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** And Sirius and Remus are very touchy-feely before it becomes clear that they're an item.
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* SlashFic: One of the best and most critically acclaimed.
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** Except that Sirius isn't heterosexual. Doesn't mean he has a crush on James, though.
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* AGoodNameForARockBand: Remus says this of "the Wet Blankets And One Very Lonely Marauder" in Part 10.
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[[http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2011/07/11/eveningnews/main20078549.shtml Was recently featured]] on the CBS news, with co-author Jaida Jones available for comment on the work itself.
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* SingleTargetSexuality: Remus, [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation possibly]]. He never really seems to show sexual attraction to anyone in the fic other than Sirius. So much so that Sirius seems worried that he's {{asexual}} before they get together.
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* FalseStart: Part 16:
--> “Oh my God,” Sirius says. “We’re going to die, aren’t we? This is your way of telling me. You don’t remember anything. Moony, listen, there’s something I’ve got to tell you before we kick it.”
--> “Disgusting,” Remus mutters. “There’s something wet — are you still dripping?”
--> “Remus, listen to me, this is very important—”
--> “Got it!” Remus grasps his wand triumphantly, holding it high above his head. “Lumos!” Weak light flutters from his fist which is, disturbingly, red and sticky. “Hallo, is that blood or cranberry juice?” He turns to face Sirius, wand wavering between them. “Well? What is it?”
--> Sirius falters, squinting. “I got chocolate on your sweater,” he says, averting his eyes. “Your favorite one. That light in front of your face makes your nose look enormous. Like a great big dolphin sticking out of your head.”
--> “Oh my God,” Sirius says. “We’re going to die, aren’t we? This is your way of telling me. You don’t remember anything. Moony, listen, there’s something I’ve got to tell you before we kick it.”
--> “Disgusting,” Remus mutters. “There’s something wet — are you still dripping?”
--> “Remus, listen to me, this is very important—”
--> “Got it!” Remus grasps his wand triumphantly, holding it high above his head. “Lumos!” Weak light flutters from his fist which is, disturbingly, red and sticky. “Hallo, is that blood or cranberry juice?” He turns to face Sirius, wand wavering between them. “Well? What is it?”
--> Sirius falters, squinting. “I got chocolate on your sweater,” he says, averting his eyes. “Your favorite one. That light in front of your face makes your nose look enormous. Like a great big dolphin sticking out of your head.”
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* HalloweenEpisode: Parts 4 and 17.
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* HalloweenEpisode: Parts 4 and 17.16.
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* ThisNeverHappened: Dramatic example when Sirius kisses Remus in part 12. When Remus just seems shocked more than anything else, Sirius freaks out and suggests this, which Remus agrees to without thinking. Needless to say, it doesn't work.
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* ThisNeverHappened: ThatDidntHappen: Dramatic example when Sirius kisses Remus in part 12. When Remus just seems shocked more than anything else, Sirius freaks out and suggests this, which Remus agrees to without thinking. Needless to say, it doesn't work.
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* ThatNeverHappened: ThisNeverHappened: Dramatic example when Sirius kisses Remus in part 12. When Remus just seems shocked more than anything else, Sirius freaks out and suggests this, which Remus agrees to without thinking. Needless to say, it doesn't work.
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* TrademarkFavouriteFood: Chocolate for Remus.
--> Where does it come from, he pauses to wonder, this love of chocolate, this veritable obsession? Everyone has a favorite food, he supposes, something that tickles an untraceable fingerprint of personality somewhere deep inside their bellies. Chocolate is a comfort. Chocolate is the essence of luxury; silks and satins for the tongue. ''But why chocolate?'' he asks himself. ''The way you are about it — it’s lunatic, you know.''
--> Where does it come from, he pauses to wonder, this love of chocolate, this veritable obsession? Everyone has a favorite food, he supposes, something that tickles an untraceable fingerprint of personality somewhere deep inside their bellies. Chocolate is a comfort. Chocolate is the essence of luxury; silks and satins for the tongue. ''But why chocolate?'' he asks himself. ''The way you are about it — it’s lunatic, you know.''
