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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8837156/1/Super-Readers-Biggest-Adventure Super Readers' Biggest Adventure]]'' is a fanfic in progress written by {{@/Iheartgod175}} for the SuperWhy fandom. Based loosely on several stories she had written beforehand, it is her first fanfic and her first "real" SuperWhy fanfic, as she considers her other stories to be an OldShame. The story has twenty chapters, and is a minor DoorStopper, stopping at a little over 120,000 words. The epilogue is in progress, and will serve as the SequelHook.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8837156/1/Super-Readers-Biggest-Adventure Super Readers' Biggest Adventure]]'' is a fanfic in progress written by {{@/Iheartgod175}} for the SuperWhy fandom. Based loosely on several stories she had written beforehand, it is her first fanfic and her first "real" SuperWhy fanfic, as she considers her other stories to be an OldShame. The story has twenty chapters, and is a minor DoorStopper, stopping at a little over 120,000 words. The epilogue is in progress, and will serve serves as the SequelHook.
Now a CompletedFic.
*AndTheAdventureContinues
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** BadassAdorable: The Super Readers, but Woofster even more so. He's a sweet, somewhat awkward little guy with a [[TheSmartGuy big vocabulary]], and he can also [[ShockAndAwe electrocute you to death]].
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** BadassAdorable: The All of the Super Readers, but Woofster even more so. He's a sweet, somewhat awkward little guy with a [[TheSmartGuy big vocabulary]], and he can also [[ShockAndAwe electrocute you to death]].
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* CannotSpitItOut: Red's dilemma about her crush on Whyatt.
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* CannotSpitItOut: Red's dilemma about her crush on Whyatt. [[spoiler: She does eventually, though, at the end of the story]].
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* CombatPragmatist: The Evil reader ''never'' fights fair, and that is what makes him such a dangerous opponent. [[spoiler: Chaos is eventually revealed to be this, and boy does it show]].
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* CombatPragmatist: The Evil reader Reader ''never'' fights fair, and that is what makes him such a dangerous opponent. [[spoiler: Chaos is eventually revealed to be this, and boy does it show]].
*HeroicSecondWind: All of the Super Readers get this at some point in the story.
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* TheLastOfHisKind: [[spoiler: As the epilogue reveals, our main heroes are ''the last Super Readers'']].
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* TheLastOfHisKind: [[spoiler: As the epilogue reveals, our main heroes are ''the some of tthe last Super Readers'']].Readers in the world]].
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*MyGreatestFailure:
**Woofster considers not being able to save his story from the Evil Reader's destructive spree to be this.
**[[spoiler: Jeremiah considers not being able to save his brother Chaos from the dark path to be this. The reason for this will have to be explained in the sequel.]]
**Woofster considers not being able to save his story from the Evil Reader's destructive spree to be this.
**[[spoiler: Jeremiah considers not being able to save his brother Chaos from the dark path to be this. The reason for this will have to be explained in the sequel.]]
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*OfficialCouple: Whyatt and Red finally get together at the end of the story.
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*SequelHook: The epilogue hints at more world-building, Jeremiah's character and past, [[spoiler: his past with Chaos, his brother]], and the new hero, Saturn Volt, who plans on ending Chaos once and for all.
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*** The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]]''.
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*** The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs ''[[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]]''.
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** Alpha Pig's purification attack is a reference to Cure Muse's attack from SuitePrecure: Shining Circle. And speaking of ''Suite'', Muse is named after '''Cure''' Muse, and her story is called Major Land.
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** Alpha Pig's purification attack is a reference to Cure Muse's attack from SuitePrecure: ''Anime/SuitePrettyCure'': Shining Circle. And speaking of ''Suite'', Muse is named after '''Cure''' Muse, and her story is called Major Land.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 17. Forget ''everything'' you thought you knew about the Evil Reader before reading this chapter. [[spoiler: He was originally a somewhat aloof, cocky, but good-natured boy named Jackson Flatts who underwent a whole bunch of terrible stuff, including being TheUnfavorite, not being able to follow his dream of being a Super Reader due to his RealityWarper abilities making him too powerful, losing the girl he loved, and THEN[[MindRape getting his mind twisted]] by a mad sorceror sealed in a crystal. His greed caused him to allow said sorceror into his body, and he kills his own friends and destroys his own story after being led to believe that he was being betrayed by them. After that, he has [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a moment of remorse]], but Chaos takes that as a moment of weakness and performs a SplitPersonalityTakeover, masquerading as the Evil Reader and killing nearly every single Super Reader]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 17. Forget ''everything'' you thought you knew about the Evil Reader before reading this chapter. [[spoiler: He was originally a somewhat aloof, cocky, but good-natured boy named Jackson Flatts who underwent a whole bunch of terrible stuff, including being TheUnfavorite, not being able to follow his dream of being a Super Reader due to his RealityWarper abilities making him too powerful, losing the girl he loved, and THEN[[MindRape getting his mind twisted]] by a mad sorceror sorcerer sealed in a crystal. His greed caused him to allow said sorceror sorcerer into his body, and he kills his own friends and destroys his own story after being led to believe that he was being betrayed by them. After that, he has [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a moment of remorse]], but Chaos takes that as a moment of weakness and performs a SplitPersonalityTakeover, masquerading as the Evil Reader and killing nearly every single Super Reader]].
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* BerserkButton: It is unwise to insinuate that you are more powerful than the Evil Reader. You're going to be in for a ''major'' [[CurbStompBattle beatdown]].
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* BerserkButton: It is not a good idea to call Pig's dad as a slave. He was the first to receive his MidSeasonUpgrade for a reason.
**It's also unwise to insinuate that you are more powerful than the Evil Reader. You're going to be in for a ''major'' [[CurbStompBattle beatdown]].
**It's also unwise to insinuate that you are more powerful than the Evil Reader. You're going to be in for a ''major'' [[CurbStompBattle beatdown]].
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* DrivenToVillainy: Lexicon was driven to become evil after his beloved Angelica was killed.
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* DrivenToVillainy: Lexicon was driven to become evil after his beloved Angelica was killed. [[spoiler: Jackson was driven to become evil when he was [[MindRape mind screwed by Chaos]] into believing that everyone hated him and wanted him to die]].
