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* DeconstructionFicDeconstructionFic: of the PeggySue fic, but differently as the Peggy Sues all come from different outcomes in the future which create alternate timelines. Their efforts to change the future can cause [[GambitPileup problems as they can interfere with the other's plans]] and people notice that they are acting different from their usual character.
** [[spoiler: Gaara demonstrates that the PeggySue doesn't have to come from a BadFuture or meant to come in the first place]]
** [[spoiler: Gaara demonstrates that the PeggySue doesn't have to come from a BadFuture or meant to come in the first place]]
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** Why Kakashi or Jiraiya didn't care of Naruto if they knew his parents? As Naruto said, Kakashi was only fourteen and Jiraiya is an irresponsible adult who can't take care of small children.
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** Why Kakashi or Jiraiya didn't care of Naruto if they knew his parents? As Naruto said, Kakashi was only fourteen and Jiraiya is an irresponsible adult who can't take care of small children.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: Played With, Kakashi considers holding Sasuke back from the Chunin Exams and wait until he's more mentally stable, but realizing if they do they lose their information advantageadvantage.
** Ultimately, justified while they want and do change certain outcomes, they mostly try to stick with previous events to not lose their advantage.
** Ultimately, justified while they want and do change certain outcomes, they mostly try to stick with previous events to not lose their advantage.
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* UnluckyCharm: Tenzo had a string of bad luck when trying to deliver Tsunade's necklace to Naruto.
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* SarcasticConfession: Tenzo is quick to reveal he's from the future to his ANBU captain. The captain lets him go on medical leave.
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* ButterflyOfDoom: [[PeggySue Jiraiya, Naruto, Tenzo and Kakashi]] note the minor effects make major changes, like Kakashi giving Naruto a new outfit results in Kiri nin fleeing because he's an ''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Uzumaki]]''
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* ButterflyOfDoom: [[PeggySue Jiraiya, Naruto, Tenzo and Kakashi]] note the minor effects make major changes, like Kakashi giving Naruto a new outfit results in Kiri nin fleeing because they realize he's an ''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Uzumaki]]''
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Naruto finds out when he and Sasuke go out for drinks to celebrate a successful D-Rank that Sasuke is a melancholic drunk and [[LooseLips tends to reveal personal secrets]]. [[spoiler: Which is how Naruto finds out Sasuke neglected and sexually abused by his caretakers post Uchiha Massacre]]
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Naruto finds out when he and Sasuke go out for drinks to celebrate a successful D-Rank that Sasuke is a melancholic drunk and [[LooseLips tends to reveal personal secrets]]. [[spoiler: Which is how Naruto finds out Sasuke was neglected and sexually abused by his caretakers post Uchiha Massacre]]
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* BufferflyOfDoom: [[PeggySue Jiraiya, Naruto, Tenzo and Kakashi]] note the minor effects
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* BufferflyOfDoom: ButterflyOfDoom: [[PeggySue Jiraiya, Naruto, Tenzo and Kakashi]] note the minor effectseffects make major changes, like Kakashi giving Naruto a new outfit results in Kiri nin fleeing because he's an ''[[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Uzumaki]]''
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* BrainBleach: a non-{{Squick}} version. Turns out Danzo is not immune to [[TheMessiah Naruto]], he has ROOT erase his memory after having prolonged contact with Naruto.
* BufferflyOfDoom: [[PeggySue Jiraiya, Naruto, Tenzo and Kakashi]] note the minor effects
* ItAmusedMe: Naruto didn't tell Kakashi, Jiraiya or Tenzo that he's also a time traveler because he works their plans with his and missed being treated like a kid.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Naruto tells Haku, Sakura and Sasuke that he's from five years in the future, but doesn't tell Tenzo, Kakashi or Jiraya that. The latter discover the other time travelers, but don't know of Naruto [[spoiler: they have a planned meeting and Naruto reveals from what point in the future he's from.]]
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Gai and Asuma believe Kakashi is so nice to Naruto because Kakashi feels guilty that Naruto almost got killed and framed by Mizuki. Kakashi was offered to adopt Naruto once and he has a precedent of having drastic personality changes when someone close to him dies.
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* ShotgunWedding: Gaara was nearly forced to marry Hinata because Hiashi thought he was "training" with Hinata without a chaperone. They were measuring Hinata for the wedding kimono while she was unconscious.