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* HomoeroticDream: After Sirius kisses Remus, the latter starts dreaming about them acting out [[ShoutOut various works of literature]], sometimes causing something [[RagingStiffie Perfectly]] [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean Natural]] in his pyjama bottoms. Remus is suitably horrified by the entire thing. Fortunately for him, they stop once he and Sirius actually talk about the whole thing. The tension doesn't go away, however.
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Dramatic example when Sirius kisses Remus in part 12. When Remus just seems shocked more than anything else, Sirius freaks out and suggests this, which Remus agrees to without thinking. Needless to say, it doesn't work.
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* ThatNeverHappened: Dramatic example when Sirius kisses Remus in part 12. When Remus just seems shocked more than anything else, Sirius freaks out and suggests this, which Remus agrees to without thinking. Needless to say, it doesn't work.
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* ChristmasEpisode: Parts 6 and 18.
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* HalloweenEpisode: Parts 4 and 17.
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* TastesLikeDiabetes: The present James tries to send to Lily in part 18:
--> '''Sirius''': And yet you think you are a pink teddy bear bloke? It said ‘I Think You’re Beary Wonderful’ on its little satin pillow. There was lace. It had button eyes. I don’t understand you anymore.
--> '''Sirius''': And yet you think you are a pink teddy bear bloke? It said ‘I Think You’re Beary Wonderful’ on its little satin pillow. There was lace. It had button eyes. I don’t understand you anymore.
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* TheTalk: In one hilarious chapter, all four boys are separately traumatized by The Talk.
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* TheTalk: In one hilarious chapter, all four boys are separately traumatized by The Talk. Talk.
* TastesLikeDiabetes: The present James tries to send to Lily in part 18:
--> '''Sirius''': And yet you think you are a pink teddy bear bloke? It said ‘I Think You’re Beary Wonderful’ on its little satin pillow. There was lace. It had button eyes. I don’t understand you anymore.
* TastesLikeDiabetes: The present James tries to send to Lily in part 18:
--> '''Sirius''': And yet you think you are a pink teddy bear bloke? It said ‘I Think You’re Beary Wonderful’ on its little satin pillow. There was lace. It had button eyes. I don’t understand you anymore.
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* GenreSavvy: Remus to the horror movie being played out in part 16. Sirius has his moments, too.
--> Hunting down the missing persons is the best possible way to get them both devoured. Not to mention they’ll have to go through the corridors. If Dr. Frankenstein, for example, had just stayed in his common room and eaten crumpets, he would probably have kept a good deal of people out of a good deal of mess.
--> Hunting down the missing persons is the best possible way to get them both devoured. Not to mention they’ll have to go through the corridors. If Dr. Frankenstein, for example, had just stayed in his common room and eaten crumpets, he would probably have kept a good deal of people out of a good deal of mess.
* HoYay: James and Sirius' hero-worship of the Prewett Brothers reeks of this, to the extent that Sirius seriously considered wearing a pink shirt reading 'Mrs. Fabian Prewett' in public.
** Also, the spells Dumbledore casts in part 16 to make the school act out a horror movie invokes this in the Slytherin girls.
** Also, the spells Dumbledore casts in part 16 to make the school act out a horror movie invokes this in the Slytherin girls.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Part 18:
--> “He makes the fleas flee,” Peter says, mostly to himself, and cackles.
--> “He makes the fleas flee,” Peter says, mostly to himself, and cackles.
* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: Dramatic example when Sirius kisses Remus in part 12. When Remus just seems shocked more than anything else, Sirius freaks out and suggests this, which Remus agrees to without thinking. Needless to say, it doesn't work.
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* DeadpanSnarker: Nearly all the characters get this at some point, but Remus seems especially suited.