*FightingYourFriend: The Super Readers are forced to fight against Princess Presto in Chapter 13, as she's been turned into a DarkMagicalGirl. [[spoiler: Cheryl and Carlos, Jackson's two best friends, also had to do this when Jackson became the Evil Reader]].
*HeadbuttingHeroes: Although it's not as brutal as most examples, Red and Muse are this for the first few chapters of the fic. Later, they become VitriolicBestBuds.
*IWishedYouWereDead: [[spoiler: Everyone tells Jackson this when Chaos shows Jackson what everyone thinks of him]].
*MegatonPunch: Super Why's Sonic Fist, revealed in Chapter 20.
*PerverseSexualLust: The Evil Reader towards Princess Presto, which she will have none of. The reason for this will be explained in the sequel.
*RedEyesTakeWarning: Red's and the Evil Reader's eyes go red when she unlocks the Berserker Mode.
*RedEyesTakeWarning: Red's and the Evil Reader's eyes go red when she unlocks the Berserker Mode.
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** Alpha Pig's purification attack is a reference to Cure Muse's attack from SuitePrecure: Shining Circle.
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** Alpha Pig's purification attack is a reference to Cure Muse's attack from SuitePrecure: Shining Circle. And speaking of ''Suite'', Muse is named after '''Cure''' Muse, and her story is called Major Land.
**The swords that Princess Presto wields while she's under the Evil Reader's control, Fatal Rose and Divine Lightning, are similar to [[VideoGames/KingdomHearts Oathkeeper and Oblivion]] in color scheme and design.
**The swords that Princess Presto wields while she's under the Evil Reader's control, Fatal Rose and Divine Lightning, are similar to [[VideoGames/KingdomHearts Oathkeeper and Oblivion]] in color scheme and design.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Chaos '''LOVES''' this trope. From dropping dimension-swallowing attacks, to causing the whole ground to erupt in pools of fire, it's pretty clear that he loves using his power to destroy everything.
* UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spolier: Chaos realizes this when he and Whyatt fight in chapter 20]].
* UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spolier: Chaos realizes this when he and Whyatt fight in chapter 20]].
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Chaos '''LOVES''' this trope. From dropping dimension-swallowing attacks, to causing the whole ground to erupt in pools of fire, it's pretty clear that he loves using his power to destroy everything.
everything.
*TwoGuysAndAGirl: Jackson, Carlos and Cheryl were all the best of friends, as Chapter 17 reveals. This soon [[FightingYourFriend turns bad later on, though...]]
* UnderestimatingBadassery:[[spolier: It happens several times when Lexicon and the Evil Reader fight the Super Readers. The standout example, however, is when [[spoiler: Chaos realizes this when he and Whyatt fight in chapter 20]].
*TwoGuysAndAGirl: Jackson, Carlos and Cheryl were all the best of friends, as Chapter 17 reveals. This soon [[FightingYourFriend turns bad later on, though...]]
* UnderestimatingBadassery:
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Alpha Pig. He's still somewhat of a CowardlyLion here, but if you refer to his dad as a slave, he will tell you that you're wrong and demolish your army with his new purification attack.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: All of the Super Readers, but especially Alpha Pig. He's still somewhat of a CowardlyLion here, but if you refer to his dad as a slave, he will tell you that you're wrong and demolish your army with his new purification attack.
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* TechnicalPacifist: Princess Presto and Alpha Pig may be the more peaceful of the Super Readers, but that doesn't stop them from shooting beams of light at their opponent if they're being attacked.
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* TechnicalPacifist: Princess Presto Presto, Super Why and Alpha Pig may be the more peaceful of the Super Readers, but that doesn't stop them from shooting beams of light at try their opponent if they're being attacked.hand, and they ''will'' beat you up.
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*UnderestimatingBadassery: [[spolier: Chaos realizes this when he and Whyatt fight in chapter 20]].
--> ''Excerpt from Chapter 20'': At that point, Chaos admitted something. He had considered, up until this point, that Super Why was the weakest of the Super Readers. The leader of the team had been a testament as to why Chaos hated the Super Readers: they were far too weak. Even that princess from Major Land had hit him harder than they had, and she was just about the same age as him, if slightly older. Even after he watched the Super Reader expertly counter him, Super Why's general lack of training and status had Chaos to consider him to be rather unimpressive.
-->This moment, however, proved that Super Why was not the weakest of the Super Readers. [[TechnicalPacifist He was just the one who held back until he had a good reason to pound someone into the ground]].
--> ''Excerpt from Chapter 20'': At that point, Chaos admitted something. He had considered, up until this point, that Super Why was the weakest of the Super Readers. The leader of the team had been a testament as to why Chaos hated the Super Readers: they were far too weak. Even that princess from Major Land had hit him harder than they had, and she was just about the same age as him, if slightly older. Even after he watched the Super Reader expertly counter him, Super Why's general lack of training and status had Chaos to consider him to be rather unimpressive.
-->This moment, however, proved that Super Why was not the weakest of the Super Readers. [[TechnicalPacifist He was just the one who held back until he had a good reason to pound someone into the ground]].
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*DeadpanSnarker: Muse at times. Wonder Red also gets the same treatment in this story.
*MassOhCrap: Happens several times in the story.
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Jackson ''immediately'' regretted his actions, which caused him to kill his friends upon believing Chaos' lies, and destroying Minor Land with a SphereOfDestruction. Unfortunately, he ends up becoming a ghost left to wander another dimension for goodness knows how many years, while Chaos makes him look bad as a HeroKiller]].
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Jackson ''immediately'' regretted his actions, which caused him to kill his friends upon believing Chaos' lies, and destroying Minor Land with a SphereOfDestruction. Unfortunately, he ends up becoming a ghost left to wander another dimension for goodness knows how many years, while Chaos makes him look bad as a HeroKiller]].
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* SphereOfDestruction: Diabolic Emission, which is the most destructive attack in the Evil Reader's arsenal, creates a giant sphere that melts everything in its path, including people.
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* SphereOfDestruction: Diabolic Emission, which is the most destructive attack in the Evil Reader's arsenal, creates a giant sphere that melts everything in its path, including people. [[spoiler: It was also used when Jackson first became the Evil Reader, and he ''erased Minor Land from existence'']].
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*TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The Evil Reader did this to many fairytales, [[spoiler: including his own story]].