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* ShotgunWedding: Gaara was nearly forced to marry Hinata because Hiashi thought he was "training" [[IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow "training"]] with Hinata without a chaperone. They were measuring Hinata for the wedding kimono while she was unconscious.
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* ArtifactOfDoom: Tsunade's necklace was believed to be one, so Tsunade explained that Tenzo took it and gave it Naruto, Hiruzen [[PapaWolf took out an arrest warrant]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: Tsunade's necklace was believed to be one, so when Tsunade explained to Hiruzen that Tenzo took it and gave it Naruto, Hiruzen he [[PapaWolf took out an arrest warrant]]
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* RightfortheWrongReasons: RightForTheWrongReasons:
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew that Hinata was stalking him. Her being in [[OblviousToLove love with however..]]
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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Well-Intentioned Extremists Has Standards]]: Koharu was horrified to learn of Sasuke's mistreatment and realized that Danzo might had a hand in it. [[spoiler: Koharu decided to confide in Hiruzen of her suspicions and rein Danzo in.]]
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew that Hinata was stalking him. Her being in[[OblviousToLove [[ObliviousToLove love with however..]]
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew that Hinata was stalking him. Her being in
* LethalChef: Jiraiya, which is why Naruto learned how to cook.
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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Well-Intentioned Extremists Has Standards]]: Koharu was horrified to learn of Sasuke's mistreatment and realized that Danzo might had a hand in it. [[spoiler: Koharu decided to confide in Hiruzen of her suspicions and rein Danzo in.]]
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Naruto finds out when he and Sasuke go out for drinks to celebrate a successful D-Rank that Sasuke is a melancholic drunk and [[LooseLips tends to reveal personal secrets]]. [[spoiler: Which is how Naruto finds out Sasuke neglected and sexu
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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Naruto finds out when he and Sasuke go out for drinks to celebrate a successful D-Rank that Sasuke is a melancholic drunk and [[LooseLips tends to reveal personal secrets]]. [[spoiler: Which is how Naruto finds out Sasuke neglected and sexu sexually abused by his caretakers post Uchiha Massacre]]
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* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally killed in the Chunin Exam, Gaara predicts rightaway[[GenreSavvy he's coming back]]
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* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally killed in the Chunin Exam, Gaara predicts rightaway[[GenreSavvy right away [[GenreSavvy he's coming back]]
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* TheAlcoholic: Sasuke who usually drinks alone to sleep, underage alcoholism is a problem among the genin.
* CantHoldHisLiquor: Naruto finds out when he and Sasuke go out for drinks to celebrate a successful D-Rank that Sasuke is a melancholic drunk and [[LooseLips tends to reveal personal secrets]]. [[spoiler: Which is how Naruto finds out Sasuke neglected and sexu
* HarmfulToMinors: Sasuke is an alcoholic and started when his caretakers forced him to drink alcohol as a child.
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* RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvilRapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil: Sexual abuse of minors is a literal death sentence.
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* DeconstructionFic
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* SelectiveSquick: Sasuke was disgusted by his future self, not that he ate Orochimaru, that he ate Orochimaru ''alive''
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* SelectiveSquick: InUniverse, Sasuke was disgusted by his future self, not that he ate Orochimaru, that he ate Orochimaru ''alive''
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous: Naruto realizedrealized Kabuto delibrately made himself smell like ramen.
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* BadFuture: Lampshaded by Naruto [[spoiler: to Gaara, who's the only time traveler who didn't came from one.]]
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* EarlyBirdCameo: Sai's older brother, Shin gets a short scene where he tries to give Sai a teddy bear.
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* SelectiveSquick: Sasuke was disgusted by his future self, not that he ate Orochimaru, that he ate Orochimaru ''alive''
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* PowerOfFriendship: Lampshaded by Tenzo that many enemies of Naruto end up as his allies and change their ways or death in repentance. Tenzo then locks Danzo and Naruto in a closet in hopes of [[InvokedTrope invoking it]]
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* DeathIsCheap: Kabuto is accidentally killed in the Chunin Exam, Gaara predicts rightaway[[GenreSavvy he's coming back]]
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Including Naruto, who knew that Hinata was stalking him. Her being in [[OblviousToLove love with however..]]
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* NoodleIncident: The Iwa Incident for Gaara, all is known that Kankuro had to marry an Iwa nin.