* DidISayThatOutLoud: Although he doesn't say the line itself, Sirius' little...''slip'' while kissing Sophie in part 14 definitely evokes this.
* DidISayThatOutLoud: Although he doesn't say the line itself, Sirius' little...''slip'' while kissing Sophie in part 14 definitely evokes this.
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* DoggedNiceGuy: James to Lily. She gives in eventually when she realizes that he really is a nice guy underneath all the bravado.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: In part 16, Remus and Sirius fall down a flight of stairs and onto one another, getting stuck on the helmet of a suit of armour. Which wouldn't have been so bad, except a moment later, Kingsley and Snape happen upon them.
--> “Is that Lupin and Black?” Snape says, sounding delighted. “Are they ''on each other?''”
--> “Is that Lupin and Black?” Snape says, sounding delighted. “Are they ''on each other?''”
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* StuffyBrit: Mentioned by Sirius in part 17:
--> Sirius: Can you even say the word ‘sex’ without going all British?
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* {{Adorkable}}: Remus. So very, very much.
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* InVinoVeritas: In part 17 on Sirius' 18th birthday he gets drunk and starts complaining about {{asexual}} Remus is. To the audience, it's clear he's upset about the fact that he's fallen for someone who, from his perspective, doesn't appear to be into anyone. Remus, however, understands none of it.
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* {{Metaphorgotten}}: James in part 11:
--> “The ceiling,” James sighs. “I like the ceiling. It doesn’t twinkle. It’s not beautiful or far away. It’s not going to up and dump you one day because it thinks you pulled a prank on Severus Bloody Snape. Don’t you like the ceiling, Pete? The ceiling is so lovely.”
--> “Er,” Peter says. “Wait, you’re not talking about the sky anymore. Are you?”
--> “The ceiling,” James sighs. “I like the ceiling. It doesn’t twinkle. It’s not beautiful or far away. It’s not going to up and dump you one day because it thinks you pulled a prank on Severus Bloody Snape. Don’t you like the ceiling, Pete? The ceiling is so lovely.”
--> “Er,” Peter says. “Wait, you’re not talking about the sky anymore. Are you?”
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**However, all things considered, there really is relatively little {{Gayngst}}, especially between Remus and Sirius. The story goes to great lengths to keep the plot and the characters' interactions lighthearted and funny, even when more serious aspects of the story come into play. The authors even admitted that one of the main reasons they wrote the fic was to challenge themselves to write a Remus/Sirius story with relatively little angst. Many would say they succeeded.
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* {{Grew the Beard}}: around the time of Part Twenty-Two, the series, though still side-splittingly funny and romantic, takes a much more serious tone, especially when dealing with Voldemort's rise and [[spoiler:the death of James' parents]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Where to begin? There's got to be at least one in every installment.
-->"Sirius said to tell you, if I saw you, that he's outside. If you're killing Snape tonight, tell him Kingsley said hello."
-->"I don't know why you'd say hello," Remus babbles. "I'd say, I'd say goodbye."
** The Importance of Being Serious!
** The bit with Sirius and Remus researching the history of Hogwarts in the library:
-->"...and ''then,'' then, they talk about the type of wood that they're going to use for twenty-six pages, after which Slytherin has this brilliant idea to build it in ''stone,'' so it won't burn ''down,'' and then they talk about what a genius he is for six pages and a half, and then Gryffindor has ''another'' feast at his castle to celebrate what a genius ''he'' is, and then there are a few ballads which are quite good but all the same when you get right down to it, and they talk about Rowena's dress for ''twelve'' pages here, and then there is a brief break to discuss the type of pie they made, and then it's back to the dress again. Apparently it was very shocking she didn't want ruffles. Or did want ruffles. I'm not entirely sure because they mentioned ruffles at the very beginning of it all, but then spent three pages on the shocking aspect. How's yours?"\\
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"So tired," Sirius whimpers, prone, from the floor. There is a book slung over his face. His hands are thrown out to the side, and his feet are flopped exhaustedly in opposite directions. "So very, very tired. Eh? What's that? Oh. This one's mostly genealogy. Hufflepuff's great great grandson is staring at me right now. Hello there, old chap. Lovely whiskers. Looks like he's got Peter killed and stapled under his nose."\\
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"Oh dear," Remus says. "I've actually killed you, haven't I?"