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*BadFuture: [[spoiler: Chaos shows Whyatt a vision of the future during their fight, in which all of the Super Readers, Lexicon and Muse were killed, Storybrook Village is in utter ruin (not to mention the rest of the fairytale world), and Jackson, who is the only surviving Super Reader, gets killed by Chaos.]]
*CrapsackWorld: What the whole fairytale world becomes after the Evil Reader shows up.
*DrivenToVillainy: Lexicon was driven to become evil after his beloved Angelica was killed.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Lexicon had no problem with kidnapping Little Boy Blue or sending an army of possessed villagers after a bunch of kid superheroes, but the moment the Evil Reader shows PerverseSexualLust towards Princess Presto,kidnaps her and turns her into a DarkMagicalGirl, he became disgusted, calls him out on this, and later releases her father from his prison, which resulted in him getting a Black Fang Striker to the face. It is only after the reveal that the Evil Reader is really Chaos that he performs a HeelFaceTurn.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Lexicon had no problem with kidnapping Little Boy Blue or sending an army of possessed villagers after a bunch of kid superheroes, but the moment the Evil Reader shows PerverseSexualLust towards Princess Presto,kidnaps her and turns her into a DarkMagicalGirl, he became disgusted, calls him out on this, and later releases her father from his prison, which resulted in him getting a Black Fang Striker to the face. It is only after the reveal that the Evil Reader is really Chaos that he performs a HeelFaceTurn.HeelFaceTurn.
*EvilIsHammy: The Evil Reader really knows how to make an entrance, chewing the scenery as though it's filet mignon.
*EvilIsHammy: The Evil Reader really knows how to make an entrance, chewing the scenery as though it's filet mignon.
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* LotusEaterMachine: Happens in this order: Jackson (during his flashback story), Whyatt, and Lexicon (when Chaos traps him in The Dark Prophecies.
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* LotusEaterMachine: Happens in this order: Jackson (during his flashback story), Whyatt, and Lexicon (when Chaos traps him them both in The Dark Prophecies.Prophecies).
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**The first moment of ShipTease happens in chapter 8, where Super Why saves Wonder Red from almost falling to her death, BridalCarry and all. The thought of being inches away from him makes Wonder Red undergo a LuminescentBlush.
**The second occurs when they go inside Red's story, which has been turned into a CrapsackWorld. Wonder Red holds onto Super Why in fear, making ''him'' blush, and when Princess Pea asks what's going on, they both hastily deny anything going wrong. Super Why is also shown to be concerned after she unlocks the [[UnstoppableRage Berserker Mode]].
**The third happens in chapter 11, where Super Why tells her not to let her rage consume her and that she can't forget what she was fighting for in the first place. After that pep talk, she realizes that she's holding hands with him, and asks if he ever liked anybody. When he asks why she's asking him this, she asks him what he would think if he had a girl who was a friend who liked him. Woofster, trying to stop laughing (and completely failing at it), tells him that [[ForegoneConclusion she likes him]]. Cue both of them going as red as stop signs and trying to deny his statement.
**The second occurs when they go inside Red's story, which has been turned into a CrapsackWorld. Wonder Red holds onto Super Why in fear, making ''him'' blush, and when Princess Pea asks what's going on, they both hastily deny anything going wrong. Super Why is also shown to be concerned after she unlocks the [[UnstoppableRage Berserker Mode]].
**The third happens in chapter 11, where Super Why tells her not to let her rage consume her and that she can't forget what she was fighting for in the first place. After that pep talk, she realizes that she's holding hands with him, and asks if he ever liked anybody. When he asks why she's asking him this, she asks him what he would think if he had a girl who was a friend who liked him. Woofster, trying to stop laughing (and completely failing at it), tells him that [[ForegoneConclusion she likes him]]. Cue both of them going as red as stop signs and trying to deny his statement.
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*DarkIsNotEvil: [[spoiler: Jackson wore dark colors originally when he was training to be a Super Reader, and even though he had his flaws, he certainly wasn't ''evil''...until Chaos showed up]].
*DarkMagicalGirl: What Princess Presto becomes after the Evil Reader possesses her.
*DarkMagicalGirl: What Princess Presto becomes after the Evil Reader possesses her.
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*TheLastOfHisKind: [[spoiler: As the epilogue reveals, our main heroes are ''the last Super Readers'']].
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*MacrossMissileMassacre: Princess Presto, Alpha Pig and Princess Muse are experts in this field.
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*TechnicalPacifist: Princess Presto and Alpha Pig may be the more peaceful of the Super Readers, but that doesn't stop them from shooting beams of light at their opponent if they're being attacked.
*ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Chaos '''LOVES''' this trope. From dropping dimension-swallowing attacks, to causing the whole ground to erupt in pools of fire, it's pretty clear that he loves using his power to destroy everything.
*ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Chaos '''LOVES''' this trope. From dropping dimension-swallowing attacks, to causing the whole ground to erupt in pools of fire, it's pretty clear that he loves using his power to destroy everything.
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*WaveMotionGun: Muse's speciality. One could argue she was taking lessons from [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha Takamachi]] in this regard. Super Why later adds this to his repertoire.
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** Jackson's teacher is named ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Lindy Harlaown]]''. Another teacher is named Leti.
** When the Evil Reader appears in chapter 6, he says, "Zenryoku Zenkai", Nanoha's trigger for Starlight Breaker. In the case of the Evil Reader, the "Full power, total annihilation" suits him perfectly.
** The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]]''.
** Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight Breaker]]'''.
** When the Evil Reader appears in chapter 6, he says, "Zenryoku Zenkai", Nanoha's trigger for Starlight Breaker. In the case of the Evil Reader, the "Full power, total annihilation" suits him perfectly.
** The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]]''.
** Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight Breaker]]'''.
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** There are also references to ''MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha''. Cases include:
*** Jackson's teacher is named ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Lindy Harlaown]]''. Another teacher is named Leti.
** When ***When the Evil Reader appears in chapter 6, he says, "Zenryoku Zenkai", Nanoha's trigger for Starlight Breaker. In the case of the Evil Reader, the "Full power, total annihilation" suits him perfectly.
