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* SenselessSacrifice - [[spoiler: In chapter 3, The maids and the two red fairies on Hong's back pretty much get knifed to death because it was part of Hong's punishment. Her punishment was suppose to be dealt on her, not anyone else.]]
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* SenselessSacrifice - [[spoiler: In chapter 3, The the maids and the two red fairies on Hong's back pretty much get knifed to death because it was part of Hong's punishment. Her punishment was suppose supposed to be dealt on to her, not anyone else.]]
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[[caption-width-right:200:'Why… Why do I stay here... Why don't I ever just, run away? Am I afraid, am I that determined with a job, no matter how everyone treats me or... or...']]
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** There are three people, the Human, the bad Youkai, and the good Youkai. The human is the goal and the good Youkai needs to get to the goal before the bad Youkai does. If the good Youkai catches the Human, they win and set the human go. But… if the bad Youkai gets her, She is killed, gutted, and eaten by the bad Youkai and they win. There is also a catch. The game is called Two-minute Kill for a reason. You see, the bad Youkai already knows where the location of the human, the good one doesn't. But, the bad Youkai is very slow and the good one is very fast. So, as the bad one paces itself to the human the good Youkai runs as fast as they can and try to find the human before the bad one does. Whichever Youkai gets to closest to Human in a two minute time limit wins the game. If both come at the same time within the time limit they fight each other off till one is left dead. If both of them die, no one lives and the human dies from an unknown Youkai.
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** There are three people, the Human, the bad Youkai, and the good Youkai. The human is the goal and the good Youkai needs to get to the goal before the bad Youkai does. If the good Youkai catches the Human, they win and set the human go. But… But... if the bad Youkai gets her, She is killed, gutted, and eaten by the bad Youkai and they win. There is also a catch. The game is called Two-minute Kill for a reason. You see, the bad Youkai already knows where the location of the human, the good one doesn't. But, the bad Youkai is very slow and the good one is very fast. So, as the bad one paces itself to the human the good Youkai runs as fast as they can and try to find the human before the bad one does. Whichever Youkai gets to closest to Human in a two minute time limit wins the game. If both come at the same time within the time limit they fight each other off till one is left dead. If both of them die, no one lives and the human dies from an unknown Youkai.
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* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: Patchy: "You said no one was going to die, you lied… Both of you lied."
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* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo: Patchy: "You said no one was going to die, you lied… lied... Both of you lied."
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* HeroicBSOD - Meiling. So many times.
* KilledOffForReal - [[spoiler:Cirno and Daiyousei]]
* ItsAllMyFault
* MyGreatestFailure
* KilledOffForReal - [[spoiler:Cirno and Daiyousei]]
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** When [[spoiler:Kaokuma]] attacks [[spoiler:Sakuya.]]
*** [[spoiler: Daiyousei when she attacks Flandre.]]
* SpotlightStealingSquad - Most of the characters in the Fic get more screen time then Hong- the main character of the story.
* StrangeSyntaxSpeaker - Cirno seems to love mispronouncing a lot of her words.
*** [[spoiler: Daiyousei when she attacks Flandre.]]
* SpotlightStealingSquad - Most of the characters in the Fic get more screen time then Hong- the main character of the story.
* StrangeSyntaxSpeaker - Cirno seems to love mispronouncing a lot of her words.
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* TooDumbToLive - That blue fairy in chapter two.
** [[spoiler: Possibly the two red fairies as well.]]
* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo - Patchy: "You said no one was going to die, you lied… Both of you lied."
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong - In chapter 4, Cirno decides to send all the fairies up the hill to take over the Scarlet Devil mansion. Of course, nothing will go wrong with this... right?
** [[spoiler:Wrong...]]
** [[spoiler: Possibly the two red fairies as well.]]
* YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo - Patchy: "You said no one was going to die, you lied… Both of you lied."
* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong - In chapter 4, Cirno decides to send all the fairies up the hill to take over the Scarlet Devil mansion. Of course, nothing will go wrong with this... right?
** [[spoiler:Wrong...]]
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* CompleteMonster - Sakuya... Sakuya, Sakuya, dear god, Sakuya.
** [[spoiler:Remilia.]]
** [[spoiler:Remilia.]]
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** [[spoiler:Wrong...]]
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** [[spoiler:Wrong...]]]]
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** [[spoiler:Remilia]][[spoiler:Remilia.]]
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* SenselessSacrifice - [[spoiler: In chapter 3, The maids and the two red fairys fairies on Hong's back pretty much get knifed to death because it was part of Hong's punishment. Her punishment was suppose to be delt dealt on her, not anyone else.]]
