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The original is complete, but the sequel is ongoing as of July 2014.
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The original is complete, but the sequel is ongoing as of July 2014.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: It happens in chapter seven, but it nonetheless qualifies. [[spoiler: When two of Twilight's new subordinates refuse to serve under her, she threatens to kill them for insubordination. When they continue to refuse, she kills them without a seconds hesitation.]]
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: It happens in chapter seven, seven of the sequel, but it nonetheless qualifies. [[spoiler: When two of Twilight's new subordinates refuse to serve under her, she threatens to kill them for insubordination. When they continue to refuse, she kills them without a seconds hesitation.]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler:What exactly happened to many of the characters, including four of the mane six and Spike, is left unresolved by the end, because Twilight doesn't know.]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler:What exactly happened to many of the characters, including four of the mane six and Spike, is left unresolved by the end, because Twilight doesn't know.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:The Necrons overpower and capture Princesses Celestia, Luna, and Cadence, as well as Discord.]]
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:The Necrons overpower and capture Princesses Celestia, Luna, and Cadence, as well as Discord.''Discord''.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: Discord. He only gets mentioned, but he's described as being a "unique warp creature", and considering the things that live there...
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* BenevolentBoss: [[spoiler: Twilight.]] Get in her way though, and, [[BewareTheNiceOnes well...]]
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* MeanBoss: [[spoiler: Twilight,]] at least to her current crew. The reason for this is because she doesn't want ''anything'', including inexperienced teammates, to get in the way her personal crusade against the Necrons. She never wants anything to go anything less than perfect against the Necrons.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Twilight gives one to Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini and the Imperium of Man in general. But the impact is lessened -Rovini is completely unphased, and Twilight joins the Inquisition immediately after.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Twilight gives one to Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini and the Imperium of Man in general. But the impact is lessened -Rovini is completely unphased, unfazed, and Twilight joins the Inquisition immediately after.]]
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* ItsPersonal: [[spoiler: Twilight reserves a special hatred, bordering on obsession, for the Necrons in the sequel.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Twilight gives one to Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini and the Inquisition in general. But the impact is lessened -Rovini is completely unphased, and Twilight joins the Inquisition immeadatly after.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Twilight gives one to Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini and the Inquisition Imperium of Man in general. But the impact is lessened -Rovini is completely unphased, and Twilight joins the Inquisition immeadatly immediately after.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Twilight gives one to Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini and Inquisition in general. But the impact is lessened -Rovini is completely unphased, and Twilight joins the Inquisition immeadatly after.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Twilight gives one to Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini and the Inquisition in general. But the impact is lessened -Rovini is completely unphased, and Twilight joins the Inquisition immeadatly after.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: [[spoiler: Twilight gives one to Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini and Inquisition in general. But the impact is lessened -Rovini is completely unphased, and Twilight joins the Inquisition immeadatly after.]]
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* BigGood: Lord Inquisitor Tas Rovini.
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* UnstoppableRage: When [[spoiler: Twilight meets one of the Necrons responsible for destroying Equestria, she gets so mad the she rips open a portal to the Warp and throws him inside it.]]
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* UnstoppableRage: When [[spoiler: Twilight meets one of the Necrons responsible for destroying Equestria, she gets so mad the she rips open a portal to the Warp and throws him inside it. Unfortunately, that was just a fake...]]
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: It happens in chapter seven, but it nonetheless qualifies. [[spoiler: When two of Twilight's new subordinates refuse to serve under her, she threatens to kill them for insubordination. When they continue to refuse, she kills them without a seconds hesitation.]]
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* FalseFriend: Kylara to Twilight.
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* FalseFriend: Kylara to Twilight. [[spoiler: Twilight gets wise to her in the sequel.]]
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* {{Revenge}}: [[spoiler: In the sequel, Inquisitor Twilight now wants this on all Necrons.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: Twilight, in the sequel. [[spoiler: Working for the Imperium]] will do that to you.
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* UnstoppableRage: When [[spoiler: Twilight meets one of the Necrons responsible for destroying Equestria, she gets so mad the she rips open a portal to the Warp and throws him inside it.]]
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* EnemyMine: [[spoiler: Twilight's reason for joining the Inquisition. "You're monsters. But I need monsters to destroy them."]]
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* LastOfHerKind: Twilight.
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/06/story-dark-ones.html The Dark Ones]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' crossover by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Snake+Staff Snake Staff]].
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/06/story-dark-ones.html The Dark Ones]] Ones]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' crossover by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Snake+Staff Snake Staff]].