** The ***The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]]''.
** *** Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight Breaker]]'''.
*** Jackson's teacher is named ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Lindy Harlaown]]''. Another teacher is named Leti.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Woofster's origins here are completely different from that of the television series. Here, he arrives in Storybrook Village after the disastrous battle with the Evil Reader, not to mention the fact that his story was destroyed and he was trying to stop the Evil Reader from destroying everything.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Woofster's origins here are completely different from that of the television series. Here, he arrives in Storybrook Village after the disastrous battle with the Evil Reader, not to mention the fact that his story was destroyed and he was trying to stop the Evil Reader from destroying everything. Plus, there are also a lot of fantasy elements that are not present in Super Why in this story.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Alpha Pig. He's still somewhat of a CowardlyLion here, but if you refer to his dad as a slave, he will tell you that you're wrong and demolish your army with his new purification attack.
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* CanonDiscontinuity: This fanfic disregards the episode "Woofster Finds A Home", the episode where Woofster was introduced, in order to introduce him in the story.
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* CanonDiscontinuity: This fanfic disregards the episode "Woofster Finds A Home", the episode where Woofster was introduced, in order for the story to introduce him in fighting the story.Evil Reader.
*HeroKiller: The Evil Reader ''was'' implied to be this, at first. [[spoiler: Then you learn that Chaos, TheManBehindTheMan for the Evil Reader, is the reason there are so few Super Readers]].
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** The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]].
** Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight Breaker]]'''
** Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight Breaker]]'''
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** The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]].
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** Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun StarlightBreaker]]'''Breaker]]'''.
** Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight
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** Lexicon's eventual HeelFaceTurn has startling parallels to [[TheLionTheWitchAndTheWardrobe Edmund Pevensie's journey]].
** Woofster's true potential attack is called [[Pokemon Volt Tackle]]. It's even executed in the same way!
** Woofster's true potential attack is called [[Pokemon Volt Tackle]]. It's even executed in the same way!
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** Lexicon's eventual HeelFaceTurn has startling parallels to [[TheLionTheWitchAndTheWardrobe Edmund Pevensie's journey]].Pevensie's]].
** Woofster's true potential attack is called[[Pokemon [[Franchise/Pokemon Volt Tackle]]. It's even executed in the same way!
** Woofster's true potential attack is called
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 17. Forget ''everything'' you thought you knew about the Evil Reader before reading this chapter. [[spoiler: He was originally a somewhat aloof, cocky, but good-natured boy named Jackson Flatts who underwent a whole bunch of terrible stuff, including being TheUnfavorite, not being able to follow his dream of being a Super Reader due to his RealityWarper abilities making him too powerful, losing the girl he loved, and THEN[[MindRape getting his mind twisted]] by a mad sorceror sealed in a crystal. His greed caused him to allow said sorceror into his body, and he kills his own friends and destroys his own story after being led to believe that he was being betrayed by them. After that, he has [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone a moment of remorse]], but Chaos takes that as a moment of weakness and performs a SplitPersonalityTakeover, masquerading as the Evil Reader and killing nearly every single Super Reader]].
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*ShoutOut:
**When Queen Pea is looking through a book about legendary swords, one of the swords she comes across is [[ThunderCats The Sword of Omens]].
**Jackson's teacher is named ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Lindy Harlaown]]''. Another teacher is named Leti.
**When the Evil Reader appears in chapter 6, he says, "Zenryoku Zenkai", Nanoha's trigger for Starlight Breaker. In the case of the Evil Reader, the "Full power, total annihilation" suits him perfectly.
**The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]].
**Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight Breaker]]'''
** The reveal of the Berserker Mode may remind one of [[DragonBall Goku's Super Saiyan transformation]]. Or alternately, [[SonicTheHedgehog Super Sonic]].
**There are six traits of a superhero, and each Super Reader is called to bear that trait, similar to [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the Elements of Harmony]].
**Lexicon's eventual HeelFaceTurn has startling parallels to [[TheLionTheWitchAndTheWardrobe Edmund Pevensie's journey]].
**Woofster's true potential attack is called [[Pokemon Volt Tackle]]. It's even executed in the same way!
**Alpha Pig's purification attack is a reference to Cure Muse's attack from SuitePrecure: Shining Circle.
**When Queen Pea is looking through a book about legendary swords, one of the swords she comes across is [[ThunderCats The Sword of Omens]].
**Jackson's teacher is named ''[[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Lindy Harlaown]]''. Another teacher is named Leti.
**When the Evil Reader appears in chapter 6, he says, "Zenryoku Zenkai", Nanoha's trigger for Starlight Breaker. In the case of the Evil Reader, the "Full power, total annihilation" suits him perfectly.
**The Evil Reader's most destructive attack? Diabolic Emission, named after the city-swallowing spell used in [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Nanoha A's]].
**Super Why's trump card? '''[[WaveMotionGun Starlight Breaker]]'''
** The reveal of the Berserker Mode may remind one of [[DragonBall Goku's Super Saiyan transformation]]. Or alternately, [[SonicTheHedgehog Super Sonic]].
**There are six traits of a superhero, and each Super Reader is called to bear that trait, similar to [[MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the Elements of Harmony]].
**Lexicon's eventual HeelFaceTurn has startling parallels to [[TheLionTheWitchAndTheWardrobe Edmund Pevensie's journey]].
**Woofster's true potential attack is called [[Pokemon Volt Tackle]]. It's even executed in the same way!
**Alpha Pig's purification attack is a reference to Cure Muse's attack from SuitePrecure: Shining Circle.
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** LightEmUp: Alpha Pig, Muse and Super Why
** PlayingWithFire: Wonder Red and Lexicon. [[spoiler: Chaos is also shown to be this.]]
** ShockAndAwe:Woofster and the Evil Reader.
** PlayingWithFire: Wonder Red and Lexicon. [[spoiler: Chaos is also shown to be this.]]
** ShockAndAwe:Woofster and the Evil Reader.
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**CastingAShadow: The Evil Reader's more destructive attacks.
**GemstoneAssault:Lexicon.
** LightEmUp: Alpha Pig, Muse and SuperWhy
Why. [[spoiler: Jeremiah also has this power]].
** PlayingWithFire: Wonder Red and Lexicon. [[spoiler:Chaos is Chaos's powers also shown to be have this.]]
** ShockAndAwe:Woofster and the EvilReader.Reader, as well as Jeremiah and Chaos.
**StarPower: Muse and Princess Presto.
**GemstoneAssault:Lexicon.
** LightEmUp: Alpha Pig, Muse and Super
** PlayingWithFire: Wonder Red and Lexicon. [[spoiler:
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**StarPower: Muse and Princess Presto.
