in flashy outfits, especially 1960s style hippie outfits. Chinami and Fukiko are also confirmed to be these, but to lesser, less flashy extents.
* {{Flight}}: Unlike other series, the girls can actually fly with wings on their shoes, like the Greek God Hermes.
* {{Flight}}: Unlike other series, the girls can actually fly with wings on their shoes, like the Greek God Hermes.
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* PowerOfLight: The series is heavy on light symbolism and motifs, so the attacks are very much light and energy based.
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* PowerOfLight: The series is heavy on light symbolism and motifs, so the attacks are very much light and energy based.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Chinami Takayama --> MinamiTakayama and ChinamiNishimura, Fukiko Dounowaki --> KyokoDounowaki, Yoshie Inoue --> KazuhikoInoue, Natsuko Mukai --> NatsumiMukai, Hanae Tanaka --> RieTanaka, Sasami Kanai --> MikaKanai, Hiroto Sagisu --> ShiroSagisu, Toshiko Shiina --> Shiina Nagano (Two-Mix) and ToshikoFujita, etc.
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* NamedAfterSomebodyFamous: Chinami Takayama --> MinamiTakayama and ChinamiNishimura, Fukiko Dounowaki --> KyokoDounowaki, Yoshie Inoue --> KazuhikoInoue, Natsuko Mukai --> NatsumiMukai, Hanae Tanaka --> RieTanaka, Sasami Kanai --> MikaKanai, Hiroto Sagisu --> ShiroSagisu, Toshiko Shiina --> Shiina Nagano (Two-Mix) and ToshikoFujita, Queen Malgotzata --> Malgorzata Szymanska (The Polish voice actress of [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Fluttershy]]), etc.
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Written by Tropers/{{Firechick12012}}, ''Twilight Pretty Cure'' is one of many PrettyCure fan series, but unlike most of its predecessors, it's not posted on LiveJournal, but on Fanfiction.net.
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Written by Tropers/{{Firechick12012}}, ''Twilight Pretty Cure'' is one of many PrettyCure fan series, but unlike most of its predecessors, it's not posted on LiveJournal, LiveJournal first, but on Fanfiction.net.
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Can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10288703/1/Twilight-Pretty-Cure here.]]
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Can be read on Fanfiction(dot)net [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10288703/1/Twilight-Pretty-Cure here]] and on her LiveJournal page [[http://joyousmenma93.livejournal.com/tag/twilight here.]]
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* {{Meganekko}}: Anzu wears her glasses and keeps them on, even when she's Cure Dawn. But she's definitely not TheIngenue, like most examples.
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* DestructiveSavior: The girls tend to cause some collateral damage when they fight, but it's all entirely by accident. The girls try to be as careful as possible when fighting, as they're aware of the repercussions that could spring up, but the Corrupt Sentinels and Zenjin don't make it easy. The reason the townspeople turned against Riko was that they saw Cure Twilight kick Marina's Corrupt Sentinel into three houses, leaving their inhabitants homeless, even though it was entirely by accident.
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* UngratefulBastard: The people of Hikaribashi don't thank Cure Twilight for saving them from Marina's Corrupt Sentinel. Instead, they yell at her and accuse her of being the one responsible for everything! Soon, they start hating the other members of Luminous-Q, but it's more sporadic than anything.
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* HeroicBSOD: Riko goes into one when the townspeople yell at her after her fight with Marina's Corrupt Sentinel.
* HurtingHero: All of the girls have shades of this, but Hotaru generally has it the best, whereas Marina and Riko are VERY hurt inside.
* HurtingHero: All of the girls have shades of this, but Hotaru generally has it the best, whereas Marina and Riko are VERY hurt inside.
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* MisunderstoodLonerWithAHeartOfGold: Riko, Anzu, and Marina all fill this role in different ways. Anzu dresses like a goth but isn't an EmoTeen and just stays on the sidelines, but her classmates are convinced otherwise. Marina is alone because kids don't want to be around a criminal's child, and Riko is much more misunderstood because she's autistic and kids her age just can't fathom why she behaves the way she does.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Zenjin, when he gets the Energia. He decimates a planet, kills people, and blows things up because he can, and he seems to enjoy it even more for it.
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* VocalDissonance: Zenjin is described as having an usually high pitched voice, unfitting of his age and character. The authoress admits she imagines him sounding like [[AndrewFrancis Dilandau]] [[VisionOfEscaflowne Albatou]] from the English dub.
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* SissyVillain: Both Zenjin and Decebal fill this trope in different ways. Zenjin is a {{bishonen}} with long silver hair, an unusually high pitched voice, and a slim build. Decebal is extremely campy, loves dressing up in sparkly 16th century Shakespeare-styled outfits, and prefers being as classy as possible. It helps that Zenjin is described as being fifteen years old.
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* StayInTheKitchen: Decebal is always going on chauvinistic rants against the girls, telling them to stop fighting and prepare themselves for marriage. The girls are NOT pleased. He doesn't do it with Beileag, however.