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/06/story-dark-ones.html The Dark Ones]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' crossover by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Snake+Staff Snake Staff]].
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/06/story-dark-ones.html The Dark Ones]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]''TabletopGame/{{Warhammer 40000}}'' crossover by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Snake+Staff Snake Staff]].
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* CurbstompBattle: [[spoiler:The Necron attack on Canterlot.]]
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* CurbstompBattle: CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:The Necron attack on Canterlot.]]
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* AfterTheEnd: The state Equestria and its planet are found in.
* AintTooProudToBeg: Twilight has no issue with pleading for mercy.
* AlienInvasion: The titular "Dark Ones" being the invaders.
* AintTooProudToBeg: Twilight has no issue with pleading for mercy.
* AlienInvasion: The titular "Dark Ones" being the invaders.
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* ApocalypticLog: Kylara's interviews with Twilight effectively function as one, though unusually the "author" is still alive, albeit [[SanitySlippage mentally damaged by the experience]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Twilight lives, and mentally recovers to some extent, but the Imperium is embroiled in a war with the Necrons, snuffing out billions more lives.]]
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* CurbstompBattle: [[spoiler:The Necron attack on Canterlot.]]
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* DistantFinale: The epilogue, which is [[spoiler:a Munitorum report from several years later, along with a pair of personal logs]].
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* HearingVoices: Twilight appears to be hearing the aliens from time to time, and repeatedly begs non-present beings for mercy.
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* SanitySlippage: What's happened to Twilight after years of living alone on her dead homeworld.
* SequelHook: In the epilogue, [[spoiler:Twilight is alive, and working for the Imperium]].
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Every multicellular animal on Equestria except Twilight has been wiped out, down to the corpses.
* TitleDrop: Twilight calls the invading aliens "the dark ones".
* SequelHook: In the epilogue, [[spoiler:Twilight is alive, and working for the Imperium]].
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Every multicellular animal on Equestria except Twilight has been wiped out, down to the corpses.
* TitleDrop: Twilight calls the invading aliens "the dark ones".
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* UnreliableNarrator: Interrogator Kylara worries that Twilight may be this.
* VillainTeamUp: [[spoiler: Imotekh the Stormlord, Trazyn the Infinite, and Illuminor Szeras all worked together in the Necron attack.]]
* WeatherControlMachine: The aliens appear to have one. [[spoiler:Or at least Imotekh does.]]
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler:What exactly happened to many of the characters, including four of the mane six and Spike, is left unresolved by the end, because Twilight doesn't know.]]
* VillainTeamUp: [[spoiler: Imotekh the Stormlord, Trazyn the Infinite, and Illuminor Szeras all worked together in the Necron attack.]]
* WeatherControlMachine: The aliens appear to have one. [[spoiler:Or at least Imotekh does.]]
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[spoiler:What exactly happened to many of the characters, including four of the mane six and Spike, is left unresolved by the end, because Twilight doesn't know.]]
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''[[http://www.equestriadaily.com/2014/06/story-dark-ones.html The Dark Ones]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''[=/=]''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000'' crossover by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Snake+Staff Snake Staff]].
Equestria is dead. The sun and moon have stopped, and the planet is in ruins. The xenos that built the civilization are gone, their works in ruins. Investigating the planet, Interrogator Kylara makes a surprising discovery, one that might hold the key to what happened to this once-fair land - and what might be done to stop it.
It takes the form of a series of interviews between Interrogator Kylara and an increasingly deranged Twilight Sparkle, with the former trying to coax the mystery of what exactly happened to Equestria from the latter.
Now with a sequel, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/202148/of-xenos-and-war Of Xenos And War]], detailing Twilight's time with the Imperial Inquisition in its war against the eponymous dark ones.
The original is complete, but the sequel is ongoing as of July 2014.
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*AbsoluteXenophobe: Interrogator Kylara, in the "finest" Imperial tradition.
*AffablyEvil: [[spoiler:Trazyn the Infinite remains as polite as ever, even when discussing genocide or screwing his partner over.]]
*ApocalypseHow: Class 6 unleashed on Equestria, barring Twilight. [[spoiler:Or maybe not, Trazyn mentions numerous "specimens" taken from the population.]]
*TheBadGuyWins: In "The Dark Ones", [[spoiler:Imotekh the Stormlord leads the Necrons to a total victory over Equestria and Trazyn gets everything he wants, barring Twilight as an addition to his galleries.]]