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*LightIsNotGood: If you ever see bright light coming from Chaos, ''run for your lives''.
* LittleRedFightingHood:Of course, Wonder Red.Red,even more so in this story as she gets to fight.
*LotusEaterMachine: Happens in this order: Jackson (during his flashback story), Whyatt, and Lexicon (when Chaos traps him in The Dark Prophecies.
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Muse's attempt to [[BeatTheCurseOutOfHim free the possessed Princess Presto]] ends up backfiring severely, as the explosion uncovered the third piece of the Summoning Pin and Lexicon grabbed it.
* LittleRedFightingHood:
*LotusEaterMachine: Happens in this order: Jackson (during his flashback story), Whyatt, and Lexicon (when Chaos traps him in The Dark Prophecies.
*NiceJobBreakingItHero: Muse's attempt to [[BeatTheCurseOutOfHim free the possessed Princess Presto]] ends up backfiring severely, as the explosion uncovered the third piece of the Summoning Pin and Lexicon grabbed it.
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*SphereOfDestruction: Diabolic Emission, which is the most destructive attack in the Evil Reader's arsenal, creates a giant sphere that melts everything in its path, including people.
*UnstoppableRage: Wonder Red gets hit with this in chapter 9, triggering TheBerserker within her. The Evil Reader goes through this as well, and things get ugly.
*Lexicon also got hit with this in the flashback for chapter 11.
*UnstoppableRage: Wonder Red gets hit with this in chapter 9, triggering TheBerserker within her. The Evil Reader goes through this as well, and things get ugly.
*Lexicon also got hit with this in the flashback for chapter 11.
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* AntiHero: [[spoiler: Lexicon. Later, Jackson Flatts, the real identity of the Evil Reader, is revealed to be this once before he turned evil]].
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* AntiHero: [[spoiler: Lexicon. Later, Jackson Flatts, the real identity of His whole reason for joining the Evil Reader, Reader was to revive his beloved Angelica, though his other plot, which was to destroy Major Land, is revealed to be this once before he turned evil]].up for debate.]].
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*DrunkOnTheDarkSide: [[spoiler: Jackson, when he first turns into the Evil Reader]].
*ElementalPowers:
**LightEmUp: Alpha Pig, Muse and Super Why
**PlayingWithFire: Wonder Red and Lexicon. [[spoiler: Chaos is also shown to be this.]]
**ShockAndAwe:Woofster and the Evil Reader.
*EvenEvilHasStandards: Lexicon had no problem with kidnapping Little Boy Blue or sending an army of possessed villagers after a bunch of kid superheroes, but the moment the Evil Reader shows PerverseSexualLust towards Princess Presto,kidnaps her and turns her into a DarkMagicalGirl, he became disgusted, calls him out on this, and later releases her father from his prison, which resulted in him getting a Black Fang Striker to the face. It is only after the reveal that the Evil Reader is really Chaos that he performs a HeelFaceTurn.
*ElementalPowers:
**LightEmUp: Alpha Pig, Muse and Super Why
**PlayingWithFire: Wonder Red and Lexicon. [[spoiler: Chaos is also shown to be this.]]
**ShockAndAwe:Woofster and the Evil Reader.
*EvenEvilHasStandards: Lexicon had no problem with kidnapping Little Boy Blue or sending an army of possessed villagers after a bunch of kid superheroes, but the moment the Evil Reader shows PerverseSexualLust towards Princess Presto,kidnaps her and turns her into a DarkMagicalGirl, he became disgusted, calls him out on this, and later releases her father from his prison, which resulted in him getting a Black Fang Striker to the face. It is only after the reveal that the Evil Reader is really Chaos that he performs a HeelFaceTurn.
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*BloodKnight: [[spoiler: Chaos aka The Evil Reader. Jackson himself was this, somewhat]].
*CannotSpitItOut: Red's dilemma about her crush on Whyatt.
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* CombatPragmatist: The Evil reader ''never'' fights fair, and that is what makes him such a dangerous opponent. [[spoiler: Chaos is even more of a CombatPragmatist than Jackson]].
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* CombatPragmatist: The Evil reader ''never'' fights fair, and that is what makes him such a dangerous opponent. [[spoiler: Chaos is even eventually revealed to be this, and boy does it show]].
*DarkerAndEdgier: Very much so.
*DarkAndTroubledPast: Woofster's past is revealed to be this. He grew up being TheUnfavorite due to his father, a legendary superhero, abandoning him for being the weakest out of his kids. He suffered a bout of CantCatchUp with his older siblings, and he considers being unable to defend his story from the Evil Reader [[MyGreatestFailure his biggest blunder]].
**[[spoiler: Jackson is revealed to have more of aCombatPragmatist troubled backstory than Jackson]].
him, though]].
*TheDreaded: [[spoiler: Chaos. As it turns out, [[PersonOfMassDestruction they had a good reason to fear him]]...]]
*GoodIsNotSoft: The Super Readers stick with their ethics, but they will not hesitate to light you up if you cause them problems. [[spoiler: Jeremiah also doesn't play around, especially when Chaos is involved]].
*LittleRedFightingHood: Of course, Wonder Red.
*ShipTease: The summary says "small Whyatt/Red ship tease", so this is to be expected. The teasing drops considerably in order to keep the seriousness of the story.
*UpToEleven: '''Everything''' from Chapter 17 to Chapter 20.
*WhamEpisode: Chapter 17.
*DarkerAndEdgier: Very much so.
*DarkAndTroubledPast: Woofster's past is revealed to be this. He grew up being TheUnfavorite due to his father, a legendary superhero, abandoning him for being the weakest out of his kids. He suffered a bout of CantCatchUp with his older siblings, and he considers being unable to defend his story from the Evil Reader [[MyGreatestFailure his biggest blunder]].
**[[spoiler: Jackson is revealed to have more of a
*TheDreaded: [[spoiler: Chaos. As it turns out, [[PersonOfMassDestruction they had a good reason to fear him]]...]]
*GoodIsNotSoft: The Super Readers stick with their ethics, but they will not hesitate to light you up if you cause them problems. [[spoiler: Jeremiah also doesn't play around, especially when Chaos is involved]].
*LittleRedFightingHood: Of course, Wonder Red.
*ShipTease: The summary says "small Whyatt/Red ship tease", so this is to be expected. The teasing drops considerably in order to keep the seriousness of the story.