** The {{Beach Episode}} where James is heroically engaging in an epic battle with a jellyfish while Remus and Peter look lazily on, too lethargic to care.
-->"Nevertheless," says James, "I drink from the keg of glory!"
-->"You should probably be drinking from a keg of antiseptic," says Peter wisely.
** From one of Remus's letters to Sirius in Part 25:
-->As her face bore down upon mine I let out a strangled cry of [[RefugeInAudacity “TULIPS!”]]
-->“What?” Amelia inquired, having been thoroughly distracted by my deranged outburst. (And so you see my plan was successful after all.)
-->"OXFORD," I added. "MONKEYWRENCH. AARDVARK. [[CheckPlease CHECK PLEASE."]]
** From the Halloween incident:
-->Kingsley looks down at Frank, cradled heavy and unwieldy and strangely poky at one end between his own massive biceps. Half of the Quiddich team is watching on in bemused horror.
-->"And that," Kingsley says, "is how a Beater can save a Chaser's life midair."
-->Everyone burst into applause.
** The evil mistletoe in Part 6 creates some very amusing scenarios, most notably [[spoiler: forcing Sirius to kiss Snape.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The dancing lilies. Part 23 in general.
-->"Sirius said to tell you, if I saw you, that he's outside. If you're killing Snape tonight, tell him Kingsley said hello."
-->"I don't know why you'd say hello," Remus babbles. "I'd say, I'd say goodbye."
** The Importance of Being Serious!
** The bit with Sirius and Remus researching the history of Hogwarts in the library:
-->"...and ''then,'' then, they talk about the type of wood that they're going to use for twenty-six pages, after which Slytherin has this brilliant idea to build it in ''stone,'' so it won't burn ''down,'' and then they talk about what a genius he is for six pages and a half, and then Gryffindor has ''another'' feast at his castle to celebrate what a genius ''he'' is, and then there are a few ballads which are quite good but all the same when you get right down to it, and they talk about Rowena's dress for ''twelve'' pages here, and then there is a brief break to discuss the type of pie they made, and then it's back to the dress again. Apparently it was very shocking she didn't want ruffles. Or did want ruffles. I'm not entirely sure because they mentioned ruffles at the very beginning of it all, but then spent three pages on the shocking aspect. How's yours?"\\
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"So tired," Sirius whimpers, prone, from the floor. There is a book slung over his face. His hands are thrown out to the side, and his feet are flopped exhaustedly in opposite directions. "So very, very tired. Eh? What's that? Oh. This one's mostly genealogy. Hufflepuff's great great grandson is staring at me right now. Hello there, old chap. Lovely whiskers. Looks like he's got Peter killed and stapled under his nose."\\
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"Oh dear," Remus says. "I've actually killed you, haven't I?"
** The {{Beach Episode}} where James is heroically engaging in an epic battle with a jellyfish while Remus and Peter look lazily on, too lethargic to care.
-->"Nevertheless," says James, "I drink from the keg of glory!"
-->"You should probably be drinking from a keg of antiseptic," says Peter wisely.
** From one of Remus's letters to Sirius in Part 25:
-->As her face bore down upon mine I let out a strangled cry of [[RefugeInAudacity “TULIPS!”]]
-->“What?” Amelia inquired, having been thoroughly distracted by my deranged outburst. (And so you see my plan was successful after all.)
-->"OXFORD," I added. "MONKEYWRENCH. AARDVARK. [[CheckPlease CHECK PLEASE."]]