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* AllAbusersAreMale: [[spoiler: Subversion, Sasuke's abusers were women, one woman was a serial child molestor]]
* ArtifactOfDoom: Tsunade's necklace was believed to be one, so Tsunade explained that Tenzo took it and gave it Naruto, Hiruzen [[PapaWolf took out an arrest warrant]]
* TheAtoner: Kakashi,PlayedForLaughsPlayedForLaughs, as he tries to make it up to Naruto for being a bad teacher, but gets misunderstood by everyone else.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Iruka is set off by Kakashi and Jiraiya's sudden desire to be close to Naruto
* ArtifactOfDoom: Tsunade's necklace was believed to be one, so Tsunade explained that Tenzo took it and gave it Naruto, Hiruzen [[PapaWolf took out an arrest warrant]]
* TheAtoner: Kakashi,
* BigBrotherInstinct: Iruka is set off by Kakashi and Jiraiya's sudden desire to be close to Naruto
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* GambitPileup: What happens when four time travelers try to change things.
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being invited
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* GambitPileup: What happens when four time travelers try to change things.
things. Several plans go wrong when someone else gets involved.
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Naruto. But it's pointed out that Naruto managed to evade several skilled Chunin and Jounin while wearing bright orange and was only caught when he felt like it.
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after beinginvitedinvited to a Uchiha funerary [[ImAHumanitarian feast]]
* HighlyVisibleNinja: Naruto. But it's pointed out that Naruto managed to evade several skilled Chunin and Jounin while wearing bright orange and was only caught when he felt like it.
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being
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* MistakenForPedophile: Kakashi and Jiraiya were seen as ''suspicious'' to Iruka
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* MistakenForPedophile: Kakashi and Jiraiya were seen as ''suspicious'' to IrukaIruka. Then again, anyone would be suspicious when two adults shower gifts and attention to a boy they just met.
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* NeverSpeakIllOfTheDead: Why no one speaks bad of the Uchiha clan when they were otherwise hated and distrusted when they were alive. They chose not to remember that the Uchiha were suspected of causing the Kyuubi attack and remember an old and distinguished clan....and project it on to Sasuke.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Temari and Kankuro ''freak'' when [[PeggySue Gaara]] suddenly acts nice
* PaedoHunt: Mocked at first, but taken seriously when Naruto accidentally finds actual pedophiles and tells Iruka. Afterward, all genin were required to take a seminar on how to recognize sexual predators. Naruto was forced to explain why Kakashi and Jiraiya weren't pedophile, just horribly misguided.
** A couple of parents called for the execution of the newly convicted pedophiles
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Temari and Kankuro ''freak'' when [[PeggySue Gaara]] suddenly acts nice
* PaedoHunt: Mocked at first, but taken seriously when Naruto accidentally finds actual pedophiles and tells Iruka. Afterward, all genin were required to take a seminar on how to recognize sexual predators. Naruto was forced to explain why Kakashi and Jiraiya weren't pedophile, just horribly misguided.
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* TookALevelInKindness: Gaara, [[spoiler: who was the Godaime Kazekage who accidentally time traveled]], PlayedForLaughs as everyone who personally knew him freaks out at sudden change in behavior.
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-->"Naruto": ''The reason I haven't been living with Ero-senin all along is because he's been away the last twelve years peeking into women's baths, writing perverted books, and keeping track of a child murdering freak.''
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* DeconReconSwitchContinuityDrift: Inconsistencies from Canon are utilized within story.
* DeconReconSwitch: A lot of ContinuityDrift from {{Naruto}} is lampshaded and justified within story.
** Why Kakashi or Jiraiya didn't care of Naruto if they knew his parents? As Naruto said, Kakashi was only fourteen and Jiraiya is an irresponsible adult who can't take care of small children.
* DeconReconSwitch: A lot of ContinuityDrift from {{Naruto}} is lampshaded and justified within story.
** Why Kakashi or Jiraiya didn't care of Naruto if they knew his parents? As Naruto said, Kakashi was only fourteen and Jiraiya is an irresponsible adult who can't take care of small children.
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* TheAtoner: Kakashi, PlayedForLaughs
* BreadEggsMilkSquick: To why Jiraiya wasn't taking care of Naruto
-->"Naruto": ''The reason I haven't been living with Ero-senin all along is because he's been away the last twelve years peeking into women's baths, writing perverted books, and keeping track of a child murdering freak.''