*UpToEleven: '''Everything''' from Chapter 17 to Chapter 20.
*WhamEpisode: Chapter 17.
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* BigGood: Jeremiah and [[Main/God]].
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* BigGood: Jeremiah and [[Main/God]].Jeremiah.
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* CombatPragmatist: The Evil reader ''never'' fights fair, and that is what makes him such a dangerous opponent.
opponent. [[spoiler: Chaos is even more of a CombatPragmatist than Jackson]].
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* [[BigDamnHeroes BigDarnHeroes]]: Big Darn Heroes]]:
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* ActionPackedPrologue: The first opening scene has Muse and Woofster fighting the Evil Reader, later teleporting away and crashing into Storybrooke Village.
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*[[BigDamnHeroes BigDarnHeroes]]:
**Middle Pig attempts to save Muse from almost getting burned by running out with a baseball bat. [[ForegoneConclusion Needless to say, it didn't work]].
**Muse's attempt to [[BeatTheCurseOutOfHim free the possessed Princess Presto]] is stopped by her father, who almost performs a HeroicSacrifice.
**[[spoiler: Chaos has an epic OhCrap moment when ''[[BigGood Jeremiah]]'', the most powerful superhero of all time, shows up to make a house call]].
**And during the fight between Super Why and Chaos, the Super Readers save his life by unleashing several attacks all at once.
**Middle Pig attempts to save Muse from almost getting burned by running out with a baseball bat. [[ForegoneConclusion Needless to say, it didn't work]].
**Muse's attempt to [[BeatTheCurseOutOfHim free the possessed Princess Presto]] is stopped by her father, who almost performs a HeroicSacrifice.
**[[spoiler: Chaos has an epic OhCrap moment when ''[[BigGood Jeremiah]]'', the most powerful superhero of all time, shows up to make a house call]].
**And during the fight between Super Why and Chaos, the Super Readers save his life by unleashing several attacks all at once.
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*BreakTheCutie: This happens to the Super Readers in the first few chapters, due to their families falling under DemonicPossession. They get better as the story progresses.
*CallingYourAttacks: Everyone in the story.
*CallingYourAttacks: Everyone in the story.
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* [[spoiler: BiggerBad]]: [[spoiler: Chaos]]
* BigGood: Jeremiah and [[God]].
* BigGood: Jeremiah and [[God]].
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* BigGood: Jeremiah and
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*ActionPackedPrologue: The first opening scene has Muse and Woofster fighting the Evil Reader, later teleporting away and crashing into Storybrooke Village.
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*TheBerserker: The Evil Reader also has this ability, though in both cases it seems to be a reaction to extreme anger.
*BigBad: The Evil Reader
*[[spoiler: BiggerBad]]: [[spoiler: Chaos]]
*BigGood: Jeremiah and [[God]].
*CanonDiscontinuity: This fanfic disregards the episode "Woofster Finds A Home", the episode where Woofster was introduced, in order to introduce him in the story.
*CastFromHitPoints: The Berserker Mode, while it gives its user tremendous strength, can shorten their lifespan severely.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alpha Pig in the story, but Whyatt more or less takes the cake. His reaction to Red asking if he ever liked anybody is to stammer and for his face to take on a LuminescentBlush.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alpha Pig in the story, but Whyatt more or less takes the cake. His reaction to Red asking if he ever liked anybody is to stammer and for his face to take on a LuminescentBlush.[[LuminescentBlush blush profusely]].
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** BadassAdorable: The Super Readers, but Woofster even more so.
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** BadassAdorable: The Super Readers, but Woofster even more so. He's a sweet, somewhat awkward little guy with a [[TheSmartGuy big vocabulary]], and he can also [[ShockAndAwe electrocute you to death]].
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* BerserkButton:
BerserkButton: It is unwise to insinuate that you are more powerful than the Evil Reader. You're going to be in for a ''major'' [[CurbStompBattle beatdown]].
**As the [[TreacherousAdvisor High Cleric of Major Land]] learned, you don't kill anybody Lexicon loves, as he will go on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and kill everyone in the area.
**As the [[TreacherousAdvisor High Cleric of Major Land]] learned, you don't kill anybody Lexicon loves, as he will go on a RoaringRampageOfRevenge and kill everyone in the area.
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* AbusiveParents: Woofster's parents are revealed to be this in Chapter 16. His father even says IHaveNoSon during Woofster's flashback. [[AntiHero Jackson Flatts also had an abusive father.]]
* AdaptationalBadass: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer No, really]]. Compare the original series Super Readers, where they don't even fight against their enemies and for the most part run away, to this story's Super Readers, who receive [[MidSeasonUpgrade power upgrades]]and proceed to kick the butts of most of the story's baddies. Special mentions go to Alpha Pig and Wonder Red, both of whom [[TookALevelInBadass went up a couple of levels]]. [[spoiler: But as of Chapter 20, Super Why takes the cake]].
* AdaptationalBadass: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer No, really]]. Compare the original series Super Readers, where they don't even fight against their enemies and for the most part run away, to this story's Super Readers, who receive [[MidSeasonUpgrade power upgrades]]and proceed to kick the butts of most of the story's baddies. Special mentions go to Alpha Pig and Wonder Red, both of whom [[TookALevelInBadass went up a couple of levels]]. [[spoiler: But as of Chapter 20, Super Why takes the cake]].
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* AbusiveParents: Woofster's parents are revealed to be this in Chapter 16. His father even says IHaveNoSon during Woofster's flashback. [[AntiHero Jackson Flatts Flatts]] also had an abusive father.]]
dad, due to his mother's DeathByChildbirth.
* AdaptationalBadass: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer No, really]]. Compare the original series Super Readers, where they don't even fight against their enemies and for the most part either talk to the villains to [[EasyEvangelism join their side]] or runaway, away if things get dangerous, to this story's Super Readers, who receive [[MidSeasonUpgrade power upgrades]]and proceed to kick the butts of most of the story's baddies. Special mentions go to Alpha Pig and Wonder Red, both of whom [[TookALevelInBadass went up a couple of levels]]. [[spoiler: But as of Chapter 20, Super Why takes the cake]].has one upped them]].