*BigBad: [[spoiler:Not the Dark Eldar, surprisingly, but the Necron race as a whole. Trazyn and Imotekh look like the biggest contenders for the individual spot.]]
*CombatByChampion: [[spoiler:Imotekh challenges Twilight to this, with the lives of Shining Armor and the guard ponies as the prize. She loses.]]
*CollectorOfTheStrange: [[spoiler:Trazyn's whole motivation for arranging the invasion was to collect all the unique creatures and artifacts of Equestria. He took three princesses, Discord, and the Elements of Harmony that we know of.]]
*DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:The Necrons overpower and capture Princesses Celestia, Luna, and Cadence, as well as Discord.]]
*EvilutionaryBiologist: [[spoiler:Illuminor Szeras took part in wiping out Equestria so he could conduct his "studies" on pony specimens.]]
*EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler:An entire world of sentient beings is destroyed because Trazyn wanted some of its stuff.]]
*FalseFriend: Kylara to Twilight.
*ForegoneConclusion: Equestria, except for Twilight, will be wiped out. The question is how, and by whom.
*GlowingEyesOfDoom: [[spoiler:All Necrons have them.]]
*KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Applejack, Big Mac, Applebloom, Granny Smith, and Mayor Mare are definitely dead. We don't know what's happened to the others.]]
*MurderIsTheBestSolution: Kylara repeatedly expresses the view that she would be happy to kill Twilight in her sleep.
*{{Main/Troll}}: [[spoiler:Trazyn to Illuminor Szeras, cheating him in their bargain at the same time as congratulating him on their success.]]
Equestria is dead. The sun and moon have stopped, and the planet is in ruins. The xenos that built the civilization are gone, their works in ruins. Investigating the planet, Interrogator Kylara makes a surprising discovery, one that might hold the key to what happened to this once-fair land - and what might be done to stop it.
It takes the form of a series of interviews between Interrogator Kylara and an increasingly deranged Twilight Sparkle, with the former trying to coax the mystery of what exactly happened to Equestria from the latter.
Now with a sequel, [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/202148/of-xenos-and-war Of Xenos And War]], detailing Twilight's time with the Imperial Inquisition in its war against the eponymous dark ones.
The original is complete, but the sequel is ongoing as of July 2014.
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*AbsoluteXenophobe: Interrogator Kylara, in the "finest" Imperial tradition.
*AffablyEvil: [[spoiler:Trazyn the Infinite remains as polite as ever, even when discussing genocide or screwing his partner over.]]
*ApocalypseHow: Class 6 unleashed on Equestria, barring Twilight. [[spoiler:Or maybe not, Trazyn mentions numerous "specimens" taken from the population.]]
*TheBadGuyWins: In "The Dark Ones", [[spoiler:Imotekh the Stormlord leads the Necrons to a total victory over Equestria and Trazyn gets everything he wants, barring Twilight as an addition to his galleries.]]
*BigBad: [[spoiler:Not the Dark Eldar, surprisingly, but the Necron race as a whole. Trazyn and Imotekh look like the biggest contenders for the individual spot.]]
*CombatByChampion: [[spoiler:Imotekh challenges Twilight to this, with the lives of Shining Armor and the guard ponies as the prize. She loses.]]
*CollectorOfTheStrange: [[spoiler:Trazyn's whole motivation for arranging the invasion was to collect all the unique creatures and artifacts of Equestria. He took three princesses, Discord, and the Elements of Harmony that we know of.]]
*DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:The Necrons overpower and capture Princesses Celestia, Luna, and Cadence, as well as Discord.]]
*EvilutionaryBiologist: [[spoiler:Illuminor Szeras took part in wiping out Equestria so he could conduct his "studies" on pony specimens.]]
*EvilIsPetty: [[spoiler:An entire world of sentient beings is destroyed because Trazyn wanted some of its stuff.]]
*FalseFriend: Kylara to Twilight.
*ForegoneConclusion: Equestria, except for Twilight, will be wiped out. The question is how, and by whom.
*GlowingEyesOfDoom: [[spoiler:All Necrons have them.]]
*KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler:Applejack, Big Mac, Applebloom, Granny Smith, and Mayor Mare are definitely dead. We don't know what's happened to the others.]]
*MurderIsTheBestSolution: Kylara repeatedly expresses the view that she would be happy to kill Twilight in her sleep.
*{{Main/Troll}}: [[spoiler:Trazyn to Illuminor Szeras, cheating him in their bargain at the same time as congratulating him on their success.]]