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* TeamMom: Hotaru and Anzu often carry this role, and it rotates depending on the episode. Moonbeam and Starbeam also count.
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* TeamMom: Hotaru and Anzu often carry this role, and it rotates depending on the episode. Moonbeam and Starbeam also count.count despite being the youngest siblings.
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* UnskilledButStrong: This mostly applies to Riko, as she's very strong as Cure Twilight, but can't fight for the life of her, and whenever she does, she unknowingly causes some collateral damage. She's working on this.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother: Hatoko, Marina's mother, is confirmed to be the youngest mother in the series. It's justified in that she was raped and had to take on motherhood during her late teens.
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* MeaningfulName: If written a certain way, Riko's name can be written as "child of truth" or "truthful child" reflecting her casual way of telling the truth and sometimes her well intentioned BrutalHonesty. Hotaru's name means "firefly," Marina's last name, Asagi, has asa in it, which means morning. Chino Anzu can translate to "apricot of the earth." Fukiko's name can mean "child of the wind and trees" since "fu" can translate to wind and "ki" can translate to tree.
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* MeaningfulName: If written a certain way, Riko's name can be written as "child of truth" or "truthful child" reflecting her casual way of telling the truth and sometimes her well intentioned BrutalHonesty. Her last name, obviously, translates to twilight. Hotaru's name means "firefly," and her last name, Minamigawa, translates to "south river." Marina's last name, Asagi, has asa in it, which means morning. Chino Anzu can translate to "apricot of the earth." Fukiko's name can mean "child of the wind and trees" since "fu" can translate to wind and "ki" can translate to tree. Kyoya's last name, Mitomo, can mean "beautiful friend" if written a certain way.
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* SickEpisode: Chapter 11. Sunbeam falls ill from stress accumulation and culture shock, exacerbated by Zenjin betraying her.
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* BreakTheCutie: Riko's spent her whole school life being picked on by both kids and adults to traumatizing extremes. Sunbeam tried to be friends with Zenjin, only for him to break her heart by telling her he was never her friend and that she shouldn't exist.
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* BreakTheCutie: Riko's spent her whole school life being picked on by both kids and adults to traumatizing extremes. Sunbeam tried to be friends with Zenjin, only for him to break her heart by [[UngratefulBastard telling her he was never her friend friend]] and that she shouldn't exist.exist. Hatoko, Marina's mother, was raped by a criminal and it traumatized her for life, but she's worked hard to raise Marina by herself and do everything in her power to make sure she grows up to be a good person.
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* ChildByRape: Marina's mother was raped by a notorious criminal, and she was born from it. Unlike most mothers, Hatoko genuinely loves and cares for Marina very much, and tries her best to raise her despite the circumstances they're in.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Zenjin decimating Rozaniela, Riko daydreaming about being a pretend superhero, Rina antagonizing her, Marina calling Riko mean names, Kyoya standing up to her, etc.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Zenjin decimating Rozaniela, Riko daydreaming about being a pretend superhero, Rina antagonizing her, Marina calling Riko mean names, Kyoya standing up to her, Hatoko scolding Marina for bullying Riko and trying to teach her right in a calm, understanding way, etc.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Riko. She's shy and has trouble socializing with others. Marina's mother, Hatoko, also counts, but she's more cripplingly scared of the world than anything due to being raped long ago.
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* GenreSavvy: Lots of characters go into this sometimes.
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* GenreSavvy: Lots of characters go into this sometimes. Riko is the most common culprit of this, as she's always dreamed of becoming a MagicalGirl hero.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Anzu has blonde hair and is the most understanding person in the group. She's definitely not [[TheIngenue an ingenue,]] though. She's actually pretty snarky and mellow, and her love of horror movies and black clothing makes her come off as a stuck-up EmoTeen to her classmates.
* HairOfGoldHeartOfGold: Anzu has blonde hair and is the most understanding person in the group. She's definitely not [[TheIngenue an ingenue,]] though. She's actually pretty snarky and mellow, and her love of horror movies and black clothing makes her come off as a stuck-up EmoTeen to her classmates.
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* NonHumanSidekick: The fairy sisters [[TheHeart Moonbeam]], [[TheSpock Starbeam]], [[GenkiGirl Sunbeam]], and [[SpoiledBrat Lovebeam]]. They do, however, fight with the Pretty Cures whenever possible, and don't just sit around and watch the action.
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* AlternateContinuity
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* ThemeNaming: Light motifs.
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* FiveManBand
** TheHero: Riko
** TheLancer: Marina
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** TheHeart: Anzu
** TheHero: Riko
** TheLancer: Marina
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* InnocentBlueEyes: Sunbeam, Hotaru. But they're anything but innocent considering what happened to them.
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* BigEater: For once, it's a villain! Zenjin not only eats a lot, but has absolutely NO table manners as he scarfs it all down like a big and makes a big mess of himself like he's a baby in a high chair!
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* BigEater: For once, it's a villain! Zenjin not only eats a lot, but has absolutely NO table manners as he scarfs it all down like a big pig and makes a big mess of himself like he's a baby in a high chair!