* AdaptationalBadass: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer No, really]]. Compare the original series Super Readers, where they don't even fight against their enemies and for the most part either talk to the villains to [[EasyEvangelism join their side]] or run
*AlternateUniverseFic: Woofster's origins here are completely different from that of the television series. Here, he arrives in Storybrook Village after the disastrous battle with the Evil Reader, not to mention the fact that his story was destroyed and he was trying to stop the Evil Reader from destroying everything.
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* AntiHero: [[spoiler: Lexicon. Later, Jackson Flatts, the real identity of the Evil Reader, is reveal to be this]].
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* AntiHero: [[spoiler: Lexicon. Later, Jackson Flatts, the real identity of the Evil Reader, is reveal revealed to be this]].
this once before he turned evil]].
*BadAss: See AdaptationalBadass above for the Super Readers. Muse and Lexicon take it more often though. [[spoiler: And then Jeremiah and Chaos, both of whom are [[PersonOfMassDestruction extremely powerful people]], are shown to be this when they fight in chapter 18]].
**BadassAdorable: The Super Readers, but Woofster even more so.
**BadassBookworm: Again, Woofster.
**BadassPrincess: Princess Presto (after her NextTierPowerUp) and Princess Muse.
*BerserkButton:
*BadAss: See AdaptationalBadass above for the Super Readers. Muse and Lexicon take it more often though. [[spoiler: And then Jeremiah and Chaos, both of whom are [[PersonOfMassDestruction extremely powerful people]], are shown to be this when they fight in chapter 18]].
**BadassAdorable: The Super Readers, but Woofster even more so.
**BadassBookworm: Again, Woofster.
**BadassPrincess: Princess Presto (after her NextTierPowerUp) and Princess Muse.
*BerserkButton:
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* AdaptationalBadass: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer No, really]]. Compare the original series Super Readers, where they don't even fight against their enemies and for the most part run away, to this story's Super Readers, who receive MidSeasonUpgrades (in a fashion), and proceed to kick butts of most of the story's baddies. Special mentions go to Alpha Pig and Wonder Red, both of whom [[TookALevelInBadass went up a couple of levels]]. [[spoiler: But as of Chapter 20, Super Why takes the cake]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer No, really]]. Compare the original series Super Readers, where they don't even fight against their enemies and for the most part run away, to this story's Super Readers, who receive MidSeasonUpgrades (in a fashion), and [[MidSeasonUpgrade power upgrades]]and proceed to kick the butts of most of the story's baddies. Special mentions go to Alpha Pig and Wonder Red, both of whom [[TookALevelInBadass went up a couple of levels]]. [[spoiler: But as of Chapter 20, Super Why takes the cake]].
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And if you thought things couldn't get more chaotic, [[FromBadToWorse they ''can'']]...
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And if you thought things couldn't get more chaotic, [[FromBadToWorse ''[[FromBadToWorse they ''can'']]...
can]]''...
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*AbusiveParents: Woofster's parents are revealed to be this in Chapter 16. His father even says IHaveNoSon during Woofster's flashback. [[AntiHero Jackson Flatts also had an abusive father.]]
*AdaptationalBadass: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer No, really]]. Compare the original series Super Readers, where they don't even fight against their enemies and for the most part run away, to this story's Super Readers, who receive MidSeasonUpgrades (in a fashion), and proceed to kick butts of most of the story's baddies. Special mentions go to Alpha Pig and Wonder Red, both of whom [[TookALevelInBadass went up a couple of levels]]. [[spoiler: But as of Chapter 20, Super Why takes the cake]].
*{{Adorkable}}: Alpha Pig in the story, but Whyatt more or less takes the cake. His reaction to Red asking if he ever liked anybody is to stammer and for his face to take on a LuminescentBlush.
*AndIMustScream: [[spoiler: Jackson Flatts, after suffering a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, is taken out of his body by [[BiggerBad Chaos]] and is sent to an alternate dimension as a ghost where he is constantly tortured, all the while Chaos goes around making him look utterly despicable as a sadistic HeroKiller]]. ''Goodness''.
*AntiHero: [[spoiler: Lexicon. Later, Jackson Flatts, the real identity of the Evil Reader, is reveal to be this]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8837156/1/Super-Readers-Biggest-Adventure Super Readers' Biggest Adventure]]'' is a fanfic written by {{@/Iheartgod175}} for the SuperWhy fandom. Based loosely on several stories she had written beforehand, it is her first fanfic and her first "real" SuperWhy fanfic, as she considers her other stories to be an OldShame.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8837156/1/Super-Readers-Biggest-Adventure Super Readers' Biggest Adventure]]'' is a fanfic in progress written by {{@/Iheartgod175}} for the SuperWhy fandom. Based loosely on several stories she had written beforehand, it is her first fanfic and her first "real" SuperWhy fanfic, as she considers her other stories to be an OldShame.
OldShame. The story has twenty chapters, and is a minor DoorStopper, stopping at a little over 120,000 words. The epilogue is in progress, and will serve as the SequelHook.
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The answer they receive is shocking. Muse and Woofster arrived after fighting a battle with the [[BigBad Evil Reader]], a boy who appears to be a dark Super Reader and is bent on taking over the entire Fairytale world with two artifacts: the [[AncestralWeapon Sword of Sealing]], and the Readers' Amulet, both of which will give him the power to become a PhysicalGod and cause [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the end of the world]]. Since he already destroyed a whole bunch of fairytales, including Muse's ''and'' Woofster's own, the princess and the dog attempted to keep him from getting the Sword. They failed, and the Evil Reader forges it with his sword, Shadowdoom, to create a new one, called Doombringer, and Muse and Woofster barely escaped before the Evil Reader could kill them. She asks the Super Readers for help, and they agree. Not long after that, the Evil Reader bursts into the kids classroom, declaring the world to be his. Realizing that the best way to stop him is to free everyone else, the Super Readers and Woofster take off, hurtling through various stories, fighting monsters and unlocking their true potentials, and getting cool [[PowerUpgrade power upgrades]].