* BreadEggsMilkSquick: To why Jiraiya wasn't taking care of Naruto
-->"Naruto": ''The reason I haven't been living with Ero-senin all along is because he's been away the last twelve years peeking into women's baths, writing perverted books, and keeping track of a child murdering freak.''
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* [[spoiler: DrivenToSuicide: Hinata Sasuke mistaken Naruto for this when Naruto went to the shed to drink some battery acid after recovering his medication.
** [[spoiler:Hinata nearly killed herself after her match with Neji went horribly and no one was there for her]]
** [[spoiler:Hinata nearly killed herself after her match with Neji went horribly and no one was there for her]]
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* LethalJokeCharacter: The Uzumaki were a clan of these, known for their [[BlackComedy deadly and comedic]] techinques.
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* LethalJokeCharacter: The Uzumaki were a clan of these, known for their [[BlackComedy deadly and comedic]] techinques.techniques. They were infamous for their humiliating tactics.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Uzumaki to Kiri nin. Literally, Kiri has a Run-On-Sight order.
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* TheStationsOfCanon: Played With, Kakashi considers holding Sasuke back from the Chunin Exams and wait until he's more mentally stable, but realizing if they do they lose their information advantage
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* TheStationsOfCanon: TheStationsOfTheCanon: Played With, Kakashi considers holding Sasuke back from the Chunin Exams and wait until he's more mentally stable, but realizing if they do they lose their information advantage
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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Well-Intentioned Extremists Has Standards: Standards]]: Koharu was horrified to learn of Sasuke's mistreatment and realized that Danzo might had a hand in it. [[spoiler: Koharu decided to confide in Hiruzen of her suspicions and rein Danzo in.]]
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* LethalJokeCharacter: Naruto uses his prank jutsu in the battlefield
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* LethalJokeCharacter: Naruto uses his prank jutsu in the battlefieldThe Uzumaki were a clan of these, known for their [[BlackComedy deadly and comedic]] techinques.
* [[spoiler: RapeAsBackstory: Sasuke was molested by his caretakers as a child]]
* TheStationsOfCanon: Played With, Kakashi considers holding Sasuke back from the Chunin Exams and wait until he's more mentally stable, but realizing if they do they lose their information advantage
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* WaxOnWaxOff: Sasuke realizes how much skill, speed and planning to pull off Naruto's pranks and get away from the ANBU.
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* WaxOnWaxOff: Sasuke realizes how much skill, speed and planning to pull off Naruto's pranks and get away from the ANBU.
ANBU...in a fluorescent pink jumpsuit. [[spoiler: Neji also becomes a believer....in a fluorescent yellow jumpsuit!]]
[[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Well-Intentioned Extremists Has Standards: Koharu was horrified
* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: PlayedWithWith, Tenzo knows that Naruto was pushed into releasing the Kyuubi and wouldn't do it otherwise. Kakashi and Naruto considered killing Sasuke, but realized they would too many repercussions.
[[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Well-Intentioned Extremists Has Standards: Koharu was horrified
* WhyDontYouJustShootHim: Played
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* AcquiredPoisonImmunity: Naruto is immune to many poisons after he tried to eat several of them as a child.
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* AcquiredPoisonImmunity: Naruto is immune to many poisons after he tried to eat several of them as a child.child to the point he drinks [[UpToEleven battery acid]] as juice.
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* NoMedicationForMe: Kakashi forgot to refill Naruto's prescription for Chakra-Induced Attention Deficiency Hyperactive Disorder, it ends badly.
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* ReallyGetsAround: The Second Hokage, Senju Tobirama, to the point his brother made a law trying to rein in his promusucity. Tobirama instead extended his tastes to outside Konoha. Many people in Suna, Iwa, Kiri, Wave and Kumo can claim him as their ancestor.
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* GambitPileup:GambitPileup: What happens when four time travelers try to change things.
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* ImAHumanitarian: The Uchiha clan. Naruto was invited to a Uchiha funeral after one of them tried to adopt him and make him part of the clan and offered some of the meat... After one of meat...
** Kakashi, Rin and Minato ate Obito, along with Obito's parents who wanted him to have the proper Uchihatried to adopt himfunerary rites since Obito was disowned by the clan after giving Kakashi his eye.