** From the Halloween incident:
-->Kingsley looks down at Frank, cradled heavy and unwieldy and strangely poky at one end between his own massive biceps. Half of the Quiddich team is watching on in bemused horror.
-->"And that," Kingsley says, "is how a Beater can save a Chaser's life midair."
-->Everyone burst into applause.
** The evil mistletoe in Part 6 creates some very amusing scenarios, most notably [[spoiler: forcing Sirius to kiss Snape.]]
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: The dancing lilies. Part 23 in general.
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* FunnyAneurysmMoment: Remus teases Sirius about his seeing "draperies" in his crystal ball during divination class and jokes about his friend's future in bridal couture, to which Sirius corrects him by saying they're actually [[spoiler: ''veils'']].
** Sirius jokingly remarks that Remus will outlive all of the Marauders.
** From the Halloween installment: [[spoiler: Remus is "well aware that he is the sidekick with the books who hangs about in the back being a good influence with a posh accent and then is killed tragically just before the climax."]] Written years before the last book came out, no less.
** "Anyway, he can't work a defensive spell if his life depended on it, which it would. You know how he gets when his blood's up, all laughing and insane and hopping about talking nonsense and all of a sudden someone would hit him in the chest with a hex before the possibility even occurred to him." - From Part 25, from James about Sirius as to why Sirius shouldn't fight Death Eaters alone. Also counts as a TearJerker.
** Realizing that ''ever single named character'' except for [[NeverMessWithGranny Professor Mcgonagall]] and [[BadassBaritone Kingsley Shacklebolt]] was killed or had their lives otherwise destroyed by the Death Eaters. And there are quite a lot of named characters.
** Sirius jokingly remarks that Remus will outlive all of the Marauders.
** From the Halloween installment: [[spoiler: Remus is "well aware that he is the sidekick with the books who hangs about in the back being a good influence with a posh accent and then is killed tragically just before the climax."]] Written years before the last book came out, no less.
** "Anyway, he can't work a defensive spell if his life depended on it, which it would. You know how he gets when his blood's up, all laughing and insane and hopping about talking nonsense and all of a sudden someone would hit him in the chest with a hex before the possibility even occurred to him." - From Part 25, from James about Sirius as to why Sirius shouldn't fight Death Eaters alone. Also counts as a TearJerker.
** Realizing that ''ever single named character'' except for [[NeverMessWithGranny Professor Mcgonagall]] and [[BadassBaritone Kingsley Shacklebolt]] was killed or had their lives otherwise destroyed by the Death Eaters. And there are quite a lot of named characters.
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* MemeticMutation: "I do believe in commas. I do, I do."
** For this troper's friends at least, Kingsley Shacklebolt has surpassed ChuckNorris in memetic badassery. Which would win in a fight? Do you even need to ask?
** For this troper's friends at least, Kingsley Shacklebolt has surpassed ChuckNorris in memetic badassery. Which would win in a fight? Do you even need to ask?
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* {{Tearjerker}}: [[spoiler: James's parents' funeral.]]
** Also, [[spoiler:the talk between James and Lily when James returns from his Auror training, after having been ambushed by Death Eaters and saved by Sirius. It's all at once funny and so, so heart-rending, mostly in the way that Jaida and Rave manage to flawlessly capture the amount of pure love Lily has for James and the terror that that love inspires, and in such realistic terms.]]
-->"No," Lily snaps. "We can't ''just,'' we can't just ''anything.'' I know I only have a stupid desk job, James, but I've seen what the Death Eaters can do – what they have done already! – to people. I don't want you brought in there like that. James, I ''love'' you, do you have any idea what it means?"\\
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"Yes," James tells her. "Actually, yes, I know exactly—"\\
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"You do not!" Lily's voice tears off, sudden and awful to hear. "It means that I'm terrified, I'm terrified all the time, and then when they brought Sirius in and you weren't there, what was I supposed to think?"\\
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"That you were in seven hundred pieces somewhere. Gone. Forever." Lily stares at the ceiling, clenching her own forearm so tightly that James wants to take her hands before her nails reach bone.