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The answer they receive is shocking. Muse and Woofster arrived after fighting a battle with the [[BigBad Evil Reader]], a boy who appears to be a dark Super Reader and is bent on taking over the entire Fairytale world with two artifacts: the [[AncestralWeapon Sword of Sealing]], and the Readers' Amulet, both of which will give him the power to become a PhysicalGod and cause [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the end of the world]]. Since he already destroyed a whole bunch of fairytales, including Muse's ''and'' Woofster's own, the princess and the dog attempted to keep him from getting the Sword. They failed, and the Evil Reader forges it with his sword, Shadowdoom, to create a new one, called Doombringer, and Muse and Woofster barely escaped before the Evil Reader could kill them. She asks the Super Readers for help, and they agree. Not long after that, the Evil Reader bursts into the kids classroom, declaring the world to be his. Realizing that the best way to stop him is to free everyone else, the Super Readers and Woofster take off, hurtling through various stories, fighting monsters and unlocking their true potentials, and getting cool [[PowerUpgrade power upgrades]].upgrades.
And if you thought things couldn't get more chaotic, [[FromBadToWorse they ''can'']]...
This is an AlternateUniverseFic/DarkFic with many [[MythologyGag shout outs to the original series]] and has its own MythArc, which will be solved in the [[SequelHook sequel]]. It also has some ShipTease between Red and Whyatt, although it decreases near the end of the story.
'''WARNING! There are spoilers for the later half of the story. You have been warned!'''
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And if you thought things couldn't get more chaotic, [[FromBadToWorse they ''can'']]...
This is an AlternateUniverseFic/DarkFic with many [[MythologyGag shout outs to the original series]] and has its own MythArc, which will be solved in the [[SequelHook sequel]]. It also has some ShipTease between Red and Whyatt, although it decreases near the end of the story.
'''WARNING! There are spoilers for the later half of the story. You have been warned!'''
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The answer they receive is shocking. Muse and Woofster arrived after fighting a battle with the [[BigBad Evil Reader]], a boy who appears to be a dark Super Reader and is bent on taking over the entire Fairytale world with two artifacts: the [[AncestralWeapon Sword of Sealing]], and the Readers' Amulet, both of which will give him the power to become a PhysicalGod and cause [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt]]. Muse failed in stopping the Evil Reader from obtaining the sword and forging it with his sword, Shadowdoom, and she and Woofster barely escaped before the Evil Reader could kill them.
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The answer they receive is shocking. Muse and Woofster arrived after fighting a battle with the [[BigBad Evil Reader]], a boy who appears to be a dark Super Reader and is bent on taking over the entire Fairytale world with two artifacts: the [[AncestralWeapon Sword of Sealing]], and the Readers' Amulet, both of which will give him the power to become a PhysicalGod and cause [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt]]. Muse failed in stopping [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt the end of the world]]. Since he already destroyed a whole bunch of fairytales, including Muse's ''and'' Woofster's own, the princess and the dog attempted to keep him from getting the Sword. They failed, and the Evil Reader from obtaining the sword and forging forges it with his sword, Shadowdoom, to create a new one, called Doombringer, and she Muse and Woofster barely escaped before the Evil Reader could kill them.them. She asks the Super Readers for help, and they agree. Not long after that, the Evil Reader bursts into the kids classroom, declaring the world to be his. Realizing that the best way to stop him is to free everyone else, the Super Readers and Woofster take off, hurtling through various stories, fighting monsters and unlocking their true potentials, and getting cool [[PowerUpgrade power upgrades]].
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-> '''Whyatt Beanstalk (inner monologue): ''"That day was the day that changed everything. The moment they arrived, we knew something big was going on. But how big it was...well, we didn't find out until later..."''
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-> '''Whyatt Beanstalk (inner monologue): monologue)''': ''"That day was the day that changed everything. The moment they arrived, we knew something big was going on. But how big it was...well, we didn't find out until later..."''
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A typical day in Storybrook Village takes a turn for the strange when a princess named Muse and her dog, Woofster, fall from the sky and crash land in the village. Not long after that, the parents
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A typical day in Storybrook Village takes a turn for the strange when a princess named Muse and her dog, Woofster, fall from the sky and crash land in the village. Not long after that, the parentsparents of the fairytale children are [[DemonicPossession possessed by a strange power]] and start to attack their kids and fellow neighbors. The [[SuperWhy Super Readers]], whose own families are possessed, decides that the answers to their questions lie with Muse, the princess from Major Land, who is currently recovering from her injuries.
The answer they receive is shocking. Muse and Woofster arrived after fighting a battle with the [[BigBad Evil Reader]], a boy who appears to be a dark Super Reader and is bent on taking over the entire Fairytale world with two artifacts: the [[AncestralWeapon Sword of Sealing]], and the Readers' Amulet, both of which will give him the power to become a PhysicalGod and cause [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt]]. Muse failed in stopping the Evil Reader from obtaining the sword and forging it with his sword, Shadowdoom, and she and Woofster barely escaped before the Evil Reader could kill them.
The answer they receive is shocking. Muse and Woofster arrived after fighting a battle with the [[BigBad Evil Reader]], a boy who appears to be a dark Super Reader and is bent on taking over the entire Fairytale world with two artifacts: the [[AncestralWeapon Sword of Sealing]], and the Readers' Amulet, both of which will give him the power to become a PhysicalGod and cause [[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt]]. Muse failed in stopping the Evil Reader from obtaining the sword and forging it with his sword, Shadowdoom, and she and Woofster barely escaped before the Evil Reader could kill them.
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-> '''Whyatt Beanstalk (inner monologue): ''"That day was the day that changed everything. The moment they arrived, we knew something big was going on. But how big it was...well, we didn't find out until later..."''
-->--Whyatt's inner monologue from the prologue
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8837156/1/Super-Readers-Biggest-Adventure Super Readers' Biggest Adventure]]'' is a fanfic written by {{@/Iheartgod175}} for the SuperWhy fandom. Based loosely on several stories she had written beforehand, it is her first fanfic and her first "real" SuperWhy fanfic, as she considers her other stories to be an OldShame.
A typical day in Storybrook Village takes a turn for the strange when a princess named Muse and her dog, Woofster, fall from the sky and crash land in the village. Not long after that, the parents
-->--Whyatt's inner monologue from the prologue
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8837156/1/Super-Readers-Biggest-Adventure Super Readers' Biggest Adventure]]'' is a fanfic written by {{@/Iheartgod175}} for the SuperWhy fandom. Based loosely on several stories she had written beforehand, it is her first fanfic and her first "real" SuperWhy fanfic, as she considers her other stories to be an OldShame.
A typical day in Storybrook Village takes a turn for the strange when a princess named Muse and her dog, Woofster, fall from the sky and crash land in the village. Not long after that, the parents