** Kakashi, Rin and Minato ate Obito, along with Obito's parents who wanted him to have the proper Uchiha
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Uzumaki to Kiri nin.
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* ShotgunWedding:
ShotgunWedding: Gaara was nearly forced to marry Hinata because Hiashi thought he was "training" with Hinata without a chaperone. They were measuring Hinata for the wedding kimono while she was unconscious.
* ShroudedInMyth: TheUzumaki
Uzumaki are infamous outside of Konoha to the point that mothers used them as a boogeyman to scare their children into being good. Several character thought Uzumaki were a myth until [[OhCrap they met Naruto.]]
*TricksterMentor:
TricksterMentor: Sasuke asks Naruto to train him after seeing Naruto single-handedly take down an army with prank jutsu. Naruto accepts because he wants to distract Sasuke from revenge and get back at him.
*WaxOnWaxOff:WaxOnWaxOff: Sasuke realizes how much skill, speed and planning to pull off Naruto's pranks and get away from the ANBU.
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* CannibalClan: The Uchiha Clan eat their dead as funerary tradition
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* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being invited
* ImAHumanitarian: The Uchiha clan. Naruto was invited to a Uchiha funeral and offered some of the meat... After one of the Uchiha tried to adopt him
* IAteWhat: Naruto, after being invited
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* KidsAreCruel: Double Subverted
Subverted, Inari put a hole in the escaping mercenaries' boat and felt bad about it. His mother punishes him with no dessert, knowing her son accidentally committed homicide.
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MundaneUtility: Haku uses his senbon as knitting needles
*NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished:NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Kakashi helped Jiraiya and Anko capture Orochimaru in the Forest of Death, but as a resulted he accidentally got Team 7 disqualified.
* NoPartyLikeADonnerParty: The Uchiha tradition of eating the dead started after a couple of hard winters before the founding of Konoha
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* NoPartyLikeADonnerParty: The Uchiha tradition of eating the dead started after a couple of hard winters before the founding of Konoha
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* DespairEventHorizon: Kakashi in his original timelinetimeline, Naruto in Tenzo's timeline [[spoiler: and Hinata in the current timeline]]
*[[spoiler: DrivenToSuicide: Hinata nearly killed herself after her match with Neji went horribly and no one was there for her]]
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* KidsAreCruel: Double Subverted
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5496758/1/Time-MixUp Time MixUp]] by Creator/{{Lucillia}} is a [[FanficRecs/{{Naruto}} recommended]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5496758/1/Time-MixUp Time MixUp]] by Creator/{{Lucillia}} is a [[FanficRecs/{{Naruto}} recommended]]recommended]] PeggySue in which after Naruto gets captured by the Akatsuki to get the Nine-Tailed Fox extracted, the Kyuubi and Naruto work together and use a time-travel jutsu to stop the Akatsuki.
But wait! ''Kakashi'' is traveled back in time after Sasuke murdered Naruto in the Valley of the End to get a second chance and be the teacher he should have been...
[[RuleOfThree But wait!]] Jiraiya traveled back in time after Orochimaru successfully took over Sasuke's body and Oto and Iwa invaded Konoha to stop Orochimaru and not bury another student...
[[OverlyLongGag But wait!]] Tenzo traveled back in time after Pein razed Konoha to the ground and Naruto released the Kyuubi in [[DespairEventHorizon despair]] to save Konoha and convince Naruto that maybe using the Kyuubi's chakra is a bad idea...
What do you get four time travelers from different [[BadFuture bad futures]] end in the same timeline to try things? [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity]] [[GambitPileup Ensues]]
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But wait! ''Kakashi'' is traveled back in time after Sasuke murdered Naruto in the Valley of the End to get a second chance and be the teacher he should have been...
[[RuleOfThree But wait!]] Jiraiya traveled back in time after Orochimaru successfully took over Sasuke's body and Oto and Iwa invaded Konoha to stop Orochimaru and not bury another student...
[[OverlyLongGag But wait!]] Tenzo traveled back in time after Pein razed Konoha to the ground and Naruto released the Kyuubi in [[DespairEventHorizon despair]] to save Konoha and convince Naruto that maybe using the Kyuubi's chakra is a bad idea...
What do you get four time travelers from different [[BadFuture bad futures]] end in the same timeline to try things? [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity]] [[GambitPileup Ensues]]
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