** Also, [[spoiler:the talk between James and Lily when James returns from his Auror training, after having been ambushed by Death Eaters and saved by Sirius. It's all at once funny and so, so heart-rending, mostly in the way that Jaida and Rave manage to flawlessly capture the amount of pure love Lily has for James and the terror that that love inspires, and in such realistic terms.]]
-->"No," Lily snaps. "We can't ''just,'' we can't just ''anything.'' I know I only have a stupid desk job, James, but I've seen what the Death Eaters can do – what they have done already! – to people. I don't want you brought in there like that. James, I ''love'' you, do you have any idea what it means?"\\
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"Yes," James tells her. "Actually, yes, I know exactly—"\\
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"You do not!" Lily's voice tears off, sudden and awful to hear. "It means that I'm terrified, I'm terrified all the time, and then when they brought Sirius in and you weren't there, what was I supposed to think?"\\
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"That I was making my report," James says, mouth dry. "That I was telling Dumbledore what happened."\\
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"That you were in seven hundred pieces somewhere. Gone. Forever." Lily stares at the ceiling, clenching her own forearm so tightly that James wants to take her hands before her nails reach bone.
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** Caradoc Dearborn gets this, too; most people don't even remember his name in the books. Not to mention Kingsley freaking Shacklebolt.
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* BeachEpisode: Part 21 has the Mauraders on holiday at the beach.
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* UnderTheMistletoe: Part 6 features some rather demanding mistletoe that leads to kisses between Remus and Lily, James and Peter, and Sirius and Snape.
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-->Repeat after me, Mr. Black: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.
-->Repeat after me, Mr. Black: I do believe in commas. I do, I do.
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** From the Halloween installment: [[spoiler: Remus is "well aware that he is the sidekick with the books who hangs about in the back being a good influence with a posh accent and then is killed tragically just before the climax." "]] Written years before the last book came out, no less.
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A long running Harry Potter fanfiction, featuring the Marauders--James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew. Other characters such as Lily Evans, Severus Snape, Professors Dumbledore and Mcgonagall, and the Prewett brothers also make appearances. Cowritten by [[http://www.jonesandbennett.com/ Jaida Jones]] and [[http://sashayed.livejournal.com/ Rave]] (who also illustrated all the scrapbook pictures.)
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A long running Harry Potter fanfiction, featuring the Marauders--James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew. Other characters such as Lily Evans, Severus Snape, Professors Dumbledore and Mcgonagall, and the Prewett brothers also make appearances. Cowritten by [[http://www.jonesandbennett.com/ Jaida Jones]] and [[http://sashayed.livejournal.com/ Rave]] (who also illustrated all drew the scrapbook pictures.illustrations.)
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A long running Harry Potter fanfiction, featuring the Marauders--James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew. Other characters such as Lily Evans, Severus Snape, Professors Dumbledore and Mcgonagall, and the Prewett brothers also make appearances. Cowritten by [[http://www.jonesandbennett.com/ Jaida Jones]], who did the letters and narrative, and [[http://sashayed.livejournal.com/ Rave]], who did the pencil drawings.
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A long running Harry Potter fanfiction, featuring the Marauders--James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, and Peter Pettigrew. Other characters such as Lily Evans, Severus Snape, Professors Dumbledore and Mcgonagall, and the Prewett brothers also make appearances. Cowritten by [[http://www.jonesandbennett.com/ Jaida Jones]], who did the letters and narrative, Jones]] and [[http://sashayed.livejournal.com/ Rave]], who did Rave]] (who also illustrated all the pencil drawings.
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** The evil mistletoe in Part 6 creates some very amusing scenarios, most notably [[spoiler: forcing Sirius to kiss Snape.]]
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*DropInCharacter: Sirius is definitely one of these in Part 26.
